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** Blaine's actor Creator/DarrenCriss is a pretty standard case of [[DawsonCasting a twenty-something playing a teenaged character.]] But in-story, Blaine is noted to be [[YoungerThanTheyLook unusually mature-looking for a teenager,]] and Morgan is horrified to realize that this is probably why [[MayDecemberRomance so many older guys go after him.]]

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** Blaine's actor Creator/DarrenCriss is a pretty standard case of [[DawsonCasting a twenty-something playing a teenaged character.]] teenage character. But in-story, Blaine is noted to be [[YoungerThanTheyLook unusually mature-looking for a teenager,]] and Morgan is horrified to realize that this is probably why [[MayDecemberRomance so many older guys go after him.]]



** Nick's hilarious ComingOutStory is retconned in "The Kingdom"--we find out Nick got the restraining order against Tori because he didn't want to be [[CureYourGays sent to straight camp]] or forced to move away from Jeff or his aunt. Hotch notes that given Blaine and Kurt's history of being bullied and how his mother kicked him out, Nick actually had ''really'' good reasons to think he needed legal protection. [[GoodParents Tori himself is pretty upset when he realizes Nick was afraid of him.]] And later on, Hotch has to remind the BAU that even though Tori loves his son, [[spoiler: he's still a criminal and they have to at least TRY to bring him to justice.]]

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** Nick's hilarious ComingOutStory is retconned in "The Kingdom"--we find out Nick got the restraining order against Tori because he didn't want to be [[CureYourGays sent to straight camp]] or forced to move away from Jeff or his aunt. Hotch notes that given Blaine and Kurt's history of being bullied and how his mother kicked him out, Nick actually had ''really'' good reasons to think he needed legal protection. [[GoodParents Tori himself is pretty upset when he realizes Nick was afraid of him.his reaction.]] And later on, Hotch has to remind the BAU that even though Tori loves his son, [[spoiler: he's still a criminal and they have to at least TRY to bring him to justice.]]
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** Blaine's actor Creator/DarrenCriss is a pretty standard case of a twenty-something playing a teenager. But in-story, Blaine is noted to be [[YoungerThanTheyLook unusually mature-looking for a teenager]] and Morgan is horrified to realize that this is probably why [[MayDecemberRomance so many older guys go after him.]]

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** Blaine's actor Creator/DarrenCriss is a pretty standard case of [[DawsonCasting a twenty-something playing a teenager. teenaged character.]] But in-story, Blaine is noted to be [[YoungerThanTheyLook unusually mature-looking for a teenager]] teenager,]] and Morgan is horrified to realize that this is probably why [[MayDecemberRomance so many older guys go after him.]]
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* FreudianSlip / AccidentalInnuendo: A serious example at the end of ''The Princess''--Blaine is thinking of what to say to Kurt, and it starts running together into "I want you."

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* FreudianSlip / AccidentalInnuendo: FreudianSlip: A serious example at the end of ''The Princess''--Blaine is thinking of what to say to Kurt, and it starts running together into "I want you."
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* ButterflyOfDoom / ThirteenIsUnlucky: The thirteenth chapter is named after the butterfly in ''Literature/TheLastUnicorn''. [[spoiler: It's the chapter where Blaine gets a stalker.]]
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* CuffsOffRubWrists: Averted. Wes and David are tied to chairs. After they're released, neither can walk properly and they suffer pins and needles, which tips the police officer off that they've been like that for much longer than they think. [[spoiler: That means Blaine's been wandering the city in a blind panic for ''two hours.'']]

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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread.


* CerebusRetcon: Three major aspects of Blaine's character have been retconned: Blaine's KnightInShiningArmor personality, played as straight as possible, would be [[{{Deconstruction}} extremely unhealthy]] in modern society. His [[ObliviousToLove obliviousness to love]] is even ''less'' fun when you're not Kurt; on the sad side, Blaine completely believed a friend's excuse to invoke a DanceOfRomance--[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment alone, in an empty room, with nobody watching]]. On the SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome side, [[spoiler: he has no idea that he now has a stalker.]]

