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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Mayuri]] is the first captain to die. Just to make sure he's dead, [[spoiler: Ichigo eats him, then he gets assimilated into Zangetsu]]. The scene is both awesome and mild NightmareFuel.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Mayuri]] is the first captain to die. Just to make sure he's dead, [[spoiler: Ichigo eats him, then he gets assimilated into Zangetsu]]. The scene is both awesome and mild NightmareFuel.
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* BroughtDownToNormal: [[spoiler: [[Anime/CodeGeass Sayoko]] and [[LightNovel/ShakuganNoShana Wilhelmina]] are Quincy who lost their powers]].
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* BroughtDownToNormal: [[spoiler: [[Anime/CodeGeass Sayoko]] and [[LightNovel/ShakuganNoShana [[Literature/ShakuganNoShana Wilhelmina]] are Quincy who lost their powers]].
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* NinjaMaid: [[spoiler: [[Anime/CodeGeass Sayoko]] and [[LightNovel/ShakuganNoShana Wilhelmina]] appear as BroughtDownToNormal Quincy. You just have to feel sorry for the Bount.]]
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* NinjaMaid: [[spoiler: [[Anime/CodeGeass Sayoko]] and [[LightNovel/ShakuganNoShana [[Literature/ShakuganNoShana Wilhelmina]] appear as BroughtDownToNormal Quincy. You just have to feel sorry for the Bount.]]
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** [[Anime/CodeGeass Sayoko]] and [[LightNovel/ShakuganNoShana Wilhelmina]] appear as maids at Uryuu's house.
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** [[Anime/CodeGeass Sayoko]] and [[LightNovel/ShakuganNoShana [[Literature/ShakuganNoShana Wilhelmina]] appear as maids at Uryuu's house.
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* ActionGirl: Pretty much every female Shinigami that has appeared. The author has stated his desire to have Senna be one (as opposed to the movie where she was TheChick).
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* ActionGirl: Pretty much every female Shinigami that has appeared. The author has stated his desire to have Senna be one (as opposed to the movie where she was TheChick).TheHeart).
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* Creator/DonLaFontaine: Provides narration for the Season II trailer. Fortunately, being dead is no handicap in a story like this.
* DynamicEntry: Ichigo faces off against Byakuya and Komamura in this manner.
* DynamicEntry: Ichigo faces off against Byakuya and Komamura in this manner.
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* Creator/DonLaFontaine: Provides narration for the Season II trailer. Fortunately, being dead is no handicap in DramaticHighPerching:
** In chapter 4, Zangetsu introduces himself to Ichigo [[spoiler: and (in chapter 8) Mayuri]] while standing on astory like this.
lamp post.
** Ikkaku and Yumichika are first shown gloating down at Chad and Orihime from on top of a nearby wall.* DynamicEntry: Ichigo faces off against Byakuya and Komamura in this manner.
** In chapter 4, Zangetsu introduces himself to Ichigo [[spoiler: and (in chapter 8) Mayuri]] while standing on a
** Ikkaku and Yumichika are first shown gloating down at Chad and Orihime from on top of a nearby wall.* DynamicEntry: Ichigo faces off against Byakuya and Komamura in this manner.
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* IHaveTheHighGround: In chapter 4, Zangetsu introduces himself to Ichigo [[spoiler: and (in chapter 8) Mayuri]] while standing on a lamp post.
** Ikkaku and Yumichika are first shown gloating down at Chad and Orihime from on top of a nearby wall.
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* WhatIsThisFeeling: [[spoiler: After having his carefully laid plans reduced to shambles and nearly dying, Aizen experiences an emotion he isn’t familiar with. After blocking a combined attack from Ichigo, Ishida, and Kenpachi that manages to cut his cheek, he finally realizes that he’s feeling ''excitement'' over how there’s someone capable of opposing him.]]
