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''My Dark King'' is a {{Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds}} {{Alternate Universe Fic}}. It leads off from the halfway point of Jack's duel with Carly as a Dark Signer with one very simple question; "What if Jack had lost that duel, died, and fulfilled Carly's vision, becoming a Dark Signer?" From [[ForWantOfANail that one change]], events go drastically differently, mostly in ways that aren't good. Yusei ends up not being around to help Aki in her duel with Misty and instead gets severely injured by a load of falling debris, Crow nearly winds up with his face beaten in by a {{Brainwashed and Crazy}} Aki, and then the [[EldritchAbomination King of the Underworld]] gets involved and everything just starts falling straight into Hell. Literally! Suffice it to say, this is one fic that takes the already kind of {{Darker and Edgier}} plot of the Dark Signer arc and ramps it straight {{Up to Eleven}}.

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-> ''Rest for a moment. All will be explained in due time, my beloved. [[TitleDrop My...Dark King.]]''
--> '''[[GodSaveUsFromTheQueen — Carly Nagisa]]'''

''My Dark King'' is a {{Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds}} {{Alternate Universe Fic}}. It leads off from the halfway point of Jack's duel with Carly as a Dark Signer with one very simple question; "What if Jack had lost that duel, died, and fulfilled Carly's vision, becoming a Dark Signer?" Signer?"

From [[ForWantOfANail that one change]], events go drastically differently, mostly in ways that aren't good. Yusei ends up not being around to help Aki in her duel with Misty and instead gets severely injured by a load of falling debris, Crow nearly winds up with his face beaten in by a {{Brainwashed and Crazy}} Aki, and then the [[EldritchAbomination King of the Underworld]] gets involved and everything just starts falling straight into Hell. Literally! Suffice it to say, this is one fic that takes the already kind of {{Darker and Edgier}} plot of the Dark Signer arc and ramps it straight {{Up to Eleven}}.
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**Jack's entire deck is based around the "Dark Counterpart" archtype.


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** Tempei is disemboweled by demonic birds.

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* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Barbara stays true to form, [[spoiler: choking Lotten to death when he refuses the Reaper's offer.]] Hinted at with Wiraqocha Rasca, but It's managed to be a lot more subtle about it so far.

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* ChronicBackstabbingDisorder: Barbara stays true to form, [[spoiler: choking Lotten to death when he refuses the Reaper's offer.]] Hinted at with Wiraqocha Rasca, but It's managed to be a lot more subtle about it so far. far.
*CombatPragmatist: Professor Frank manages to weaponize the energy source lodged in his chest. He does so by chest-bumping his foes.

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* BeyondTheImpossible: The 12-way duel of [[spoiler: Team Kizuna vs Nicolas and Barbara]]. For perspective, in the series proper only 1 duel had a comparable number of participants. That duel was also dramatically one-sided, something the writer goes to great lengths to avoid for this duel.


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* UpToEleven: The 12-way duel of [[spoiler: Team Kizuna vs Nicolas and Barbara]]. For perspective, in the series proper only 1 duel had a comparable number of participants. That duel was also dramatically one-sided, something the writer goes to great lengths to avoid for this duel.
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* GratuitousGerman: Used by Nickolas, although he's less than fluent himself.
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* ObligatorySwearing: Whereas the original series used swearing sparingly, My Dark King...doesn't

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* AxCrazy: Player Killer of Darkness

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* AxCrazy: Player Killer of DarknessDarkness.
* AwesomeButImpractical: The card "Sleeping Giant: Zushin." because this fic takes place prior to the second half of 5D's, there has yet to be a single summoning of the monster in an official duel. [[spoiler: [[MillionToOneChance But since it had such a low chance of happening, of course it happens.]]]]
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* SoftWater : [[AvertedTrope Averted]] in the side-story "Second Sun." While Goodwin does manage to leave Satellite by speeding off a bridge, the impact into the waters below destroys one of his arms.

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* SoftWater : [[AvertedTrope Averted]] in the side-story "Second Sun." While Goodwin does manage manages to leave Satellite by speeding off a bridge, bridge into the ocean below, but the impact into the waters below destroys one of his arms.arms in the process.



