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* ADateWithRosiePalms: [[spoiler:Chalcedony has apparently fantasised about "straightening out" Nomination, which isn't helping her guilt over being a little more bigoted than she lets on]].


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* MasturbationMeansSexualFrustration: [[spoiler:Chalcedony has apparently fantasised about "straightening out" Nomination, which isn't helping her guilt over being a little more bigoted than she lets on]].
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* UncannyValley: InUniverse, the Major hits this for Chartreuse thanks to her stainless steel teeth.
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* AdultFear: Chalcedony wants foals, but is genuinely worried about how her disability will affect that, and worries that her (hypothetical) offspring will be taken from her, as well as the difficulties acquiring and keeping a mate while she's blind.
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* SpotOfTea: Casual-Tea of a Name Tearoom have a sale on that Chartreuse decides must be taken advantage of, given that their household is perpetually broke. When she gets inside and finds Nomination with a black eye she puts the kettle on, and she uses it to help recover from the horrors of the infestation (though as part of her newfound insight on [[FalseDichotomy False Dichotomies]], notes that it doesn't prevent her also enjoying coffee).
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* OurMagesAreDifferent: The first chapter involves something of a discussion of this, with Dim and Sunburst's scientific approach (Mages are like Scholars) contrasting with Chartreuse' earlier training with Rarity, who takes a more artistic approach to her sorcery (Mages are like Artists), with both approaches involving training and practice (Mages are like Athletes). Obviously, being a [[WitchSpecies unicorn]] is necessary for both these particular styles.

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* OurMagesAreDifferent: The first chapter involves something of a discussion of this, with Dim and Sunburst's scientific approach (Mages are like Scholars) contrasting with Chartreuse' earlier training with Rarity, who takes a more artistic approach to her sorcery (Mages are like Artists), with both approaches involving training and practice (Mages are like Athletes). Obviously, being a [[WitchSpecies [[MageSpecies unicorn]] is necessary for both these particular styles.
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A sequel to Fanfic/CrystalCamaraderie, a story in Fanfic/TheWeedverse by Kudzuhaiku, Nom's Mom Bomb can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/403220/noms-mom-bomb here]]

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A sequel to Fanfic/CrystalCamaraderie, ''Fanfic/CrystalCamaraderie'', a story in Fanfic/TheWeedverse ''Fanfic/TheWeedverse'' by Kudzuhaiku, Nom's ''Nom's Mom Bomb Bomb'' can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/403220/noms-mom-bomb here]]


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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Major has revealed that Nomination has far exceeded expectations, and that she's very proud of what he is and will become, but she's leaving on a permanent posting soon, so for all the new closeness between her and her son, it's unlikely to really go anywhere. Still, Nomination knows he is loved and his contributions are valued]].



* CelibateHero: In contrast to her housemates, Chartreuse doesn't care about seeking out a romantic partner, her studies keep her too busy. It's ZigZagged though, she has a crush on Chalcedony that she confesses ([[Incompatible Orientation without result]]) later in the story.

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* CelibateHero: In contrast to her housemates, Chartreuse doesn't care about seeking out a romantic partner, her studies keep her too busy. It's ZigZagged though, she has a crush on Chalcedony that she confesses ([[Incompatible Orientation ([[IncompatibleOrientation without result]]) later in the story.story.
* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler:Nomination's number (88 33 23 44) is far more significant than it appears. Even Nomination doesn't know it's meaning. He's the 88th generation of his bloodline. Colony 33 (only eleven survive, unfortunately). 23 is the successful outcomes from the 88 generations. 44 is the number in the control group, and an unheard-of high, offering valuable hope for stability]].



* FantasticCasteSystem: Reference is made to one that structures draconic pegasus society.
* FantasyForbiddingMother: ZigZagged, Nomination's mother is not keen on his studying at an outside school or his desire to pursue cooking as a career (and has given him major issues over it), but she still fought against Command, risking her own career, to make sure he could do it.

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* FantasticCasteSystem: Reference is made to one that structures draconic pegasus society.
society. [[spoiler:The castes are all control groups, taking different approaches to building a society and culture so they can find the one that works best]].
* FantasyForbiddingMother: ZigZagged, Nomination's mother is not keen on his studying at an outside school or his desire to pursue cooking as a career (and has given him major issues over it), but she still fought against Command, risking her own career, to make sure he could do it. [[spoiler:She really wants him to do the cooking, and integrate into civilian society. She was only trying to keep him from getting crushed if it fell apart, and the fact it hasn't fallen apart brings her so much joy]].



