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* NeverLearnedToRead: Ember, having grown up in the wild with no parents, is illiterate in the beginning, and has a note that she was given since she was born. [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Spyro offers to teach her, beginning their friendship.]] friendship. Spyro later regrets this after [[spoiler: Ember reads the note, and learns that Spyro lied to her about it being in another language.]]
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** Others include Franchise/{{Castlevania}}, Manga/DragonBall, Creator/AbbottAndCostello, Creator/MontyPython, Franchise/StarTrek (though that one was unintentional) and KingdomHearts.Franchise/KingdomHearts.
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* NeverLearnedToRead: Ember, having grown up in the wild with no parents, is illiterate in the beginning, and has a note that she was given since she was born. [[HeartwarmingMoments [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments Spyro offers to teach her, beginning their friendship.]] Spyro later regrets this after [[spoiler: Ember reads the note, and learns that Spyro lied to her about it being in another language.]]
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A FanFic trilogy based off the SpyroTheDragon Franchise/SpyroTheDragon series, written by the Chaotic Queen of Madness. Currently in progress, with the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5669477/1/Spyro_Madness_Saga_Book_one_Chaos first book]] finished after [[ScheduleSlip two years.]] View second book [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7813424/1/Spyro_Madness_Saga_Book_two_War here.]]
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* ShoutOut: Oh, so many, but most notably to [[Videogame/TheElderScrollsIVOblivion The Shivering Isles]].
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** Others include{{Castlevania}}, DragonBall, Abbot And Costello, Franchise/{{Castlevania}}, Manga/DragonBall, AbbotAndCostello, Creator/MontyPython, Franchise/StarTrek (though that one was unintentional) and KingdomHearts.
** Oh, so many, but most notably to [[Videogame/TheElderScrollsIVOblivion The Shivering Isles]].
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A FanFic trilogy based off the SpyroTheDragon series, written by the Chaotic Queen of Madness. Currently in progress, with the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5669477/1/Spyro_Madness_Saga_Book_one_Chaos first book]] finished after [[ScheduleSlip two years.]] View second book [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7813424/1/Spyro_Madness_Saga_Book_two_War here.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[invoked]] Ember's father, [[spoiler: Terrador. He killed his mate because she is the granddaughter of Malefor and [[ParentalAbandonment left Ember's egg in a swamp to die.]] He then kidnapped her and let the others think she died as he mercilessly beat her every day.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[invoked]] Ember's father, [[spoiler: Terrador. He killed his mate because she is the granddaughter of Malefor and [[ParentalAbandonment left Ember's egg in a swamp to die.]] He then kidnapped her and let the others think she did died as he mercilessly beat her every day.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass [[spoiler: Ember in the beginning of book two.]
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* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler: Terrador does this to Ember in Chaos.]]
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A FanFic trilogy based off the SpyroTheDragon series, written by the Chaotic Queen of Madness. Currently in progress, with the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5669477/1/Spyro_Madness_Saga_Book_one_Chaos first book]] finished after [[ScheduleSlip two years.]]
]] View second book [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7813424/1/Spyro_Madness_Saga_Book_two_War here.]]
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* BigDammedHeroes: Spyro [[spoiler: enters Cynder's mind to save her from Torment.]]
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A FanFic trilogy based off the SpyroTheDragon series, written by the Chaotic Queen of Madness. Currently in progress, with the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5669477/1/Spyro_Madness_Saga_Book_one_Chaos first book]] near the end.
finished after [[ScheduleSlip two years.]]
* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: Terrador.]]
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* BerserkButton: Celia has very few standards, but never, EVER harm a child in any way, or she will make you suffer a FateWorseThanDeathFateWorseThanDeath.
* CallingTheOldManOut: [[spoiler: Ember does this to Terrador.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[invoked]] Ember's father. father, [[spoiler: Terrador. He killed his mate because she is the daughter granddaughter of Malefor and [[ParentalAbandonment left Ember's egg in a swamp to die]]]].die.]] He then kidnapped her and let the others think she did as he mercilessly beat her every day.]]