* SummoningRitual: A more scientific variant. Wiraqocha Rascha plans for the Momentum Reactor to set off a cataclysmic explosion that will release every remaining Eartbound God from their seals. Doubles as [[RaceAgainsttheClock Race Against the Clock]]

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* SummoningRitual: A more scientific variant. Wiraqocha Rascha plans for the Momentum Reactor to set off a cataclysmic explosion that will release every remaining Eartbound God from their seals. Doubles as [[RaceAgainsttheClock Race Against the Clock]]Clock]].
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Yusei is very hard on himself for his failures even when they aren't his fault.

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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Yusei is very hard on himself for his failures failures...even when they aren't his fault.
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* SoftWater : [[AvertedTrope Averted]] in the side-story "Second Sun." When Goodwin attempts to leave Satellite by speeding off a bridge he succeeds...and destroys one of his arms in the process.

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* SoftWater : [[AvertedTrope Averted]] in the side-story "Second Sun." When While Goodwin attempts does manage to leave Satellite by speeding off a bridge he succeeds...and bridge, the impact into the waters below destroys one of his arms in the process.arms.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Yusei is very hard on himself for his failures, sometimes even when they aren't his fault.

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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Yusei is very hard on himself for his failures, sometimes failures even when they aren't his fault.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: The 12-way duel of [[spoiler: Team Kizuna vs Nicolas and Barbara]]. For perspective, in the series proper only 1 duel prior to this had a comparable number of participants. That duel was also dramatically one-sided, something the writer goes to great lengths to avoid for this duel.

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* BeyondTheImpossible: The 12-way duel of [[spoiler: Team Kizuna vs Nicolas and Barbara]]. For perspective, in the series proper only 1 duel prior to this had a comparable number of participants. That duel was also dramatically one-sided, something the writer goes to great lengths to avoid for this duel.
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* JawDrop: The reaction of all present parties to Leo's [[Spoiler summoning of Time Wizard.]]

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* JawDrop: The reaction of all present parties to Leo's [[Spoiler [[spoiler: summoning of Time Wizard.]]
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* JawDrop: The reaction of all present parties to Leo's [[Spoiler: summoning of Time Wizard.]]

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* JawDrop: The reaction of all present parties to Leo's [[Spoiler: [[Spoiler summoning of Time Wizard.]]
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* SummoningRitual: A more scientific variant. Wiraqocha Rascha plans for the Momentum Reactor to set off a cataclysmic explosion that will release every remaining Eartbound God from their seals. Doubles as [[RaceAgainsttheClock Race Against the Clock]]


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* YouHave48Hours: The initial deadline for the cataclysmic release of the remaining sealed Earthbound Gods. [[FromBadtoWorse The deadline has moved up since then.]]
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* Troperiffic: Unsurprising, considering the writer is [[OneofUs One of Us]]

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* Troperiffic: Unsurprising, considering the writer is [[OneofUs One of Us]]Us]]. Several Tropes are even referred to by name.
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** The first appearance of [[spoiler: Asiru Amaru]] is overloaded with references to various myths.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: The 12-way duel of [[spoiler: Team Kizuna vs Nicolas and Barbara]]. For perspective, in the series proper only 1 duel prior to this had a comparable number of participants. That duel was also dramatically one-sided, something the writer goes to great lengths to avoid for this duel.
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* HardLight: The "Solid Vision" generated by Duel Disks is mentioned as possessing this quality.



* ItsAllMyFault: How Yusei feels about [[spoiler: unwittingly leading Carly right to Aki.]]



* SoftWater : [[AvertedTrope Averted]] in the side-story "Second Sun." When Goodwin attempts to leave Satellite by speeding off a bridge he succeeds...and destroys one of his arms in the process.



* TheStoic: One thought that occurs to Yusei during t

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* TheStoic: One thought that occurs to Yusei during this breakdown is [[OutofCharacterMoment how at odds his current behavior is with the image he normally maintains.]]



* Troperiffic: Unsurprising, considering the writer is [[OneofUs One of Us]]



[[spoiler: Barbara as well, after realizing that her death is likely imminent.]]

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** [[spoiler: Barbara as well, after realizing that her death is likely imminent.]]
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Yusei is very hard on himself for his failures, sometimes even when they aren't his fault.


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* AxCrazy: Player Killer of Darkness



* InvincibleHero: Subverted. The Signers have been getting their asses kicked up and down the street starting with Jack's death in the first chapter right up to Yusei getting his shit ruined by a pack of ravenous birds in Chapter 12, with no end in sight.