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* CerebusRetcon: Three major aspects of Blaine's character have been retconned: Blaine's KnightInShiningArmor personality, played as straight as possible, would be [[{{Deconstruction}} extremely unhealthy]] in modern society. His [[ObliviousToLove obliviousness to love]] is even ''less'' fun when you're not Kurt; on the sad side, Blaine completely believed a friend's excuse to invoke a DanceOfRomance--[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment alone, in an empty room, with nobody watching]]. On the SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome side, And [[spoiler: he has no idea that he now has a stalker.]]



** Nick starts out as a comic-relief stoner who [[CloudCuckooLander isn't quite on the same wavelength as most people]]. Then it turns out he's got a concerning family life, and his strange logic means that he's kept information from ''everyone,'' including his [[TrueCompanions friends]] and his therapist. With all the stuff that he doesn't tell [[Series/CriminalMinds the BAU]] (intentionally or not), [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome he's constantly going back to the police station for questioning.]] The more Hotch in particular finds out about Nick, the more [[OnlySaneMan confused]] [[PapaWolf (and protective)]] he feels.

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** Nick starts out as a comic-relief stoner who [[CloudCuckooLander isn't quite on the same wavelength as most people]]. Then it turns out he's got a concerning family life, and his strange logic means that he's kept information from ''everyone,'' including his [[TrueCompanions friends]] and his therapist. With all the stuff that he doesn't tell [[Series/CriminalMinds the BAU]] (intentionally or not), [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome he's constantly going back to the police station for questioning.]] questioning. The more Hotch in particular finds out about Nick, the more [[OnlySaneMan confused]] [[PapaWolf (and protective)]] he feels.



** And that's not getting into the plot, which involves [[spoiler: Blaine's stalker kidnapping him, Wes, and David.]] Meanwhile, Blaine got a concussion that leaves him [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome barely aware of things]].

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** And that's not getting into the plot, which involves [[spoiler: Blaine's stalker kidnapping him, Wes, and David.]] Meanwhile, Blaine got a concussion that leaves him [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome barely aware of things]].things.



* SexEqualsLove: [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Not necessarily]]. It gets worse if you try to ''invoke'' it.

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* SexEqualsLove: [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome [[AvertedTrope Not necessarily]]. It gets worse if you try to ''invoke'' it.



* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: And does it ''ever''. Look at all the tropes that have been PlayedWith and deconstructed.
** In ''The Princess,'' we get the reminder that sex is important, but it does ''not'' [[SexEqualsLove equal love.]] [[BreakTheCutie Not even for you,]] [[spoiler: Blaine]].
** In ''Robin Hood'', the BAU point out that some of the Warblers' actions (like covert taping and tracking people extensively for a bet) are actually ''illegal'', and while they weren't meant maliciously, it still looks pretty weird to an outside observer.
** In ''Maid Marian,'' Wes and David's parents remind them that they weren't the only ones looking for Blaine.
** The BAU gets pretty alarmed at how Nick sneaks into clubs, has a restraining order against his divorced father, is in therapy, and ''hasn't told them any of it.''
** Simon Tam's decision to call the BAU in the first place is ''very'' understandable, since [[spoiler: the concussed Blaine has a lot of gaps in his memory and Alex was specifically a StalkerWithACrush. It's much safer to call the BAU for backup and find out that Blaine didn't get sexually assaulted than to brush off Blaine's semi-coherent ramblings only to find out that he ''was''.]]
** Jeff attempted against-the-wall sex. [[DoNotTryThisAtHome He needed Midol after ten seconds and he nearly dropped the girl twice.]]
** Private schools are ''expensive'', and even with the scholarship, Kurt still can't afford to stay at Dalton.
*** As pointed out by Blaine, Kurt's decision to stay at Dalton or move back to [=McKinley=] is his, and Blaine doesn't really have a right to insist that Kurt stay with him.
** PlayedWith in "The Kingdom." Nick attempts to call Tori through the BatSignal [[spoiler: to get him and Alex out of hiding so they can get arrested (again)]]. The BAU doesn't think much of it and doesn't bring much backup, since [[spoiler: they don't think a notorious FBI rogue would take a needless risk to talk to his son]]. As RefugeInAudacity notes below, they're thrown off when Nick's plan actually WORKS.
*** In the same chapter, Hotch has to point out that while yes, Tori genuinely loves Nick and wants the best for him, ''that doesn't mean he's not a criminal'', so they still have to catch him.