** There's also [[ManipulativeBastard Torment]]
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* IGotBetter: [[spoiler: Ember wasn't dead, just kept in a cell alone for months by [[CompleteMonster Terrador.]]]]
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* {{Jerkass}}: Whoever Ember's father is. [[spoiler: It's Terrador.]]
* KnightTemplar: [[spoiler: Terrador.]]
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* YouMonster: Ember to [[spoiler: Terrador.]]
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A FanFic trilogy based off the SpyroTheDragon series, written by the Chaotic Queen of Madness. Currently in progress, with the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5669477/1/Spyro_Madness_Saga_Book_one_Chaos first book]] near the end.
Spyro and Cynder are sent by the guardians to investigate a disturbance, and end up falling into a new world known the the Chaotic Realm, led by an insane queen who "invited" them and another family. Spyro and Cynder both have personal problems: Spyro is raising his twin daughters alone after his mate Ember passed away laying the egg, and Cynder is literally struggling with her own mind. The queen has asked them for help, but what could she need their help with?
The saga manages to keep enough humerous qualities to be concidered Adventure-Comedy.
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!!Tropes in the saga
* AffectionateParody: of {{Oblivion}}.
* AlwaysIdenticalTwins: Virtue and Rose.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Her whole life, Ember has wanted to know what the letter from her parents said. When she finally learns what is says, her response is less than pleased.
* BerserkButton: Celia has very few standards, but never, EVER harm a child in any way, or she will make you suffer a FateWorseThanDeath
* CloudCuckooLander: Virtually everyone in the Madness Realm.
* CompleteMonster: [[invoked]] Ember's father. [[spoiler: He killed his mate because she is the daughter of Malefor and [[ParentalAbandonment left Ember's egg in a swamp to die]]]].
* CuteClumsyGirl: Nala is very pretty, but incredibly clumsy.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Two cases.
** Case one: Ember is [[spoiler: Malefor's granddaughter]], but despite this, she's still the kind-hearted dragoness Spyro fell in love with.
** Case two: Cynder posesses her dark powers, but still sees them as evil.
* DeathByChildbirth: Ember [[spoiler: supposedly]] dies laying an egg.
* DespairEventHorizon: Cynder after breaking free of [[spoiler: [[SuperPoweredEvilSide Torment's]]]] control.
* EveryoneIsBi: And I mean EVERYONE!
* FirstGirlWins: {{Averted}}. Cynder has known Spyro for years and believes Spyro is in love with her, but he actually is in love with Ember, who he took care of for months and grew close to.
* HeroicBSOD: Happens to Ember after learning Spyro lied to her in book one.
** PlayedForLaughs with [[spoiler: Cynder after she sees Spyro and Ember getting intimate]].
** More tragically [[spoiler: Cynder after her SuperPoweredEvilSide slaughters an entire party]].
* IJustWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Cynder after admitting Spyro loves Ember.
* {{Jerkass}}: Whoever Ember's father is.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: The queen may be an AxeCrazy, sadistic slut, but she truly cares for the innocent, especially children.
* LoveAtFirstSight: Averted. Spyro does befriend Ember right away, but doesn't begin falling in love with her until they spend plenty of time together with her readng lessons.
* ManipulativeBitch: Torment.
* MeaningfulName: Virtue and Rose were named for a discussion Spyro had with Ember shortly after becoming a couple.
* NeverLearnedToRead: Ember, having grown up in the wild with no parents, is illiterate in the beginning, and has a note that she was given since she was born. [[HeartwarmingMoments Spyro offers to teach her, beginning their friendship.]] Spyro later regrets this after [[spoiler: Ember reads the note, and learns that Spyro lied to her about it being in another language.]]
* OrderVersusChaos: The main plot.
* PapaWolf: [[spoiler: Spyro jumps into a strange portal so he can follow his daughter Virtue, who jumped in]].
* ReallyGetsAround: Queen Celia has slept with many of her servants, [[BiTheWay male and female]].
* ShoutOut: Oh, so many, but most notably to [[Videogame/TheElderScrollsIVOblivion The Shivering Isles]].