* MotorMouth: While she tries to remain reserved, Chartreuse gets very overexcited over the revelations about Nomination.



* NotSoStoic: [[spoiler:Chalcedony's shameless flirting with Nomination is enough to cause the Major to break down laughing, to Nomination's astonishment]].



* SoProudOfYou: The Major is sincerely proud of what Nomination has achieved, although her first statement of this comes before he comes out.

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* SoProudOfYou: The Major is sincerely proud of what Nomination has achieved, although her first statement of this comes before he comes out. [[spoiler:Her response to him coming out is to say that he's exceeded all her expectations, even if it's not what they were initially after. Nomination is not the last of his sequence, he is the first of a new one, meant to help integrate draconic pegasi into the whole of Equestrian society, rather than their current role as Super Soldiers on the fringe]].

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* CelibateHero: In contrast to her housemates, Chartreuse doesn't care about seeking out a romantic partner, her studies keep her too busy. It's ZigZagged though, she has an unacted-upon crush on Chalcedony.

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* CelibateHero: In contrast to her housemates, Chartreuse doesn't care about seeking out a romantic partner, her studies keep her too busy. It's ZigZagged though, she has an unacted-upon a crush on Chalcedony.Chalcedony that she confesses ([[Incompatible Orientation without result]]) later in the story.



* CultureClash: Chalcedony and Chartreuse (and probably the reader), upon first exposure to the letter from Nomination's mother, read it as being incredibly cold[[note]]Chartreuse explicitly compares it to the letters written by Shining Armor to the noble houses he doesn't like.[[/note]], written with military precision and no emotion. Nomination instead recognises the affection behind it, after all, his mother didn't have to use names (numbers are sufficient) and remind him that she is his mother, not just his superior, both of which waste ink and space. Also, Nomination's serial number is one higher than her own, he's the next in a sequence. Her care might be wrapped up in her expectations, but she does care.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: We get some insight into Chalcedony's, as a blind orphan who was, at least at some point, a slave.
* DeathGlare: After Nomination erupts into a self-loathing rant, Chartreuse inflicts one so strong Chalcedony claims even she can see it. She's been practicing in the mirror, with the assistance of a book written by Princess Celestia. Later on, when the Major tries using one on Chalcedony in more dramatic circumstances, it's entirely ineffective, due to Chalcedony being, well, blind.

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* CultureClash: Chalcedony and Chartreuse (and probably the reader), upon first exposure to the letter from Nomination's mother, read it as being incredibly cold[[note]]Chartreuse explicitly compares it to the letters written by Shining Armor to the noble houses he doesn't like.[[/note]], written with military precision and no emotion. Nomination instead recognises the affection behind it, after all, his mother didn't have to use names (numbers are sufficient) and remind him that she is his mother, not just his superior, both of which waste ink and space. Also, Nomination's serial number is one higher than her own, he's the next in a sequence. Her care might be wrapped up in her expectations, but she does care.
care. Chalcedony's response to actually meeting the Major is little better, with her angry at the Major for being a bad mother by her standards.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: We get some insight into Chalcedony's, as a blind orphan who was, at least at some point, a slave.
was under King Sombra's rule for much of her childhood.
* DeathGlare: After Nomination erupts into a self-loathing rant, Chartreuse inflicts one so strong Chalcedony claims even she can see it. She's been practicing in the mirror, with the assistance of a book written by Princess Celestia. Later on, when the Major tries using one on Chalcedony in more dramatic circumstances, it's entirely ineffective, due to Chalcedony being, well, blind. Chalcedony's stare is more effective the other way, with the Major not meeting her gaze.


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* DragonHoard: {{Discussed}}, a young Nomination apparently kept his choco-rations, and Command feared it was a sign of (very undesireable) hoarding instincts. It wasn't, he just wanted to combine them with his berry rations.
* ExpospeakGag: The Major's first experience of tea does not go well, and she describes it in these terms.


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* FantasticCasteSystem: Reference is made to one that structures draconic pegasus society.


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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Part of Pasteur's talent is apparently knowing which criminals can be caught (and are therefore worth pursuing).


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* SoProudOfYou: The Major is sincerely proud of what Nomination has achieved, although her first statement of this comes before he comes out.