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* WallBangHer: Jeff attempted against-the-wall sex. [[DoNotTryThisAtHome He needed Midol after ten seconds and he nearly dropped the girl twice.]]
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** Turned UpToEleven in ''Jack Jingly.''

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** Turned UpToEleven Exaggerated in ''Jack Jingly.''



** And '''''[[UpToEleven Nikos.]]'''''

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** And '''''[[UpToEleven Nikos.]]''''''''''Nikos.'''''



* LampshadeHanging: The Warblers, [[UpToEleven so much]]. Kurt and Blaine are a [[LifetimeMovieOfTheWeek Lifetime couple,]] "Candles" is only romantic if you don't pay attention to [[LyricalDissonance the lyrics,]] Blaine is a [[KnightInShiningArmor chivalrous]] [[IdiotBall idiot]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking he uses too much hair-gel]].

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* LampshadeHanging: The Warblers, [[UpToEleven so much]].much. Kurt and Blaine are a [[LifetimeMovieOfTheWeek Lifetime couple,]] "Candles" is only romantic if you don't pay attention to [[LyricalDissonance the lyrics,]] Blaine is a [[KnightInShiningArmor chivalrous]] [[IdiotBall idiot]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking he uses too much hair-gel]].
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* ToBeLawfulOrGood: The BAU has a really tough decision between [[spoiler: risking the chance of letting a kidnapper escape the law]] and [[spoiler: putting a troubled teenager's very loving father in jail for sheltering said kidnapper.]] That's ''before'' they know [[TragicVillain the accomplice is only doing it because of blackmail threatening his son,]] which is its own "lawful versus good" decision. As AdultFear notes above, [[TruthInTelevision parents will do MANY questionable things to keep their kids safe.]]

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* ToBeLawfulOrGood: The BAU has a really tough decision between [[spoiler: risking the chance of letting a kidnapper escape the law]] and [[spoiler: putting a troubled teenager's very loving father in jail for sheltering said kidnapper.]] That's ''before'' they know [[TragicVillain the accomplice is only doing it because of blackmail threatening his son,]] which is its own "lawful versus good" decision. As AdultFear notes above, [[TruthInTelevision parents will do MANY questionable things to keep their kids safe.]]
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* AdultFear:
** Blaine is a ''minefield'' of this: He's painfully lonely, makes absurd mistakes because nobody's there to tell him otherwise (or he waits until the absolute last minute to ask for help), and then [[spoiler: he gets a StalkerWithACrush who ''kidnaps him and his friends''.]] And is he a juvenile delinquent? No, he goes around being a KnightInShiningArmor because [[DramaticIrony that's what his parents taught him before they dropped out of his life]].
** Wes and David were supposed to go home [[spoiler: after the police found them]]. Instead they [[spoiler: kept looking for the still-missing Blaine]] and refused to answer their parents' calls. Said parents are relieved but ''extremely'' angry when they get to the Blue Sun Hospital.
** Nick's situation is alarming for the BAU (divorced parents and heavy drug/alcohol use). It's later revealed that he has a restraining order against his father, he lies to his friends due to having "three definitions of truth," and he sneaks into gay clubs using [[LoopholeAbuse his own modified driver's license.]]
** Nick and Tori's specific situation is terrible: Nick got a restraining order on his already-estranged dad because he was afraid about coming out as bisexual, but it turns out Tori [[GoodParents loves Nick to death]] and hated the sudden distance between them. Unfortunately, they both find this out while [[spoiler: Nick is ''trying to get Tori arrested'' for criminal activity,]] which is happening because [[spoiler: Littlefinger's blackmailed Tori with Nick's safety.]]
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* ThoseTwoGuys: Wes and David, when they're not being a PowerTrio with Blaine. Jeff and Nick, also.

