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Trope has been renamed to Diagnosed By The Audience and made YMMV. Removing for not fitting the definition.
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* AmbiguousDisorder:
** Steve is obviously suffering from panic attacks and possibly some kind of post traumatic stress disorder with what might be depersonalization/derealization episodes.
** Billy seems to have either antisocial personality disorder or borderline personality disorder.
** Steve's mother has a unnamed 'nervous disposition' that she self-medicates for and that results in her staying in bed for days at a time that might be chronic depression.
** El and Hopper both realize that not having any kind of normal development from age 0-12 is likely to leave El with issues.
** Joyce has and is implied to have been briefly hospitalized in her teens for some kind of anxiety disorder.
** Steve is obviously suffering from panic attacks and possibly some kind of post traumatic stress disorder with what might be depersonalization/derealization episodes.
** Billy seems to have either antisocial personality disorder or borderline personality disorder.
** Steve's mother has a unnamed 'nervous disposition' that she self-medicates for and that results in her staying in bed for days at a time that might be chronic depression.
** El and Hopper both realize that not having any kind of normal development from age 0-12 is likely to leave El with issues.
** Joyce has and is implied to have been briefly hospitalized in her teens for some kind of anxiety disorder.
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* AssholeVictim: Neil Hargrove. Reed. Dr. Roethe and the other members of the Shop.
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** Doctor Brenner would like everyone to follow [[Wiki/SCPFoundation Standard Containment Protocols]] at all times.
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** Doctor Brenner would like everyone to follow [[Wiki/SCPFoundation [[Website/SCPFoundation Standard Containment Protocols]] at all times.
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* FamilyOfChoice: These being more meaningful than blood relationships is a major theme of the fic, with both Steve and El fully accepting that they're part of one.
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* FalseFriend: Tommy and Carol are this even beyond what they were on the show.
** Steve paints an incredibly bleak picture of a 'friendship' with Tommy that was made up of almost constant pressure to be 'cool' that encouraged TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior; smoking at ten, drinking himself sick but not being able to show it at thirteen, and being afraid that Tommy was going to tell the entire school that he was a loser if he hadn't had sex before ''High School''- and that was always right on the edge of TallPoppySyndrome if he was exceptional in any way that didn't serve him being popular/helping them be popular. Murray Bauman shows Steve witness testimony that shows the two of them coordinated their statements to the police to make it seem like Steve might have killed Barbara. It's telling that Steve doesn't know if they did it take heat off of Tommy or purely because they thought it was funny. Steve mentions to Jonathan that Tommy and Carol wouldn't even buy him a coke without making him pay them back- something you can see happen in Season One of the show- implying that he was more MealTicket than friend.
** Reed saw Steve as an ExtremeDoormat that was easy to manipulate through praise.* FamilyOfChoice: These being more meaningful than blood relationships is a major theme of the fic, with both Steve and El fully accepting that they're part of one.
** Steve paints an incredibly bleak picture of a 'friendship' with Tommy that was made up of almost constant pressure to be 'cool' that encouraged TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior; smoking at ten, drinking himself sick but not being able to show it at thirteen, and being afraid that Tommy was going to tell the entire school that he was a loser if he hadn't had sex before ''High School''- and that was always right on the edge of TallPoppySyndrome if he was exceptional in any way that didn't serve him being popular/helping them be popular. Murray Bauman shows Steve witness testimony that shows the two of them coordinated their statements to the police to make it seem like Steve might have killed Barbara. It's telling that Steve doesn't know if they did it take heat off of Tommy or purely because they thought it was funny. Steve mentions to Jonathan that Tommy and Carol wouldn't even buy him a coke without making him pay them back- something you can see happen in Season One of the show- implying that he was more MealTicket than friend.
** Reed saw Steve as an ExtremeDoormat that was easy to manipulate through praise.* FamilyOfChoice: These being more meaningful than blood relationships is a major theme of the fic, with both Steve and El fully accepting that they're part of one.
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* PoisonousFriend: Tommy and Carol are this even beyond what they were on the show.
** Steve paints an incredibly bleak picture of a 'friendship' with Tommy that was made up of almost constant pressure to be 'cool' that encouraged TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior; smoking at ten, drinking himself sick but not being able to show it at thirteen, and being afraid that Tommy was going to tell the entire school that he was a loser if he hadn't had sex before ''High School''- and that was always right on the edge of TallPoppySyndrome if he was exceptional in any way that didn't serve him being popular/helping them be popular.
*** Murray Bauman shows Steve witness testimony that shows the two of them coordinated their statements to the police to make it seem like Steve might have killed Barbara. It's telling that Steve doesn't know if they did it take heat off of Tommy or purely because they thought it was funny.
