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* BatOutOfHell: A giant bat-like creature attacks Link and Jenna in the final completed chapter, apparently on the orders of the DarkLordAriakis.
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* BatOutOfHell: A giant bat-like creature attacks Link and Jenna in the final completed chapter, apparently on the orders of the DarkLordAriakis.DarkLord Ariakis.
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* SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Not a science fiction story, but everything in Hyrule seems to be exactly a day's ride from everything else.
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* SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Not a science fiction story, but everything in Hyrule seems to be exactly a day's ride from everything else. This greatly undercuts the threat of the Black Desert - see ThirstyDesert below.
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* ThirstyDesert: The Black Desert. This is even more so than most deserts, because it's black, so it retains heat more easily. However, it's ultimately downplayed, since crossing it only takes a day, and Link and Jenna do this twice without incident. We're told they got pretty thirsty and it was hard going, but there's never any sense of genuine danger there.
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* ThirstyDesert: The Black Desert. This is even more so than most deserts, because it's black, so it retains heat more easily. However, it's ultimately downplayed, since [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale crossing it only takes a day, day]], and Link and Jenna do this twice without incident. We're told they got pretty thirsty and it was hard going, but there's never any sense of genuine danger there.
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear an incomplete DramaticReading [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]]. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the very first DramaticReading (some of which is still available on [=archive.org=], but is no longer available on [=YouTube=]), began a remake, which is being re-uploaded with the sex scenes cut out [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNGVCw_DBevTeNU2Kh-0kI90wozys3ldV here]] after the story got his channel terminated, presumably due to the story's explicit content.
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear an incomplete DramaticReading [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]]. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the very first DramaticReading (some of which is still available on [=archive.org=], but is no longer available on [=YouTube=]), began a remake, which is being re-uploaded with (with the sex scenes cut out out) [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNGVCw_DBevTeNU2Kh-0kI90wozys3ldV here]] after the story got his original channel was terminated, presumably due to the story's explicit content.
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: The Draconians. According to the footnotes, they are the most feared and powerful of the Dark Knights who serve the Dark Lord Ariakis. However, at other times in the story, it seems like they are an AlwaysChaoticEvil race of beings, from whom the Dark Knights are recruited. The two Draconians we meet in the story never remove their armour, so we never find out for sure what manner of creature they are.
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** By the point in the story when Jenna and Link are crossing the desert back, Jen the author responded to a curious reader, saying that she, Link and Nabooru would travel to her homeland, the great lebian coast, and that they'd face Dark Link again. She also spoils that presumed arc by telling us that Link would die, but not to worry, since he'd be back soon.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The story is set up by Link not going back in time at the end of ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime'', allowing him to meet Jenna.
* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The Draconians.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The story is set up by Link not going back in time at the end of ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime'', allowing him to meet Jenna.
* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The Draconians.
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** By the point in the story when Jenna and Link are crossing the desert back, Jen the author responded to a curious reader, saying that she, Link and Nabooru would travel to her homeland, the great lebian coast, Great Lebian Coast, and that they'd face Dark Link again. She also spoils that presumed arc by telling us that Link would die, but not to worry, since he'd be back soon.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The story is set up by Link not going back in time at the end of ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime'', allowing him to meetJenna.
* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The Draconians.Jenna. Therefore, as explicitly stated in the author's note, ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask Majora's Mask]]'' and the ''[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaOracleGames Oracle]]'' games did not happen in this timeline.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The story is set up by Link not going back in time at the end of ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime'', allowing him to meet
* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The Draconians.
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** Four-month-old babies ''do not know simple math'', nor can they crawl.
** Also, [[http://www.babycenter.com/0_milestone-chart-1-to-6-months_1496585.bc babies don't start laughing or giggling until they're about 2-4 months old]], while Link Jr is giggling from the start. It's possible she made that mistake due to the [[ThreeMonthOldNewborn media's common portrayal of newborns.]]
** Also, [[http://www.babycenter.com/0_milestone-chart-1-to-6-months_1496585.bc babies don't start laughing or giggling until they're about 2-4 months old]], while Link Jr is giggling from the start. It's possible she made that mistake due to the [[ThreeMonthOldNewborn media's common portrayal of newborns.]]
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** Four-month-old babies ''do not know simple math'', nor can they crawl.
** Also, [[http://www.babycenter.com/0_milestone-chart-1-to-6-months_1496585.bc babies don't start laughing or giggling until they're about 2-4 months old]], whileLink Jr is giggling from the start. It's possible she made that mistake due to the [[ThreeMonthOldNewborn media's common portrayal Jr. does not act like a real baby of newborns.]]his age. See ThreeMonthOldNewborn below for specifics.
** Also, [[http://www.babycenter.com/0_milestone-chart-1-to-6-months_1496585.bc babies don't start laughing or giggling until they're about 2-4 months old]], while
* BackFromTheDead: The Great Deku Tree, who should still be dead after ''Ocarina of Time'', shows up with no explanation whatsoever.
* BlackKnight: The villainous Dark Knights, who wear heavy black armour with a SkeletonMotif.
* FantasticRacism: The reason griffins are usually hesitant to trust humans is that, during the Great War of the Lands, Hyrule enslaved the griffins. Also a case of MoralMyopia, as there's no indication that Hyrule is (or should be) making reparations to the griffins or even issuing a formal apology. The story puts the onus entirely on the griffins to "learn to trust" humans again.
* HiddenElfVillage: The Unipegs are said to be extremely shy of outsiders, living in a remote HungryJungle and refusing to get involved in the affairs of the world at large. However, when Hyrule needs their help, they are surprisingly easy to get into contact with, and equally easy to talk into joining the war against Ariakis.
* HungryJungle: The Mystic Rainforest (sometimes called the Mystic''al'' Rainforest) is said to have some of these qualities, being supernaturally easy to get lost in, and only able to be found at all under the light of the full moon. Ultimately a benevolent example, however, since the Rainforest is the home of the [[HiddenElfVillage reclusive but goodhearted]] Unipegs.
