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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Played with. Equestrian is functionally identical to English but Agatha's first language is actually German. She does speak English but it takes her several scenes to get fully used to it.
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* LanguageBarrier: Played with. Equestrian is functionally identical to English but Agatha's first language is actually German. She does speak English but it takes her several scenes to get fully used to it.
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''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mare-genius.226331/ Mare]] [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/32193/mare-genius Genius]]'' by Samarkand is a ''Webcomic/GirlGenius[=/=]WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic.
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''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mare-genius.226331/ Mare]] [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/32193/mare-genius Genius]]'' by [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14607789/chapters/33762693 by]] Samarkand is a ''Webcomic/GirlGenius[=/=]WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic.
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* HilariousInHindsight The fanfic made a gag of Agatha's battle with her cowlick hair, some half a year before GirlGenius did the same.
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* ShoutOut: to ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'' -- After Applejack brings several jars of her family's trademark GargleBlaster to the wedding, she and several of the girls end up singing the Hedgehog Song.
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* ShoutOut: to ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'' -- After Applejack brings several jars of her family's trademark GargleBlaster to the wedding, she and several of the girls end up singing the Hedgehog Song. (Note also that the GargleBlaster in the Tiffany Aching subseries is "Special Sheep Liniment".)
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* CarnivoreConfusion: Gilda is clearly a carnivore. Agatha impresses her immensly by eating most of a rabbit raw on a dare. Her herbivore stomach doesn't take it well. No comments are made on it later, when Agatha meets Angel (a mute but clearly sentient rabbit).
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* CarnivoreConfusion: Gilda is clearly a carnivore. Agatha impresses her immensly immensely by eating most of a rabbit raw on a dare. Her herbivore stomach doesn't take it well. No comments are made on it later, when Agatha meets Angel (a mute but clearly sentient rabbit).
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--> '''Agatha:''' Is that a Vohlman Class Three Resurrection Circuit?\\
'''Rarity:''' ''(Attaching alligator clips to Agatha's mane)'' Now just sit still, while Spike plugs this into the lightning rod. We'll have the pegasi summon a teensy little lightning storm so this WILL NOT DEFEAT ME--
'''Rarity:''' ''(Attaching alligator clips to Agatha's mane)'' Now just sit still, while Spike plugs this into the lightning rod. We'll have the pegasi summon a teensy little lightning storm so this WILL NOT DEFEAT ME--
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: played with. Equestrian is functionally identical to English but Agatha's first language is actually German. She does speak English but it takes her several scenes to get fully used to it.
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: played Played with. Equestrian is functionally identical to English but Agatha's first language is actually German. She does speak English but it takes her several scenes to get fully used to it.
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* StubbornHair: Rarity's efforts to tame Agatha's cowlick escalate until she starts going into the Madness Place.
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* NoodleImplements: Twilight dissects the story Agatha had heard while working as a fortune-teller. She not only deduces that the author of the story must have been a biped, but adjusts the NoodleImplements involved to make it work for ponies.
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* NoodleImplements: Twilight dissects the story Agatha had heard while working as a fortune-teller. fortune-teller (Involving a tea cozy and a spoon). She not only deduces that the author of the story must have been a biped, but adjusts the NoodleImplements involved to make it work for ponies.ponies (A pony would also require a full tea set, four more spoons, a strainer ball, and an oven mitt).
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* BawdySong: Something to do with platypi. Even Fluttershy joins in (to her lasting chagrin when she sobers up). Believed to be Discworld's ''The Hedgehog Song''.
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* BawdySong: Something BawdySong / DrunkenSong: Includes a particularly naughty verse that has something to do with platypi. Even Fluttershy joins in (to her lasting chagrin when she sobers up). Believed to be Discworld's ''The Hedgehog Song''.