*** Steve mentions to Jonathan that Tommy and Carol wouldn't even buy him a coke without making him pay them back- something you can see happen in Season One of the show- implying that he was more MealTicket than friend.
** Reed saw Steve as an ExtremeDoormat that was easy to manipulate through praise.
** Steve paints an incredibly bleak picture of a 'friendship' with Tommy that was made up of almost constant pressure to be 'cool' that encouraged TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior; smoking at ten, drinking himself sick but not being able to show it at thirteen, and being afraid that Tommy was going to tell the entire school that he was a loser if he hadn't had sex before ''High School''- and that was always right on the edge of TallPoppySyndrome if he was exceptional in any way that didn't serve him being popular/helping them be popular.
*** Murray Bauman shows Steve witness testimony that shows the two of them coordinated their statements to the police to make it seem like Steve might have killed Barbara. It's telling that Steve doesn't know if they did it take heat off of Tommy or purely because they thought it was funny.
*** Steve mentions to Jonathan that Tommy and Carol wouldn't even buy him a coke without making him pay them back- something you can see happen in Season One of the show- implying that he was more MealTicket than friend.
** Reed saw Steve as an ExtremeDoormat that was easy to manipulate through praise.
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Learning that there are monsters, nearly dying twice, and deciding that you're personally responsible for a bunch of suicidally brave thirteen year olds takes a serious mental toll on Steve.
*** In the epilogue Hopper ends up in the unenviable position of having to explain to Steve that killing the Aboleth didn't fix the symptoms of 'psychic drain' because he's actually been suffering from PTSD, completely independent of the monster.
** A bunch of teenagers in suburban Indiana in the 80's have no idea how to navigate even the possibility of a poly relationship or possibly even what it's called- leaving everyone various levels of frustrated and confused though they care deeply about each other.
** A suburban town in Indiana in the early 80's likely wouldn't have had a computer lab in the middle/high-school yet and even fewer people had them at home- so neither Jonathan or Steve have any idea how to work a personal computer and have to rely on Dustin's instructions to figure it out.
** Learning that there are monsters, nearly dying twice, and deciding that you're personally responsible for a bunch of suicidally brave thirteen year olds takes a serious mental toll on Steve.
*** In the epilogue Hopper ends up in the unenviable position of having to explain to Steve that killing the Aboleth didn't fix the symptoms of 'psychic drain' because he's actually been suffering from PTSD, completely independent of the monster.
** A bunch of teenagers in suburban Indiana in the 80's have no idea how to navigate even the possibility of a poly relationship or possibly even what it's called- leaving everyone various levels of frustrated and confused though they care deeply about each other.
** A suburban town in Indiana in the early 80's likely wouldn't have had a computer lab in the middle/high-school yet and even fewer people had them at home- so neither Jonathan or Steve have any idea how to work a personal computer and have to rely on Dustin's instructions to figure it out.
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* DrFeelgood: Steve's father, the CEO of a pharmaceutical company, plies his wife with drugs like Valium and benzos in order to help her with her "nervous disposition," leaving Mrs. Harrington constantly drowsy and confused.
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** Defied by Billy Hargrove during his No-Holds-BarredBeatdown of Steve Harrington at Sattler Quarry. Instead of delivering the posturing one-liner that Steve and Billy's friends expect him to, Billy starts the fight by walloping Steve in the ribcage with a sock loaded with gym locks.
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** Defied by Billy Hargrove during his No-Holds-BarredBeatdown NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of Steve Harrington at Sattler Quarry. Instead of delivering the posturing one-liner that Steve and Billy's friends expect him to, Billy starts the fight by walloping Steve in the ribcage with a sock loaded with gym locks.
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* OminousMundanity: Dr. Owens believes that, in his line of work, the most dangerous people have the least remarkable names. When he is introduced to Mr. Bates and Mr. Cuff from the Department of Scientific Intelligence, Dr. Owens is immediately wary of the pair's intentions.
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** Defied by Billy Hargrove during his No-Holds-BarredBeatdown of Steve Harrington at Sattler Quarry. Instead of delivering the posturing one-liner that Steve and Billy's friends expect him to, Billy starts the fight by walloping Steve in the ribcage with a sock loaded with gym locks.
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A novel-length ''Series/StrangerThings'' fan fiction set after Season 2 of the show, inspired by the works of Stephen King and H P Lovecraft. Notable for its strong character voices, historical detail, and LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters.