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* WeCanRebuildHim: A throwaway line from the Major implies she's been through this.

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* AdultFear: Chalcedony wants foals, but is genuinely worried about how her disability will affect that, and worries that her (hypothetical) offspring will be taken from her, as well as the difficulties acquiring and keeping a mate while she's blind.



* BalloonBelly: Chalcedony, following one of Nomination's breakfasts.



* DeathGlare: After Nomination erupts into a self-loathing rant, Chartreuse inflicts one so strong Chalcedony claims even she can see it. She's been practicing in the mirror, with the assistance of a book written by Princess Celestia.

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* DeathGlare: After Nomination erupts into a self-loathing rant, Chartreuse inflicts one so strong Chalcedony claims even she can see it. She's been practicing in the mirror, with the assistance of a book written by Princess Celestia. Later on, when the Major tries using one on Chalcedony in more dramatic circumstances, it's entirely ineffective, due to Chalcedony being, well, blind.


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* DistractedByTheSexy: For a gay colt, Nomination gets rather distracted by Chartreuse being domineering and Chalcedony talking about her butt[[note]]He is definitely gay, but he also likes being dominated (or dominating)[[/note]].


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* ExpectingSomeoneTaller: The first impression we get of the Major is a small and unassuming pegasus mare, which comes as something of a surprise to Chartreuse and the readers, given what we've heard of her. Quickly shown to be a [[SubvertedTrope Subversion]], as it's an illusion to allow her to blend in. She's actually a massive[[note]]Her neck is wider than Chartreuse' entire body[[/note]] draconic pegasus.
* EyepatchOfPower: One of the Major's eyes has been replaced with a screwed-on metal plate.


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* MindOverManners: {{Averted}}, the Major casually uses her mind-reading powers to analyse Chartreuse, and she mucks around a bit with her fear while she's at it.


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* UncannyValley: InUniverse, the Major hits this for Chartreuse thanks to her stainless steel teeth.


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* WhatTheHellHero: Chalcedony yells at the Major over her distant parenting style.

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After putting the kettle on and having a go at working on Nomination's {{Angst}}, she reads him his letter. Turns out the Major, his mother, is coming to inspect his living conditions. Nomination proceeds to [[OhCrap screech the place down]][[note]]Not literally, though Chartreuse is briefly concerned about the structural integrity of the tableware[[/note]], not unreasonably, and so, preparations begin. Unfortunately, Chartreuse' duties don't stop just because of this, and she has to go and deal with a [[ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight shadowling]] infestation with Dim. Things go south, badly.

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After putting the kettle on and having a go at working on Nomination's {{Angst}}, she reads him his letter. Turns out the Major, his mother, is coming to inspect his living conditions. Nomination proceeds to [[OhCrap screech the place down]][[note]]Not literally, though Chartreuse is briefly concerned about the structural integrity of the tableware[[/note]], not unreasonably, and so, preparations begin. Unfortunately, Chartreuse' duties don't stop just because of this, and she has to go and deal with a [[ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight shadowling]] infestation with Dim. Things go south, badly.
badly, and when it's over Chartreuse has a new insight into what she wants, and what is needed for Nomination. With a [[WillNotTellALie new policy]], she opens up to her friends, and encourages Nomination to do the same for his mother.



* ADateWithRosiePalms: [[spoiler:Chalcedony has apparently fantasised about "straightening out" Nomination, which isn't helping her guilt over being a little more bigoted than she lets on]].



* BullyHunter: When Nomination gets assaulted by the colt he's just asked out, Chalcedony gets [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown violent]].

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* BullyHunter: When Nomination gets assaulted by the colt he's just asked out, Chalcedony gets [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown violent]]. [[spoiler:The ferocity of her attack was at least partially inspired by her own repressed bigotry]].



* ComingOutStory: The story is about Chartreuse coming to understand that she needs to be honest about what she wants, and that she needs to encourage Nomination to do the same in the classic form of the trope. Interestingly, despite the fact they're both gay, they're actually going opposite ways, Chartreuse' natural place in the day giving way to a more twilit existence, while Nomination is leaving his birthplace in the night to find his place in the day.



* TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne: Chalcedony is able to see [[spoiler:the newly-magical nature of Chartreuse' leg, following the infestation. Nomination is also able to sense that she's a potential danger]].



* HasAType: Chartreuse's is white coats, curves and feminine voices.