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* GargleBlaster: "Zap Apple Horse Liniment" is fermented Zap Apple Jam that's run through a pot still the Apple Family keeps in a hollow on the edge of their property. Said still is only lit up when the wind is blowing away from the farmstead and any pony habitation. It is usually used to rub down Granny Smith's arthritic joints. It is also a dandy engine degreaser, fire accelerant, and sterilization agent during field surgery. Drinking the stuff usually results in a "not guilty by reason of insanity" plea in Equestrian court, because you would have to be out of your mind to consume it in the first place.
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* HowDoIShotWeb: Agatha spends several hours figuring out how to walk on four legs.
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* HowDoIShotWeb: Agatha spends several hours figuring out how to walk on four legs. She writes a quadrupedal locomotion program in her head.
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* FishOutOfWater: Agatha is shocked that no pony wears clothes regularly. She's also mildly concerned that the train has no armaments.
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* AntiAir: Rainbow Dash resolves to follow Agatha around when she learns Agatha and Gilda are friends. Agatha resolves to build a flak cannon ASAP.
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* Running Gag:
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* Running Gag:RunningGag:
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--> '''Agatha''': "Danke."[[note]]German for Thank you"[[/note]]
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--> '''Agatha''': "Danke."[[note]]German for Thank "Thank you"[[/note]]
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--> '''Agatha''': "Danke."[[hottip:*: German for Thank you"]]
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--> '''Agatha''': "Danke."[[hottip:*: German "[[note]]German for Thank you"]]you"[[/note]]
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* BawdySong: Something to do with platypi. Even Fluttershy joins in (to her lasting chagrin when she sobers up).
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* BawdySong: Something to do with platypi. Even Fluttershy joins in (to her lasting chagrin when she sobers up). Believed to be Discworld's ''The Hedgehog Song''.
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--> '''Agatha''': "Danke."[[hottip:*: German for Thank you"]]
--> '''Pony being addressed''': "Donkey? Where?"
--> '''Agatha''': "Danke."[[hottip:*: German for Thank you"]]
--> '''Pony being addressed''': "Donkey? Where?"
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* NakedPeopleAreFunny: Agatha freaks out when she notices nobody in Ponyville wears clothing.
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* BawdySong: Something to do with platypi. Even Fluttershy joins in (to her lasting chagrin when she sobers up).
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* HowDoIShotWeb: Agatha spends several hours learning how to walk on four legs.
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* HowDoIShotWeb: Agatha spends several hours learning figuring out how to walk on four legs.
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* NoodleImplements: Twilight dissects the story Agatha had heard while working as a fortune-teller. She not only deduces that the author of the story must have been a biped but adjusts the NoodleImplements involved to make it work for ponies.
* NotSoDifferent: Rarity's "creativity mode" turns out to be eerily similar to sparks' "madness place". Once they meet half-way with their ideas, they become instant best friends.
* NotSoDifferent: Rarity's "creativity mode" turns out to be eerily similar to sparks' "madness place". Once they meet half-way with their ideas, they become instant best friends.
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* NoodleImplements: Twilight dissects the story Agatha had heard while working as a fortune-teller. She not only deduces that the author of the story must have been a biped biped, but adjusts the NoodleImplements involved to make it work for ponies.
* NotSoDifferent: Rarity's "creativity mode" turns out to be eerily similar to sparks' "madness place". Once they meethalf-way halfway with their ideas, they become instant best friends.
* NotSoDifferent: Rarity's "creativity mode" turns out to be eerily similar to sparks' "madness place". Once they meet
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Fluttershy gets drunk from just sniffing the drink Applejack brought. Actually justified, as the drink is not only a GargleBlaster but partially magical.
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: [[CantHoldHisLiquor Can't Hold Her Liquor]]: Fluttershy gets drunk from just sniffing the drink Applejack brought. Actually justified, as the drink is not only a GargleBlaster but partially magical.
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* HypercompetentSidekick: Spike is not only a walking index of the whole library but also accustomed to handling both Twilight's and Rarity's quirks. He also speaks Germane.