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* ThoseTwoGuys: Wes and David, when they're not being a PowerTrio WithAFriendAndAStranger trio with Blaine. Jeff and Nick, also.

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* CerebusRetcon: Three major aspects of Blaine's character have been retconned: Blaine's KnightInShiningArmor personality, played as straight as possible, would be [[{{Deconstruction}} extremely unhealthy]] in modern society. His [[ObliviousToLove obliviousness to love]] is even ''less'' fun when you're not Kurt; on the sad side, Blaine completely believed a friend's excuse to invoke a DanceOfRomance--[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment alone, in an empty room, with nobody watching]]. On the RealityEnsues side, [[spoiler: he has no idea that he now has a stalker.]]

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* CerebusRetcon: Three major aspects of Blaine's character have been retconned: Blaine's KnightInShiningArmor personality, played as straight as possible, would be [[{{Deconstruction}} extremely unhealthy]] in modern society. His [[ObliviousToLove obliviousness to love]] is even ''less'' fun when you're not Kurt; on the sad side, Blaine completely believed a friend's excuse to invoke a DanceOfRomance--[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment alone, in an empty room, with nobody watching]]. On the RealityEnsues SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome side, [[spoiler: he has no idea that he now has a stalker.]]



** Nick starts out as a comic-relief stoner who [[CloudCuckooLander isn't quite on the same wavelength as most people]]. Then it turns out he's got a concerning family life, and his strange logic means that he's kept information from ''everyone,'' including his [[TrueCompanions friends]] and his therapist. With all the stuff that he doesn't tell [[Series/CriminalMinds the BAU]] (intentionally or not), [[RealityEnsues he's constantly going back to the police station for questioning.]] The more Hotch in particular finds out about Nick, the more [[OnlySaneMan confused]] [[PapaWolf (and protective)]] he feels.

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** Nick starts out as a comic-relief stoner who [[CloudCuckooLander isn't quite on the same wavelength as most people]]. Then it turns out he's got a concerning family life, and his strange logic means that he's kept information from ''everyone,'' including his [[TrueCompanions friends]] and his therapist. With all the stuff that he doesn't tell [[Series/CriminalMinds the BAU]] (intentionally or not), [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome he's constantly going back to the police station for questioning.]] The more Hotch in particular finds out about Nick, the more [[OnlySaneMan confused]] [[PapaWolf (and protective)]] he feels.



** And that's not getting into the plot, which involves [[spoiler: Blaine's stalker kidnapping him, Wes, and David.]] Meanwhile, Blaine got a concussion that leaves him [[RealityEnsues barely aware of things]].

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** And that's not getting into the plot, which involves [[spoiler: Blaine's stalker kidnapping him, Wes, and David.]] Meanwhile, Blaine got a concussion that leaves him [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome barely aware of things]].