* IncompatibleOrientation: As part of her [[WillNotTellALie new policy]], Chartreuse confesses her crush on Chalcedony. Chalcedony is straight, and wants foals, so it's not going to work out.



* SpotOfTea: Casual-Tea of a Name Tearoom have a sale on that Chartreuse decides must be taken advantage of, given that their household is perpetually broke. When she gets inside and finds Nomination with a black eye she puts the kettle on.

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* TroubledSympatheticBigot: [[spoiler:Chalcedony isn't as OK with Nomination's homosexuality as she pretends. She knows it's wrong, but she's a foal from an ancient age where it really wasn't done to be gay]].
* TrueCompanions: Chartreuse realises that she has this relationship with Nomination and Chalcedony, even beyond her transient crush on Chalcedony.


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* WillNotTellALie: Chartreuse decides to not tell lies, or even keep secrets, from her friends, as anything buried is a psychological weakness that can be used against her.

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After putting the kettle on and having a go at working on Nomination's {{Angst}}, she reads him his letter. Turns out the Major, his mother, is coming to inspect his living conditions. Nomination proceeds to [[OhCrap screech the place down]][[note]]Not literally, though Chartreuse is briefly concerned about the structural integrity of the tableware[[/note]], not unreasonably, and so, preparations begin.

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begin. Unfortunately, Chartreuse' duties don't stop just because of this, and she has to go and deal with a [[ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight shadowling]] infestation with Dim. Things go south, badly.



* BloodKnight: Chartreuse is forced to face the fact that she does not fear her nightly duties, but revels in them, marking her out as on a darker path closer to Dim than Sunburst. It comes to a head at the end of Chapter 5, where she chooses to accept it by going to face the [[ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight shadowling]] infestation on her own, rather than seeking protection from her masters.

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* BloodKnight: Chartreuse is forced by Dim to face the fact that she does not fear her nightly duties, but revels in them, marking her out as on a darker path closer to Dim than Sunburst. It comes to a head at the end of Chapter 5, where she chooses to accept it by going to face the [[ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight shadowling]] infestation on her own, rather than seeking protection from her masters. Later, the choice is shown to be less black-and-white than Dim makes out, with Luna claiming that it's a FalseDichotomy that Dim's wounded mind makes him unable to escape.



* ColdIron: As previously established in Fanfic/TheWeedverse, demons are vulnerable to iron, which is why Dim supplies Chartreuse with a fireplace poker that's he's spent a fair amount of time aligning to make it more effective, as well as adding some [[SaltSolution salt]], also established to be useful against the ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight.

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* ColdIron: As previously established in Fanfic/TheWeedverse, demons are vulnerable to iron, which is why Dim supplies Chartreuse with a fireplace poker that's he's spent a fair amount of time aligning to make it more effective, as well as adding some [[SaltSolution salt]], also established to be useful against the ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight. [[spoiler:After Chartreuse is offered the job of exorcist, Luna mentions that she'll be fitted with iron horseshoes at some point]].



* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Dim ends up beating himself up over [[spoiler:the fact that he underestimated the shadowlings and nearly got Chartreuse killed, and then being disabled by his own infirmity because he's been putting off getting a healing spell]].

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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Dim ends up beating himself up over [[spoiler:the fact that he underestimated the shadowlings and nearly got Chartreuse killed, and then being disabled by his own infirmity because he's been putting off getting a healing spell]]. Princess Luna feels he's being overly sentimental, a sign of his CharacterDevelopment since Fanfic/{{Eigengrau}}, where he has no sentiment left.



* DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:Chartreuse ends up partially possessed by the shadowlings, but is able to drive them off by using the poker on her own leg, with a little help from the Hearthfire. This convinces Luna to give her Ex Libris Exorcista, a spell book written as a resource for exorcists]].



* FalseDichotomy: Luna feels that Dim's abandonment of the day (see BloodKnight, above) and insistence that a pony can only be of one, Day or Night, is false, but she agrees that walking both paths is very hard, as a pony of night represents the unknown, the monsters in the darkness, and the day ponies fear that.



* HeroicBSOD: The horrors of the shadowling infestation drive Chartreuse into a brief one, Princess Luna helps her out of it.



