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Also involved is a martian rockster ParodyStu, Carl, who's [[NoCelebritiesWereHarmed a blatant reference to]] CharlieSheen[=/=][[TwoAndAHalfMen Charlie Harper]], the Major crossdressing as a part of a ShowWithinAShow, a giant, mutant Homer Simpson, a giant, non-mutant Creator/DavidHasselhoff, and Rip Van Winkle becoming an overly sexualized MsFanservice.
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Also involved is a martian rockster ParodyStu, Carl, who's [[NoCelebritiesWereHarmed a blatant reference to]] CharlieSheen[=/=][[TwoAndAHalfMen Creator/CharlieSheen[=/=][[Series/TwoAndAHalfMen Charlie Harper]], the Major crossdressing as a part of a ShowWithinAShow, a giant, mutant Homer Simpson, a giant, non-mutant Creator/DavidHasselhoff, and Rip Van Winkle becoming an overly sexualized MsFanservice.
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Elaborating on What Happened To The Mouse (Not the ACTUAL what happened to them (you\'ll have to wait for later on in HHC for that), but the trope entry and why they fit.)
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse What happened to Dracula? Or Chief Wiggim?
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse What happened WhatHappenedToTheMouse
** {{Dracula}} is one of the very few characters left completely unnacounted for: He appears only once in a flashback explaining how Alucard became the way he is in the story, and as that was a flashback toDracula? Or Chief Wiggim?World War I it's not really known if he's even still alive in 2011, much less [[DistantFinale 2041]].
** Cheif Wiggim appears at the end of chapter 8 to arrest Integra as well as Seras and Rip (who were riding with her at the time) for speeding, however he never appears in the court room itself or gets a nod in the epilogue. Even what happens to him after he presumably sends the three to the court (which is paradoxically [[FridgeLogic in anot]][[InvokedTrope her country]]) is unknown, since him taking them to the court not only happens off screen, but in between chapters. This is weirder because he makes a re-appearance in ''Housestuck Hurrcain Crconikals'', although it's days before where he would appear in HUC.
** {{Dracula}} is one of the very few characters left completely unnacounted for: He appears only once in a flashback explaining how Alucard became the way he is in the story, and as that was a flashback to
** Cheif Wiggim appears at the end of chapter 8 to arrest Integra as well as Seras and Rip (who were riding with her at the time) for speeding, however he never appears in the court room itself or gets a nod in the epilogue. Even what happens to him after he presumably sends the three to the court (which is paradoxically [[FridgeLogic in anot]][[InvokedTrope her country]]) is unknown, since him taking them to the court not only happens off screen, but in between chapters. This is weirder because he makes a re-appearance in ''Housestuck Hurrcain Crconikals'', although it's days before where he would appear in HUC.
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Oh, right, Time Skip is for when it happens in the middle. Distant Finale is for when it happens in the end. And I already have distant finale on here.
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A semi-sequel, ''FanFic/HousestuckHurrcainCrconikals'', was released on the annaversary of HUC's first chapter. It takes place in the same universe as HUC, and focuses on the ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' characters, as well as elaborating a little more on the rest of the chapter 9 jury and the world in general. There is also an upcoming sort of {{Crossover}}, ''Carl Stevens Universe'', where the members of Hecksing who survived in HUC ([[spoiler:Carl, Seras, Rip, and the Captain]]) get into a bit of a quarrel with the [[WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse Crystal Gems.]]
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A semi-sequel, ''FanFic/HousestuckHurrcainCrconikals'', was released on the annaversary of HUC's first chapter. It takes place in the same universe as HUC, and focuses on the ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' characters, as well as elaborating a little more on the rest of the chapter 9 jury and the world in general. There is also an upcoming sort of {{Crossover}}, ''Carl Stevens Universe'', where the members of Hecksing who survived in HUC ([[spoiler:Carl, Seras, Rip, and the Captain]]) get into a bit of a quarrel with the [[WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse Crystal Gems.]]
]] According to the author, the rough draft of that story is already finished, though when the final draft is out is anyone's guess.