* HungryJungle: The Mystic Rainforest (sometimes called the Mystic''al'' Rainforest) is said to have some of these qualities, being supernaturally easy to get lost in, and only able to be found at all under the light of the full moon. Ultimately a benevolent example, however, since the Rainforest is the home of the [[HiddenElfVillage reclusive but goodhearted]] Unipegs.
* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Dark Link makes an implied threat to rape Jenna.
* InformedAttribute: The Black Desert is repeatedly emphasized as an enormously dangerous place that few have ever crossed successfully. However, it only takes a single day to cross it, and Jenna and Link do so twice with no real difficulty.
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* IkeaErotica: In some cases, although it's almost always averted in favor of PurpleProse.
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** Finding out she's descended from the made-up "Silverlites," a race of people who can control the elements, was discovered at a very opportune time.
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** Finding out she's descended from the made-up "Silverlites," a CanonForeigner race of people who can control the elements, was discovered at a very opportune time.
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* NoEnding: The story was never completed, and ends on a chapter heading for a chapter that was never written. Because of the way it's formatted, however, the last part of it most people read are the footnotes, which are their own anticlimax.
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* NoEnding: The story was never completed, and ends on a chapter heading ("Path of Darkness") for a chapter that was never written. Because of the way it's formatted, however, the last part of it most people read are the footnotes, which are their own anticlimax.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Rather, older than they ''act.'' Most people assume Jenna was in her early teens when she wrote this with her character aged about the same, and are appropriately squicked out by the sex scenes between her and Link. However, anyone who digs in a little deeper will be relieved/shocked to find that she was actually in her late teens/early twenties.
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** The names Dalamar and Ariakas, as well as the Draconian race, are all likely taken from ''Literature/{{Dragonlance}}''.
** Unintentional, but Stardancer is the name of a ''Franchise/MyLittlePony'' character from gen 1.
** Unintentional, but Stardancer is the name of a ''Franchise/MyLittlePony'' character from gen 1.
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** The names Dalamar and Ariakas, as well as the Draconian race, are all likely taken from ''Literature/{{Dragonlance}}''.
''Literature/{{Dragonlance}}''. Her versions of dragons, while not entirely the same as the ones in ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'', do still follow the same "chromatic bad, metallic good" binary; see OurDragonsAreDifferent, above.
**Unintentional, Possibly unintentional, but Stardancer is the name of a ''Franchise/MyLittlePony'' character from gen 1.1.
** The use of the word "youngling" is generally understood to be a reference to the ''Franchise/StarWars'' prequels, which use that word a lot.
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** The use of the word "youngling" is generally understood to be a reference to the ''Franchise/StarWars'' prequels, which use that word a lot.
** A lot of the original
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* SophisticatedAsHell: The sex scenes, where flowery language is intercut with words like "nutsack" and "pussy".
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* SophisticatedAsHell: The sex scenes, where flowery language MillsAndBoonProse is intercut with words like "nutsack" and "pussy".
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* TheUnfought: Because we're LeftHanging, Ariakis and his forces are never defeated. Ariakis himself never even [[TheGhost appears directly.]]
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* TheUnfought: TheUnfought:
** Because we're LeftHanging, Ariakis and his forces are never defeated. Ariakis himself never even [[TheGhost appears directly.]]]]
** The [[BatOutOfHell bat monster]] that appears in the final completed chapter is a peculiar case. It chases Link and Jenna around a bit but at no point do they even consider standing and fighting it. Where the story leaves off, it's presumably still at large, flapping through the Hyrule night.
** If this trope can be applied to a place, there's the Barren Sea. It is hyped up as an enormously dangerous place, both in the story itself and again in the footnotes, but Jenna's travels never take her there.
** Because we're LeftHanging, Ariakis and his forces are never defeated. Ariakis himself never even [[TheGhost appears directly.
** The [[BatOutOfHell bat monster]] that appears in the final completed chapter is a peculiar case. It chases Link and Jenna around a bit but at no point do they even consider standing and fighting it. Where the story leaves off, it's presumably still at large, flapping through the Hyrule night.
** If this trope can be applied to a place, there's the Barren Sea. It is hyped up as an enormously dangerous place, both in the story itself and again in the footnotes, but Jenna's travels never take her there.
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* AcrophobicBird:
** Invoked, probably unintentionally. While in the Griffin City, Jenna meets a griffin merchant named Tanis who claims to have traveled across the Barren Sea, a body of water Jenna has always understood to be impassable, due to a ferocious SeaMonster and constant whirlpools. Tanis is [[NoodleIncident deliberately coy]] about how he managed to do it. It never seems to occur to Jenna that he flew.
** Also present in the layout of the Griffin City, which has roads, roofs, and doors much as a human city would. The griffins' power of flight does not impact their architecture in any way.
** Invoked, probably unintentionally. While in the Griffin City, Jenna meets a griffin merchant named Tanis who claims to have traveled across the Barren Sea, a body of water Jenna has always understood to be impassable, due to a ferocious SeaMonster and constant whirlpools. Tanis is [[NoodleIncident deliberately coy]] about how he managed to do it. It never seems to occur to Jenna that he flew.
** Also present in the layout of the Griffin City, which has roads, roofs, and doors much as a human city would. The griffins' power of flight does not impact their architecture in any way.
* ArcVillain: Dark Link returns to the Water Temple for a story arc, but is then defeated and vanishes from the narrative. Had the story been finished, there's evidence to believe that Ariakis would have ended up this way as well.
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** Let the record show that having sex while pregnant will ''not'' make your baby stronger. Let it also show that getting drunk while pregnant will give your baby the aptly-named Fetal Alcohol Syndrome, which isn't a good thing.