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A novel-length ''Series/StrangerThings'' fan fiction set after Season 2 of the show, inspired by the works of Stephen King and H P Lovecraft. Notable for its strong character voices, historical detail, and LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters.
a large cast.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters : The Party, Hopper, Joyce, the Teens, Mr. Clarke, Doc Owens, and Billy Hargrove all have major POV chapters. Others with much briefer ones include Callahan, Axel, Kali, Mr. Clarke's girlfriend Jen, Reed, the Mind-Flayer, and Erica. Non-POV characters that get mentioned include pretty much every named character on the show and a couple from the tie-in novels.
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* AdultFear:
** In spite of fighting actual monsters the teens nightmares at Hawkins Lab are all these rather than being related to the Upside-Down.
*** Fear of being mentally ill without realizing and harming the people you care about (Jonathan).
*** Fear that someone you're in love with is actually just using you for sex (Nancy).
*** Fear of a thoughtless accident that leads to the death of a friend/the kids that you're supposed to be in charge of (Nancy and Steve).
** After successfully fighting the Aboleth Joyce and Hopper come home to the sight of Billy's car on the lawn and the door broken down. Hopper immediately assumes the worst.
** In spite of fighting actual monsters the teens nightmares at Hawkins Lab are all these rather than being related to the Upside-Down.
*** Fear of being mentally ill without realizing and harming the people you care about (Jonathan).
*** Fear that someone you're in love with is actually just using you for sex (Nancy).
*** Fear of a thoughtless accident that leads to the death of a friend/the kids that you're supposed to be in charge of (Nancy and Steve).
** After successfully fighting the Aboleth Joyce and Hopper come home to the sight of Billy's car on the lawn and the door broken down. Hopper immediately assumes the worst.
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* HiddenDepths: Steve wants to come across as cool and unflappable, but he's surprisingly sensitive and smarter than most people give him credit for. While he's still always slowest on the uptake when it comes to complex concepts he generally proves to have good instincts and is actually a creative thinker.
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* HiddenDepths: Steve wants to come across as cool and unflappable, but he's surprisingly sensitive and smarter than most people give him credit for. While he's still always slowest on the uptake when it comes to complex concepts he generally proves to have good instincts and is actually a creative thinker. He's also deep down nerdier than the other characters assume from his JerkJock exterior, and was a huge fan of Franchise/{{Superman}} comics.
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* CrossOver: Starts as an homage/pastiche of Stephen King but veers into true cross-over territory when Nancy, Steve, and Jonathan run into The Shop, AKA the Weapons Shop of Isher AKA The Department of Scientific Intelligence, the group responsible for the events of Literature/{{Firestarter}} and TheMist and who fail to stop the super-flu outbreak during TheStand.
** Roethe and Subject Six are part of Project Arrowhead- the project to open gates to other worlds that resulted in the events of TheMist.
** Roethe and Subject Six are part of Project Arrowhead- the project to open gates to other worlds that resulted in the events of TheMist.
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* CrossOver: Starts as an homage/pastiche of Stephen King but veers into true cross-over territory when Nancy, Steve, and Jonathan run into The Shop, AKA the Weapons Shop of Isher AKA The Department of Scientific Intelligence, the group responsible for the events of Literature/{{Firestarter}} ''Literature/{{Firestarter}}'' and TheMist ''Literature/TheMist'' and who fail to stop the super-flu outbreak during TheStand.
''Literature/TheStand''.
** Roethe and Subject Six are part of Project Arrowhead- the project to open gates to other worlds that resulted in the events ofTheMist.''Literature/TheMist''.
** Roethe and Subject Six are part of Project Arrowhead- the project to open gates to other worlds that resulted in the events of
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** In the final battle, Mike gives Nancy the character class of "gunslinger" even though, as he notes mentally, it's not a type which can be found in ''Dungeons and Dragons''. It is, of course, a class in [[Literature/TheDarkTower another fantasy epic of interest to a universe inspired by the works of]] Creator/StephenKing.
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** In the final battle, Mike gives Nancy the character class of "gunslinger" even though, as he notes mentally, it's not a type which can be found in ''Dungeons and Dragons''. It is, of course, a class in [[Literature/TheDarkTower another fantasy epic involving travel between parallel worlds which may be of interest to a universe inspired by the works of]] Creator/StephenKing.
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* RealityEnsues:
** Learning that there are monsters, nearly dying twice, and deciding that you're personally responsible for a bunch of suicidally brave thirteen year olds takes a serious mental toll on Steve.
*** In the epilogue Hopper ends up in the unenviable position of having to explain to Steve that killing the Aboleth didn't fix the symptoms of 'psychic drain' because he's actually been suffering from PTSD, completely independent of the monster.
