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* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected.

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* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected.expected; she is also literate in Equestrian and Griffon, and can recognise Taurian writing, albeit not translate it.
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* DelayedReaction: Rarity has one when Pinkie says that she will pay for the two of them, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash when they go to the spa.



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** It's even hinted that Rainbow and Sweetie Belle's burn toast turn into monsters.

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** It's even hinted that Rainbow and Sweetie Belle's burn toast turn turned into monsters.
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: Spike seemed quite intrigued when Rainbow Dash said she couldn't stop touching Fluttershy, asking her to go on.
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* FurryConfusion: According to Rarity, the spa doesn't allow animals. No one in Equestria realizes the irony.
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-->Rainbow Dash: Fluttershy. You should take up some sports... and become a Wonderbolt.
-->Fluttershy: Why?
-->Rainbow Dash: Because. *Hugs Fluttershy* Then you'd be my three favourite things combined; an athlete, a Wonderbolt, and you.

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-->Rainbow Dash: -->'''Rainbow Dash''': Fluttershy. You should take up some sports... and become a Wonderbolt.
-->Fluttershy: -->'''Fluttershy''': Why?
-->Rainbow Dash: -->'''Rainbow Dash''': Because. *Hugs Fluttershy* Then you'd be my three favourite things combined; an athlete, a Wonderbolt, and you.



** All subtelty is dropped and Pinkie Pie joins in on the fun in the not-so-final chapter, when she and Rarity [[spoiler:erect a giant banner with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's faces on it with a heart between them. Unfortunately, AJ talks them into taking it down]]. Even the author refers to them collectively as "the shippers" at this point.

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** All subtelty subtlety is dropped and Pinkie Pie joins in on the fun in the not-so-final chapter, when she and Rarity [[spoiler:erect a giant banner with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's faces on it with a heart between them. Unfortunately, AJ talks them into taking it down]]. Even the author refers to them collectively as "the shippers" at this point.

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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: After Rainbow Dash takes off for the bathroom, one of Fluttershy's animal friends asks about the bracelet on her hoof. Fluttershy realizes what's about to happen after she finishes explaining.
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* ImagineSpot: Angel has a few about Dash making Fluttershy into a sex slave.

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Also fixed up a mass of spelling errors, left out words, fluff, and some other stuff.


* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The first two chapter names.

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The first two chapter names.chapters are named "Binding Bracelets" and "Bunny Block"



* InnocentInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which, after a short awkward silence, Rarity lampshades this, followed by Rainbow Dash admitting that she doesn't know what an innuendo is.
-->'''Rainbow Dash''' (oblivious to the double meaning): Now we buck.
-->'''Fluttershy''' (much more sexually aware): The clouds!

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* InnocentInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which, after a short awkward silence, Rarity lampshades this, followed by Rainbow Dash admitting that she doesn't know what an innuendo is.
is. It's later explained that she missed an entire week of school as a filly that just so happened to be the week they were teaching Sex Ed.
-->'''Rainbow Dash''' (oblivious to the double meaning): Dash''': Now we buck.
-->'''Fluttershy''' (much more sexually aware): -->'''Fluttershy''': The clouds!



* InterruptedDeclarationOfLove: Chapter eight has [[spoiler: Fluttershy just about to tell Rainbow that she loves her. The moment is ruined when Rainbow cuts her off, declaring that the bracelets had come off. Despite all of the shippers going "OH COME ON!" a la Sweetie Belle, WordOfGod states that it was for the best. This was due to the fact that Rainbow would have been confused and the bracelets would not have been removed.]]

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* InterruptedDeclarationOfLove: Chapter eight has [[spoiler: Fluttershy just about to tell Rainbow that she loves her. The moment is ruined when Rainbow cuts her off, declaring that the bracelets had come off. Despite all of the shippers going "OH COME ON!" a la Sweetie Belle, WordOfGod states that it was for stated that, because the best. This was due to original plans involved Fluttershy confessing before the fact that bracelets were explained, Rainbow would have would've just been confused confused, and the bracelets would not never have been removed.come off.]]



* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash does the same thing Sweetie Belle did with toast, turning it into a burnt goop. Also appears in the backstory, where Rainbow Dash mentions that the one time she was put in charge of cooking, the staff at flight camp was out for weeks. See also: EpicFail.

