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** One interesting way- instead of the straight up inversion of ''human'' gender tropes- is an inversion of the "Herd of Mares," trope in FurryReminder above. Ditzy unintentionally gets her own herd of Stallions, which is considered quite unusual.

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* [[spoiler:ArousedByTheirVoice:]] Before Sombra [[spoiler:gets his dental appliances out of his mouth,]] he's TheUnintelligible ("Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?") [[spoiler:After he gets them out, however...]]

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* [[spoiler:ArousedByTheirVoice:]] ArousedByTheirVoice: Before Sombra [[spoiler:gets his dental appliances out of his mouth,]] he's TheUnintelligible ("Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?") [[spoiler:After he gets them out, however...]]



* IntelligibleUnintelligible: Though Spike, Twilight, and a number of other characters understand Sombra's gibberish and growling perfectly.



* [[MenActWomenAre Mares Act, Stallions Are]]: One of the complaints stallions have.

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* [[MenActWomenAre MenActWomenAre: The gender-flipped version -- Mares Act, Stallions Are]]: One Are -- is one of the complaints stallions have.



** IntelligibleUnintelligible: Though Spike, Twilight, and a number of other characters understand him perfectly.

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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Subverted; Twilight goes to jail for a week when she struck Snowflake. She was treated the same way a human man would get if he struck a woman in public.
** Of course, as with every other gender trope, it's inverted as well. Big [=McIntosh=] smacks some random mare who, in a very friendly way, asks if it's his birthday by way of explaining why he's not at work and she acts as if it were somehow her fault she got hit.

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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale:
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Subverted; Twilight goes to jail for a week when she struck Snowflake. She was treated the same way a human man would get if he struck a woman in public.
** Of course, as with every other gender trope, it's inverted as well. Big [=McIntosh=] Macintosh smacks some random mare who, in a very friendly way, asks if it's his birthday by way of explaining why he's not at work and she acts as if it were somehow her fault she got hit.



* {{UsefulNotes/Feminism}}: The entire story mirrors the movement for stallions.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Sombra calls out the S.O.S. for storming Canterlot and imprisoning Celestia and Luna because they heard a rumor that Celestia had dismissed their petition outright, without bothering to check if the rumor was real. [[spoiler:It was, but he didn't know that.]]

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* WhatTheHellHero: Sombra calls out the S.O.S. for storming Canterlot and imprisoning Celestia and Luna because they heard a rumor that Celestia had dismissed their petition outright, without bothering to check if the rumor was real. [[spoiler:It was, but he didn't know that.the summit to discuss the petition hadn't happened yet.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: Sombra calls out the S.O.S. for storming Canterlot and imprisoning Celestia and Luna because they heard a rumor that Celestia had dismissed their petition outright, without bothering to check if the rumor was real.

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* WhatTheHellHero: Sombra calls out the S.O.S. for storming Canterlot and imprisoning Celestia and Luna because they heard a rumor that Celestia had dismissed their petition outright, without bothering to check if the rumor was real. [[spoiler:It was, but he didn't know that.]]
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic {{Fanfic}} by Aegis Shield, found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/76119/stallions-on-strike here]].

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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic {{Fanfic}} ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{fanfic}} by Aegis Shield, found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/76119/stallions-on-strike here]].
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: When Spike asks Sombra to become leader of the SOS movement, he agrees simply because Spike sent him a crystal-growing kit for a Hearths' Warming Eve gift (presumably the only one he got).
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** IntelligibleUnintelligible: Though Spike, Twilight, and a number of other characters understand him perfectly.
* TheUnreveal: The conditions around Sombra's HeelFaceTurn, as they're described by [[TheUnintelligible Sombra himself.]] Whatever it was it must've been pretty moving to convince Twilight (and everyone else) to trust him.
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* [[spoiler:ArousedByTheirVoice:]] Before Sombra gets his dental appliances out of his mouth, he's TheUnintelligible ("Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?") [[spoiler:After he gets them out, however...]]

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* [[spoiler:ArousedByTheirVoice:]] Before Sombra gets [[spoiler:gets his dental appliances out of his mouth, mouth,]] he's TheUnintelligible ("Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?") [[spoiler:After he gets them out, however...]]
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[[spoiler:-->'''Sombra:''' Forgive my mild lisp up to this point, friends.]]
[[spoiler:-->''Sombra’s voice was deep, syrupy, and rang like a bronze bell over the crowd. Something in it shook the air, vibrated it like the tones of a church signal bell or a tuning fork. It was a powerful thing meant for great speeches, soothing reveries, and wise statements. Everypony in the room oooh’d appreciatively, hoping he had more to say.'']]

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[[spoiler:-->'''Sombra:''' -->[[spoiler:'''Sombra:''' Forgive my mild lisp up to this point, friends.]]
[[spoiler:-->''Sombra’s -->[[spoiler:''Sombra’s voice was deep, syrupy, and rang like a bronze bell over the crowd. Something in it shook the air, vibrated it like the tones of a church signal bell or a tuning fork. It was a powerful thing meant for great speeches, soothing reveries, and wise statements. Everypony in the room oooh’d appreciatively, hoping he had more to say.'']]
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* [[spoiler:ArousedByTheirVoice:]] Before Sombra gets his dental appliances out of his mouth, he's TheUnintelligible ("Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?") [[spoiler:After he gets them out, however...
-->'''Sombra:''' Forgive my mild lisp up to this point, friends.
-->''Sombra’s voice was deep, syrupy, and rang like a bronze bell over the crowd. Something in it shook the air, vibrated it like the tones of a church signal bell or a tuning fork. It was a powerful thing meant for great speeches, soothing reveries, and wise statements. Everypony in the room oooh’d appreciatively, hoping he had more to say.'']]