** A bunch of teenagers in suburban Indiana in the 80's have no idea how to navigate even the possibility of a poly relationship or possibly even what it's called- leaving everyone various levels of frustrated and confused though they care deeply about each other.
** A suburban town in Indiana in the early 80's likely wouldn't have had a computer lab in the middle/high-school yet and even fewer people had them at home- so neither Jonathan or Steve have any idea how to work a personal computer and have to rely on Dustin's instructions to figure it out.
** Learning that there are monsters, nearly dying twice, and deciding that you're personally responsible for a bunch of suicidally brave thirteen year olds takes a serious mental toll on Steve.
*** In the epilogue Hopper ends up in the unenviable position of having to explain to Steve that killing the Aboleth didn't fix the symptoms of 'psychic drain' because he's actually been suffering from PTSD, completely independent of the monster.
** A bunch of teenagers in suburban Indiana in the 80's have no idea how to navigate even the possibility of a poly relationship or possibly even what it's called- leaving everyone various levels of frustrated and confused though they care deeply about each other.
** A suburban town in Indiana in the early 80's likely wouldn't have had a computer lab in the middle/high-school yet and even fewer people had them at home- so neither Jonathan or Steve have any idea how to work a personal computer and have to rely on Dustin's instructions to figure it out.
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** Learning that there are monsters, nearly dying twice, and deciding that you're personally responsible for a bunch of suicidally brave thirteen year olds takes a serious mental toll on Steve.
*** In the epilogue Hopper ends up in the unenviable position of having to explain to Steve that killing the Aboleth didn't fix the symptoms of 'psychic drain' because he's actually been suffering from PTSD, completely independent of the monster.
** A bunch of teenagers in suburban Indiana in the 80's have no idea how to navigate even the possibility of a poly relationship or possibly even what it's called- leaving everyone various levels of frustrated and confused though they care deeply about each other.
** A suburban town in Indiana in the early 80's likely wouldn't have had a computer lab in the middle/high-school yet and even fewer people had them at home- so neither Jonathan or Steve have any idea how to work a personal computer and have to rely on Dustin's instructions to figure it out.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Learning that there are monsters, nearly dying twice, and deciding that you're personally responsible for a bunch of suicidally brave thirteen year olds takes a serious mental toll on Steve.
*** In the epilogue Hopper ends up in the unenviable position of having to explain to Steve that killing the Aboleth didn't fix the symptoms of 'psychic drain' because he's actually been suffering from PTSD, completely independent of the monster.
** A bunch of teenagers in suburban Indiana in the 80's have no idea how to navigate even the possibility of a poly relationship or possibly even what it's called- leaving everyone various levels of frustrated and confused though they care deeply about each other.
** A suburban town in Indiana in the early 80's likely wouldn't have had a computer lab in the middle/high-school yet and even fewer people had them at home- so neither Jonathan or Steve have any idea how to work a personal computer and have to rely on Dustin's instructions to figure it out.
** Learning that there are monsters, nearly dying twice, and deciding that you're personally responsible for a bunch of suicidally brave thirteen year olds takes a serious mental toll on Steve.
*** In the epilogue Hopper ends up in the unenviable position of having to explain to Steve that killing the Aboleth didn't fix the symptoms of 'psychic drain' because he's actually been suffering from PTSD, completely independent of the monster.
** A bunch of teenagers in suburban Indiana in the 80's have no idea how to navigate even the possibility of a poly relationship or possibly even what it's called- leaving everyone various levels of frustrated and confused though they care deeply about each other.
** A suburban town in Indiana in the early 80's likely wouldn't have had a computer lab in the middle/high-school yet and even fewer people had them at home- so neither Jonathan or Steve have any idea how to work a personal computer and have to rely on Dustin's instructions to figure it out.
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** In spite of fighting actual monsters the teen's nightmares at Hawkins Lab are all these rather than being related to the Upside-Down.
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** In spite of fighting actual monsters the teen's teens nightmares at Hawkins Lab are all these rather than being related to the Upside-Down.
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* {{Adorkable}}:
** In keeping with the show the whole Party, but especially Dustin whose chapters are littered with references ranging from comics to Star Wars to Lord of the Rings, even when he's under stress.
** Mr. Clarke is a big nerd who's first thoughts about finding out that alternate dimensions are real and filled with monsters is how it's going to effect various scientific fields. He's also a huge horror fan with almost every movie he references being horror that ranges from Hammer films, to 50's creature features to 80's BodyHorror. Imagine ''Mr. Clarke'' watching a David Cronenberg film.
** Steve has his moments- he's genuinely good at and enjoys playing D&D, secretly used to read comics as a kid, and suggests that the argument of whether to call El Jane or El is best solved by 'calling her Jane-El like she's from Krypton.'