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** Also averted by the remaining members of the 12th division, who point out that invasive tests on [[spoiler:Senna]] [[RealityEnsues run the risk of destroying a unique subject]]. This is why real scientists tend to avert this trope.
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** Also averted by the remaining members of the 12th division, who point out that invasive tests on [[spoiler:Senna]] [[RealityEnsues run the risk of destroying a unique subject]].subject. This is why real scientists tend to avert this trope.
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* NotSoInvincibleAfterAll: Aizen's habit of {{No Sell}}ing everything bites him in the ass when Orihime attacks him. Turns out assuming you can shrug everything off isn't a good idea against a RealityWarper.
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* RealityEnsues: Aizen's habit of {{No Sell}}ing everything bites him in the ass when Orihime attacks him. Turns out assuming you can shrug everything off isn't a good idea against a RealityWarper.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7462056/1/Not_bQuite_b_as_bPlanned_b/ Not Quite as Planned]] is a ForWantOfANail Manga/{{Bleach}} fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1734433/cerokun/ cerokun]].
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Not Quite as Planned covers the entirety of the Soul Society Arc. The sequel, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8214538/1/NQaP_Season_II_Still_Not_Going_as_Planned/ Still Not Going as Planned]], picks up immediately after the first ends.
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--> '''Mayuri'': (To Ichigo) "What a fantastic Resureccion! I can't wait to vivisect you in this form!"
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* TheyWouldCutYouUp
TheyWouldCutYouUp: [[MadScientist Mayuri]] would, at least.
-->'''Mayuri'': '''Mayuri''': (To Ichigo) "What a fantastic Resureccion! I can't wait to vivisect you in this form!"
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: [[spoiler:Aizen]] is guilty of this due to the kids being much better trained then in cannon during the invasion. [[spoiler: Orihime and Ichigo come very close to killing him due to his arrogance. Then Ishida nearly kills him again with a powered up arrow when he lets his guard down in the Negacion field.]]
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: [[spoiler:Aizen]] is guilty of this due to the kids being much better trained then than in cannon canon during the invasion. [[spoiler: Orihime and Ichigo come very close to killing him due to his arrogance. Then Ishida nearly kills him again with a powered up arrow when he lets his guard down in the Negacion field.]]
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** Also averted by the remaining members of the 12th division, who point out that invasive tests on [[spoiler:Senna]][[RealityEnsues run the risk of destroying a unique subject]]. This is why real scientists tend to avert this trope.
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** Also averted by the remaining members of the 12th division, who point out that invasive tests on [[spoiler:Senna]][[RealityEnsues [[spoiler:Senna]] [[RealityEnsues run the risk of destroying a unique subject]]. This is why real scientists tend to avert this trope.
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** Also averted by the remaining members of the 12th division, who point out that invasive tests on [[spoiler:Senna]][[RealityEnsues: run the risk of destroying a unique subject]]. This is why real scientists tend to avert this trope.
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** Also averted by the remaining members of the 12th division, who point out that invasive tests on [[spoiler:Senna]][[RealityEnsues: [[spoiler:Senna]][[RealityEnsues run the risk of destroying a unique subject]]. This is why real scientists tend to avert this trope.
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** Also averted by the remaining members of the 12th division, who point out that invasive tests on [[spoiler:Senna]] [[RealityEnsues:run the risk of destroying a unique subject]]. This is why real scientists tend to avert this trope.
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** Also averted by the remaining members of the 12th division, who point out that invasive tests on [[spoiler:Senna]] [[RealityEnsues:run [[spoiler:Senna]][[RealityEnsues: run the risk of destroying a unique subject]]. This is why real scientists tend to avert this trope.
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** Also averted by the remaining members of the 12th division, who point out that invasive tests on [[spoiler:Senna]] [[RealityEnsues:run the risk of destroying a unique subject]]. This is why real scientists tend to avert this trope.