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* InvincibleHero: Subverted. The Signers have been getting their asses kicked up and down the street starting with Jack's death in the first chapter right up to Yusei getting his shit ruined by a pack of ravenous birds in Chapter 12, with no end in sight. sight.
* JawDrop: The reaction of all present parties to Leo's [[Spoiler: summoning of Time Wizard.]]



* UnstoppableRage: Jack unleashes his on [[spoiler: Divine]] when he threatens Carly's life.
* VillainousBreakdown: Goodwin gets one when [[spoiler: Jack takes control of Wiraqocha Rasca and it goes without a fight]].

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* UnstoppableRage: Jack unleashes his on [[spoiler: Divine]] when he the latter threatens Carly's life.
* VillainousBreakdown: Goodwin gets one when [[spoiler: Jack takes control of Wiraqocha Rasca and it goes without a fight]]. fight]].
[[spoiler: Barbara as well, after realizing that her death is likely imminent.]]
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* UnstoppableRage: Jack unleashes his on [[spoiler: Divine]] when he threatens Carly's life.
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* SaidBookism: The [[OneofUs writer]] explicitly faults themselves for this trope in their Author's Notes.

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Badass Nickname is an alternative title for Red Baron. Secondly, there is a project in progress to trim down the badass snowclones


* BadassNickname: "The High Ruler of Hell, Dark King."



* GambitRoulette: Subverted. Goodwin's falls outside its ridiculously small margin of success, and he ends up having to try something else



* RedBaron: "The High Ruler of Hell, Dark King."



* XanatosRoulette: Subverted. Goodwin's falls outside its ridiculously small margin of success, and he ends up having to try something else.
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"My Dark King" is a {{Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds}} {{Alternate Universe Fic}}. It leads off from the halfway point of Jack's duel with Carly as a Dark Signer with one very simple question; "What if Jack had lost that duel, died, and fulfilled Carly's vision, becoming a Dark Signer?" From [[ForWantOfANail that one change]], events go drastically differently, mostly in ways that aren't good. Yusei ends up not being around to help Aki in her duel with Misty and instead gets severely injured by a load of falling debris, Crow nearly winds up with his face beaten in by a {{Brainwashed and Crazy}} Aki, and then the [[EldritchAbomination King of the Underworld]] gets involved and everything just starts falling straight into Hell. Literally! Suffice it to say, this is one fic that takes the already kind of {{Darker and Edgier}} plot of the Dark Signer arc and ramps it straight {{Up to Eleven}}.

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"My ''My Dark King" King'' is a {{Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds}} {{Alternate Universe Fic}}. It leads off from the halfway point of Jack's duel with Carly as a Dark Signer with one very simple question; "What if Jack had lost that duel, died, and fulfilled Carly's vision, becoming a Dark Signer?" From [[ForWantOfANail that one change]], events go drastically differently, mostly in ways that aren't good. Yusei ends up not being around to help Aki in her duel with Misty and instead gets severely injured by a load of falling debris, Crow nearly winds up with his face beaten in by a {{Brainwashed and Crazy}} Aki, and then the [[EldritchAbomination King of the Underworld]] gets involved and everything just starts falling straight into Hell. Literally! Suffice it to say, this is one fic that takes the already kind of {{Darker and Edgier}} plot of the Dark Signer arc and ramps it straight {{Up to Eleven}}.



** Chapter 15 takes it a step even further, positing that the King is in fact [[spoiler: a member of an entire ''species'' of EldritchAbominations, which also includes the already-deceased Zorc Necrophades, Leviathan, and Darkness from the previous two series.]]

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** Chapter 15 takes it a step even further, positing that the King is in fact [[spoiler: a member of an entire ''species'' of EldritchAbominations, {{Eldritch Abomination}}s, which also includes the already-deceased Zorc Necrophades, Leviathan, and Darkness from the previous two series.]]
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It's worth noting that the author has also written three one-shots that fit neatly into the same "universe", [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6048880/1/The_Devil_and_the_Star The Devil and the Star]], a story about Takuma Saiou from {{Yu-Gi-Oh GX}} founding the Arcadia Movement and how it was taken from him by Divine, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6494911/1/Second_Sun Second Sun]], a story elaborating on Rex Goodwin's past and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6732194/1/Heroes_of_Justice Heroes of Justice]], a story about a young Sherry Leblanc meeting Edo Phoenix. The former two work perfectly well as standalones, not having to read "My Dark King" to really get them and not having to read them to get the main story, but "Heroes of Justice" at least pretty much requires having read "The Devil and the Star" first. More recently, he's also added an ongoing miniseries running alongside the main story: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7135968/1/I_Am_Become_Death I Am Become Death]], a series of [[BlatantLies short]] drabbles featuring each of the original seven Dark Signers.