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* [[spoiler:UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler: It's a badfic of a series with Nazis as the main villain. Him being the BiggerBad is kind of a given]].
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* [[spoiler:UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler: It's a badfic of a series with Nazis as the main villain. Him being the BiggerBad is kind of a given]].given.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: The number of important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barely, though.[[note]]Carl, Seras, Rip, Quimby, and technically the Captain.[[/note]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: The number of important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barely, though.[[note]]Carl, [[labelnote:Spoilers, obviously]]Carl, Seras, Rip, Quimby, and technically the Captain.[[/note]][[/labelnote]]
* ArtifactTitle: The pun of "Hellsing Ultimate" stops making sense after chapter 7. The following chapters not only do ''not'' corrspond to an OVA, but also go off on a completely different storyline.
** NonIndicativeName: The "Hecksing"/"Hellsing" part, however, never makes much sense in the first place. Alucard's back story and the Hellsing family is ''gone'' -- '''including''' Integra actually encountering Alucard in the first place, which is replacted with a simple CrashIntoHello. And, as you can imagine, Van Helsing has absolutely nothing to do with this story in any way whatsoever. Integra's last name, changed or not, is pretty much the only reason why this story is named the way it is. [[spoiler:And even then she dies off in chapter 9.]]
* ArtifactTitle: The pun of "Hellsing Ultimate" stops making sense after chapter 7. The following chapters not only do ''not'' corrspond to an OVA, but also go off on a completely different storyline.
** NonIndicativeName: The "Hecksing"/"Hellsing" part, however, never makes much sense in the first place. Alucard's back story and the Hellsing family is ''gone'' -- '''including''' Integra actually encountering Alucard in the first place, which is replacted with a simple CrashIntoHello. And, as you can imagine, Van Helsing has absolutely nothing to do with this story in any way whatsoever. Integra's last name, changed or not, is pretty much the only reason why this story is named the way it is. [[spoiler:And even then she dies off in chapter 9.]]
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*** Also, when he dies, he says two quotes from ''TheSimpsonsHitAndRun'' before dieing.
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** [[MyImmortal "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOIN IN MY BER MOTHERFUCKERS?" It was... Integra!]]
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** Alucard and Seras are, at one point, refered to as [[WesternAnimation/TotalDrama "Sierra and Alejandro."]] Alucard later on sings a ripoff of ''This is How we Will end it'' in his battle with Jan.
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** Alucard and Seras are, at one point, refered to as [[WesternAnimation/TotalDrama "Sierra and Alejandro."]] Alucard later on sings a ripoff of ''This is How we Will end End it'' in his battle with Jan.
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** There are a few refrences to ''Film/UndercoverBrother'', such as Rip taking the role of White She Devil during the end of chapter 7. This is especially notable in the cover art, which serves as the picture for this very page. [[ContinuityNod And Rip is in the place of White She-Devil]].
** [[SnakesOnAPlane "ENOF IS ENOF! I HAVE HAD IT WITH THESE MEDDLING HECKSINGS, AND THAT STUPID INTEGRA!"]]
** [[SnakesOnAPlane "ENOF IS ENOF! I HAVE HAD IT WITH THESE MEDDLING HECKSINGS, AND THAT STUPID INTEGRA!"]]
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** There are a few refrences references to ''Film/UndercoverBrother'', such as Rip taking the role of White She Devil during the end of chapter 7. This is especially notable in the cover art, which serves as the picture for this very page. [[ContinuityNod And Rip is in the place of White She-Devil]].
**[[SnakesOnAPlane [[Film/SnakesOnAPlane "ENOF IS ENOF! I HAVE HAD IT WITH THESE MEDDLING HECKSINGS, AND THAT STUPID INTEGRA!"]]
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* TimeSkip: Chapter 13 takes place 30 years in the future.
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** [[spoiler:Alucard, after killing "First Boss," Anderson, Luke, Card Guy, and singing a brief musical number about it, getting blown up by Jan, killing him off for real. [[ParodySue Carl]] later manages to take Jan out with next to no effort, though]].