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* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash does the same thing Sweetie Belle did with toast, turning it into a burnt goop. Also appears in the backstory, where Rainbow Dash mentions that the one time she was put in charge of cooking, the staff at flight camp was out for weeks. See also: EpicFail.EpicFail for more.



* NoMoreForMe: Zigzaged. One of the ponies Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy pranked tried to give up the habit, but after seeing Fluttershy's snake and rat playing noughts and crosses together, he had a relapse.

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* NoMoreForMe: Zigzaged. One of the ponies Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy pranked tried Zigzagged. BG character Berry Punch, often depicted as an alcoholic, had sworn off alcohol according to give up the habit, but after seeing Fluttershy's chapter 5. Then she saw [[BrickJoke a snake and a rat playing noughts Noughts and crosses together, he had a relapse.Crosses together]].



* ObliviousToLove: Rainbow is oblivious to Fluttershy's feelings for her throughout, and apparently hadn't the slightest clue that [[spoiler:Gilda's grabbing her ass and such]] meant she was attracted to her.

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* ObliviousToLove: Rainbow is oblivious to Fluttershy's feelings for her throughout, and apparently hadn't the slightest clue that [[spoiler:Gilda's [[spoiler:Gilda grabbing her ass and such]] meant she was attracted to her.



* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: Happens with soup that has laxative in it, though only one of the consumers of said food had any idea something might be off.

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* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: Happens Subverted when Angel makes vegetable soup for Rainbow and Flutters. Rainbow Dash (rightfully) thinks he poisoned her bowl, so she switches with soup Fluttershy and expects Angel to stop her from eating. [[spoiler:It turns out that has laxative in it, though only one of [[GenreSavvy Angel expected Rainbow to try this]], so he put the consumers of said food had any idea something might be off.laxatives in Fluttershy's bowl in the first place.]]



** Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. [[spoiler:Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill her, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom]]. Fluttershy is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.
*** [[spoiler:At least till they're in bed together]].

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** Rainbow Dash has one while at Fluttershy's house. [[spoiler:Her first attempt to pee drags Fluttershy halfway up the stairs, and reinforces Angel's belief that Rainbow Dash is trying to kill her, so Rainbow has to take Fluttershy with her into the bathroom]]. Fluttershy is only comforted by thinking nothing will be more awkward than that.
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that. [[spoiler:At least till they're in bed together]].



** All subtelty is dropped and Pinkie Pie joins in on the fun in the not-so-final chapter, when she and Rarity [[spoiler:erect a giant banner with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's faces on it with a heart between them. Unfortunately, AJ talks them into taking it down]].

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** All subtelty is dropped and Pinkie Pie joins in on the fun in the not-so-final chapter, when she and Rarity [[spoiler:erect a giant banner with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's faces on it with a heart between them. Unfortunately, AJ talks them into taking it down]]. Even the author refers to them collectively as "the shippers" at this point.


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** Happens again in the climax of chapter 8, with everyone except Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy rendered completely silent until the bracelets come off.
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** Of "May the Best Pet Win." Rainbow Dash notes, with some trepidation that a turtle[[note]]tortoise[[/note]] has taken quite the interest in her.



** Chapter 6 foreshadows "Read It and Weep," with Rainbow saying “Seriously, I’ve about as much chance breaking my wing as I do enjoying a book, it just isn’t going to happen.”
** It also foreshadows "The Cutie Pox" when Rainbow Dash tells Scootaloo to try bowling.
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It is completed, and has a sequel currently in-progress, [[The Shy Knight and the Rainbow Princess! The Shy Knight and the Rainbow Princess]].

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It is completed, and has a sequel currently in-progress, [[The Shy Knight and the Rainbow Princess! [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/142833/the-shy-knight-and-the-rainbow-princess The Shy Knight and the Rainbow Princess]].
Princess!]].
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It is completed, and has a sequel currently in-progress, [[The Shy Knight and the Rainbow Princess! The Shy Knight and the Rainbow Princess]].


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* CovertPervert: [[spoiler:Fluttershy likes being tied up]].
** Rarity apparently reads ''very'' raunchy novels.
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* EmbarassingMiddleName: The flashback reveals that Rainbow Dash's full name is Rainbow Prismatic Dashing.