* InnocenceLost: The shadowling infestation is a brutal trial by fire for Chartreuse, who comes out of it with both physical and mental injuries. Dim blames himself for this, believing Chartreuse was not ready. Luna disagrees, if Chartreuse wasn't ready, she'd be dead (or worse).
* ItOnlyWorksOnce: [[spoiler:Possession is almost invariably fatal, but if the pony manages to expel to possessing imps, as Chartreuse does, the possessed body part becomes anathema to infernal creatures]].



* ParalyzingFearOfSexuality: {{Downplayed}}, but in common with fillies who are still sorting stuff out, Chartreuse is somewhat afraid of sex, something the shadowlings try to use against her. It doesn't work too well at the time, but once the adrenaline's worn off and it has time to sink it, Chartreuse ends up more than a little freaked.



* PostVictoryCollapse: After beaing the shadowling infestation, Chartreuse topples over. Fortunately, Dim is there to catch her. Once the adrenaline wears off and [[spoiler:the Hearthfire moves on]], she stops being able to even speak properly, slipping into particularly poor BuffySpeak.

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* PostVictoryCollapse: After beaing the shadowling infestation, Chartreuse topples over. Fortunately, Dim is there to catch her. Once the adrenaline wears off and [[spoiler:the Hearthfire moves on]], she stops being able to even speak properly, slipping into particularly poor BuffySpeak. Once she's able to think again and the horror has had time to sink it, she drops into a HeroicBSOD.



* SpellBook: [[spoiler:Princess Luna leaves Chartreuse one as a gift while she's recovering from the infestation, Ex Libris Exorcista. It's impossible to read for a normal pony, but Chartreuse can read it after looking through the Tartarean gate. It also has a habit of making noises, including whimpers and cries of pain, though according to Luna they're pretty sure it isn't actually sentient]].



* VoluntaryShapeshifting: A shadowling takes the form of a severed phallus in an attempt to capitalise on the common fears of fillies Chartreuse' age. It doesn't work immediately, but once the adrenaline wears off...



* YouCannotGraspTheTrueForm: Whatever lies through the Tartarean portal is not possible for mortals to really grasp. It leaves an impression, though, Dim comments that Chartreuse will remember it for the rest of her life.

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* YouCannotGraspTheTrueForm: Whatever lies through the Tartarean portal is not possible for mortals to really grasp. It leaves an impression, though, Dim comments that Chartreuse will remember it for the rest of her life. [[spoiler:The experiences leaves her able to read Ex Libris Exorcista]].

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* CelibateHero: In contrast to her housemates, Chartreuse doesn't care about seeking out a romantic partner, her studies keep her too busy. It's ZigZagged though, she has an unacted-upon crush on Chalcedony.
* CirclingBirdies: The circling alicorns make another appearance after Chartreuse gets beaned by a wardrobe, including the first appearance of tiny Gosling.



* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Dim ends up beating himself up over [[spoiler:the fact that he underestimated the shadowlings and nearly got Chartreuse killed, and then being disabled by his own infirmity because he's been putting off getting a healing spell]].



* CelibateHero: In contrast to her housemates, Chartreuse doesn't care about seeking out a romantic partner, her studies keep her too busy.

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* CelibateHero: In contrast to her housemates, DivineIntervention: [[spoiler:Chartreuse is all-but defeated by the shadowlings, which would be a fate worse than death as Chartreuse doesn't care would become a shade herself, but "pink flames"[[note]][[WhiteMagic Chantico's Hearthfire]][[/note]] revive her and give her the strength needed to go on, along with a brief message from Chantico, explaining what she's done and encouraging Chartreuse to continue]].
* LadyOfWar: Chartreuse has learned well from Rarity. She spends much of her time with the shadowlings complaining
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* PeoplePuppets: The shadowlings take control of one of Chartreuse' hooves and make her [[StopHittingYourself attack herself]], at least until she deals with it by applying the ColdIron poker to her own flesh, with unpleasant and painful, if somewhat successful, results, before [[spoiler:Chantico interferes, using the Hearthfire to heal some of Chartreuse's wounds and purge the remaining possessing shadowlings]].


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* {{Poltergeist}}: The shadowlings are able to act like this when they feel threatened, such as when a violently chartreuse wizard is trying to evict them.
* PostVictoryCollapse: After beaing the shadowling infestation, Chartreuse topples over. Fortunately, Dim is there to catch her. Once the adrenaline wears off and [[spoiler:the Hearthfire moves on]], she stops being able to even speak properly, slipping into particularly poor BuffySpeak.


