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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Rainbow yells "My! Wing! Is! Not! Broken!" at the end of chapter 6.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Rainbow yells "My! Wing! Is! Not! Isn't! Broken!" at the end of chapter 6.
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* ActorAllusion: Pinkie speaks with Fluttershy's voice, saying it's easy. [[spoiler:less explainable is Pinkie speaking with Rainbow's voice]].
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* ActorAllusion: Pinkie speaks with Fluttershy's voice, saying it's easy. [[spoiler:less [[spoiler:Less explainable is Pinkie speaking with Rainbow's voice]].
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*** [[spoiler:At least till they're in bed together]].
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** Rainbow Dash does this with her hoof when she realizes she pulled Fluttershy in the direction of the spa.
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* FlippingTheBird: Angel Bunny did this to Rainbow Dash right before she dropped a hot rock on his head.
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* TheInsomniac: Twilight, while studying a number of ancient artifacts she recieved from Princess Luna, becomes an obsessive one. It gets worse when the bracelets get stuck to her two friends, and she insists on solving their problem before getting any sleep.
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* TheInsomniac: Twilight, while studying a number of ancient artifacts she recieved received from Princess Luna, becomes an obsessive one. It gets worse when the bracelets get stuck to her two friends, and she insists on solving their problem before getting any sleep.
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* MundaneMadeAwesome: Rainbow Dash has quite the reaction to successfully making cereal. To be fair, with what we've seen of her attempts at cooking, successfully making cereeal is saying something.
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* MundaneMadeAwesome: Rainbow Dash has quite the reaction to successfully making cereal. To be fair, with what we've seen of her attempts at cooking, successfully making cereeal cereal is saying something.
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* NonSequiturThud: After crashing into Rainbow, while holding onto Fluttershy, Twilight says, "yes mommy I would like syrup with my pancakes" before falling over again.
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* NonSequiturThud: After crashing into Rainbow, while holding onto Fluttershy, Twilight says, "yes mommy "Yes Mommy I would like syrup with my pancakes" before falling over again.
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* NoSenseofPersonalSpace: While it is necessary to keep touching, Rainbow has a tendency to get a bit...intimate without realizing it.
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* NoSenseofPersonalSpace: NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: While it is necessary to keep touching, Rainbow has a tendency to get a bit...intimate without realizing it.
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* IWantGrandkids: Apparently Granny Smith wants ''ten'' great-grandkids, which is why Applejack is so horrified by the idea that Big Mac and/or Applebloom moght be gay.
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* IWantGrandkids: Apparently Granny Smith wants ''ten'' great-grandkids, which is why Applejack is so horrified by the idea that Big Mac and/or Applebloom moght might be gay.
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* EroticDream: [[spoiler:subverted]] at the beginning of chapter four.
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* EroticDream: [[spoiler:subverted]] [[spoiler:Subverted]] at the beginning of chapter four.
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* BathtubScene: recounted in detail by Rainbow Dash during the spa scene.
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* BathtubScene: recounted Recounted in detail by Rainbow Dash during the spa scene.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50060/Magnetism%21 Magnetism!]]'' is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy/shipping fanfic where, during a visit to Twilight's house, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy end up [[ChainedHeat stuck together]] due to two magical bracelets that slam the wearers back together if they don't touch for more than five seconds. This quickly proves awkward for the two ponies.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/50060/Magnetism%21 Magnetism!]]'' is an ongoing a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' comedy/shipping fanfic where, during a visit to Twilight's house, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy end up [[ChainedHeat stuck together]] due to two magical bracelets that slam the wearers back together if they don't touch for more than five seconds. This quickly proves awkward for the two ponies.
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* BurningWithAnger: Twilight combines this with a slasher smile when [[spoiler:Rainbow breaks her bracelet, after getting it off]].
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* SlasherSmile: Whenever Twilight goes off the deep end, she sports one
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* IWantGrandkids: Apparently Granny SMith wants ''ten'' great-grandkids, which is why Applejack is so horrified by the idea that Big Mac and/or Applebloom moght be gay.
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* IWantGrandkids: Apparently Granny SMith Smith wants ''ten'' great-grandkids, which is why Applejack is so horrified by the idea that Big Mac and/or Applebloom moght be gay.
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* FriendlyTickleTorture: During the prank spree.
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* FriendlyTickleTorture: During Rainbow gives Fluttershy a dose of this during the prank spree.
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* InnocentInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which after a short awkward silence, Rarity lampshades this, followed by Rainbow Dash admitting that she doesn't know what an innuendo is.
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* InnocentInnuendo: Constantly when other ponies are around. For example, when it's mentioned that the bracelets act like magnets in front of Rarity's house, Rainbow asks which one's the top and which one's the bottom, which which, after a short awkward silence, Rarity lampshades this, followed by Rainbow Dash admitting that she doesn't know what an innuendo is.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Angel.
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* IWantGrandkids: Apparently Granny SMith wants ''ten'' great-grandkids, which is why Applejack is so horrified by the idea that Big Mac and/or Applebloom moght be gay.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold:Angel.Angel means well for his master, but prefers that he's the center of her attention and getting what he wants from her in return. He isn't particularly nice in making sure he gets this, either.
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* LaxativePrank: Much to Rainbow's discomfort
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* LaxativePrank: Much Angel manages to pull one, much to Rainbow's discomfort
* ObliviousToLove: Rainbow is oblivious to Fluttershy's feelings for her throughout, and apparently hadn't the slightest clue that [[spoiler:Gilda's grabbing her ass and such]] meant she was attracted to her.