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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: Senna]] attempts one on Ichigo during their first meeting. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny It fails]] thanks to his [[NighInvulnerable Hierro]].
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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: Senna]] attempts one on Ichigo during their first meeting. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments It fails]] thanks to his [[NighInvulnerable Hierro]].
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: [[spoiler:Aizen]] is guilty of this due to the kids being much better trained then in cannon during the invasion. [[spoiler:Both Orihime and Ichigo come very close to killing him due to having powers he just didn't expect.]]
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: [[spoiler:Aizen]] is guilty of this due to the kids being much better trained then in cannon during the invasion. [[spoiler:Both [[spoiler: Orihime and Ichigo come very close to killing him due to having powers his arrogance. Then Ishida nearly kills him again with a powered up arrow when he just didn't expect.lets his guard down in the Negacion field.]]
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: [[spoiler:Aizen]] is guilty of this due to the kids being much better trained then in cannon during the invasion. [[spoiler:Both Orihime and Ichigo come very close to killing him due to having powers he just didn't expect.]]
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* CovertPervert: [[spoiler:Senna]] seems to have a very dirty mind, and is quick to assume someone wants to do "perverted things" to her, which Ichigo lampshades.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: The whole Rukia rescue plan has more holes in it that a piece of Swiss cheese, with the most gaping one being the fact that the gang had no clue how they'd get out of the Seireitei afterwards. This is lampshaded mercilessly.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: The whole Rukia rescue plan has more holes in it that a piece of Swiss cheese, with the most gaping one being the fact that the gang had no clue how they'd get out of the Seireitei afterwards.afterward. This is lampshaded mercilessly.
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** Orihime's rambling in chapter 6 is full of references to MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail
*** In Chapter 9 of the sequel, [[spoiler: Senna and Ichigo]] actually get several lines into the [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Black Knight sketch]].
*** In Chapter 9 of the sequel, [[spoiler: Senna and Ichigo]] actually get several lines into the [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Black Knight sketch]].
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** Orihime's rambling in chapter 6 is full of references to MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail
''Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail''.
*** In Chapter 9 of the sequel, [[spoiler: Senna and Ichigo]] actually get several lines into the[[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail [[Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Black Knight sketch]].
*** In Chapter 9 of the sequel, [[spoiler: Senna and Ichigo]] actually get several lines into the
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** Ban and Ho seem to be fans of [[Main/DoctorWho the Doctor]].
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** Ban and Ho seem to be fans of [[Main/DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho the Doctor]].
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** "[[FateStayNight I am the bone of my sword.]]"
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* WorldofBadass: Seems to be going in this direction. As the author said (paraphrased)"if you haven't seen some characters yet it's because they're busy kicking ass".
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* BasementDweller: Ichigo calls out the [[spoiler:Visards]] for being this, since before the events of the story, they last left their base (not including errands) was when they went to see Evangelion 2.0 ''five and 1/2 years ago''!
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** They're ''trying'' to do this with [[spoiler:Senna]].
** [[spoiler:In this continuity is possible that a mixed-blood Quincy can survive having Yhwach take their powers away]].
** They're ''trying'' to do this with [[spoiler:Senna]].
** [[spoiler:In this continuity is possible that a mixed-blood Quincy can survive having Yhwach take their powers away]].
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** Before that, Ichigo and Ishia's timely appearance is what prevents Aaroniero from beating the remains of the Thirteenth Division into a bloody pulp.
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* NinjaMaid: [[spoiler: [[Anime/CodeGeass Sayoko]] and [[LightNovel/ShakuganNoShana Wilhelmina]] appear as BroughtDownToNormal Quincy. You just have to feel sorry for the Bount.]]
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* TakeTheThirdOption: Urahara outright references this in the beginning of the second chapter when talking about how Ichigo got his powers "back".
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* ExtremeOmnivore: Ichigo starts eating [[spoiler: Ukitake's]] ''utensils'' once he runs through all of his food.
