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** BrickJoke: ...until chapter 14, where a pony corpse is found, bludgeoned to death with a copy of ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''.

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** BrickJoke: ...until chapter 14, where a pony corpse is found, bludgeoned to death with a copy of ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''.''Literature/TheTwilightSaga''.



* EvilLaugh: [[MadScientist Chao]] is a big fan.

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* %%* EvilLaugh: [[MadScientist Chao]] is a big fan.



* [[spoiler: GrandTheftMe: Chao's husband does this, along with BodySurf.]]
* HaremSeeker: The Slime Girls.
* HostileShowTakeover: One of The Slime Girls' goals.

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* %%* [[spoiler: GrandTheftMe: Chao's husband does this, along with BodySurf.]]
* %%* HaremSeeker: The Slime Girls.
* %%* HostileShowTakeover: One of The Slime Girls' goals.



* RidiculouslyHumanRobot: Even more than Chachamaru!

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* %%* RidiculouslyHumanRobot: Even more than Chachamaru!
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* BerserkButton: Turns out Haruna has a ''major'' one: [[spoiler: do ''not'' annihilate her [[SeriousBusiness yaoi collection]], or else she'll use her Artifact to create the Anime/{{Witchblade}} and go on an AxeCrazy RoaringRampageOfRevenge.]]

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* BerserkButton: Turns out Haruna has a ''major'' one: [[spoiler: do ''not'' annihilate her [[SeriousBusiness yaoi collection]], or else she'll use her Artifact to create the Anime/{{Witchblade}} and go on an AxeCrazy AxCrazy RoaringRampageOfRevenge.]]
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Not a Trope Anymore


* InfantImmortality: The Slime Girls claim that Amalthea has this.
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* HurricaneOfPuns: [[PaperThinDisguise Captain Shotacon's]] horse is named Negi-sensei. [[DoubleEntendre We're positive you can see]] [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar where this is going....]]

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* HurricaneOfPuns: [[PaperThinDisguise Captain Shotacon's]] horse is named Negi-sensei. [[DoubleEntendre We're positive you can see]] [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar see where this is going....]]
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-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of little boys – [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]]"

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-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of little boys – [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]]"
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Capitalization was fixed from FanFic.Out Of Control to Fanfic.Out Of Control. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact


-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of little boys – [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]]"

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-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of little boys – [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]]"
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A ''Manga/MahouSenseiNegima'' fanfiction collaboration story by the tropers of Ala Iridia. The story takes place after the Magic World arc where Chao has returned and helps Hakase build an even more RidiculouslyHumanRobot than Chachamaru. This has some unexpected results as class A discovers the robot and they try to look after it.

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A ''Manga/MahouSenseiNegima'' ''Manga/NegimaMagisterNegiMagi'' fanfiction collaboration story by the tropers of Ala Iridia. The story takes place after the Magic World arc where Chao has returned and helps Hakase build an even more RidiculouslyHumanRobot than Chachamaru. This has some unexpected results as class A discovers the robot and they try to look after it.
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-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of little boys – [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"

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-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of little boys – [[AndZoidberg [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"MOVES!]]"



* MarryThemAll: For [[spoiler: Chao]], but [[spoiler: one of her husbands]] [[{{Deconstruction}} isn't happy about it.]]

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* MarryThemAll: For [[spoiler: Chao]], but [[spoiler: one of her husbands]] [[{{Deconstruction}} isn't happy about it.]]it]].



* ShoutOut: The nameless KnightTemplar ChurchMilitant [[MoralGuardians Moral Guardian]] who [[spoiler: burns Haruna's yaoi collection]] seems to be ''very'' similar to [[{{Hellsing}} Alexander Anderson]].
** Also, [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]] Not to mention [[spoiler: Haruna drawing and then ''using'' [[ArtifactOfDoom the Witchblade]]....]]

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* ShoutOut: The nameless KnightTemplar ChurchMilitant [[MoralGuardians Moral Guardian]] {{Moral Guardian|s}} who [[spoiler: burns Haruna's yaoi collection]] seems to be ''very'' similar to [[{{Hellsing}} [[Manga/{{Hellsing}} Alexander Anderson]].
** Also, [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]] Not to mention [[spoiler: Haruna drawing and then ''using'' [[ArtifactOfDoom the Witchblade]]....]]Witchblade]]..]].
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Lolicon and shotacon have been disambiguated. Links with too little context are being removed - "paedo" is not always a trope, examples where the tropeworthiness is unclear are being removed. Also, please do not use "loli" as a synonym for little girl; see Lolicon And Shotacon as to why not


** Also [[spoiler: Ayaka. [[PaperThinDisguise Or should we say]] [[VideoGame/{{F-Zero}} Captain Shotacon]]?]]

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** Also [[spoiler: Ayaka. [[PaperThinDisguise Or should we say]] [[VideoGame/{{F-Zero}} [[VideoGame/{{FZero}} Captain Shotacon]]?]]



