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->'''Spike''': So those bracelets have turned Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash into magnets?
->'''Twilight''': Well that’s simplifying things a bit, but pretty much.
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?
->'''Twilight''': Well that’s simplifying things a bit, but pretty much.
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?
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->'''Spike''': So those bracelets have turned Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash into magnets?
->'''Twilight''':magnets?\\
'''Twilight''': Well that’s simplifying things a bit, but prettymuch.
->'''Rainbowmuch.\\
'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?
->'''Twilight''':
'''Twilight''': Well that’s simplifying things a bit, but pretty
->'''Rainbow
'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?
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* ShoutOut: To ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZelda'', after Rainbow successfully makes cereal. The line before is a shout out to an episode of ''WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons'' where Homer makes cereal and it catches fire.
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* ShoutOut: To ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZelda'', ''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda'', after Rainbow successfully makes cereal. The line before is a shout out to an episode of ''WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons'' where Homer makes cereal and it catches fire.
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* SecretlyWealthy: It's all but said outloud that [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash comes from a very wealthy family. However, she didn't like the lifestyle, so she left in search of adventure...leaving Fluttershy behind in the process]].
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* FluffyDryCat: A rabbit variation. When Angel Bunny ended up breaking the spa's hot water line, he ended up getting drenched to the point that he had to go home and dry off, making him look like a puffball. Rainbow Dash found the sight hilarious.
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* ObligatoryJoke: A prank featuring Lyra Heartstrings. It's based on her meme of being obsessed with humans, despite that the story is meant to take place within the canon of the show. It also is a callback to G1 having seaponies.
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* MoodWhiplash: All throughout, the story is loaded with comedic elements. Chapter seven contains a sad backstory, which explains a lot of things in the present time.
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* JerkAss: Gilda.
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* JerkAss: Gilda.Gilda Big time. [[spoiler: She threatened to rip Fluttershy's throat out if she even so much as batted her eyelashes at Rainbow Dash.]] Whether an exaggerated threat or not, it was still pretty deplorable of her. For no good reason other than being a ClingyJealousGirl.
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* MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels: Twilight's initial translation of the letter that explains the bracelets is [[AccidentalInnuendo unintentionally erotic]]:
--> '''Twilight:''' It is then, according to my research so far, an impossibility to separate the wearers until they settle their problems, repair their relationship to the status that it once was, and make out.
--> “No!” Twilight shouted out, then shifted through her memory banks to remember what she had previously said and figure out what she had said wrong, “I-I meant make up, not make out! Make up!”
--> '''Twilight:''' It is then, according to my research so far, an impossibility to separate the wearers until they settle their problems, repair their relationship to the status that it once was, and make out.
--> “No!” Twilight shouted out, then shifted through her memory banks to remember what she had previously said and figure out what she had said wrong, “I-I meant make up, not make out! Make up!”
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* AllLesbiansWantKids: During Lyra and Bon Bon's brief scene in Chapter 5, Bon Bon looks fondly at the foals playing in the park and tries to tell Lyra that she'd love to be a mother, except that Lyra keeps interrupting her, not wanting her to bring up the subject. She's almost thankful when she spots Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy coming.
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* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: Subverted when Angel makes vegetable soup for Rainbow and Flutters. Rainbow Dash (rightfully) thinks he poisoned her bowl, so she switches with Fluttershy and expects Angel to stop her from eating. [[spoiler:It turns out that [[GenreSavvy Angel expected Rainbow to try this]], so he put the laxatives in Fluttershy's bowl in the first place.]]
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* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: Subverted when Angel makes vegetable soup for Rainbow and Flutters. Rainbow Dash (rightfully) thinks he poisoned her bowl, so she switches with Fluttershy and expects Angel to stop her from eating. [[spoiler:It turns out that [[GenreSavvy Angel expected Rainbow to try this]], this, so he put the laxatives in Fluttershy's bowl in the first place.]]
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The first two chapters are named "Binding Bracelets" and "Bunny Block"
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The first two chapters are named "Binding Bracelets" and "Bunny Block"Block".
* DoubleMeaningTitle: The OneWordTitle refers to Fluttershy's feelings towards Rainbow Dash, and the effect of the bracelets, which effectively make Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash magnets for each other, physically pulling them towards each other if they get too far away, and needing them to touch every five seconds.
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-->Rainbow Dash poured the milk into the bowl of cereal. Astonishingly, this time it did not catch on fire.
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* InterruptedDeclarationOfLove: Chapter eight has [[spoiler: Fluttershy just about to tell Rainbow that she loves her. The moment is ruined when Rainbow cuts her off, declaring that the bracelets had come off. WordOfGod stated that, because the original plans involved Fluttershy confessing before the bracelets were explained, Rainbow would've just been confused, and the bracelets would never have come off.]]
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* InterruptedDeclarationOfLove: Chapter eight has [[spoiler: Fluttershy [[spoiler:Fluttershy just about to tell Rainbow that she loves her. The moment is ruined when Rainbow cuts her off, declaring that the bracelets had come off. WordOfGod stated that, because the original plans involved Fluttershy confessing before the bracelets were explained, Rainbow would've just been confused, and the bracelets would never have come off.]]
* OneWordTitle: Also a DoubleMeaningTitle, referring to Fluttershy's feelings towards Rainbow Dash, and the effect of the bracelets, which effectively make Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash magnets for each other, physically pulling them towards each other if they get too far away, and needing them to touch every five seconds.
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* SlasherSmile: Whenever Twilight goes off the deep end, she sports one
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* SlasherSmile: Whenever Twilight goes off the deep end, she sports oneone.
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-->My mum smiled to this and watched me go without saying a word. It would have been a little scary if she had.\\
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* FurryConfusion: According to Rarity, the spa doesn't allow animals. No one in Equestria realizes the irony.
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* FurryConfusion: According to Rarity, the spa doesn't allow animals. No one in Equestria realizes the irony.irony ([[UsefulNotes/{{Taxonomy}} not that it would be any less ironic if it were a spa for humans]]).
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* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected; she is also literate in Equestrian and Griffon, and can recognise Taurian writing, albeit not translate it.
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* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected; she is also literate in Equestrian and Griffon, and can make herself understood in five other languages and recognise Taurian writing, albeit not translate it.their writing systems.