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* [[spoiler:ArousedByTheirVoice:]] Before Sombra gets his dental appliances out of his mouth, he's TheUnintelligible ("Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?") [[spoiler:After he gets them out, however...
-->'''Sombra:'''
however...]]
[[spoiler:-->'''Sombra:'''
Forgive my mild lisp up to this point, friends.
-->''Sombra’s
friends.]]
[[spoiler:-->''Sombra’s
voice was deep, syrupy, and rang like a bronze bell over the crowd. Something in it shook the air, vibrated it like the tones of a church signal bell or a tuning fork. It was a powerful thing meant for great speeches, soothing reveries, and wise statements. Everypony in the room oooh’d appreciatively, hoping he had more to say.'']]
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* ArousedByTheirVoice: Before Sombra gets his dental appliances out of his mouth, he's TheUnintelligible ("Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?") After he gets them out, however...

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* ArousedByTheirVoice: [[spoiler:ArousedByTheirVoice:]] Before Sombra gets his dental appliances out of his mouth, he's TheUnintelligible ("Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?") After [[spoiler:After he gets them out, however...



-->''Sombra’s voice was deep, syrupy, and rang like a bronze bell over the crowd. Something in it shook the air, vibrated it like the tones of a church signal bell or a tuning fork. It was a powerful thing meant for great speeches, soothing reveries, and wise statements. Everypony in the room oooh’d appreciatively, hoping he had more to say.''

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-->''Sombra’s voice was deep, syrupy, and rang like a bronze bell over the crowd. Something in it shook the air, vibrated it like the tones of a church signal bell or a tuning fork. It was a powerful thing meant for great speeches, soothing reveries, and wise statements. Everypony in the room oooh’d appreciatively, hoping he had more to say.'''']]



* TheUnintelligible: Subverted. Sombra's lines are largely gibberish except for the odd "cryyystallls". Turns out he's using braces the entire time and once he has them removed he can speak just fine. In fact, Sombra can speak so fine, its effect borders on ArousedByTheirVoice.

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* TheUnintelligible: Subverted. [[spoiler:Subverted.]] Sombra's lines are largely gibberish except for the odd "cryyystallls". Turns [[spoiler:Turns out he's using braces the entire time and once he has them removed he can speak just fine. In fact, Sombra can speak so fine, its effect borders on ArousedByTheirVoice.]]
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* AudioErotica: Before Sombra gets his dental appliances out of his mouth, he's TheUnintelligible ("Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?") After he gets them out, however...

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* AudioErotica: ArousedByTheirVoice: Before Sombra gets his dental appliances out of his mouth, he's TheUnintelligible ("Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?") After he gets them out, however...



* TheUnintelligible: Subverted. Sombra's lines are largely gibberish except for the odd "cryyystallls". Turns out he's using braces the entire time and once he has them removed he can speak just fine. In fact, Sombra can speak so fine, it borders on AudioErotica.

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* TheUnintelligible: Subverted. Sombra's lines are largely gibberish except for the odd "cryyystallls". Turns out he's using braces the entire time and once he has them removed he can speak just fine. In fact, Sombra can speak so fine, it its effect borders on AudioErotica.ArousedByTheirVoice.
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-->''Sombra’s voice was deep, syrupy, and rang like a bronze bell over the crowd. Something in it shook the air, vibrated it like the tones of a church signal bell or a tuning fork. It was a powerful thing meant for great speeches, soothing reveries, and wise statements. Everypony in the room oooh’d apprieciatively, hoping he had more to say.''

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-->''Sombra’s voice was deep, syrupy, and rang like a bronze bell over the crowd. Something in it shook the air, vibrated it like the tones of a church signal bell or a tuning fork. It was a powerful thing meant for great speeches, soothing reveries, and wise statements. Everypony in the room oooh’d apprieciatively, appreciatively, hoping he had more to say.''



* TheUnintelligible: Subverted. Sombra's lines are largely gibberish except for the odd "cryyystallls". Turns out he's using bracesthe entire time and once he has them removed he can speak just fine. In fact, Sombra can speak so fine, it borders on AudioErotica.

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* TheUnintelligible: Subverted. Sombra's lines are largely gibberish except for the odd "cryyystallls". Turns out he's using bracesthe braces the entire time and once he has them removed he can speak just fine. In fact, Sombra can speak so fine, it borders on AudioErotica.
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* AudioErotica: Before Sombra gets his dental appliances out of his mouth: [[TheUnintelligible "Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?”]] After he gets them out:

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* AudioErotica: Before Sombra gets his dental appliances out of his mouth: [[TheUnintelligible "Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?”]] mouth, he's TheUnintelligible ("Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?") After he gets them out:out, however...

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* AudioErotica: Before Sombra gets his dental appliances out of his mouth: [[TheUnintelligible "Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?”]]
** And after:

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* AudioErotica: Before Sombra gets his dental appliances out of his mouth: [[TheUnintelligible "Wargh-rawrgh-snargh, Karg-argh?”]]
** And after:
Karg-argh?”]] After he gets them out:

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