-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of [[{{Shotacon}} little boys]] – [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"

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-->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of [[{{Shotacon}} little boys]] boys – [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"
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Misuse. It's Genre Savvy, not just "savvy".


* GenreSavvy: The Slime Girls are. They are trying (and failing) to be DangerouslyGenreSavvy.
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A ''MahouSenseiNegima'' fanfiction collaboration story by the tropers of Ala Iridia. The story takes place after the Magic World arc where Chao has returned and helps Hakase build an even more RidiculouslyHumanRobot than Chachamaru. This has some unexpected results as class A discovers the robot and they try to look after it.

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A ''MahouSenseiNegima'' ''Manga/MahouSenseiNegima'' fanfiction collaboration story by the tropers of Ala Iridia. The story takes place after the Magic World arc where Chao has returned and helps Hakase build an even more RidiculouslyHumanRobot than Chachamaru. This has some unexpected results as class A discovers the robot and they try to look after it.
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Hey Its That Guy cut by TRS decision. Ditto for Hey Its That Voice.


* ActorAllusion[=/=]HeyItsThatVoice: Haruna gets one in chapter 21, though it may not be readily apparent. [[spoiler: Check for a certain ''other'' [[Anime/{{Witchblade}} fanservice-heavy anime]] that her English VA did.]]

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* ActorAllusion[=/=]HeyItsThatVoice: ActorAllusion: Haruna gets one in chapter 21, though it may not be readily apparent. [[spoiler: Check for a certain ''other'' [[Anime/{{Witchblade}} fanservice-heavy anime]] that her English VA did.]]
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** Also, [[SuperSmashBros SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]] Not to mention [[spoiler: Haruna drawing and then ''using'' [[ArtifactOfDoom the Witchblade]]....]]

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** Also, [[SuperSmashBros [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]] Not to mention [[spoiler: Haruna drawing and then ''using'' [[ArtifactOfDoom the Witchblade]]....]]

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* MediumAwareness: In one chapter, Asuna explicitly refers to the story as a T rated fanfic when it looks like Eva's about to start talking about things that belong in an M rated fanfic.

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* MarryThemAll: For [[spoiler: Chao]], but [[spoiler: one of her husbands]] [[{{Deconstruction}} isn't happy about it.]]
* MediumAwareness: In one chapter, Asuna explicitly refers to the story as a T rated fanfic [[ThinkOfTheCensors when it looks like Eva's about to start talking about things that belong in an M rated fanfic.fanfic]].



* TenchiSolution: For [[spoiler: Chao]], but [[spoiler: one of her husbands]] [[{{Deconstruction}} isn't happy about it.]]

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Rename.


* BlackComedy: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/7 Chapter 7]] consists of Chachamaru trying to kill her newborn little sister. Given said sister is a robot, it doesn't really work that well.



* DeadBabyComedy: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/7 Chapter 7]] consists of Chachamaru trying to kill her newborn little sister. Given said sister is a robot, it doesn't really work that well.
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* SayMyName: CHAAAAAAAAOOOOO!
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* HurricaneOfPuns: [[PaperThinDisguise Captain Shotacon's]] horse is named Negi-sensei. [[DoubleEntendre We're positive you can see]] [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar where this is going....]]
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Haruna: "Give me ''some'' credit, at least. It's not like I go around molesting babies or anything."
** LampshadeHanging: "The way you say that gives me cause for suspicion-yo."

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the namespace Fix - also, sorted a bit


The story can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/1/Out_of_Control here]].

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The story can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/1/Out_of_Control here]].
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** Also [[spoiler: Ayaka. [[PaperThinDisguise Or should we say]] [[FZero Captain Shotacon]]?]]

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** Also [[spoiler: Ayaka. [[PaperThinDisguise Or should we say]] [[FZero [[VideoGame/{{F-Zero}} Captain Shotacon]]?]]



* DeadBabyComedy: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/7 Chapter 7]] consists of Chachamaru trying to kill her newborn little sister. Given said sister is a robot, it doesn't really work that well.