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** Let the record show The castle healer tells Jenna that having sex while pregnant will ''not'' make your baby stronger. Let it her body stronger, which is not the case in real life. There's also show that getting a notorious sequence in which a heavily-pregnant Jenna gets very drunk while pregnant will give your baby with no apparent adverse effect on the aptly-named Fetal Alcohol Syndrome, which isn't a good thing.baby
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** At one point, Jenna said her blood was cold.
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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: During the sex scenes. PLEASURE! HEAVENLY NAKED BODY! SHEER ECSTASY!
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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: During the sex scenes. PLEASURE! HEAVENLY NAKED BODY! SHEER ECSTASY!ECSTASY! PURE BLISS!
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** Jen also really, ''really'' likes to use the words "[[Franchise/StarWars youngling]]" when describing any sort of baby animal; "miracle" when describing her first son, Link Junior; and "sneer" when describing how a villain utters their dialogue.
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** Jen also really, ''really'' likes to use the words "[[Franchise/StarWars youngling]]" when describing any sort of baby animal; "miracle" when describing her first son, Link Junior; and "sneer" when describing how a villain utters their dialogue. Things are also often described as "causing" other things, in a way that becomes extremely noticable the more of it you see.
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* BigBad: Dark Lord Ariakas.
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** In the world-building segments (especially in the footnotes at the end), the phrase "once peaceful race" comes up a lot.
* BatOutOfHell: A giant bat-like creature attacks Link and Jenna in the final completed chapter, apparently on the orders of the DarkLordAriakis.
* BigBad: Dark LordAriakas.Ariakas ends up as this, given where the story ends. However, it seems likely from what we know of WhatMightHaveBeen that he was supposed to be more of an ArcVillain like Dark Link.
* BatOutOfHell: A giant bat-like creature attacks Link and Jenna in the final completed chapter, apparently on the orders of the DarkLordAriakis.
* BigBad: Dark Lord
* BouquetToss: At her wedding to Link, Jenna tosses her bouquet into the crowd. Zelda catches it, and we're told this means she'll be the next to wed. It's uncertain whether the author ever planned on following up on this.
* FiveSecondForeshadowing: The narration informs us that griffins exist in this setting in the very same chapter in which a griffin first appears.
* TheGhost: Dark Lord Ariakis never appears in person.
* HellIsThatNoise: The [[BatOutOfHell bat monster]] can emit a piercing shriek that causes intense physical pain to anyone near it.
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* KaleidoscopeEyes: Everyone seems to have these.
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* KaleidoscopeEyes: Everyone seems to have these. When a character is concerned, for example, the narration will frequently mention that their eyes have turned a shade of grey.
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* MonsterShapedMountain: Dragonmount is said to be shaped like a dragon. It's implied that this is a natural formation, rather than some kind of gigantic sculpture.
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* MonsterShapedMountain: Dragonmount is said to be shaped like a dragon. It's implied We're told that this is it was probably a natural formation, rather than some kind deliberate work of gigantic sculpture.sculpture ''by'' the dragons, although in-universe historians aren't entirely sure why.
* MrExposition: A lot of our information about the world beyond Hyrule's borders comes from Dalamar.
* MrExposition: A lot of our information about the world beyond Hyrule's borders comes from Dalamar.
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** Finding out she's descended from the made-up "Silverites," a race of people who can control the elements, was discovered at a very opportune time.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Not explained in much detail, but it's mentioned that blue dragons are the most dangerous variety, as they have the sharpest senses. Other than that, they seem to be fairly standard European-style fire-breathing dragons.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Not explained in much detail, but it's mentioned that blue dragons are the most dangerous variety, as they have the sharpest senses. As in ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'', they appear to be ColourCodedForYourConvenience, with blue, red, and black dragons as evil beings in the service of Ariakis, while the bronze and silver dragons (which never appear in-story) are said to still be free from his control, and are implicitly good. Other than that, they seem to be fairly standard European-style fire-breathing dragons.
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* ThirstyDesert: The Black Desert. This is even more so than most deserts, because it's black, so it retains heat more easily.
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* ThirstyDesert: The Black Desert. This is even more so than most deserts, because it's black, so it retains heat more easily. However, it's ultimately downplayed, since crossing it only takes a day, and Link and Jenna do this twice without incident. We're told they got pretty thirsty and it was hard going, but there's never any sense of genuine danger there.
* TheUnfought: Because we're LeftHanging, Ariakis and his forces are never defeated. Ariakis himself never even [[TheGhost appears directly.]]
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* WillTheyOrWontThey: A few readers have picked up on a peculiar InterspeciesRomance subtext between Zelda and Dalamar. Again, because the story was never finished, we may never know whether this was intentional.
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* OurElvesAreBetter: Link is said to be a half-elf (hence the pointy ears), and therefore, has better hearing than Jenna.
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* OurElvesAreBetter: OurElvesAreDifferent: Link is said to be a half-elf (hence the pointy ears), and and, therefore, has better hearing than Jenna.
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* TooDumbToLive: Ruto almost gets herself killed by wandering around Lake Hylia during a horrible blizzard ''because she was bored.'' For extra points, the fic earlier declares that the Zora are very susceptible to the cold.
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* TooDumbToLive: TooDumbToLive:
** Ruto almost gets herself killed by wandering around Lake Hylia during a horrible blizzard ''because she was bored.'' For extra points, the fic earlier declares that the Zora are very susceptible to thecold.cold.
** Jenna herself. Among other things, she kicks her horses in the legs to make them go, tries holding in the baby she's birthing, and insists on tagging along on risky journeys ''while heavily pregnant.''
** Ruto almost gets herself killed by wandering around Lake Hylia during a horrible blizzard ''because she was bored.'' For extra points, the fic earlier declares that the Zora are very susceptible to the
** Jenna herself. Among other things, she kicks her horses in the legs to make them go, tries holding in the baby she's birthing, and insists on tagging along on risky journeys ''while heavily pregnant.''