*** The fact that he practically squees the first time he sees her use her powers (to lift a ''jar'') and ends up nick-naming her Supergirl.
** In keeping with the show the whole Party, but especially Dustin whose chapters are littered with references ranging from comics to Star Wars to Lord of the Rings, even when he's under stress.
** Mr. Clarke is a big nerd who's first thoughts about finding out that alternate dimensions are real and filled with monsters is how it's going to effect various scientific fields. He's also a huge horror fan with almost every movie he references being horror that ranges from Hammer films, to 50's creature features to 80's BodyHorror. Imagine ''Mr. Clarke'' watching a David Cronenberg film.
** Steve has his moments- he's genuinely good at and enjoys playing D&D, secretly used to read comics as a kid, and suggests that the argument of whether to call El Jane or El is best solved by 'calling her Jane-El like she's from Krypton.'
*** The fact that he practically squees the first time he sees her use her powers (to lift a ''jar'') and ends up nick-naming her Supergirl.
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->'''[[spoiler: “Because her father is here, goddamnit. She’s Sara Hopper.”]]
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->'''[[spoiler: “BecauseWhamLine: [[spoiler:“Because her father is here, goddamnit. She’s Sara Hopper.”]]
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* LastNameBasis: When Mr. Harrington shows up to collect Steve from one of the gang's exploits, he encounters Hopper, with whom he clearly has a long-standing enmity. When the two go to leave, Hopper bids the two farewell with a respectful "Harrington", which Mr. Harrington comments on with surprised approval. Hopper then clarifies that he was talking to Steve, whom he actually ''does'' respect.
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* BiTheWay: Jonathan Byers is attracted to both Nancy and Steve, even though he's not completely sure that he even *likes* Steve as a person. Comes to terms with the fact that he's [[BlatantLies tolerable]] by the end.
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* TheGunslinger: Mike gives this class to Nancy in the Inbetween. She [[TheDarkTower shoots with her mind]]
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* TheGunslinger: Mike gives this class to Nancy in the Inbetween. She [[TheDarkTower [[Literature/TheDarkTower shoots with her mind]]
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** In the final battle, Mike gives Nancy the character class of "gunslinger" even though, as he notes mentally, it's not a type which can be found in ''Dungeons and Dragons''. It is, of course, a class in [[Franchise/TheDarkTower another fantasy epic of interest to a universe inspired by the works of]] Creator/StephenKing.
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** In the final battle, Mike gives Nancy the character class of "gunslinger" even though, as he notes mentally, it's not a type which can be found in ''Dungeons and Dragons''. It is, of course, a class in [[Franchise/TheDarkTower [[Literature/TheDarkTower another fantasy epic of interest to a universe inspired by the works of]] Creator/StephenKing.
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* DarkWorld: The Inbetween is nothing but dark. With all the Stephen King references in the fic it's possible that the author is assuming that the Void of the show is analogous to Todash Space - the dark dimension that characters travel through in TheDarkTower when they 'go todash' and that spawns the monsters from TheMist.
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* DarkWorld: The Inbetween is nothing but dark. With all the Stephen King references in the fic it's possible that the author is assuming that the Void of the show is analogous to Todash Space - the dark dimension that characters travel through in TheDarkTower ''Literature/TheDarkTower'' when they 'go todash' and that spawns the monsters from TheMist.''Literature/TheMist''.
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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: The page breaks throughout the fic have messages from the monster hidden in Zalgo text, directed to the reader.
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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou:
** The page breaks throughout the fic have messages from the monster hidden in Zalgo text, directed to thereader.reader.
** A rare case of The Fourth Wall Will Not Protect The Characters. When Mr. Clarke gets involved in the action of the story proper and encounters the monster he ends up too rattled to deliver the End Notes, basically telling the readers to just move on.
** The page breaks throughout the fic have messages from the monster hidden in Zalgo text, directed to the
** A rare case of The Fourth Wall Will Not Protect The Characters. When Mr. Clarke gets involved in the action of the story proper and encounters the monster he ends up too rattled to deliver the End Notes, basically telling the readers to just move on.
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** Steve's mother has a unnamed 'nervous disposition' that she self-medicates for that might be chronic depression.
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** Steve's mother has a unnamed 'nervous disposition' that she self-medicates for and that results in her staying in bed for days at a time that might be chronic depression.
** Jen from Season One is an occasional POV character and is still having her date nights interrupted by Dustin needing information.
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* CelebrityParadox : Due to CanonWelding the fic explicitly crosses over with the (a?) universe of Creator/StephenKing with an appearance by The Shop and mentions of John Rainbird and The Dark Tower - but Billy and Steve both make pop-culture references to Film/TheShining which means Stephen King exists in universe too...