* RealityEnsues: And does it ''ever''. Look at all the tropes that have been PlayedWith and deconstructed.
** In ''The Princess,'' we get the reminder that sex is important, but it does ''not'' [[SexEqualsLove equal love.]] [[BreakTheCutie Not even for you,]] [[spoiler: Blaine]].
** In ''Robin Hood'', the BAU point out that some of the Warblers' actions (like covert taping and tracking people extensively for a bet) are actually ''illegal'', and while they weren't meant maliciously, it still looks pretty weird to an outside observer.
** In ''Maid Marian,'' Wes and David's parents remind them that they weren't the only ones looking for Blaine.
** The BAU gets pretty alarmed at how Nick sneaks into clubs, has a restraining order against his divorced father, is in therapy, and ''hasn't told them any of it.''
** Simon Tam's decision to call the BAU in the first place is ''very'' understandable, since [[spoiler: the concussed Blaine has a lot of gaps in his memory and Alex was specifically a StalkerWithACrush. It's much safer to call the BAU for backup and find out that Blaine didn't get sexually assaulted than to brush off Blaine's semi-coherent ramblings only to find out that he ''was''.]]
** Jeff attempted against-the-wall sex. [[DoNotTryThisAtHome He needed Midol after ten seconds and he nearly dropped the girl twice.]]
** Private schools are ''expensive'', and even with the scholarship, Kurt still can't afford to stay at Dalton.
*** As pointed out by Blaine, Kurt's decision to stay at Dalton or move back to [=McKinley=] is his, and Blaine doesn't really have a right to insist that Kurt stay with him.
** PlayedWith in "The Kingdom." Nick attempts to call Tori through the BatSignal [[spoiler: to get him and Alex out of hiding so they can get arrested (again)]]. The BAU doesn't think much of it and doesn't bring much backup, since [[spoiler: they don't think a notorious FBI rogue would take a needless risk to talk to his son]]. As RefugeInAudacity notes below, they're thrown off when Nick's plan actually WORKS.
*** In the same chapter, Hotch has to point out that while yes, Tori genuinely loves Nick and wants the best for him, ''that doesn't mean he's not a criminal'', so they still have to catch him.



* SexEqualsLove: [[RealityEnsues Not necessarily]]. It gets worse if you try to ''invoke'' it.

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* SexEqualsLove: [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Not necessarily]]. It gets worse if you try to ''invoke'' it.


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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: And does it ''ever''. Look at all the tropes that have been PlayedWith and deconstructed.
** In ''The Princess,'' we get the reminder that sex is important, but it does ''not'' [[SexEqualsLove equal love.]] [[BreakTheCutie Not even for you,]] [[spoiler: Blaine]].
** In ''Robin Hood'', the BAU point out that some of the Warblers' actions (like covert taping and tracking people extensively for a bet) are actually ''illegal'', and while they weren't meant maliciously, it still looks pretty weird to an outside observer.
** In ''Maid Marian,'' Wes and David's parents remind them that they weren't the only ones looking for Blaine.
** The BAU gets pretty alarmed at how Nick sneaks into clubs, has a restraining order against his divorced father, is in therapy, and ''hasn't told them any of it.''
** Simon Tam's decision to call the BAU in the first place is ''very'' understandable, since [[spoiler: the concussed Blaine has a lot of gaps in his memory and Alex was specifically a StalkerWithACrush. It's much safer to call the BAU for backup and find out that Blaine didn't get sexually assaulted than to brush off Blaine's semi-coherent ramblings only to find out that he ''was''.]]
** Jeff attempted against-the-wall sex. [[DoNotTryThisAtHome He needed Midol after ten seconds and he nearly dropped the girl twice.]]
** Private schools are ''expensive'', and even with the scholarship, Kurt still can't afford to stay at Dalton.
*** As pointed out by Blaine, Kurt's decision to stay at Dalton or move back to [=McKinley=] is his, and Blaine doesn't really have a right to insist that Kurt stay with him.
** PlayedWith in "The Kingdom." Nick attempts to call Tori through the BatSignal [[spoiler: to get him and Alex out of hiding so they can get arrested (again)]]. The BAU doesn't think much of it and doesn't bring much backup, since [[spoiler: they don't think a notorious FBI rogue would take a needless risk to talk to his son]]. As RefugeInAudacity notes below, they're thrown off when Nick's plan actually WORKS.
*** In the same chapter, Hotch has to point out that while yes, Tori genuinely loves Nick and wants the best for him, ''that doesn't mean he's not a criminal'', so they still have to catch him.
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** Nick in general is a notorious TruthTwister and prone to LoopholeAbuse.

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** Nick in general is a notorious TruthTwister ConsummateLiar and prone to LoopholeAbuse.
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* AnxietyDreams / BadDreams: Blaine (both) and Kurt (the second). Both are symbolic.