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If those aren't enough to quell your interest, there is also a Sims 2 reenactment, part one of which can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F9z2rLuD0ss/ here]]. Also recommended is this [[http://zelda-queen.livejournal.com/18688.html sporking]]. Two more interesting sporks are [[http://thepdohf.blogspot.com/2012/08/a-nightmare-on-hyrule-field-part-1-get.html here]] and [[https://celestiallapras.livejournal.com/15073.html here]].
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If those aren't enough to quell your interest, there is also a Sims 2 reenactment, reenactment in ''VideoGame/TheSims2'', part one of which can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F9z2rLuD0ss/ here]]. Also recommended is this [[http://zelda-queen.livejournal.com/18688.html sporking]]. Two more interesting sporks are [[http://thepdohf.blogspot.com/2012/08/a-nightmare-on-hyrule-field-part-1-get.html here]] and [[https://celestiallapras.livejournal.com/15073.html here]].
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* HeirClubForMen: It's repeatedly mentioned that Link really wants a son.
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* SickeninglySweethearts: Link and Jenna have an obnoxious sweet relationship.
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* SickeninglySweethearts: Link and Jenna have an obnoxious sweet relationship.relationship, but little in common beyond the fact that they're in love.
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* TooDumbToLive: Ruto almost gets herself killed by wandering around Lake Hylia during a horrible blizzard ''because she was bored.'' For extra points, the fic declares that the Zora are very susceptible to the cold.
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* TooDumbToLive: Ruto almost gets herself killed by wandering around Lake Hylia during a horrible blizzard ''because she was bored.'' For extra points, the fic earlier declares that the Zora are very susceptible to the cold.
* WhatsUpKingDude: A traveling merchant has somehow become so close with the royal family that she's in line for the throne.
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* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: The Deku Tree and the King of Hyrule.
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* YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe: The Deku Tree and the King of Hyrule.
Hyrule use "thee" and "thou" a lot, often incorrectly.
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear an incomplete DramaticReading [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]]. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the very first DramaticReading (some of which is still available on [=archive.org)=], but is no longer available on [=YouTube=]), began a remake, which is being re-uploaded with the sex scenes cut out [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNGVCw_DBevTeNU2Kh-0kI90wozys3ldV here]] after the story got his channel terminated, presumably due to the story's explicit content.
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear an incomplete DramaticReading [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]]. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the very first DramaticReading (some of which is still available on [=archive.org)=], org=], but is no longer available on [=YouTube=]), began a remake, which is being re-uploaded with the sex scenes cut out [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNGVCw_DBevTeNU2Kh-0kI90wozys3ldV here]] after the story got his channel terminated, presumably due to the story's explicit content.
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Also, see ''FanFic/MyImmortal'', ''[[Fanfic/LegolasByLaura legolas by laura]]'', ''Fanfic/ShinraHighSoldier'', ''FanFic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil'', ''FanFic/LoveIsDeffinatlyBlind'', ''FanFic/BackToTheFrollo'', ''Fanfic/TheFinalSword'', ''FanFic/MarissaPicard'', ''FanFic/ShinraHighSoldier'', ''Literature/AtlantaNights'', and ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy''.
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Also, see ''FanFic/MyImmortal'', ''[[Fanfic/LegolasByLaura legolas by laura]]'', ''Fanfic/ShinraHighSoldier'', ''FanFic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil'', ''FanFic/LoveIsDeffinatlyBlind'', ''FanFic/BackToTheFrollo'', ''Fanfic/TheFinalSword'', ''FanFic/MarissaPicard'', ''FanFic/ShinraHighSoldier'', ''Literature/AtlantaNights'', and ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy''.
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear it in DramaticReading form [[https://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=9657945AD58D5150 here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]], although the latter was never finished. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the first DramaticReading, began a remake, which is being re-uploaded [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNGVCw_DBevTeNU2Kh-0kI90wozys3ldV here]] after the story got his channel terminated due to the story’s explicit content.
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear it in an incomplete DramaticReading form [[https://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=9657945AD58D5150 here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]], although the latter was never finished. here]]. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the very first DramaticReading, DramaticReading (some of which is still available on [=archive.org)=], but is no longer available on [=YouTube=]), began a remake, which is being re-uploaded with the sex scenes cut out [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNGVCw_DBevTeNU2Kh-0kI90wozys3ldV here]] after the story got his channel terminated terminated, presumably due to the story’s story's explicit content.
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** Epona gives birth to a [[AnimalGenderBender female colt.]]
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** More a problem of terminology than anything else, but Epona gives birth to a [[AnimalGenderBender female colt.]]
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** Jen also really, ''really'' likes to use the words "[[Franchise/StarWars youngling]]" when describing any sort of baby animal; "miracle" when describing her first son, Link Junior; and "sneer" when describing how a villain utters their latest cliche.
** To say nothing of the references to tigers during the sex scenes. In the sexual bonding ceremony, the characters are described as acting like tigers four times in just two paragraphs!
** To say nothing of the references to tigers during the sex scenes. In the sexual bonding ceremony, the characters are described as acting like tigers four times in just two paragraphs!
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** Jen also really, ''really'' likes to use the words "[[Franchise/StarWars youngling]]" when describing any sort of baby animal; "miracle" when describing her first son, Link Junior; and "sneer" when describing how a villain utters their latest cliche.
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**To say nothing of the references References to tigers during the sex scenes. In the sexual bonding ceremony, the characters are described as acting like compared to tigers four times in just two paragraphs!
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* BigBrotherIsWatching: The monks from the bonding ceremony.
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* BigBrotherIsWatching: The monks from the bonding ceremony. Apparently they have agents all over the place, so you can never tell when they might be watching just in case a bonded couple are cheating on each other.
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* {{Chickification}}: Every rival for Link's affections, including [[BarrierMaiden Princess Zelda]], Malon, [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Saria]], and [[{{Tsundere}} Ruto]] are reduced from their powerful and determined selves to fawning over Jenna, angst about how [[IwantMyBelovedToBeHappy they want Link to be happy with her]], ''and'' give her cool stuff... like ''the Ocarina of freakin' Time''.