* DeadBabyComedy: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6889369/7 Chapter 7]] consists of Chachamaru trying to kill her newborn little sister. Given said sister is a robot, it doesn't really work that well.



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* [[CardboardPrison: [[CrazyJealousGuy Tao Lingshen]] escapes, ''somehow''.]]

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* [[CardboardPrison: [[spoiler: CardboardPrison: [[CrazyJealousGuy Tao Lingshen]] escapes, ''somehow''.]]



-->[[spoiler '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of [[{{Shotacon}} little boys]] – [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"

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-->[[spoiler -->[[spoiler: '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of [[{{Shotacon}} little boys]] – [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"



* [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge: ''Haruna''.]]

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* [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: RoaringRampageOfRevenge: ''Haruna''.]]
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* ActorAllusion[=/=]HeyItsThatVoice: Haruna gets one in chapter 21, though it may not be readily apparent. [[spoiler: Check for a certain ''other'' [[Anime/{{Witchblade}} fanservice-heavy anime]] that her English VA did.]]


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** Also [[spoiler: Ayaka. [[PaperThinDisguise Or should we say]] [[FZero Captain Shotacon]]?]]
* BerserkButton: Turns out Haruna has a ''major'' one: [[spoiler: do ''not'' annihilate her [[SeriousBusiness yaoi collection]], or else she'll use her Artifact to create the Anime/{{Witchblade}} and go on an AxeCrazy RoaringRampageOfRevenge.]]


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* [[CardboardPrison: [[CrazyJealousGuy Tao Lingshen]] escapes, ''somehow''.]]
* [[spoiler: CharlesAtlasSuperpower and MegatonPunch: Good ''lord'', Ayaka. The aftereffects of her MegatonPunch are [[ExaggeratedTrope visible from orbit]].'']]


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* InTheNameOfTheMoon
-->[[spoiler '''Ayaka:''']] "You! I don't know who you are nor do I care, but those who threaten the lives of [[{{Shotacon}} little boys]] – [[AndZoidberg and also other innocent people]] - [[ThisIsUnforgivable cannot be forgiven]]! [[BringIt COME NOW, VILLAIN, AND SHOW ME YOUR MOVES]]!"


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* [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge: ''Haruna''.]]
* ShoutOut: The nameless KnightTemplar ChurchMilitant [[MoralGuardians Moral Guardian]] who [[spoiler: burns Haruna's yaoi collection]] seems to be ''very'' similar to [[{{Hellsing}} Alexander Anderson]].
** Also, [[SuperSmashBros SHOW ME YOUR MOVES!]] Not to mention [[spoiler: Haruna drawing and then ''using'' [[ArtifactOfDoom the Witchblade]]....]]


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* [[WorldOfHam World of Scenery-Chewing and]] HotBlooded: If only in the chapter written by Gundam Kaiser, almost everyone yells a lot.
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* BigNo: When Asuna learns that she needs to re-qrite one of her reports, her scream can be heard in Kyoto.

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* BigNo: When Asuna learns that she needs to re-qrite rewrite one of her reports, her scream can be heard in Kyoto.



* RidiculouslyHumanRobot: Even more than Chahchamaru!

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* RidiculouslyHumanRobot: Even more than Chahchamaru!Chachamaru!
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: [[LampshadeHanging Title]] of the chapter in which [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Ponies]] show up. This has been soundly ignored by all subsequent contributors.

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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: [[LampshadeHanging Title]] Tit]][[InvokedTrope le]] of the chapter in which [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Ponies]] show up. This has been soundly ignored by all subsequent contributors.



--> The we learn that the pony was [[spoiler: The Great and Powerful Trixie]]

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--> The *** Then we learn that the pony was [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The Great and Powerful Trixie]]
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: [[LampshadeHanging Title]] of the chapter in which [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Ponies]] show up. This has been soundly ignored by all subsequent contributors.

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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: [[LampshadeHanging Title]] of the chapter in which [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Ponies]] show up. This has been soundly ignored by all subsequent contributors.
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Eliminated \"If You Know What I Mean\" sinkhole as part of Special Efforts cleanup.


* MediumAwareness: In one chapter, Asuna explicitly refers to the story as a T rated fanfic when it looks like Eva's about to start talking about things that belong [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean in an M rated fanfic.]]

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* MediumAwareness: In one chapter, Asuna explicitly refers to the story as a T rated fanfic when it looks like Eva's about to start talking about things that belong [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean in an M rated fanfic.]]

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