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* AnxietyDreams / BadDreams: AnxietyDreams: Blaine (both) and Kurt (the second). Both are symbolic.
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*** In the same chapter, Hotch has to point out that while yes, Tori genuinely loves Nick and wants the best for him, ''that doesn't mean he's not a criminal'', so they still have to catch him.
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* DistractedByTheSexy: Nick gets distracted in his home therapy session by thinking about [[BiTheWay Young Queen Cersei AND Young King Robert.]]

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* DistractedByTheSexy: Nick gets distracted in his home therapy session by thinking about [[BiTheWay Young Queen Cersei AND and Young King Robert.]]
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* ElephantInTheLivingRoom: In-story, Blaine's sheer terror regarding sex. For readers, the warnings about assault and [[spoiler: Blaine's abduction/pursuit by Alex]] are [[CaptainObvious almost certainly connected]].

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* ElephantInTheLivingRoom: In-story, Blaine's sheer terror regarding sex. For readers, the warnings about assault and [[spoiler: Blaine's abduction/pursuit by Alex]] are [[CaptainObvious almost certainly connected]].connected.
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** CloudCuckooLander and troubled background aside, Nick has a pretty strong sense of justice and barely hesitates to [[spoiler: try and lure his criminal father out of hiding so he can get arrested.]] Tori's only [[spoiler: on the wrong side of the law in the first place [[TragicVillain to keep Nick safe]].]]

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** CloudCuckooLander tendencies and troubled background aside, Nick has a pretty strong sense of justice and barely hesitates to [[spoiler: try and lure his criminal father out of hiding so he can get arrested.]] Tori's only [[spoiler: on the wrong side of the law in the first place [[TragicVillain to keep Nick safe]].]]



** Later, we see Blaine get uncomfortable listening to [[Theatre/SpringAwakening "Touch Me"]]. He also takes ''lots'' of [[ShowerOfAngst cold showers]] to deal with his feelings, and he can barely talk about it to anyone.

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** Later, we see Blaine get uncomfortable listening to [[Theatre/SpringAwakening "Touch Me"]]. He also takes ''lots'' of [[ShowerOfAngst cold showers]] to deal with his feelings, and he can barely talk about it to anyone.it.
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** Nick and Tori's specific situation is terrible: Nick got a restraining order on his already-estranged dad because he was afraid about coming out as bisexual, but it turns out Tori [[GoodParents loves Nick to death]] and hated the sudden distance between them. Unfortunately, they both find this out while [[spoiler: Nick is ''trying to get Tori arrested'' for criminal activity,]] which is happening because [[spoiler: Littlefinger is threatening Nick's safety to blackmail Tori.]]

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** Nick and Tori's specific situation is terrible: Nick got a restraining order on his already-estranged dad because he was afraid about coming out as bisexual, but it turns out Tori [[GoodParents loves Nick to death]] and hated the sudden distance between them. Unfortunately, they both find this out while [[spoiler: Nick is ''trying to get Tori arrested'' for criminal activity,]] which is happening because [[spoiler: Littlefinger is threatening Littlefinger's blackmailed Tori with Nick's safety to blackmail Tori.safety.]]

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** In "The Kingdom," we find out Nick got the restraining order because he was terrified that Tori would react badly if Nick told him he was bisexual. Tori is upset that his own son was afraid of him, [[GoodParents hugs him, and says he loves him.]] This actually sends Nick into BerserkerTears because given that his mom kicked him out, [[DramaticIrony he got the restraining order on the wrong parent.]]
** [[spoiler: Littlefinger is blackmailing Tori with Nick's safety to make Tori shelter a kidnapper.]] [[TruthInTelevision Parents have done MANY questionable things to keep their kids safe.]]