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** [[spoiler:Alucard, after killing "First Boss," Anderson, Luke, Card Guy, and singing a brief musical number about it, getting blown up by Jan, killing him off for real. [[ParodySue Carl]] later manages to take Jan out with next to no effort, though]].effort though.]]
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** [[spoiler:Integra "I can stand in front of a colossal mutant Homer Simpson without fear (until discovering that I didn't bring any anti-mutant ammo)" Heck getting stabbed through the back by Lawyer Guy and dying]].
** [[spoiler:Kamina having his life force drained by Hitler]].
** [[spoiler:Kamina having his life force drained by Hitler]].
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** [[spoiler:Integra "I can stand in front of a colossal mutant Homer Simpson without fear (until discovering that I didn't bring any anti-mutant ammo)" Heck getting stabbed through the back by Lawyer Guy and dying]].
dying.]]
** [[spoiler:Kamina having his life force drained byHitler]].Hitler.]]
** [[spoiler:Kamina having his life force drained by
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A semi-sequel, ''FanFic/HousestuckHurrcainCrconikals'', was released on the annaversary of HUC's first chapter. It takes place in the same universe as HUC, and focuses on the ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' characters, as well as elaborating a little more on the rest of the chapter 9 jury and the world in general.
general. There is also an upcoming sort of {{Crossover}}, ''Carl Stevens Universe'', where the members of Hecksing who survived in HUC ([[spoiler:Carl, Seras, Rip, and the Captain]]) get into a bit of a quarrel with the [[WesternAnimation/StevenUniverse Crystal Gems.]]
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It isn\'t until I think about it that I find how weird \"United Kingdoms of London\" sounds.
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* BritainIsOnlyLondon: Parodied. The country is called "The United Kingdoms of London."
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This is probably one of the weirdest PTDs out there.
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* PlotTriggeringDeath: Flanders' death. After that, the spell over the United Kingdoms of London goes down, letting the Millennium invade, kick starting the plot for the majority of the story. To a lesser extent, Anderson's as well, as his death leads to Flanders hanging himself.
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* {{Expy}}: Alucard (and later, Carl) of [[FanFic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences John Freeman]]. Complete with having a vehicle where it shouldn't be (in Al's case, a tank).
* EverybodyLaughsEnding: Except for the main characters, [[spoiler:as ''they'' are what's being laughed at because they forgot clothes]].
* {{Expy}}: Alucard (and later, Carl) of [[FanFic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences John Freeman]]. Complete with having a vehicle where it shouldn't be (in Al's case, a tank).
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* InterfaceSpoiler: The title of chapter 12 reveals that [[spoiler:Hitler will be fought at some point]]. It doesn't say that he's the BigBad, but considering how his identity was kept secret until the end of chapter 11 it's still something of a big deal. It's also hard to notice unless the reader doesn't use the trop down menu to navigate chapters.
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* InterfaceSpoiler: The title of chapter 12 reveals that [[spoiler:Hitler will be fought at some point]]. It doesn't say that he's the BigBad, but considering how his identity was kept secret until the end of chapter 11 it's still something of a big deal. It's also hard to notice unless the reader doesn't use the trop drop down menu to navigate chapters.
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** Carl's route near the end of chapter 8 deserves special mention. He and the Master Chief are chasing a flying werewolf carrying the president, and eventually [[spoiler:the Chief shoots said werewolf casually]]. Then a giant David Hasselhoff comes out of ''nowhere'' to give them a ride back to London, and on this ride [[spoiler:they are attacked by Jan, who has a robotic arm with rocket jets and poison swords]].
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** Carl's route near the end of chapter 8 deserves special mention. He and the Master Chief are chasing a flying werewolf carrying the president, and eventually [[spoiler:the Chief shoots said werewolf casually]]. Then a giant David Hasselhoff comes out of ''nowhere'' to give them a ride back to London, and on this ride [[spoiler:they are attacked by Jan, who has a robotic arm with rocket jets and poison swords]].swords. By the way, Jan uses said robo-arm to lift off a quarter of a blown up aircraft carrier]].