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* CelebrityParadox : Due to CanonWelding the fic explicitly crosses over with the (a?) universe of Creator/StephenKing with an appearance by The Shop and mentions of John Rainbird and The Dark Tower - but Billy and Steve both make pop-culture references to Film/TheShining which means Stephen King exists in universe too...though since King ''is'' a character in the Stephen King universe this doesn't really present a problem.
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Bob's appearance in Chapter 11 is explained away by Mr. Clarke as a hallucination brought on by an acute stress reaction but this ''is'' Hawkins...
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Bob's MaybeMagicMaybeMundane:
**Bob's appearance in Chapter 11 is explained away by Mr. Clarke as a hallucination brought on by an acute stress reaction but this ''is''Hawkins...Hawkins...
**There are a couple of instances where the generally slow-on-the-uptake Steve has unusual insight into events or other characters that he can't even explain to himself. It's possible that he's just more perceptive than he thinks he is or- given the nature of the fic-that he [[Literature/TheShining shines]] very slightly.
**Bob's appearance in Chapter 11 is explained away by Mr. Clarke as a hallucination brought on by an acute stress reaction but this ''is''
**There are a couple of instances where the generally slow-on-the-uptake Steve has unusual insight into events or other characters that he can't even explain to himself. It's possible that he's just more perceptive than he thinks he is or- given the nature of the fic-that he [[Literature/TheShining shines]] very slightly.
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* SummonBiggerFish: Will does this to the Aboleth [[spoiler: when he uses his presence in the Upside Down to alers the Mind-Flayer that it's there. There's a ''reason'' it's been going out of its way to avoid anything related to Will Byers.]]
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* SummonBiggerFish: Will does this to the Aboleth [[spoiler: when he uses his presence in the Upside Down to alers alerts the Mind-Flayer that it's there. There's a ''reason'' it's been going out of its way to avoid anything related to Will Byers.]]
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* AdultsAreUseless: Averted. Hopper, Joyce, Kali and Mr.Clarke are all instrumental in killing the monster. Sam Owens passes along vital information and even some adults that aren't in the loop like Phil Callhan do something useful over the course of the story.
* AlasPoorVillain: Not that he feels bad for it for long but Hopper feels the Aboleth's projected loss as the same loss as a parent losing a child [[spoiler: when Joyce destroys its eggs.]]
* AlasPoorVillain: Not that he feels bad for it for long but Hopper feels the Aboleth's projected loss as the same loss as a parent losing a child [[spoiler: when Joyce destroys its eggs.]]
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* AdultsAreUseless: Averted. Hopper, Joyce, Kali and Mr.Clarke are all instrumental in killing the monster. Sam Owens passes along vital information and even some adults that aren't in the loop like Phil Callhan Callahan do something useful over the course of the story.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Not that he feels bad for it for long but Hopper feels the Aboleth's projected loss as the same loss as a parent losing a child [[spoiler: when Joyce destroys itseggs.]]
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** Lampshaded by Dustin at one point, who figures out the Aboleth's motives partly by comparing them to a bunch of bullies who were frightened off by Steve earlier in the story, but who later got another group of kids to pick on them instead.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Dr. Roethe is an ex-Nazi scientist with no compunctions whatsoever about experimenting on children or murdering teenagers to cover up her secrets, but she seems to genuinely view what she sees as Subject Six "toying" with Jonathan, Nancy and Steve as unnecessarily cruel, and sincerely regrets that they were about to be inflicted with Subject Six's powers while conscious.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Dr. Roethe is an ex-Nazi scientist with no compunctions whatsoever about experimenting on children or murdering teenagers to cover up her secrets, but she seems to genuinely view what she sees as Subject Six "toying" with Jonathan, Nancy and Steve as unnecessarily cruel, and sincerely regrets that they were about to be inflicted with Subject Six's powers while
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* MamaBear: When confronting a possessed neighbor trying to attack the kids with an axe, Joyce has to be held back by Hopper to prevent her from throwing herself right at the neighbor.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: At the end, after everything has calmed down, Mr. Clarke's girlfriend makes a comment about not knowing exactly what the heck just happened... and realises when his response ''isn't'' to immediately start enthusiastically hypothesising, and is to just hug her quietly, that he (a) knows exactly what was going on and (b) is very disturbed by that knowledge. She decides not to pry any further.
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** Steve's father, noted as incredibly aloof and distant, breaks down completely when Steve confronts him aboue [[spoiler: having helped the Lab]].