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* TheSacredDarkness: Becoming a pony of the night may have its costs, but it also allows you to see the beauty and glory of the darkness.


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* ShutUpHannibal: Upon being offered power in exchange for allowing the dark creatures to flee, Chartreuse' response is a PreAssKickingOneLiner and stabbing it with the iron poker.
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* SternTeacher: Dim Dark may be a harsh taskmaster, with no patience for weakness, but he's still there to catch Chartreuse after he accidentally sends her into a far more dangerous situation than he realised.


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* StopHittingYourself: Chartreuse gets repeatedly kicked by her own hoof when she annoys the shadowlings, who taunt her by chanting the trope name as she slowly kicks herself to death, [[spoiler:at least until she takes an iron poker to her own leg and Chantico uses the hearthfire to remove the remaining shadowlings]].


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* TheVirus: Anyone slain while possessed by the shadowlings will rise as a shade. Or worse.
* WeakenedByTheLight: Chartreuse saves one particularly annoying shadowling in a jar so that it can face the sunrise.
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* BigEntrance: Dim, being Dim, does this when he needs Chartreuse, causing both Nomination and Chalcedony to flee. Chartreuse, being Chartreuse, snarks at him about it.


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* BloodKnight: Chartreuse is forced to face the fact that she does not fear her nightly duties, but revels in them, marking her out as on a darker path closer to Dim than Sunburst. It comes to a head at the end of Chapter 5, where she chooses to accept it by going to face the [[ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight shadowling]] infestation on her own, rather than seeking protection from her masters.


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* ComfortFood: {{Exploited}}, Chartreuse offers the foals in the [[ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight shadowling]]-infested house some cookies if they'll be brave. Said cookies contain tranquilisers and other drugs to counter the SupernaturalFearInducer effect of the imps.


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* ImprobableWeaponUser: Chartreuse ends up using a fireplace poker in the course of her duties. It gets {{Lampshaded}} by one of the ponies she's helping, as they're sceptical of its efficacy, but as it's [[ColdIron purified iron]] infused with [[SaltSolution salt]], it'll be quite sufficient.


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* PowerPerversionPotential: Chartreuse briefly muses on the potential of crystal ponies' tendency to glow when exposed to love and affection, and how they might respond to more heated actions.


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* DarkAndTroubledPast: We get some insight into Chalcedony's, as a blind orphan who was, at least at some point, a slave.



* ExoticEquipment: Dragons apparently have two penises (as you could expect for a reptilian species). According to Nomination, it occasionally shows up in the [[UnevenHybrid draconic pegasi]] too.



* FrenchMaidOutfit: {{Discussed}}, though not actually worn, when Chartreuse is cleaning the house, Chalcedony comments that she'd be a stunner in a Fancy maid outfit, which gives even the gay Nomination distracting thoughts. Chartreuse, for her part, doesn't mind at all, although she doesn't let her friends see it.



* OverlyLongName: Miss Chalcedony Cuddlesworth the LXVIII, the addressee on letters from Sumac. It's probably not Chalcedony's real full name, but Sumac's the type to go along with that kind of silliness. It's apparently a regular feature of Sumac's letters, giving the orphaned Chalcedony the fantasy of a large family.

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* OverlyLongName: Miss Chalcedony Cuddlesworth the LXVIII, the addressee on letters the letter from Sumac. It's probably not Chalcedony's real full name, but Sumac's the type to go along with that kind of silliness. It's Such names are apparently a regular feature of Sumac's letters, giving the orphaned Chalcedony the fantasy of a large family.


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* PinkySwear: Foals in the Crystal Empire have a similar tradition where they drink from the fountain commemorating Spike's heroism[[note]]Said fountain depicts Spike peeing, and him being [[ExoticEquipment a dragon]], this results in two streams[[/note]] after making the promise. This particular fountain has developed quite a few traditions, as it replaces an older one depicting Princess Amore[[note]]And yes, she was depicted performing the same action[[/note]] that was destroyed by King Sombra. In this case, it's a promise to reassure Chalcedony that despite her [[DarkAndTroubledPast past]], things can and will get better.
-->'''Chartreuse:''' I, Chartreuse Le Feu, of House Le Feu, give my word to be a steadfast friend to Chalcedony.


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* StepfordSmiler: Chalcedony's outburst over dinner suggests that her DarkAndTroubledPast hurts her far more than her overly-cheerful demeanour lets on.