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* ViewerGenderConfusion: In-universe in chapter 9:
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* ViewerGenderConfusion: In-universe in chapter 9:9, which is weird because the character in question is heavily implied to have a more feminine redesign, and was at the time wearing a (presumably) still see-through shirt and thong that should be small enough to rid any ambiguity:
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I very recently slightly claimed that Homestuck doesn\'t count for Kill Em All (the fact that it\'s not even over with yet seriously helping), and I don\'t want to look like a hypocrite.
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]][[note]][[Characters/MillenniumNazis Rip's]] to the left, [[Characters/HellsingOrganization Seras]] is to the right. It's not stated outright, but it's implied that that's [[ParodySue Carl]] in the center.[[/note]]]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Unless [[spoiler:either your name is Carl or you have "nice boos."]] Although this is kind of appropriate, [[spoiler:the self-insert parody and two of his three girlfriends survive]]. Though if you count becoming a vampire/familiar as a death, then ''every major character'' has died at one point in the story.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Unless [[spoiler:either your name is Carl or you have "nice boos."]] Although this is kind The number of appropriate, [[spoiler:the self-insert parody important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barely, though.[[note]]Carl, Seras, Rip, Quimby, and two of his three girlfriends survive]]. Though if you count becoming a vampire/familiar as a death, then ''every major character'' has died at one point in technically the story.Captain.[[/note]]
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* CrackFic: AdolfHitler as a life-draining snakeman who can summon minions from four different Hells! Alucard flying around in a tank with rocket boosters! A Martian expy of Charlie Harper having to deal with an evil liquid metal lawyer with his partners, a former Nazi opera fan and a tsundere-with-little-dere cop girl! Said Charlie expy and the Master Chief who is really Kamina saving Quimby from the ''Simpsons'' by riding on a giant David Hasselhoff! The list goes on...
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* CrackFic: AdolfHitler as a life-draining snakeman who can summon minions from four different Hells! Alucard flying around in a tank with rocket boosters! A Martian expy of Charlie Harper having to deal with an evil liquid metal lawyer with his partners, a former Nazi opera fan and a tsundere-with-little-dere cop girl! Said Charlie expy and the Master Chief who is really Kamina [[spoiler:Kamina]] saving Quimby from the ''Simpsons'' by riding on a giant David Hasselhoff! The list goes on...
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Carl and Seras.
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* DistantFinale: Takes place 30 years in the future. Likely inspired by ''Hellsing''[='=]s own.
* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Carl and Seras. Though subverted as it's implied that Carl treats her (and Rip, if the flashback at the beginning of chapter 9 is anything to go by) like crap and at one point even rips off her skirt in public for no reason.
* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Carl and Seras. Though subverted as it's implied that Carl treats her (and Rip, if the flashback at the beginning of chapter 9 is anything to go by) like crap and at one point even rips off her skirt in public for no reason.
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* KillEmAll: The number of important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barely, though.[[note]]Carl, Seras, Rip, Quimby, and technically the Captain.[[/note]]
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* RatedMForManly: Just about everything after [[spoiler:Alucard's death]], where the fan fic pretty much stops pretending it has a plot and turns into "Let's kill the Nazis!" Carl especially is a bad offender. To a lesser extent, the stuff Alucard does could count as well.
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* RatedMForManly: RatedMForManly:
** Just about everything after [[spoiler:Alucard's death]], where the fan fic pretty much stops pretending it has a plot and turns into "Let's kill the Nazis!" Carl especially is a badoffender. offender.
** Carl's route near the end of chapter 8 deserves special mention. He and the Master Chief are chasing a flying werewolf carrying the president, and eventually [[spoiler:the Chief shoots said werewolf casually]]. Then a giant David Hasselhoff comes out of ''nowhere'' to give them a ride back to London, and on this ride [[spoiler:they are attacked by Jan, who has a robotic arm with rocket jets and poison swords]].