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**A suburban town in Indiana in the early 80's likely wouldn't have had a computer lab in the middle/high-school yet and even fewer people had them at home- so neither Jonathan or Steve have any idea how to work a personal computer and have to rely on Dustin's instructions to figure it out.
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** Mr. Clarke is a big nerd who's first thoughts about finding out that alternate dimensions are real and filled with monsters is how it's going to effect various scientific fields. He's also a huge horror fan with almost every movie he references being horror. Imagine ''Mr. Clarke'' watching a David Cronenberg film.
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** Mr. Clarke is a big nerd who's first thoughts about finding out that alternate dimensions are real and filled with monsters is how it's going to effect various scientific fields. He's also a huge horror fan with almost every movie he references being horror.horror that ranges from Hammer films, to 50's creature features to 80's BodyHorror. Imagine ''Mr. Clarke'' watching a David Cronenberg film.
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* TheEighties: Set in winter of '85 and it shows. Laser discs, the Apple Lisa 2 and tons of 80's music and movie references make an appearance.
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** Happens to the Aboleth [[spoiler: when Will's presence in the Upside Down alerts the Mind-Flayer that it's there. There's a ''reason'' it's been going out of its way to avoid anything related to Will Byers.]]
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* BlatantLies: Steve only knows about Krypton because he's seen Superman 3. Obviously.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Hopper finds out his daughter is alive with no way to find or contact her, some of the symptoms of the 'psychic drain' Steve was suffering from are actually untreated PTSD, and the Trio haven't had a chance to really figure out where they stand with each other. However the Aboleth is dead and the bonds of love and friendship between everyone in the group are stronger than ever.]]
* BlatantLies: Steve only knows about Krypton because he's seenSuperman 3.Film/SupermanIII. Obviously.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: An interesting case with the Aboleth. While it's obviously actively cruel, vindictive and petulant it seems to truly believe that humanity should be grateful to it since while the Mind-Flayer will leave the world a dark, toxic, empty ruin, it will preserve humanity's consciousnesses within itself. Forever.
** Mr. Clarke thinks that it's probably a bad idea to try to assign human moral understanding to a thing from another dimension, though this philosophy doesn't survive his first encounter with it.
* BodyHorror: The bodies of victims of the Aboleth who have their consciousness eaten are still technically functioning, if empty, until the necrosis sets in and they rot alive.
* BlatantLies: Steve only knows about Krypton because he's seen
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: An interesting case with the Aboleth. While it's obviously actively cruel, vindictive and petulant it seems to truly believe that humanity should be grateful to it since while the Mind-Flayer will leave the world a dark, toxic, empty ruin, it will preserve humanity's consciousnesses within itself. Forever.
** Mr. Clarke thinks that it's probably a bad idea to try to assign human moral understanding to a thing from another dimension, though this philosophy doesn't survive his first encounter with it.
* BodyHorror: The bodies of victims of the Aboleth who have their consciousness eaten are still technically functioning, if empty, until the necrosis sets in and they rot alive.
* BreakTheHaughty:
**While less concerned with being King of the School than he used to be Steve is still trying to claw his way back to social normalcy early on, pointing out that there's only so outcast you can get with his family's money and that there are still hangers on who are betting on him bouncing back and bringing them with him. He goes through a lot and ends up losing any interest in the pointless things he used to think were important, while ending up happier with real friends.
** Steve's father, noted as incredibly aloof and distant, breaks down completely when Steve confronts him aboue [[spoiler: having helped the Lab]].
**While less concerned with being King of the School than he used to be Steve is still trying to claw his way back to social normalcy early on, pointing out that there's only so outcast you can get with his family's money and that there are still hangers on who are betting on him bouncing back and bringing them with him. He goes through a lot and ends up losing any interest in the pointless things he used to think were important, while ending up happier with real friends.
** Steve's father, noted as incredibly aloof and distant, breaks down completely when Steve confronts him aboue [[spoiler: having helped the Lab]].
* ClippedWingAngel: After Mike figures out how to ShapeshifterModeLock the Aboleth with their belief that the creature is an Aboleth from D&D he brings it down from 'unkillable' to 'manageable' by giving it stats.
* DaylightHorror: A vast majority of the scenes where the Party interact with the Aboleth take place during the day, including the final battle which wraps up before ten in the morning.
**Lampshaded by Steve after they encounter the creature for the first time in the storm drain, with him expecting it to suddenly be dark out since "monsters don’t attack in the late afternoon".
**Lampshaded by Steve after they encounter the creature for the first time in the storm drain, with him expecting it to suddenly be dark out since "monsters don’t attack in the late afternoon".
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** Billy considers things that would range from sexual assault to possible manslaughter to be pranks to pull on someone that passes out at a party.