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* {{Chickification}}: Every rival for Link's affections, including [[BarrierMaiden Princess Zelda]], Malon, [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Saria]], and [[{{Tsundere}} Ruto]] are reduced from their powerful and determined selves to fawning over Jenna, angst about how [[IwantMyBelovedToBeHappy they want Link to be happy with her]], ''and'' give her cool stuff... like ''the Ocarina of freakin' Time''.
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** After Jenna is given her own guardian fairy by the Great Deku Tree, Mido is the only one who points out that there's no reason for her to have one. [[JerkassHasAPoint He has a completely legitimate point there]], since Jenna is not a Kokiri.[[note]]The justification is also rather flimsy; Jenna's fairy is supposed to protect her should Ganondorf return, but the game shows that Ganondorf is far more powerful than Link's own guardian fairy, who was useless in the fight against him. Also, [[KilledOffForReal Ganondorf is dead in this story and never does return.]][[/note]] Of course, Saria instantly gets all up in Mido's business for this, yelling at him for having the gall to suggest that Jenna doesn't deserve every little thing she is given.
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** After Jenna is given her own guardian fairy by the Great Deku Tree, Mido is the only one who points out that there's no reason for her to have one. [[JerkassHasAPoint He has a completely legitimate point there]], since Jenna is not a Kokiri.[[note]]The justification is also rather flimsy; Jenna's fairy is supposed to protect her should Ganondorf return, but the game shows that Ganondorf is far more powerful than Link's own guardian fairy, who was useless in the fight against him. Also, [[KilledOffForReal In the DistantCoda story ''Mother Goddess'', Ganondorf is dead in this story and never finally does return.]][[/note]] return (somehow), and sure enough, the fairies are powerless against him.[[/note]] Of course, Saria instantly gets all up in Mido's business for this, yelling at him for having the gall to suggest that Jenna doesn't deserve every little thing she is given.
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** Also, when Link and Jenna are about to travel to the griffins' home, he tries to get her to stay behind with the very good point of her being six-months pregnant. She goes with him anyway, and we're supposed to congratulate her on how feminist she supposedly is.
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** Also, when Link and Jenna are about to travel to the griffins' home, he tries to get her to stay behind with the very good point of her being six-months pregnant. She goes with him anyway, and we're supposed to congratulate her on how feminist she supposedly is.this is presented as the unambiguously correct and empowered course of action, with Jenna absolutely carrying the party both physically and magically in the fight against the evil {{dragon rider}}s.
** Hilariously averted in the wedding scene; after spending paragraphs describing Jenna's gown, Link's attire is simply referred to as "prince clothes".
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* DramaticReading: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cKzJ9_oKnCs This story]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dVgTZv15pck has three]] [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady of them.]]
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* DramaticReading: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cKzJ9_oKnCs This story]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dVgTZv15pck has three]] [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady DragonRider: The Dark Knight of them.]]Ariakis ride on dragons.
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* FootnoteFever: Because she felt the need to explain what a Spring Festival was ([[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin It's a festival held in Spring)]].
** In many cases, she gives a footnote and then has Link explain to Jenna what the term is ''several sentences later'' in the body of the text. One footnote actually retells plot points from the main story.
*** One footnote goes even farther, and goes over plot points that haven't happened yet!
** Pretty much every single bit of information that was conveyed in a footnote could have easily been woven into the main narration (the whole point of a footnote being to relay important information to the reader that would otherwise be unnatural or difficult to explain in the narration), but that would mean that Jenna would have to spend time talking about something other than her clothes or grotesque sex life.
** In many cases, she gives a footnote and then has Link explain to Jenna what the term is ''several sentences later'' in the body of the text. One footnote actually retells plot points from the main story.
*** One footnote goes even farther, and goes over plot points that haven't happened yet!
** Pretty much every single bit of information that was conveyed in a footnote could have easily been woven into the main narration (the whole point of a footnote being to relay important information to the reader that would otherwise be unnatural or difficult to explain in the narration), but that would mean that Jenna would have to spend time talking about something other than her clothes or grotesque sex life.
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* FootnoteFever: Because she felt There are a lot of footnotes explaining the new additions to the lore that Jenna has come up with. Unfortunately, many of these additions [[CaptainObvious need to explain what a no explanation at all]] (the Spring Festival was ([[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin It's is a festival held in Spring)]].
** In many cases, she gives a footnotespring), and then has Link explain to Jenna what the term is ''several sentences later'' others are explained in the body of the text. One footnote actually retells plot points from the main story.
*** One footnote goesstory anyway. A few footnotes even farther, and goes over plot points recap the events of the main story, one of them recapping events that haven't even happened yet!
** Pretty much every single bit of information that was conveyed in a footnote could have easily been woven into the main narration (the whole point of a footnote being to relay important information to the reader that would otherwise be unnatural or difficult to explain in the narration), but that would mean that Jenna would have to spend time talking about something other than her clothes or grotesque sex life.yet at this point.
** In many cases, she gives a footnote
*** One footnote goes
** Pretty much every single bit of information that was conveyed in a footnote could have easily been woven into the main narration (the whole point of a footnote being to relay important information to the reader that would otherwise be unnatural or difficult to explain in the narration), but that would mean that Jenna would have to spend time talking about something other than her clothes or grotesque sex life.
** When Jenna discovers her elemental powers, all the other characters act like this is something no one in Hyrule has ever been able to do, forgetting that several of the classical elements are represented in the magic of the Sages, and that Link himself learns to cast spells that draw on three of the elements over the course of ''Ocarina of Time''.
* GreatOffscreenWar: The footnotes talk a little about something called The Great War Of The Lands, which is outlined in very vague terms, as befits its vague name.