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* EmbarassingMiddleName: EmbarrassingMiddleName: The flashback reveals that Rainbow Dash's full name is Rainbow Prismatic Dashing.
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* EmbarassingMiddleName: The flashback reveals that Rainbow Dash's full name is Rainbow Prismatic Dashing.
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* AnythingButThat: Mayor Mare's saying she'll do anything if it means not falling on love with the Smarty Pants doll again.

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* AnythingButThat: Mayor Mare's saying she'll do anything if it means not falling on in love with the Smarty Pants doll again.
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* WorthyOpponent: By the end of the story Angel and Rainbow see each other as this.

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* WorthyOpponent: By the end of the story story, Angel and Rainbow see each other as this.
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* BurningWithAnger: Twilight combines this with a slasher smile when [[spoiler:Rainbow breaks her bracelet, after getting it off]].

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* BurningWithAnger: Twilight combines this with a slasher smile when [[spoiler:Rainbow breaks her bracelet, the bracelets, after getting it them off]].



** Of "May the Best Pet Win." Rainbow Dash notes, with some trepidition that a turtle[[note]]tortoise[[/note]] has taken quite the interest in her.

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** Of "May the Best Pet Win." Rainbow Dash notes, with some trepidition trepidation that a turtle[[note]]tortoise[[/note]] has taken quite the interest in her.



* LaxativePrank: Angel manages to pull one, much to Rainbow's discomfort

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* LaxativePrank: Angel manages to pull one, much to Rainbow's discomfortdiscomfort.



** She loses it a second time at the end of Chapter eight, and combines it with [[BurningWithAnger a burning mane]] after [[spoiler:Rainbow gets her bracelet off, and throws it on the ground, shattering it]].

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** She loses it a second time at the end of Chapter eight, and combines it with [[BurningWithAnger a burning mane]] after [[spoiler:Rainbow gets the bracelets off her bracelet off, and Fluttershy, and throws it them on the ground, shattering it]].them]].
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* DoubleTake: Rainbow Dash does this when she think she sees an archaeopteryx in Fluttershy's garden.
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* NoMoreForMe: Zigzaged. One of the ponies Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy pranked tried to give up the habit, but after seeing Fluttershy's snake and mouse playing noughts and crosses together, he had a relapse.

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* NoMoreForMe: Zigzaged. One of the ponies Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy pranked tried to give up the habit, but after seeing Fluttershy's snake and mouse rat playing noughts and crosses together, he had a relapse.
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* NoMoreForMe: Zigzaged. One of the ponies Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy pranked tried to give up the habit, but after seeing Fluttershy's snake and mouse playing noughts and crosses together, he had a relapse.
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* SneezeCut: At the same time that Rainbow Dash said she doubted there was no pony who could cook as bad as her, Sweetie Belle sneezed.
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* CallBack: This adorable exchange comes back in chapter eight after it was featured in a flashback in chapter seven.
-->Rainbow Dash: Fluttershy. You should take up some sports... and become a Wonderbolt.
-->Fluttershy: Why?
-->Rainbow Dash: Because. *Hugs Fluttershy* Then you'd be my three favourite things combined; an athlete, a Wonderbolt, and you.


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* JerkAss: Gilda.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Gilda, as revealed in the backstory in chapter seven. [[spoiler: She was aware of Fluttershy's feelings for Rainbow, and threatened to physically hurt her if she flirted with her.]]
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* InterruptedDeclarationOfLove: Chapter eight has [[spoiler: Fluttershy just about to tell Rainbow that she loves her. The moment is ruined when Rainbow cuts her off, declaring that the bracelets had come off. Despite all of the shippers going "OH COME ON!" a la Sweetie Belle, WordOfGod states that it was for the best. This was due to the fact that Rainbow would have been confused and the bracelets would not have been removed.]]
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** Yet another one happens after Angel drugs Rainbow Dash's soup with laxatives.
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* PassThePopcorn: During Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash's emotional conversation, Spike went to get popcorn and even shared some with Pinkie Pie.
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** It's even hinted that Rainbow and Sweetie Belle's burn toast turn into monsters.
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* BridalCarry: How Rainbow holds Fluttershy when they take care of the former's weather jobs.
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** It also foreshadows "The Cutie Pox" when Rainbow Dash tells Scootaloo to try bowling.

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