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** Billy considers things that would range from sexual assault to possible manslaughter through alcohol poisoning to be pranks to pull on someone that passes out at a party.
** Steve thinks Billy might be 'queer for him' and not in the LGBTQ inclusiveway.
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** The Zimmerman brothers and Billy use 'faggot' and 'retarded' freely when insulting the party.
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** The Zimmerman brothers and Billy use 'faggot' and 'retarded' freely when insulting the party.
* EveryoneHasStandards:
** Reed and Tommy H. are happy to go with Billy to rough-up Steve but absolutely freak out when it starts to escalate.
** They aren't ''high'' standards but Billy is angry that the Aboleth is trying to force him to kill the Party when they're unconscious instead of letting him and Steve duke it out, has no real desire to hurt Dustin (at least until he insults him) and even offers him a chance to run away.
** Reed and Tommy H. are happy to go with Billy to rough-up Steve but absolutely freak out when it starts to escalate.
** They aren't ''high'' standards but Billy is angry that the Aboleth is trying to force him to kill the Party when they're unconscious instead of letting him and Steve duke it out, has no real desire to hurt Dustin (at least until he insults him) and even offers him a chance to run away.
* GuiltComplex: Steve is dealing with one of these early on due to the fact that he technically failed to save Dustin in the tunnels during Season 2 even though he had time to at least get him up the rope. Seems to mostly get over it as their friendship develops and[[spoiler: he gets a chance to make up for it when he saves him from the Aboleth]]
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* LightIsNotGood: Along with its tendency to show up during the day the true form of the Aboleth emits some kind of eldritch light. Or possibly is the light if the Aboleth is [[Literature/{{IT}}the same species as another emotion eating abomination from beyond worlds.]] It even refers to itself as 'the light in the darkness' compared to the Mind-Flayer.
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** Both times Steve goes to his mom when he's upset she basically tells him to ignore it. The second time she explicitly tells him he should smile because he 'looks just like [his father] when he frowns'. The reader gets the impression this isn't the first time that she's said this.
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** Both times Steve goes to his mom when he's upset she basically tells him to ignore it.it and everything will be fine. The second time she explicitly tells him he should smile because he 'looks just like [his father] when he frowns'. The reader gets the definite impression this isn't the first time that she's said this.
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* SummonBiggerFish: Will does this to the Aboleth [[spoiler: when he uses his presence in the Upside Down to alers the Mind-Flayer that it's there. There's a ''reason'' it's been going out of its way to avoid anything related to Will Byers.]]
* SummonBiggerFish: Will does this to the Aboleth [[spoiler: when he uses his presence in the Upside Down to alers the Mind-Flayer that it's there. There's a ''reason'' it's been going out of its way to avoid anything related to Will Byers.]]
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* MenDontCry: Averted. Steve, Dustin, Billy and Hopper cry.
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* {{Expy}} : Billy's role in the story shares a lot of similarities with [[{Literature/{IT}} Henry Bowers]].
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** To Stephen King to the point of being a WholePlotReference for {{IT}}.
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* LovecraftCountry: Or rather, Stephen King Country. The eclipse Mr. Clarke mentions is the same one featured in [[Literature/DoloresClaiborne Dolores Claiborne]] and [[Literature/GeraldsGame Gerald's Game]]. Mr. Clarke grew up in Haven Village, Maine the setting of [[Literature/TheTommyknockers The Tommyknockers]], and mentions going to the movies as a kid at the Aladdin- the movie theater in nearby [[{{IT}} Derry.]]
** With Mr. Clarke in his mid-late 30's he would have been a preteen in 1958- this might not be the first time he's been in a town being menaced by a [[{{IT}}shape-shifting Eldritch Abomination.]]
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* LovecraftCountry: Or rather, Stephen King Country. The eclipse Mr. Clarke mentions is the same one featured in [[Literature/DoloresClaiborne Dolores Claiborne]] and [[Literature/GeraldsGame Gerald's Game]]. Mr. Clarke grew up in Haven Village, Maine the setting of [[Literature/TheTommyknockers The Tommyknockers]], and mentions going to the movies as a kid at the Aladdin- the movie theater in nearby [[{{IT}} [[Literature/{{IT}} Derry.]]
** With Mr. Clarke in his mid-late 30's he would have been a preteen in 1958- this might not be the first time he's been in a town being menaced by a[[{{IT}}shape-shifting [[Literature/{{IT}}shape-shifting Eldritch Abomination.]]
** With Mr. Clarke in his mid-late 30's he would have been a preteen in 1958- this might not be the first time he's been in a town being menaced by a
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