** During the main story, Link goes off to fight in another war which is even more loosely defined. Aside from Hyrule, we're not told the names of any of the belligerent nations or why they're fighting, the emphasis instead on Link and Jenna's resulting separation.
** During the main story, Link goes off to fight in another war which is even more loosely defined. Aside from Hyrule, we're not told the names of any of the belligerent nations or why they're fighting, the emphasis instead on Link and Jenna's resulting separation.
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* IdealizedSex: Some of the things described in the sex scenes would not work. At all. The author has no idea what the male refractory period is and seems to think that men can climax twice in five minutes without any problems (some can, but the odds are against it and doubly so for those out of their twenties!). Also, women do excrete a certain fluid during orgasm, but the sheer amount that shows up after every one of Jenna's orgasms means that she has some serious health problems.
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* IdealizedSex: Some of the things described in the sex scenes would not work. At all. The author author, presumably a virgin at the time of writing, has no idea what the male refractory period is and seems to think that men can climax twice in five minutes without any problems (some can, but the odds are against it and doubly so for those out of their twenties!). Also, women do excrete a certain fluid during orgasm, but the sheer amount that shows up after every one of Jenna's orgasms means that she has some serious health problems.
* MonsterShapedMountain: Dragonmount is said to be shaped like a dragon. It's implied that this is a natural formation, rather than some kind of gigantic sculpture.
* NoEnding: The story was never completed, and ends on a chapter heading for a chapter that was never written. Because of the way it's formatted, however, the last part of it most people read are the footnotes, which are their own anticlimax.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Not explained in much detail, but it's mentioned that blue dragons are the most dangerous variety, as they have the sharpest senses. Other than that, they seem to be fairly standard European-style fire-breathing dragons.
* OurElvesAreBetter: Link is said to be a half-elf (hence the pointy ears), and therefore, has better hearing than Jenna.
* OurGryphonsAreDifferent: Griffins are a noble but reclusive race who live in the Black Mountains, across the desert from Hyrule. They are intelligent and can speak and even brew beer. Despite being able to fly, their town is laid out very much like a human settlement.
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* PostVictoryCollapse: Jenna faints immediately after using her new-found ElementalPowers to kill Dark Link as an excuse to wake up in Link's arms.
* PsychicLink: Jenna has one with Link.
* PornWithoutPlot: There's not a hint of real, life-threatening-to-a-main-character conflict until near the end of the ''twelfth chapter'' and even then, it's resolved in less than two chapters. Indeed, there isn't ''any'' conflict, life-threatening or not, in the story until then.
** Link and Jenna are parted for several months of plot time because he has to go to war. He's back in a few pages.
** Another conflict is set up towards the end, involving Jenna and Link getting in the thick of a brewing war amongst CanonForeigner countries. It reaches its climax when a huge bat-like creature attacks them at night and they opt to run away to Hyrule Castle instead of fighting. The story ends that same chapter and we're LeftHanging.
* PsychicLink: Jenna has one with Link.
* PornWithoutPlot: There's not a hint of real, life-threatening-to-a-main-character conflict until near the end of the ''twelfth chapter'' and even then, it's resolved in less than two chapters. Indeed, there isn't ''any'' conflict, life-threatening or not, in the story until then.
** Link and Jenna are parted for several months of plot time because he has to go to war. He's back in a few pages.
** Another conflict is set up towards the end, involving Jenna and Link getting in the thick of a brewing war amongst CanonForeigner countries. It reaches its climax when a huge bat-like creature attacks them at night and they opt to run away to Hyrule Castle instead of fighting. The story ends that same chapter and we're LeftHanging.
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* PostVictoryCollapse: Jenna faints immediately after using her new-found newfound ElementalPowers to kill Dark Link as an excuse to wake up in Link's arms.
Link.
* PsychicLink: Jenna has one withLink.
* PornWithoutPlot: There's not a hint of real, life-threatening-to-a-main-character conflict until near the end of the ''twelfth chapter'' and even then, it's resolved in less than two chapters. Indeed, there isn't ''any'' conflict, life-threatening or not, in the story until then.
** Link and Jenna are parted for several months of plot time because he hasLink. A link to go to war. He's back in a few pages.
** Another conflict is set up towards the end, involving Jenna and Link getting in the thick of a brewing war amongst CanonForeigner countries. It reaches its climax when a huge bat-like creature attacks them at night and they opt to run away to Hyrule Castle instead of fighting. The story ends that same chapter and we're LeftHanging.Link, if you will.
* PsychicLink: Jenna has one with
* PornWithoutPlot: There's not a hint of real, life-threatening-to-a-main-character conflict until near the end of the ''twelfth chapter'' and even then, it's resolved in less than two chapters. Indeed, there isn't ''any'' conflict, life-threatening or not, in the story until then.
** Link and Jenna are parted for several months of plot time because he has
** Another conflict is set up towards the end, involving Jenna and Link getting in the thick of a brewing war amongst CanonForeigner countries. It reaches its climax when a huge bat-like creature attacks them at night and they opt to run away to Hyrule Castle instead of fighting. The story ends that same chapter and we're LeftHanging.
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** Probably unintentional, but the names Dalamar and Ariakas [[Literature/{{Dragonlance}} sure do sound familiar...]]
** Also probably unintentional, but Stardancer is the name of a My Little Pony from gen 1.
** Also probably unintentional, but Stardancer is the name of a My Little Pony from gen 1.
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** Probably unintentional, but the The names Dalamar and Ariakas [[Literature/{{Dragonlance}} sure do sound familiar...]]
Ariakas, as well as the Draconian race, are all likely taken from ''Literature/{{Dragonlance}}''.
**Also probably unintentional, Unintentional, but Stardancer is the name of a My Little Pony ''Franchise/MyLittlePony'' character from gen 1.
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* SmugSnake: Dark Link is a genetically smug villain.