** Others include {{Castlevania}}, DragonBall, Abbot And Costello, MontyPython, StarTrek (though that one was unintentional) and KingdomHearts.
* SuperPoweredEvilSide: [[spoiler: Torment]]
* WhosOnFirst: Logar and Natalie perform the classic skit flawlessly on stage, impressing the queen.
Spyro and Cynder are sent by the guardians to investigate a disturbance, and end up falling into a new world known the the Chaotic Realm, led by an insane queen who "invited" them and another family. Spyro and Cynder both have personal problems: Spyro is raising his twin daughters alone after his mate Ember passed away laying the egg, and Cynder is literally struggling with her own mind. The queen has asked them for help, but what could she need their help with?
The saga manages to keep enough humerous qualities to be concidered Adventure-Comedy.
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!!Tropes in the saga
* AffectionateParody: of {{Oblivion}}.
* AlwaysIdenticalTwins: Virtue and Rose.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Her whole life, Ember has wanted to know what the letter from her parents said. When she finally learns what is says, her response is less than pleased.
* BerserkButton: Celia has very few standards, but never, EVER harm a child in any way, or she will make you suffer a FateWorseThanDeath
* CloudCuckooLander: Virtually everyone in the Madness Realm.
* CompleteMonster: [[invoked]] Ember's father. [[spoiler: He killed his mate because she is the daughter of Malefor and [[ParentalAbandonment left Ember's egg in a swamp to die]]]].
* CuteClumsyGirl: Nala is very pretty, but incredibly clumsy.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Two cases.
** Case one: Ember is [[spoiler: Malefor's granddaughter]], but despite this, she's still the kind-hearted dragoness Spyro fell in love with.
** Case two: Cynder posesses her dark powers, but still sees them as evil.
* DeathByChildbirth: Ember [[spoiler: supposedly]] dies laying an egg.
* DespairEventHorizon: Cynder after breaking free of [[spoiler: [[SuperPoweredEvilSide Torment's]]]] control.
* EveryoneIsBi: And I mean EVERYONE!
* FirstGirlWins: {{Averted}}. Cynder has known Spyro for years and believes Spyro is in love with her, but he actually is in love with Ember, who he took care of for months and grew close to.
* HeroicBSOD: Happens to Ember after learning Spyro lied to her in book one.
** PlayedForLaughs with [[spoiler: Cynder after she sees Spyro and Ember getting intimate]].
** More tragically [[spoiler: Cynder after her SuperPoweredEvilSide slaughters an entire party]].
* IJustWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Cynder after admitting Spyro loves Ember.
* {{Jerkass}}: Whoever Ember's father is.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: The queen may be an AxeCrazy, sadistic slut, but she truly cares for the innocent, especially children.
* LoveAtFirstSight: Averted. Spyro does befriend Ember right away, but doesn't begin falling in love with her until they spend plenty of time together with her readng lessons.
* ManipulativeBitch: Torment.
* MeaningfulName: Virtue and Rose were named for a discussion Spyro had with Ember shortly after becoming a couple.
* NeverLearnedToRead: Ember, having grown up in the wild with no parents, is illiterate in the beginning, and has a note that she was given since she was born. [[HeartwarmingMoments Spyro offers to teach her, beginning their friendship.]] Spyro later regrets this after [[spoiler: Ember reads the note, and learns that Spyro lied to her about it being in another language.]]
* OrderVersusChaos: The main plot.
* PapaWolf: [[spoiler: Spyro jumps into a strange portal so he can follow his daughter Virtue, who jumped in]].
* ReallyGetsAround: Queen Celia has slept with many of her servants, [[BiTheWay male and female]].
* ShoutOut: Oh, so many, but most notably to [[Videogame/TheElderScrollsIVOblivion The Shivering Isles]].
** Others include {{Castlevania}}, DragonBall, Abbot And Costello, MontyPython, StarTrek (though that one was unintentional) and KingdomHearts.
* SuperPoweredEvilSide: [[spoiler: Torment]]
* WhosOnFirst: Logar and Natalie perform the classic skit flawlessly on stage, impressing the queen.