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* HeteronormativeCrusader: {{Downplayed}}, there's no indication that Snow Dust was one prior to his assaulting Nomination, Nomination probably wouldn't have tried asking him out if there was. Still, his first response was to buck Nomination in the face while screaming slurs, so...

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* TheGlomp: How Chalcedony greets Sunburst. No-one present expects otherwise.
* HeteronormativeCrusader: {{Downplayed}}, there's no indication that Snow Dust was one prior to his assaulting Nomination, Nomination probably wouldn't have tried asking him out if there was. Still, his first response was to buck Nomination in the face while screaming slurs, so... It's certainly enough to get him in serious trouble, with an expulsion hearing being held, and Sunburst is pessimistic about his chances of remaining in Cadance's school, though he hopes the example will encourage other students to be more thoughtful.



* MundaneUtility: Chartreuse uses magic to butter and jam the bread directly, rather than using a butterknife, a deliberate instruction to make her practice her focus.

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* IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure: A variant. Chalcedony is sentenced to community service for her NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of Snow Dust, meaning one of her friends is also sentenced to it, as she needs a pair of eyes to do anything useful. Her response to being forced to choose which is not what Sunburst was hoping for, as he was hoping that she'd feel bad about dragging her friends into the punishment, but Chalcedony asks if she can have both, in friendly retribution for some light-hearted teasing earlier.
* LoudOfWar: Chartreuse does not appreciate Chalcedony's taste in music, especially not when played very loudly. Unfortunately for her, she appears to be alone in this.
* MundaneUtility: Chartreuse uses magic to butter and jam the bread directly, rather than using a butterknife, a deliberate instruction to make her practice her focus. She is also tasked with putting away the shopping to allow her to practise her telekinesis.


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* ParentalSubstitute: Sunburst has become more than just a teacher to Chalcedony.

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After putting the kettle on and having a go at working on Nomination's {{Angst}}, she reads him his letter. Turns out the Major, his mother, is coming to inspect his living conditions. Nomination proceeds to [[OhCrap screech the place down]][[note]]Not literally, though Chartreuse is briefly concerned about the structural integrity of the tableware[[/note]], not unreasonably, and so, preparations begin.



* ActualPacifist: Nomination finds the idea of violence literally sickening. As he's part of a species that's been deliberately bred as SuperSoldiers and expected to contribute, it doesn't help his feelings of inadequacy.
* {{Angst}}: Nomination is sufficiently prone to this due to expectations and his upbringing clashing with what he actually is and wants to do that a new regulation has to be put in place forbidding him from degrading himself.
* BadassBoast: When Nomination is bothered about Chartreuse' ability to expel a rude Major from her house due to regulations, she gets annoyed.
-->'''Chartreuse: ''' I am Chartreuse Le Feu, of House Le Feu, Bearer of the Flame of Chantico, I am ''Damoiselle Despoillier''! My house, my regulations!
* BlindSeer: Chalcedony remains only able to see magic, which means that some adaptations are needed to make books and letters she can read (the ink used is also invisible to normal ponies). It also means that she can use her half of the Rainbow of Light. Made invisible by Sombra, only ponies that can see it can interact with it, and Chalcedony can obviously see such a powerful artifact, a feat that no other known individual can (including [[TheArchmage Twilight Sparkle]]).



* CultureClash: Chalcedony and Chartreuse (and probably the reader), upon first exposure to the letter from Nomination's mother, read it as being incredibly cold[[note]]Chartreuse explicitly compares it to the letters written by Shining Armor to the noble houses he doesn't like.[[/note]], written with military precision and no emotion. Nomination instead recognises the affection behind it, after all, his mother didn't have to use names (numbers are sufficient) and remind him that she is his mother, not just his superior, both of which waste ink and space. Also, Nomination's serial number is one higher than her own, he's the next in a sequence. Her care might be wrapped up in her expectations, but she does care.
* DeathGlare: After Nomination erupts into a self-loathing rant, Chartreuse inflicts one so strong Chalcedony claims even she can see it. She's been practicing in the mirror, with the assistance of a book written by Princess Celestia.



* FantasyForbiddingMother: ZigZagged, Nomination's mother is not keen on his studying at an outside school or his desire to pursue cooking as a career (and has given him major issues over it), but she still fought against Command, risking her own career, to make sure he could do it.



* MundaneUtility: Chartreuse uses magic to butter and jam the bread directly, rather than using a butterknife, a deliberate instruction to make her practice her focus.