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* SliceOfLife: The emphasis is very much on the characters' domestic lives most of the time, which can be jarring for readers who expect a ''Zelda'' fanfic to contain more adventure. There's not a hint of real, life-threatening-to-a-main-character conflict until near the end of the ''twelfth chapter'' and even then, it's resolved in less than two chapters. Indeed, there isn't ''any'' conflict, life-threatening or not, in the story until then.
** Link and Jenna are parted for several months of plot time because he has to go to war. He's back in a few pages.
** Another conflict is set up towards the end, involving Jenna and Link getting in the thick of a brewing war amongst CanonForeigner countries. It reaches its climax when a huge bat-like creature attacks them at night and they opt to run away to Hyrule Castle instead of fighting. The story ends that same chapter and we're LeftHanging.
* SmugSnake: Dark Link is agenetically generically smug villain.villain, who "sneers" almost all his dialogue.
** Link and Jenna are parted for several months of plot time because he has to go to war. He's back in a few pages.
** Another conflict is set up towards the end, involving Jenna and Link getting in the thick of a brewing war amongst CanonForeigner countries. It reaches its climax when a huge bat-like creature attacks them at night and they opt to run away to Hyrule Castle instead of fighting. The story ends that same chapter and we're LeftHanging.
* SmugSnake: Dark Link is a
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* SuckinessIsPainful: In the [[AuthorFilibuster incredibly long author's introduction]], Jenna [[SarcasmBlind fails to understand hyperboled criticism]] that claims this.
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* SuckinessIsPainful: In the [[AuthorFilibuster incredibly long author's introduction]], Jenna responds to someone claiming this about the story, and [[SarcasmBlind fails to understand hyperboled criticism]] that claims this.the hyperbole]].
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: The authors' notes mention (in ''more'' than just the line quoted above) how she never "physically" hurt anyone with the story, to the point that she seems to acknowledge that [[GoMadFromTheRevelation mental trauma might have occurred]].
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* TigerVersusDragon: Almost certainly done unintentionally. Jenna and Link [[PurpleProse are described as "tigers" when having sex]], and the Draconians have tame dragons
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* TigerVersusDragon: Almost certainly done unintentionally. Jenna and Link [[PurpleProse are described as "tigers" when having sex]], and the Draconians have tame dragonstamed dragons.
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* WingedUnicorn: Called "Unipegs" in the story. They appear towards the end of the story when Hyrule is preparing for war. Of course, by "appear", we mean "are mentioned in passing as an ally and swiftly forgotten".
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* WingedUnicorn: Called "Unipegs" in the story. They appear are mentioned towards the end of the story when Hyrule is preparing for war. Of course, by "appear", we mean "are mentioned in passing war, as an ally and swiftly forgotten". a possible ally, but the story ends before they actually show up.
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear it in DramaticReading form [[https://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=9657945AD58D5150 here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]], although the latter was never finished. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the first DramaticReading, began a remake, which unfortunately got his channel terminated due to the story’s explicit content.
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear it in DramaticReading form [[https://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=9657945AD58D5150 here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]], although the latter was never finished. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the first DramaticReading, began a remake, which unfortunately is being re-uploaded [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNGVCw_DBevTeNU2Kh-0kI90wozys3ldV here]] after the story got his channel terminated due to the story’s explicit content.
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* UltimateEvil: Dark Lord Ariakas, though TheUnseen.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Jenna ''Silverblade'' and her horses, Midnight Star and Star Dancer.
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* CaptainObvious: "The nipples on my breasts."
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** "The nipples on my breasts."
** "The nipples on my breasts."
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** At one point, Jenna smells "something [[CluckingFunny fowl"]].
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** At one point, Jenna smells "something [[CluckingFunny fowl"]].fowl".
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear it in DramaticReading form [[https://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=9657945AD58D5150 here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]], although the latter was never finished. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the first DramaticReading, began a remake, which you can listen to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IAallLqvQ8g&list=PLkpx8GQSAZWYJt-lDEtIfjANNIsDSFiX9 here.]]
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear it in DramaticReading form [[https://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=9657945AD58D5150 here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]], although the latter was never finished. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the first DramaticReading, began a remake, which you can listen unfortunately got his channel terminated due to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IAallLqvQ8g&list=PLkpx8GQSAZWYJt-lDEtIfjANNIsDSFiX9 here.]]
the story’s explicit content.
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* DontLikeDontRead: The author's note takes this UpToEleven. If copied and pasted into Word or similar, it turns out the rant [[AuthorFilibuster goes on for three pages-ish.]]
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* DontLikeDontRead: The author's note takes this UpToEleven.up to eleven. If copied and pasted into Word or similar, it turns out the rant [[AuthorFilibuster goes on for three pages-ish.]]
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Also, see ''FanFic/MyImmortal'', ''[[Fanfic/LegolasByLaura legolas by laura]]'', ''Fanfic/ShinraHighSoldier'', ''FanFic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil'', ''FanFic/LoveIsDeffinatlyBlind'', ''FanFic/BackToTheFrollo'', ''Fanfic/TheFinalSword'', ''FanFic/MarissaPicard'', ''Literature/AtlantaNights'', and ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy''.
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Also, see ''FanFic/MyImmortal'', ''[[Fanfic/LegolasByLaura legolas by laura]]'', ''Fanfic/ShinraHighSoldier'', ''FanFic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil'', ''FanFic/LoveIsDeffinatlyBlind'', ''FanFic/BackToTheFrollo'', ''Fanfic/TheFinalSword'', ''FanFic/MarissaPicard'', ''FanFic/ShinraHighSoldier'', ''Literature/AtlantaNights'', and ''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy''.
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* {{Chickification}}: Every rival for Link's affections, including [[BarrierMaiden Princess]] [[LadyOfWar Zelda]], Malon, [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Saria]], and [[{{Tsundere}} Ruto]] are reduced from their powerful and determined selves to fawning over Jenna, angst about how [[IwantMyBelovedToBeHappy they want Link to be happy with her]], ''and'' give her cool stuff... like ''the Ocarina of freakin' Time''.