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* HypercompetentSidekick: [[HypercompetentSidekick Hypercompetent Minion]]: Spike is not only a walking index of the whole library but also accustomed to handling both Twilight's and Rarity's quirks. He also speaks Germane.
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* InnocentFanserviceGirl: Inverted. The fact of everypony being naked initially goes over Agatha's head and she freaks out when it finally dawns on her - but nopony but her cares. (except for Rarity who, despite a massive hangover, feels fashion-related distress from several houses away)
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* InnocentFanserviceGirl: Inverted. The fact of everypony being naked initially goes over Agatha's head and she freaks out when it finally dawns on her - but nopony but her cares. (except (Except for Rarity who, Rarity, who despite a massive hangover, feels senses fashion-related distress from several houses away)away.)
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* ShoutOut: to ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'' -- After Applejack brings several jars of her family trademark GargleBlaster to the wedding, she and several of the girls end up singing the hedgehog song.
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* ShoutOut: to ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'' -- After Applejack brings several jars of her family family's trademark GargleBlaster to the wedding, she and several of the girls end up singing the hedgehog song.Hedgehog Song.
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* ForWantOfANail: Annoyed by Gilda's antics, Agatha tells her how a minor mean act (Moloch's friend stealing her locket) indirectly lead to her foster parents getting torn to shreds before her eyes.
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* ForWantOfANail: Annoyed by Gilda's antics, Agatha tells her how a minor mean act (Moloch's friend brother stealing her locket) indirectly lead led to her foster parents getting torn to shreds before her eyes.
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* ShoutOut: to ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'' -- After Applejack brings several jars of her family trademark GargleBlaster to the wedding, the girls end up singing the hedgehog song.
* SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic: It doesn't take Agatha long to figure that the locals blatantly disregard normal physics. Being a MadScientist she gets over it reasonably quickly. After all, magic is just another form of energy.
* SugarBowl: repeatadly lampshaded by Agatha. Ultimately averted, as she learns of the mane six' heroic deeds and decides Equestria is not so safe after all.
* SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic: It doesn't take Agatha long to figure that the locals blatantly disregard normal physics. Being a MadScientist she gets over it reasonably quickly. After all, magic is just another form of energy.
* SugarBowl: repeatadly lampshaded by Agatha. Ultimately averted, as she learns of the mane six' heroic deeds and decides Equestria is not so safe after all.
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* ShoutOut: to ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'' -- After Applejack brings several jars of her family trademark GargleBlaster to the wedding, she and several of the girls end up singing the hedgehog song.
* SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic: It doesn't take Agatha long to figure that the locals blatantly disregard normal physics. Being a MadScientist she gets over it reasonably quickly. After all, magic is just another form ofenergy.
SCIENCE!
* SugarBowl:repeatadly Repeatadly lampshaded by Agatha. Ultimately averted, as she learns of the mane six' Mane Six's heroic deeds and decides Equestria is not so safe after all.
* SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic: It doesn't take Agatha long to figure that the locals blatantly disregard normal physics. Being a MadScientist she gets over it reasonably quickly. After all, magic is just another form of
* SugarBowl:
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''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mare-genius.226331/ Mare Genius]]'' by Samarkand is a ''Webcomic/GirlGenius[=/=]WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic.
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''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mare-genius.226331/ Mare Mare]] [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/32193/mare-genius Genius]]'' by Samarkand is a ''Webcomic/GirlGenius[=/=]WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic.
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This doesn\'t have Boobs Of Steel and this sounds a lot more like Amazonian Beauty. Feel free to re-add with some clarification
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* BigBeautifulWoman: Agatha's BoobsOfSteel don't quite translate to pony anatomy. Between this and all the muscles that come from her combat training and being a WrenchWench, she ends up as a sturdy-looking earth pony. If Big Mac's reaction is any indication, she does look attractive.