* OhCrap: When Nomination gets the letter from his mother saying she'll be coming to inspect him, he begins doing an impression of the kettle.



* OverlyLongName: Miss Chalcedony Cuddlesworth the LXVIII, the addressee on letters from Sumac. It's probably not Chalcedony's real full name, but Sumac's the type to go along with that kind of silliness.

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* OverlyLongName: Miss Chalcedony Cuddlesworth the LXVIII, the addressee on letters from Sumac. It's probably not Chalcedony's real full name, but Sumac's the type to go along with that kind of silliness. It's apparently a regular feature of Sumac's letters, giving the orphaned Chalcedony the fantasy of a large family.


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* SuperBreedingProgram: The Draconic Pegasi are the result and subjects of an ongoing one, and Nomination is seriously bothered by the fact he's expected to contribute, but has [[{{Gayngst}} undesirable]] [[ActualPacifist traits]].
* ThatCameOutWrong: While talking about practicing particular magical techniques, in this case hardening the magic field so it can be used as a butterknife, Sunburst says that to unexpectedly go soft [is] to invite disaster, before going very orange.
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Chartreuse' lessons aren't going as well as she'd like, even if Sunburst will grade her on what she achieves, even if it's not what they were aiming for. Heading home for the day, she picks up the post (a flyer promoting the local tea shop, a letter from Chalcedony's pen pal and, surprisingly, a letter for Nomination). Upon getting upstairs, she discovers that Nomination's latest attempt to ask out a colt ended even worse than usual, with him getting a black eye and the colt in question getting a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown from Chalcedony.

A sequel to Fanfic/CrystalCamaraderie, a story in Fanfic/TheWeedverse by Kudzuhaiku, Nom's Mom Bomb can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/403220/noms-mom-bomb here]]
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!!This story contains examples of:
* BullyHunter: When Nomination gets assaulted by the colt he's just asked out, Chalcedony gets [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown violent]].
* CelibateHero: In contrast to her housemates, Chartreuse doesn't care about seeking out a romantic partner, her studies keep her too busy.
* EmotionEater: Part of Chartreuse' duties, especially in the wake of the Ice Orc invasion, is dealing with the fear-eating [[ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight darklings and shadowlings]].
* HeteronormativeCrusader: {{Downplayed}}, there's no indication that Snow Dust was one prior to his assaulting Nomination, Nomination probably wouldn't have tried asking him out if there was. Still, his first response was to buck Nomination in the face while screaming slurs, so...
* IWantToBeARealMan: The dark side of this trope comes up, as Snow Dust considers being asked out by Nomination a threat to his masculinity and responds with an assault. One suspects his masculinity is not helped by the resulting NoHoldsBarredBeatdown at [[IWasBeatenByAGirl the hooves]] of [[BlindSeer Chalcedony]].
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Poor Snowdust, beaten into the ground by a blind filly. Still, he kinda deserved it.
* OurMagesAreDifferent: The first chapter involves something of a discussion of this, with Dim and Sunburst's scientific approach (Mages are like Scholars) contrasting with Chartreuse' earlier training with Rarity, who takes a more artistic approach to her sorcery (Mages are like Artists), with both approaches involving training and practice (Mages are like Athletes). Obviously, being a [[WitchSpecies unicorn]] is necessary for both these particular styles.
* OverlyLongName: Miss Chalcedony Cuddlesworth the LXVIII, the addressee on letters from Sumac. It's probably not Chalcedony's real full name, but Sumac's the type to go along with that kind of silliness.
* PerpetualPoverty: Chartreuse, Chalcedony and Nomination are students. Money is tight.
* PowerIncontinence: While keeping her eyes closed and focusing on drawing up the pure magic, Chartreuse fails to notice she's begun levitating everything nearby, including several ponies.
* ScientificallyUnderstandableSorcery: One of Dim's particular tricks, and one he's shared with Sunburst and Chartreuse, is using scientific principles to improve his magic, allowing molecular level control of the environment and some very nasty tricks far above brute-forcing it with raw magic.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Snow Dust quickly finds himself without help when he provokes Chalcedony.
* SpotOfTea: Casual-Tea of a Name Tearoom have a sale on that Chartreuse decides must be taken advantage of, given that their household is perpetually broke. When she gets inside and finds Nomination with a black eye she puts the kettle on.
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