** To a lesser extent, the stuff Alucard does could count as well.
** Just about everything after [[spoiler:Alucard's death]], where the fan fic pretty much stops pretending it has a plot and turns into "Let's kill the Nazis!" Carl especially is a bad
** Carl's route near the end of chapter 8 deserves special mention. He and the Master Chief are chasing a flying werewolf carrying the president, and eventually [[spoiler:the Chief shoots said werewolf casually]]. Then a giant David Hasselhoff comes out of ''nowhere'' to give them a ride back to London, and on this ride [[spoiler:they are attacked by Jan, who has a robotic arm with rocket jets and poison swords]].
** To a lesser extent, the stuff Alucard does could count as well.
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* [[spoiler:AdolphHitler: It's a badfic of a series with Nazis as the main villain. Him being the BiggerBad is kind of a given.]]
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* [[spoiler:AdolphHitler: It's a badfic of a series with Nazis as the main villain. Him being the BiggerBad is kind of a given.]]given]].
* CharacterizationMarchesOn: The entire first season barely had any consistency with its characters compared to how they would be later on. Seras was actually rational at first, Carl was more of a perverted asshole and way more GenreSavvy than the other characters, and Rip acted like an idiot (which makes less sense considering how she acts as a sane, intelligent guide to Seras in chapter 8).
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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[Webcomic/SweetJadeAndHellaJohn It is mentioned in the epilogue's intermission that John Egbert gets a female clone of himself in a lab accident named Jean. Jade also has a clone named Jude.]] SJAHJ was in the middle of Intermission Act Two at the time of this chapter, back when the counterparts (of which Jean and Jude are) were barley hinted at.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[Webcomic/SweetJadeAndHellaJohn It is mentioned in the epilogue's intermission that John Egbert gets a female clone of himself in a lab accident named Jean. Jade also has a clone named Jude.]] SJAHJ was in the middle of Intermission Act Two at the time of this chapter, back when the counterparts (of which Jean and Jude are) were barley barely hinted at.
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** Chapter 5 has Integra's flashback (which is actually from Alucard's perspective for the most part), where it says that Alucard's older brother [[spoiler:Hitler]] wanted to "manhood" him when he turned old enough. It's supposed to mean something along the lines of "put him through family tradition and make him become a villain," but the way it was written just sounds... well... like [[BrotherSisterIncest something else]].
* FullFrontalAssault: [[spoiler:Carl, Rip, and Seras end up doing this ''accidentally'' in the final chapter. Quimby points out that they basically went into battle while forgetting to put clothes on first.]]
* FullFrontalAssault: [[spoiler:Carl, Rip, and Seras end up doing this ''accidentally'' in the final chapter. Quimby points out that they basically went into battle while forgetting to put clothes on first.]]
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** Chapter 5 has Integra's flashback (which is actually from Alucard's perspective for the most part), where it says that Alucard's older brother [[spoiler:Hitler]] wanted to "manhood" him when he turned old enough. It's supposed to mean something along the lines of "put him through family tradition and make him become a villain," but the way it was written just sounds... well... like [[BrotherSisterIncest something else]].
else.]]
* FullFrontalAssault: [[spoiler:Carl, Rip, and Seras end up doing this ''accidentally'' in the final chapter. Quimby points out that they basically went into battle while forgetting to put clothes onfirst.]]first]].
* FullFrontalAssault: [[spoiler:Carl, Rip, and Seras end up doing this ''accidentally'' in the final chapter. Quimby points out that they basically went into battle while forgetting to put clothes on
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** Giant Mutant Homer Simpson. Literally only serves as someone for Master Chief to kill so that Integra can hire them as Alucard's replacement.
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** Giant Mutant Homer Simpson. Literally only serves as someone for Master Chief to kill so that Integra can hire them as Alucard's replacement. [[spoiler:That is, beofre his story was elaborated in in ''Housestuck'']].
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* KillEmAll: The number of important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barley, though.[[note]]Carl, Seras, Rip, Quimby, and technically the Captain[[/note]]
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* KillEmAll: The number of important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barley, Barely, though.[[note]]Carl, Seras, Rip, Quimby, and technically the Captain[[/note]]Captain.[[/note]]
* SensibleHeroesSkimpyVillains: Compare Seras to Rip. Before the latter joins ''Hecksing'', then it's pretty much even, if not ''inverted'' considering how Seras (and Rip and Carl) have been naked at least twice throughout the story.