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** In "The Kingdom," we find out Nick and Tori's specific situation is terrible: Nick got the restraining order because he was terrified that Tori would react badly if Nick told him he was bisexual. Tori is upset that his own son was afraid of him, [[GoodParents hugs him, and says he loves him.]] This actually sends Nick into BerserkerTears because given that his mom kicked him out, [[DramaticIrony he got the a restraining order on his already-estranged dad because he was afraid about coming out as bisexual, but it turns out Tori [[GoodParents loves Nick to death]] and hated the wrong parent.]]
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sudden distance between them. Unfortunately, they both find this out while [[spoiler: Nick is ''trying to get Tori arrested'' for criminal activity,]] which is happening because [[spoiler: Littlefinger is blackmailing Tori with threatening Nick's safety to make Tori shelter a kidnapper.]] [[TruthInTelevision Parents have done MANY questionable things to keep their kids safe.blackmail Tori.]]
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** In the latest chapter "The Kingdom," we find out Nick got the restraining order because he was terrified that Tori would react badly if Nick told him he was bisexual. Tori is upset that his own son was afraid of him, [[GoodParents hugs him, and says he loves him.]] This actually sends Nick into BerserkerTears because given his mom's reaction, [[DramaticIrony he got the restraining order on the wrong parent.]]
** Speaking of Nick, [[spoiler: Littlefinger is blackmailing Tori with Nick's safety to make Tori shelter a kidnapper.]] [[TruthInTelevision Parents have done MANY questionable things to keep their kids safe.]]

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** In the latest chapter "The Kingdom," we find out Nick got the restraining order because he was terrified that Tori would react badly if Nick told him he was bisexual. Tori is upset that his own son was afraid of him, [[GoodParents hugs him, and says he loves him.]] This actually sends Nick into BerserkerTears because given that his mom's reaction, mom kicked him out, [[DramaticIrony he got the restraining order on the wrong parent.]]
** Speaking of Nick, [[spoiler: Littlefinger is blackmailing Tori with Nick's safety to make Tori shelter a kidnapper.]] [[TruthInTelevision Parents have done MANY questionable things to keep their kids safe.]]



* BreakTheCutie: Obviously Kurt, but Blaine comes ''pre-''broken. And [[FromBadToWorse they're not done yet]].
** [[spoiler: Nick's dad Tori is sheltering Blaine's kidnapper.]] Nick doesn't react well when he finds out in "The Tunnel."

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* BreakTheCutie: Obviously Kurt, but Blaine comes ''pre-''broken. And [[FromBadToWorse they're They're not done yet]].
** [[spoiler: Nick's dad Tori is sheltering Blaine's kidnapper.]] Nick doesn't react take it well when he finds out in "The Tunnel." "
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** In the latest chapter "The Kingdom," we find out Nick got the restraining order because he was terrified that Tori would react badly to finding out he's bisexual. Tori is upset that Nick was afraid of him, [[GoodParents hugs him, and says he loves him,]] which sends Nick into BerserkerTears--given his mom's reaction, [[DramaticIrony he got the restraining order on the wrong parent.]]

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** In the latest chapter "The Kingdom," we find out Nick got the restraining order because he was terrified that Tori would react badly to finding out he's if Nick told him he was bisexual. Tori is upset that Nick his own son was afraid of him, [[GoodParents hugs him, and says he loves him,]] which him.]] This actually sends Nick into BerserkerTears--given BerserkerTears because given his mom's reaction, [[DramaticIrony he got the restraining order on the wrong parent.]]



** In "The Kingdom," Nick finally tells Tori why he got a restraining order on him: He was afraid of coming out and Tori reacting badly, like his mother ended up doing. [[GoodParents Tori tells him that he loves him,]] and Nick's reaction is pretty bad:

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** In "The Kingdom," Nick finally tells Tori why he got a restraining order on him: He was afraid of coming out and Tori reacting badly, like his mother ended up doing. did. [[GoodParents Tori just tells him that he loves him,]] and Nick's reaction is pretty bad:

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** In the latest chapter "The Kingdom," we find out Nick got the restraining order because he was terrified that Tori would react badly to finding out he's bisexual. Not helped by [[RealityEnsues two of his friends suffering a LOT for being openly gay, or by his mother kicking him out.]] [[GoodParents Tori just hugs him and says he loves him,]] which sends Nick into BerserkerTears because given his mom's reaction, [[DramaticIrony he got the restraining order on the wrong parent.]]

