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After they figure out what the hell just happened, the invading Australians then proceed to [[SmallAnnoyingCreature pretty much piss off every single citizen of Atmos.]]
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After they figure out what the hell just happened, the invading Australians then proceed to [[SmallAnnoyingCreature [[SidekickCreatureNuisance pretty much piss off every single citizen of Atmos.]]
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not a trope
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* UsefulNotes/AustralianAccent: The Girls
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* CommonMarySueTraits: Just LOOK at Drake
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* Fi: Pretty much a female [[TheMightyBoosh Vince Noir]]. [[NeverMyFault The whole thing is her fault.]]
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* Fi: Pretty much a female [[TheMightyBoosh [[Series/TheMightyBoosh Vince Noir]]. [[NeverMyFault The whole thing is her fault.]]
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Fi and Mel also started providing their own commentary on episodes of WesternAnimation/StormHawks. Their You Tube channel can be found here: [[http://www.youtube.com/user/Pur3Cracke]] Enter at your own risk...
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Fi and Mel also started providing their own commentary on episodes of WesternAnimation/StormHawks. Their You Tube channel can be found here: [[http://www.youtube.com/user/Pur3Cracke]] Enter at your own risk...
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* AustralianAccent: The Girls
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* AustralianAccent: UsefulNotes/AustralianAccent: The Girls
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Lost in Atmos is a WesternAnimation/StormHawks Fanfiction written by three mildly retarded [[AustralianSchoolSystem Australian High School Students]]. The story begins with Fi stumbling across an enchanted Storm Hawks streaming site, and [[NiceJobBreakingItHero accidentally flinging herself and her two friends Mel and Rach into the world of Atmos....a couple of kilometres above ground.]]
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Lost in Atmos is a WesternAnimation/StormHawks Fanfiction written by three mildly retarded [[AustralianSchoolSystem [[UsefulNotes/AustralianSchoolSystem Australian High School Students]]. The story begins with Fi stumbling across an enchanted Storm Hawks streaming site, and [[NiceJobBreakingItHero accidentally flinging herself and her two friends Mel and Rach into the world of Atmos....a couple of kilometres above ground.]]
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!!Character List (Not including Cannon Characters)
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!!Character List (Not including Cannon Canon Characters)
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* Rach: Researches the different breeds of fangirl and works in Coles. Had a fling with a character named [[MartyStu Drake]] for whatever reason.
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* Rach: Researches the different breeds of fangirl and works in Coles. Had a fling with a character named [[MartyStu Drake]] Drake for whatever reason.
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* Drake: A [[MartyStu Gary-Stu]] Cyclonian written in by Rach as a love interest. [[spoiler: He is later killed off by Fi and Mel, (still without Rach’s knowledge at the time of writing this) for being an annoying Gary-Stu. The chapter is aptly called “It HAD to happen”]]
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* Drake: A [[MartyStu Gary-Stu]] Cyclonian written in by Rach as a love interest. [[spoiler: He is later killed off by Fi and Mel, (still without Rach’s knowledge at the time of writing this) for being an annoying Gary-Stu. The chapter is aptly called “It HAD to happen”]]
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* AngstWhatAngst: Mel and Fi about [[spoiler: Drake’s Death]]. But that could just be because they hate him.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler: Drake’s death... according to Fi and Mel anyway]]
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: (Mel to Dark Ace) “Hey, you know how you are some old 30-something year old, and Cyclonis is a fifteen year old kid, doesn't that make you a paedophile?"...”You know, a Kiddy-Fiddler!”
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: (Mel to Dark Ace) “Hey, you know how you are some old 30-something year old, and Cyclonis is a fifteen year old kid, doesn't that make you a paedophile?"...”You know, a Kiddy-Fiddler!”
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: AngstWhatAngst: Mel and Fi about [[spoiler: Drake’s death... according to Fi and Mel anyway]]
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: (Mel to Dark Ace) “Hey, you know how you are some old 30-something year old, and Cyclonis is a fifteen year old kid, doesn'tDeath]]. But that make you a paedophile?"...”You know, a Kiddy-Fiddler!” could just be because they hate him.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: (Mel to Dark Ace) “Hey, you know how you are some old 30-something year old, and Cyclonis is a fifteen year old kid, doesn't
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* MartyStu: Drake
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** Fi's familiy catching Swine Flu
** The death of the ant
** Fi's familiy catching Swine Flu
** The death of the ant
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** Fi's familiy catching Swine Flu
** The death of the ant
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Lost in Atmos is a StormHawks Fanfiction written by three mildly retarded [[AustralianSchoolSystem Australian High School Students]]. The story begins with Fi stumbling across an enchanted Storm Hawks streaming site, and [[NiceJobBreakingItHero accidentally flinging herself and her two friends Mel and Rach into the world of Atmos....a couple of kilometres above ground.]]
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Lost in Atmos is a StormHawks WesternAnimation/StormHawks Fanfiction written by three mildly retarded [[AustralianSchoolSystem Australian High School Students]]. The story begins with Fi stumbling across an enchanted Storm Hawks streaming site, and [[NiceJobBreakingItHero accidentally flinging herself and her two friends Mel and Rach into the world of Atmos....a couple of kilometres above ground.]]
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It can be found here: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5105894/1/Lost_in_Atmos]]
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It can be found here: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5105894/1/Lost_in_Atmos]]
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Fi and Mel also started providing their own commentary on episodes of StormHawks. Their You Tube channel can be found here: [[http://www.youtube.com/user/Pur3Cracke]] Enter at your own risk...
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Fi and Mel also started providing their own commentary on episodes of StormHawks.WesternAnimation/StormHawks. Their You Tube channel can be found here: [[http://www.youtube.com/user/Pur3Cracke]] Enter at your own risk...