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** The David Hasselhoff ride is a blatant reference to the ''TheSpongebobSquarepantsMovie''.
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** Alucard vs Luke is a reference to ''KungFuHustle''.
** Alucard and Seras are, at one point, refered to as [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland "Sierra and Alejandro."]] Alucard later on sings a ripoff of ''This is How we Will end it'' in his battle with Jan.
** Alucard and Seras are, at one point, refered to as [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland "Sierra and Alejandro."]] Alucard later on sings a ripoff of ''This is How we Will end it'' in his battle with Jan.
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** Alucard vs Luke is a reference to ''KungFuHustle''.
''Film/KungFuHustle''.
** Alucard and Seras are, at one point, refered to as[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland [[WesternAnimation/TotalDrama "Sierra and Alejandro."]] Alucard later on sings a ripoff of ''This is How we Will end it'' in his battle with Jan.
** Alucard and Seras are, at one point, refered to as
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** There are a few refrences to ''UndercoverBrother'', such as Rip taking the role of White She Devil during the end of chapter 7.
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** There are a few refrences to ''UndercoverBrother'', ''Film/UndercoverBrother'', such as Rip taking the role of White She Devil during the end of chapter 7.7. This is especially notable in the cover art, which serves as the picture for this very page. [[ContinuityNod And Rip is in the place of White She-Devil]].
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* ShowWithinAShow: A few, three of them have been seen within the fic. The first is ''WesternAnimation/RenAndStimpy''. The second is a StylisticSuck (yes, even compared to HUC) series made by the Millennium. The third is one by [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} John Egbert and Jade Harley]][[labelnote:Note]]No, Rose and Dave do not appear or even get mention at all in this fan fic, but they, the trolls, and the Felt are in ''Housestuck Hurrcain Crconikals''.[[/labelnote]] and is losley based off of their respective interests. (And ''EdEddNEddyTheMisEdventures''.) Also, one of Pikmin Fan's [[FanFic/TotalFanServiceSeries other fan fics]] is also a series, but it was not seen as the clip of it wasn't ready yet.
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* ShowWithinAShow: A few, three of them have been seen within the fic. The first is ''WesternAnimation/RenAndStimpy''. The second is a StylisticSuck (yes, even compared to HUC) series made by the Millennium. The third is one by [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} John Egbert and Jade Harley]][[labelnote:Note]]No, Rose and Dave do not appear or even get mention at all in this fan fic, but they, the trolls, and the Felt are in ''Housestuck Hurrcain Crconikals''.[[/labelnote]] and is losley loosely based off of their respective interests. (And ''EdEddNEddyTheMisEdventures''.''VideoGame/EdEddNEddyTheMisEdventures''.) Also, one of Pikmin Fan's [[FanFic/TotalFanServiceSeries [[FanFic/TotalZeksmitSeries other fan fics]] is also a series, but it was not seen as the clip of it wasn't ready yet.
* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: Chapter 9 sticks out like a sore thumb from the rest of the series, being the only chapter that is neither the beginning nor the epilogue that's focused on a villain ''not'' part of the Millennium. In fact, Rip is the only (ex-)member of the group to ''appear'', which is noteworthy considering how the previous chapter was about breaking into their base and even ended with Carl fending off against [[spoiler:Jan again]]. It's also probably the most side-character heavy chapter aside from the epilogue. WordOfGod said that he liked the latter attribute, and stylized ''Housestuck''[='=]s story flow so that most of it would have the same "sidequest" based plotlines as that.
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* TeenyWeenie: Carl, albeit through a "mistake" in the writting. His penis can be "censored" by a ''small'' laptop.
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* TeenyWeenie: Carl, albeit through a "mistake" in the writting.writing. His penis can be "censored" by a ''small'' laptop.
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Eh, getting rid of some redundancy.
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* RatedMForManly: Pretty much everything after [[spoiler:Alucard's death]], where the fan fic pretty much stops pretending it has a plot and turns into "Let's kill the Nazis!" Carl especially is a bad offender. To a lesser extent, the stuff Alucard does could count as well.