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** In the latest chapter "The Kingdom," we find out Nick got the restraining order because he was terrified that Tori would react badly to finding out he's bisexual. Not helped by [[RealityEnsues two Tori is upset that Nick was afraid of his friends suffering a LOT for being openly gay, or by his mother kicking him out.]] him, [[GoodParents Tori just hugs him him, and says he loves him,]] which sends Nick into BerserkerTears because given BerserkerTears--given his mom's reaction, [[DramaticIrony he got the restraining order on the wrong parent.]]


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** Another of Nick's berserk-buttons is [[spoiler: his father.]]
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** Nick gets caught being high and has to go to the police station. When he calls his aunt to come pay the misdemeanor fine, he has to assure her that [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy he's not in Canada.]]

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** Nick gets caught being high and has to go to the police station. When he calls his aunt to come pay the misdemeanor fine, about it, he has to assure her that [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy he's not in Canada.]]
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* MenDontCry: Averted. It's okay for men to cry when they go through as much as [[TheWoobie Kurt]] does. Or if their heart is [[LoveHurts utterly broken]] like Blaine's is.

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* MenDontCry: Averted. It's okay for men to cry when they go through as much as [[TheWoobie Kurt]] the shit that Kurt does. Or if their heart is [[LoveHurts utterly broken]] like Blaine's is.

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** In the latest chapter "The Kingdom," we find out Nick got the restraining order because he was terrified of coming out as bi and having Tori react badly. Not helped by [[RealityEnsues two of his friends suffering a LOT for being openly gay, or by his mother kicking him out.]] [[GoodParents Tori just hugs him and says he loves him,]] which sends Nick into BerserkerTears because given his mother's reaction, [[DramaticIrony he got the restraining order on the wrong parent.]]

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** In the latest chapter "The Kingdom," we find out Nick got the restraining order because he was terrified of coming out as bi and having that Tori would react badly.badly to finding out he's bisexual. Not helped by [[RealityEnsues two of his friends suffering a LOT for being openly gay, or by his mother kicking him out.]] [[GoodParents Tori just hugs him and says he loves him,]] which sends Nick into BerserkerTears because given his mother's mom's reaction, [[DramaticIrony he got the restraining order on the wrong parent.]]



* {{Foreshadowing}}: ''[[FridgeHorror Here is there, and high is low;]] [[DeconstructionFic all may be undone.]] [[UnreliableNarrator What is true, no two men know;]] [[TheReveal what is gone is gone.]]''

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: ''[[FridgeHorror ''[[CerebusRetcon Here is there, and high is low;]] [[DeconstructionFic all may be undone.]] [[UnreliableNarrator What is true, no two men know;]] [[TheReveal [[BreakTheCutie what is gone is gone.]]''



** Nick keeps saying he doesn't care about his dad Tori, but his actions state otherwise.



** Jeff drags Nick by his collar into the bathroom, arguing about when Nick was stoned last year and forgot to straighten something out. The Warblers find no problem with one of their friends manhandling another friend, and immediately start betting that [[ShipperOnDeck one of them said "I love you" while Nick was stoned.]]

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** Jeff drags Nick by his collar into the bathroom, arguing about when Nick was stoned last year and forgot to straighten something out. The Warblers find no problem with one of their friends manhandling another friend, this, and immediately start betting that [[ShipperOnDeck one of them said "I love you" while Nick was stoned.]]
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* FixFic: On Website/LiveJournal, the author says Blaine's CharacterDevelopment could have been similar if RIB hadn't kept pandering to the [[VocalMinority loudest]] [[YaoiFangirl fans]].

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* FixFic: On Website/LiveJournal, the author says Blaine's CharacterDevelopment could have been similar if RIB hadn't kept pandering to the [[VocalMinority loudest]] [[YaoiFangirl loudest fans]].
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* CultureClash / ValuesDissonance: A source of conflict for Blaine, whose mother is old-fashioned.

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