History Fanfic / Magnetism

28th Jun '17 2:46:42 PM Ferot_Dreadnaught
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* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: Subverted when Angel makes vegetable soup for Rainbow and Flutters. Rainbow Dash (rightfully) thinks he poisoned her bowl, so she switches with Fluttershy and expects Angel to stop her from eating. [[spoiler:It turns out that [[GenreSavvy Angel expected Rainbow to try this]], so he put the laxatives in Fluttershy's bowl in the first place.]]

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* PoisonedChaliceSwitcheroo: Subverted when Angel makes vegetable soup for Rainbow and Flutters. Rainbow Dash (rightfully) thinks he poisoned her bowl, so she switches with Fluttershy and expects Angel to stop her from eating. [[spoiler:It turns out that [[GenreSavvy Angel expected Rainbow to try this]], this, so he put the laxatives in Fluttershy's bowl in the first place.]]
21st Apr '17 8:54:59 AM Malady
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The first two chapters are named "Binding Bracelets" and "Bunny Block"

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The first two chapters are named "Binding Bracelets" and "Bunny Block"Block".



* DoubleMeaningTitle: The OneWordTitle refers to Fluttershy's feelings towards Rainbow Dash, and the effect of the bracelets, which effectively make Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash magnets for each other, physically pulling them towards each other if they get too far away, and needing them to touch every five seconds.



-->Rainbow Dash poured the milk into the bowl of cereal. Astonishingly, this time it did not catch on fire.

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-->Rainbow --> Rainbow Dash poured the milk into the bowl of cereal. Astonishingly, this time it did not catch on fire.



* InterruptedDeclarationOfLove: Chapter eight has [[spoiler: Fluttershy just about to tell Rainbow that she loves her. The moment is ruined when Rainbow cuts her off, declaring that the bracelets had come off. WordOfGod stated that, because the original plans involved Fluttershy confessing before the bracelets were explained, Rainbow would've just been confused, and the bracelets would never have come off.]]

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* InterruptedDeclarationOfLove: Chapter eight has [[spoiler: Fluttershy [[spoiler:Fluttershy just about to tell Rainbow that she loves her. The moment is ruined when Rainbow cuts her off, declaring that the bracelets had come off. WordOfGod stated that, because the original plans involved Fluttershy confessing before the bracelets were explained, Rainbow would've just been confused, and the bracelets would never have come off.]]



* OneWordTitle: Also a DoubleMeaningTitle, referring to Fluttershy's feelings towards Rainbow Dash, and the effect of the bracelets, which effectively make Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash magnets for each other, physically pulling them towards each other if they get too far away, and needing them to touch every five seconds.



* SlasherSmile: Whenever Twilight goes off the deep end, she sports one

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* SlasherSmile: Whenever Twilight goes off the deep end, she sports oneone.



-->My mum smiled to this and watched me go without saying a word. It would have been a little scary if she had.\\

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-->My --> My mum smiled to this and watched me go without saying a word. It would have been a little scary if she had.\\
12th Nov '16 9:02:45 AM PedanticSpeaker
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* FurryConfusion: According to Rarity, the spa doesn't allow animals. No one in Equestria realizes the irony.

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* FurryConfusion: According to Rarity, the spa doesn't allow animals. No one in Equestria realizes the irony.irony ([[UsefulNotes/{{Taxonomy}} not that it would be any less ironic if it were a spa for humans]]).



* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected; she is also literate in Equestrian and Griffon, and can recognise Taurian writing, albeit not translate it.

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* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected; she is also literate in Equestrian and Griffon, and can make herself understood in five other languages and recognise Taurian writing, albeit not translate it.their writing systems.
12th Nov '16 8:33:20 AM PedanticSpeaker
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* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected.

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* HiddenDepths: Rainbow Dash knows a lot more about animals than anyone expected.expected; she is also literate in Equestrian and Griffon, and can recognise Taurian writing, albeit not translate it.
26th Mar '16 3:14:41 PM Eddy1215
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* DelayedReaction: Rarity has one when Pinkie says that she will pay for the two of them, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash when they go to the spa.



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19th Feb '16 11:20:18 AM Eddy1215
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** It's even hinted that Rainbow and Sweetie Belle's burn toast turn into monsters.

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** It's even hinted that Rainbow and Sweetie Belle's burn toast turn turned into monsters.
19th Feb '16 11:16:04 AM Eddy1215
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: Spike seemed quite intrigued when Rainbow Dash said she couldn't stop touching Fluttershy, asking her to go on.
9th Feb '16 11:17:33 AM Eddy1215
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* FurryConfusion: According to Rarity, the spa doesn't allow animals. No one in Equestria realizes the irony.
3rd Dec '15 7:46:56 PM Eddy1215
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-->Rainbow Dash: Fluttershy. You should take up some sports... and become a Wonderbolt.
-->Fluttershy: Why?
-->Rainbow Dash: Because. *Hugs Fluttershy* Then you'd be my three favourite things combined; an athlete, a Wonderbolt, and you.

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-->Rainbow Dash: -->'''Rainbow Dash''': Fluttershy. You should take up some sports... and become a Wonderbolt.
-->Fluttershy: -->'''Fluttershy''': Why?
-->Rainbow Dash: -->'''Rainbow Dash''': Because. *Hugs Fluttershy* Then you'd be my three favourite things combined; an athlete, a Wonderbolt, and you.



** All subtelty is dropped and Pinkie Pie joins in on the fun in the not-so-final chapter, when she and Rarity [[spoiler:erect a giant banner with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's faces on it with a heart between them. Unfortunately, AJ talks them into taking it down]]. Even the author refers to them collectively as "the shippers" at this point.

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** All subtelty subtlety is dropped and Pinkie Pie joins in on the fun in the not-so-final chapter, when she and Rarity [[spoiler:erect a giant banner with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's faces on it with a heart between them. Unfortunately, AJ talks them into taking it down]]. Even the author refers to them collectively as "the shippers" at this point.
27th Jul '15 12:19:20 PM MarkLungo
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