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* RatedMForManly: Pretty much Just about everything after [[spoiler:Alucard's death]], where the fan fic pretty much stops pretending it has a plot and turns into "Let's kill the Nazis!" Carl especially is a bad offender. To a lesser extent, the stuff Alucard does could count as well.
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Because HUC is one giant parody, I don\'t quite know if it fits as Rated M For Manly or Testosterone Poisoning. On one hand, it\'s not really treated seriously. On the other hand... let\'s just say Carl\'s testosterone levels are low.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles''; not ''Hellsing'') is the third installment to the ''[[FanFic/SBIGSeries SBIG]]'' series by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first one longer than a one-shot to be completed.[[note]]Also of note, ''Zombie Attack!'', the work before HUC, ended on a CliffHanger[[/note]] Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of the original canon of ''Manga/{{Hellsing}} at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles''; not ''Hellsing'') is the third installment to entry the StylisticSuck ''[[FanFic/SBIGSeries SBIG]]'' series by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first one longer than a one-shot to be completed.[[note]]Also of note, ''Zombie Attack!'', the work before HUC, ended on a CliffHanger[[/note]] Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of the original canon of ''Manga/{{Hellsing}} at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
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* RatedMForManly: Pretty much everything after [[spoiler:Alucard's death]], where the fan fic pretty much stops pretending it has a plot and turns into "Let's kill the Nazis!" Carl especially is a bad offender. To a lesser extent, the stuff Alucard does could count as well.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapters only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in the aformentioned chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue. Except Dracula.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The first four chapters only have the absolute central characters, but then side-characters such as Dracula, Homer Simpson, David Hasselhoff, and the jury in chapter 9 are introduced. Ed, Eddy, and Sonic of the jury even play a role in the aformentioned chapter (providing Hecksing with some rides), and all of them get a mention in the epilogue. Except Dracula.Dracula and Wiggim.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse What happened to Dracula?
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse What happened to Dracula?Dracula? Or Chief Wiggim?
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** Carl's name. Carl is based on Charlie Sheen or -- his real name -- '''Carl'''os Irwin E'''stéve'''z.
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** Carl's Carl Steven's name. Carl is based on Charlie Sheen or -- his real name -- '''Carl'''os Irwin E'''stéve'''z.
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I can\'t believe it took me over two years after this fic came out before I confirmed this. I also can\'t believe this has been out for two years.
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* StealthPun: In chapter 7, Zorin attempts to look into Carl's memories, but gets {{Squick}}ed out by all the sex. [[spoiler:She borrowed Carl's brains and was like, "Dude, can't handle it! Unplug this bastard!"]]
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* StealthPun: StealthPun:
** In chapter 7, Zorin attempts to look into Carl's memories, but gets {{Squick}}ed out by all the sex. [[spoiler:She borrowed Carl's brains and was like, "Dude, can't handle it! Unplug thisbastard!"]]bastard!"]]
** Carl's name. Carl is based on Charlie Sheen or -- his real name -- '''Carl'''os Irwin E'''stéve'''z.
** In chapter 7, Zorin attempts to look into Carl's memories, but gets {{Squick}}ed out by all the sex. [[spoiler:She borrowed Carl's brains and was like, "Dude, can't handle it! Unplug this
** Carl's name. Carl is based on Charlie Sheen or -- his real name -- '''Carl'''os Irwin E'''stéve'''z.
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I\'m re-reading this for fun, and I came across an innacuracy. Anyway, Seras\'s new knowledge is used on RIP, not Zorin.
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** Zorin is, according to Seras's new "vampire knowledge," one of the more elite members of the Millennium. After Walter [[spoiler:reveals himself as a traitor]] and [[spoiler:Zorin joins Hecksing]], during their fight Walter manages to effortlessly kill Zorin by ''seeing past her illusions simply by consentrating'' (illusions being Zorin's main special ability) and takes her out in one hit.