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* {{Chickification}}: Every rival for Link's affections, including [[BarrierMaiden Princess]] [[LadyOfWar Princess Zelda]], Malon, [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Saria]], and [[{{Tsundere}} Ruto]] are reduced from their powerful and determined selves to fawning over Jenna, angst about how [[IwantMyBelovedToBeHappy they want Link to be happy with her]], ''and'' give her cool stuff... like ''the Ocarina of freakin' Time''.
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* [[ForgotAboutHisPowers Forgot About Her Powers]]:
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* [[ForgotAboutHisPowers Forgot About Her Powers]]:ForgotAboutHerPowers:
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* InformedFlaw: As mention above, we're constantly told that the Griffins don't trust anybody. However the only time this is actually shown is by a pair of royal guards (whose job would require them to not trust everybody) who are promptly chewed out for doing so.
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* MoralDissonance: The pregnant bender. Either Jen forgot that her character was pregnant at the time (which wouldn't be surprising) or she'd never heard of Fetal Alcohol Syndrome (which also wouldn't be surprising).
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* AlternateUniverseFic: The story is set up by Link not going back in time at the end of ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime'', allowing him to meet Jenna.
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* LikeBrotherAndSister: Link is essentially an adoptee of the Royal Family in this fic, which ensures he can't be a love interest for Zelda.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: Link gets the last name "Silverblade."
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* WeakButSkilled: Link is still a swordsman and soldier, but gets beaten up and captured enough to give Jenna time to shine.
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* DontLikeDontRead: The author's note takes this UpToEleven. If copied and pasted into Word or similar, it turns out the rant (consisting entirely of how people who complain about her writing or consider her character a MarySue are bad and should feel bad) [[AuthorFilibuster goes on for three pages-ish.]]
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* DontLikeDontRead: The author's note takes this UpToEleven. If copied and pasted into Word or similar, it turns out the rant (consisting entirely of how people who complain about her writing or consider her character a MarySue are bad and should feel bad) [[AuthorFilibuster goes on for three pages-ish.]]
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%%* ScreamingBirth: Coupled with InstantBirthJustAddWater.
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%%* ScreamingBirth: Coupled with InstantBirthJustAddWater.InstantBirthJustAddLabor.
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!!''FanFic/MyInnerLife'' provides examples of:
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* ShoutOut: Probably unintentional, but the names Dalamar and Ariakas [[Literature/{{Dragonlance}} sure do sound familiar...]]
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** Probably unintentional, but the names Dalamar and Ariakas [[Literature/{{Dragonlance}} sure do sound familiar...]]]]
** Also probably unintentional, but Stardancer is the name of a My Little Pony from gen 1.
** Probably unintentional, but the names Dalamar and Ariakas [[Literature/{{Dragonlance}} sure do sound familiar...
** Also probably unintentional, but Stardancer is the name of a My Little Pony from gen 1.
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Also, see ''FanFic/MyImmortal'', ''[[Fanfic/LegolasByLaura legolas by laura]]'', ''Fanfic/ShinraHighSoldier'', ''FanFic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil'', ''FanFic/LoveIsDeffinatlyBlind'', ''FanFic/BackToTheFrollo'', ''Fanfic/TheFinalSword'', ''FanFic/MarissaPicard'', and ''Literature/AtlantaNights''.
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Also, see ''FanFic/MyImmortal'', ''[[Fanfic/LegolasByLaura legolas by laura]]'', ''Fanfic/ShinraHighSoldier'', ''FanFic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil'', ''FanFic/LoveIsDeffinatlyBlind'', ''FanFic/BackToTheFrollo'', ''Fanfic/TheFinalSword'', ''FanFic/MarissaPicard'', ''Literature/AtlantaNights'', and ''Literature/AtlantaNights''.
''Fanfic/StarkitsProphecy''.
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear it in DramaticReading form [[https://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=9657945AD58D5150 here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]], although the latter was never finished. If those aren't enough to quell your interest, there is also a Sims 2 reenactment, part one of which can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F9z2rLuD0ss/ here]]. Also recommended is this [[http://zelda-queen.livejournal.com/18688.html sporking]]. Two more interesting sporks are [[http://thepdohf.blogspot.com/2012/08/a-nightmare-on-hyrule-field-part-1-get.html here]] and [[https://celestiallapras.livejournal.com/15073.html here]].
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The author [[CutShort never actually finished the story]], but it lives on in the memories of many traumatized and amused ''Zelda'' fans. The story, plus a shrine to the author herself, can be found [[http://linksqueen.tripod.com/ here]]. You can also hear it in DramaticReading form [[https://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=9657945AD58D5150 here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/user/RenegadeTimeLady here]], although the latter was never finished. In February 2021, mutant museum[[note]]formerly manwithoutabody[[/note]], who did the first DramaticReading, began a remake, which you can listen to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IAallLqvQ8g&list=PLkpx8GQSAZWYJt-lDEtIfjANNIsDSFiX9 here.]]
If those aren't enough to quell your interest, there is also a Sims 2 reenactment, part one of which can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F9z2rLuD0ss/ here]]. Also recommended is this [[http://zelda-queen.livejournal.com/18688.html sporking]]. Two more interesting sporks are [[http://thepdohf.blogspot.com/2012/08/a-nightmare-on-hyrule-field-part-1-get.html here]] and [[https://celestiallapras.livejournal.com/15073.html here]].
If those aren't enough to quell your interest, there is also a Sims 2 reenactment, part one of which can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F9z2rLuD0ss/ here]]. Also recommended is this [[http://zelda-queen.livejournal.com/18688.html sporking]]. Two more interesting sporks are [[http://thepdohf.blogspot.com/2012/08/a-nightmare-on-hyrule-field-part-1-get.html here]] and [[https://celestiallapras.livejournal.com/15073.html here]].
