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** There are also references to space filksongs like [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mZ9pKvCmk Surprise!]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cVOOXQo22o The Eagle Has Landed]], and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ryd_p20XEU Fire In The Sky]].
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** There are also references to space filksongs like [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mZ9pKvCmk Surprise!]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cVOOXQo22o The Eagle Has Landed]], Hope Eyrie]], and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ryd_p20XEU Fire In The Sky]].
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic '''''Our First Steps''''', written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic '''''Our ''Our First Steps''''', Steps'', written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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* NoodleIncident: Alluded to by Celestia as what, in the distant past, rearranged the landscape to the point where "Cape" Coltaveral is landlocked.
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** Some of the chapter titles are drawn from filksongs like [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mZ9pKvCmk Surprise!]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ryd_p20XEU Fire In The Sky]].
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** Some of the chapter titles There are drawn from also references to space filksongs like [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mZ9pKvCmk Surprise!]] Surprise!]], [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cVOOXQo22o The Eagle Has Landed]], and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ryd_p20XEU Fire In The Sky]].
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** Some of the chapter titles are drawn from filksongs like [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mZ9pKvCmk Surprise!]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ryd_p20XEU Fire In The Sky]].
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* {{Magitek}}: Some of Equestria's technology works like this. The space program on the other hand avoids using magic so that pegasi and earth ponies can operate the rockets and not just unicorns.
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* DeusExMachina: A literal one. [[spoiler:At the end of Part 8 Celestia saves the day.]]
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic Our First Steps, written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic Our '''''Our First Steps, Steps''''', written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
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Can be found [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-our-first-steps.html here]].
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Can be found [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-our-first-steps.html here]] and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30248/Our-First-Steps here]].
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the My Little Pony Fanfic Our First Steps, written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and the topic of the My Little Pony ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic Our First Steps, written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
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* Fire-ForgedFriends: Most of the Cosmodrome staff become this. [[spoiler: especially the ones that stay after they lose government funding and most leave.]]
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* BreatherEpisode: Part 9
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: [[spoiler: At the end of Part 8]] Zvezda remarks that if this was a story she'd want her money back because of the Deus Ex Machina ending.
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and where Equestria's secretive space program is taking place, with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
But a grand task like this never was easy and the staff and crew at Cape Coltaveral are in for a long struggle fighting setbacks, accidents and even their own govermant to achive their dream.
But a grand task like this never was easy and the staff and crew at Cape Coltaveral are in for a long struggle fighting setbacks, accidents and even their own govermant to achive their dream.
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Welcome to Cape Coltaveral, headquarters of the Bureau of Atmospheric Experimentation and where Equestria's secretive the topic of the My Little Pony Fanfic Our First Steps, written by Mrakoplaz. Where we follow the ponies behind Equestria's space program is taking place, with the goal of launching a pony into orbit.
orbit.
But a grand task like this never was easy and the staff and crew at Cape Coltaveral are in for a long struggle fightingsetbacks, setbacks and accidents and even their own govermant to achive their dream.
But a grand task like this never was easy and the staff and crew at Cape Coltaveral are in for a long struggle fighting
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* DeusExMachina: A litteral one. At [[spoiler:At the end of Part 8 Celestia saves the day.
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