** She loses it a second time at the end of Chapter eight, and combines it with [[BurningWithAnger a burning mane]] after [[spoiler:Rainbow gets her bracelet off, and throws it on the ground, shattering it]].
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* ShipperOnDeck: Rarity goes with a nudge, nudge, wink, wink approach with Fluttershy, after hearing about their more compromising moments.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Rarity goes with a nudge, nudge, wink, wink approach with Fluttershy, after hearing about their more compromising moments.moments in the bathtub.
** All subtelty is dropped and Pinkie Pie joins in on the fun in the not-so-final chapter, when she and Rarity [[spoiler:erect a giant banner with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's faces on it with a heart between them. Unfortunately, AJ talks them into taking it down]].
** All subtelty is dropped and Pinkie Pie joins in on the fun in the not-so-final chapter, when she and Rarity [[spoiler:erect a giant banner with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's faces on it with a heart between them. Unfortunately, AJ talks them into taking it down]].
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* WorthyOpponent: By the end of the story Angel and Rainbow see each other as this.
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->'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, [[InnocentInnuendo if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?]]
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->'''Rainbow Dash''': Quick question, [[InnocentInnuendo if me and Fluttershy are magnets, am I top and she bottom or does Fluttershy top me?]]
me?
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Non-romantic example. Angel does not like seeing Rainbow Dash getting so...intimate with Fluttershy. It also doesn't help that he doesn't think that the magic bracelets aren't magic but an excuse for Rainbow to take all the attention from him. Fluttershy is completely oblivious to this [[spoiler:and their attempts to attack each other]], of course.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Non-romantic example. Angel does not like seeing Rainbow Dash getting so...intimate with Fluttershy. It also doesn't help that he doesn't think thinks that the magic bracelets aren't magic but an excuse for Rainbow to take all the attention from him. Fluttershy is completely oblivious to this [[spoiler:and their attempts to attack each other]], of course.
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* WhamLine: In chapter 7, Fluttershy spends a long time talking to her mother, before heading off to make herself dinner. At the end of her conversation with her mother, Fluttershy tells us:
-->My mum smiled to this and watched me go without saying a word. It would have been a little scary if she had.\\
[[spoiler:After all, photos don’t talk back.]]
-->My mum smiled to this and watched me go without saying a word. It would have been a little scary if she had.\\
[[spoiler:After all, photos don’t talk back.]]
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** Though he tones it down after the catapult incident, as he's finally convinced that the bracelets are real.
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* AnythingButThat: Mayor Mare's saying she'll do anything if it means not falling on love with the Smarty Pants doll again.
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* CuteAndPsycho: Sweetie Belle, when she chops trees, shows shades of this
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* CuteAndPsycho: Sweetie Belle, when she chops trees, shows shades of thisthis.
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* EpicFail: If th is is anything to go by...
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* EpicFail: If th is this is anything to go by...
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* ShoutOut: To ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZelda'', after Rainbow successfully makes cereal.
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* ShoutOut: To ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZelda'', after Rainbow successfully makes cereal. The line before is a shout out to an episode of ''WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons'' where Homer makes cereal and it catches fire.
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* AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: A very large monster that looks like toast attacks Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and The Cutie Mark Crusaders at one point.
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* AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: A very large monster that looks like toast attacks Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and The Cutie Mark Crusaders at one point. Believe it or not, ItMakesSenseInContext.
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* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash does the same thing Sweetie Belle did with toast, turning it into a burnt goop. Also appears in the backstory, where Rainbow Dash mentions that the one time she was put in charge of cooking, the staff at flight camp was out for weeks.
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* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash does the same thing Sweetie Belle did with toast, turning it into a burnt goop. Also appears in the backstory, where Rainbow Dash mentions that the one time she was put in charge of cooking, the staff at flight camp was out for weeks. See also: EpicFail.
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* ShapedLikeItself: Chapter two describes a "peach colored peach."
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* MundaneMadeAwesome: Rainbow Dash has quite the reaction to successfully making cereal. To be fair, with what we've seen of her attempts at cooking, successfully making cereeal is saying something.
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* EpicFail: If th is is anything to go by...
-->Rainbow Dash poured the milk into the bowl of cereal. Astonishingly, this time it did not catch on fire.
-->Rainbow Dash poured the milk into the bowl of cereal. Astonishingly, this time it did not catch on fire.
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* ShoutOut: To ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZelda'', after Rainbow successfully makes cereal.
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* FacePalm: Angel, while trying to pantomime the fact that Rainbow and FLuttershy ended up in Everfree together, ends up doing this a few times.
* [[FeudEpisode Feud Cahpter]]: Chapter 6 has Rainbow and Fluttershy feuding quite a bit.
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* FacePalm: Angel, while trying to pantomime the fact that Rainbow and FLuttershy Fluttershy ended up in Everfree together, ends up doing this a few times.
* [[FeudEpisode FeudCahpter]]: Chapter]]: Chapter 6 has Rainbow and Fluttershy feuding quite a bit.
* [[FeudEpisode Feud
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* ThisExplainsSoMuch: During the (rather dark) flashback in chapter seven, it is revealed that [[spoiler:the reason Rainbow is so ignorant about sex is because she got sick during the week they taught sex ed]].
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** Chapter 1 briefly shows a scene that we don't see again until chapter 7.
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* ToneShift: Chapter 7 takes a far darker route when we flash back to Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash's time in school.
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* AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: A very large monster that looks like toast attacks Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and The Cutie Mark Crusaders.
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* AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: A very large monster that looks like toast attacks Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and The Cutie Mark Crusaders.Crusaders at one point.