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It's worth noting that the author has also written three one-shots that fit neatly into the same "universe", [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6048880/1/The_Devil_and_the_Star The Devil and the Star]], a story about Takuma Saiou from {{Yu-Gi-Oh GX}} from Anime/YuGiOhGX founding the Arcadia Movement and how it was taken from him by Divine, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6494911/1/Second_Sun Second Sun]], a story elaborating on Rex Goodwin's past and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6732194/1/Heroes_of_Justice Heroes of Justice]], a story about a young Sherry Leblanc meeting Edo Phoenix. The former two work perfectly well as standalones, not having to read "My Dark King" to really get them and not having to read them to get the main story, but "Heroes of Justice" at least pretty much requires having read "The Devil and the Star" first. More recently, he's also added an ongoing miniseries running alongside the main story: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7135968/1/I_Am_Become_Death I Am Become Death]], a series of [[BlatantLies short]] drabbles featuring each of the original seven Dark Signers.
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"My Dark King" is a {{Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds}} {{Alternate Universe Fic}}. It leads off from the halfway point of Jack's duel with Carly as a Dark Signer with one very simple question; "What if Jack had lost that duel, died, and fulfilled Carly's vision, becoming a Dark Signer?" From [[ForWantOfANail that one change]], events go drastically differently, mostly in ways that [[ItGotWorse aren't good]]. Yusei ends up not being around to help Aki in her duel with Misty and instead gets severely injured by a load of falling debris, Crow nearly winds up with his face beaten in by a {{Brainwashed and Crazy}} Aki, and then the [[EldritchAbomination King of the Underworld]] gets involved and everything just starts falling straight into Hell. Literally! Suffice it to say, this is one fic that takes the already kind of {{Darker and Edgier}} plot of the Dark Signer arc and ramps it straight {{Up to Eleven}}.

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"My Dark King" is a {{Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds}} {{Alternate Universe Fic}}. It leads off from the halfway point of Jack's duel with Carly as a Dark Signer with one very simple question; "What if Jack had lost that duel, died, and fulfilled Carly's vision, becoming a Dark Signer?" From [[ForWantOfANail that one change]], events go drastically differently, mostly in ways that [[ItGotWorse aren't good]].good. Yusei ends up not being around to help Aki in her duel with Misty and instead gets severely injured by a load of falling debris, Crow nearly winds up with his face beaten in by a {{Brainwashed and Crazy}} Aki, and then the [[EldritchAbomination King of the Underworld]] gets involved and everything just starts falling straight into Hell. Literally! Suffice it to say, this is one fic that takes the already kind of {{Darker and Edgier}} plot of the Dark Signer arc and ramps it straight {{Up to Eleven}}.
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The story is currently being written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/832399/Masterdramon Masterdramon]], and is 15 chapters in. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5670368/1/My_Dark_King here]]. The story's greatest strengths are its familiarity with and respect towards the entirety of the Yu-Gi-Oh! canon, its expert ability to flesh out and develop minor characters, and juggling a ''lot'' of viewpoints at once, not to mention just being really damn well-written. The author is [[OneOfUs a lover of this site]] and a self-professed believer that TVTropesWillRuinYourLife, even going so far as to write a one-shot in gratitude to the troper, Tropers/{{Lale}}, who wrote the first [[FanficRecs recommendation]] for it.

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The story is currently being written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/832399/Masterdramon Masterdramon]], and is 15 16 chapters in. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5670368/1/My_Dark_King here]]. The story's greatest strengths are its familiarity with and respect towards the entirety of the Yu-Gi-Oh! canon, its expert ability to flesh out and develop minor characters, and juggling a ''lot'' of viewpoints at once, not to mention just being really damn well-written. The author is [[OneOfUs a lover of this site]] and a self-professed believer that TVTropesWillRuinYourLife, even going so far as to write a one-shot in gratitude to the troper, Tropers/{{Lale}}, who wrote the first [[FanficRecs recommendation]] for it.

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* AscendedExtra: And how. One of the story's defining traits is how it takes the most minor one-note characters of 5D's and completely fleshes them out.

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* AscendedExtra: And how. AscendedExtra: One of the story's defining traits is how it takes the most minor one-note characters of 5D's and completely fleshes them out.

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