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** Zorin is, according to Seras's new "vampire knowledge," Integra, one of the more elite members of the Millennium. After Walter [[spoiler:reveals himself as a traitor]] and [[spoiler:Zorin joins Hecksing]], during their fight Walter manages to effortlessly kill Zorin by ''seeing past her illusions simply by consentrating'' (illusions being Zorin's main special ability) and takes her out in one hit.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: The first season didn't have as concrete characterization and holds record for being the closest Pikmin Fan ever came to playing TheStationsOfTheCanon straight. The latter is weird seeing how the author would later go on to say things like "Don't rehash canon." The central characters were also vastly different; Seras didn't have her hot-temper established until later on, and Rip wasn't even in the story until chapter 4. In short, the fact that Seras is the ''only'' character with perfect attendance in appearing in every chapter really says something.
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* WhamEpisode: Parodied with chapter 4. It's even titled "A Shocking Twist!"
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* WhamEpisode: Parodied (and played straight, being the first time in the fan fic that the story ''truely'' derails and involving [[spoiler:the death of Alucard]]) with chapter 4. It's even titled "A Shocking Twist!"
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* TheWorfEffect: Numerous examples, including pretty much every time a hero dies:
** Tucalcain "Dandy"/"Card Guy" Alhambra's cards blocking all of Alucard's bullets. Because in this fic, [[BadassDecay Alucard can apparantly only shoot things and lacks most of his other abilities,]] this makes their battle a stalemate... until Carl's sonic wave guitar blows the cards away with wind ''and'' kills Card Guy.
** [[spoiler:Alucard, after killing "First Boss," Anderson, Luke, Card Guy, and singing a brief musical number about it, getting blown up by Jan, killing him off for real. [[ParodySue Carl]] later manages to take Jan out with next to no effort, though]].
** Zorin is, according to Seras's new "vampire knowledge," one of the more elite members of the Millennium. After Walter [[spoiler:reveals himself as a traitor]] and [[spoiler:Zorin joins Hecksing]], during their fight Walter manages to effortlessly kill Zorin by ''seeing past her illusions simply by consentrating'' (illusions being Zorin's main special ability) and takes her out in one hit.
** [[spoiler:Integra "I can stand in front of a colossal mutant Homer Simpson without fear (until discovering that I didn't bring any anti-mutant ammo)" Heck getting stabbed through the back by Lawyer Guy and dying]].
** [[spoiler:Kamina having his life force drained by Hitler]].
** Tucalcain "Dandy"/"Card Guy" Alhambra's cards blocking all of Alucard's bullets. Because in this fic, [[BadassDecay Alucard can apparantly only shoot things and lacks most of his other abilities,]] this makes their battle a stalemate... until Carl's sonic wave guitar blows the cards away with wind ''and'' kills Card Guy.
** [[spoiler:Alucard, after killing "First Boss," Anderson, Luke, Card Guy, and singing a brief musical number about it, getting blown up by Jan, killing him off for real. [[ParodySue Carl]] later manages to take Jan out with next to no effort, though]].
** Zorin is, according to Seras's new "vampire knowledge," one of the more elite members of the Millennium. After Walter [[spoiler:reveals himself as a traitor]] and [[spoiler:Zorin joins Hecksing]], during their fight Walter manages to effortlessly kill Zorin by ''seeing past her illusions simply by consentrating'' (illusions being Zorin's main special ability) and takes her out in one hit.
** [[spoiler:Integra "I can stand in front of a colossal mutant Homer Simpson without fear (until discovering that I didn't bring any anti-mutant ammo)" Heck getting stabbed through the back by Lawyer Guy and dying]].
** [[spoiler:Kamina having his life force drained by Hitler]].
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\"Appearantly\" GAAAAAH. I swear if I Google that mispelling my own userpage would be the first result.
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* AuthorAppeal: Great Pikmin Fan likes ''Total Drama'', ''Homestuck'' (starting after he published chapter 4), and as his username implies ''Pikmin''. Let's just leave it at that. Pikmin Fan also appearantly doesn't like modern ''Simpsons'', openly mocking it in one of the first lines of the fan fic and [[spoiler:killing or near-killing (in Quimby's case) every character from that series to appear except Wiggim]]. The sexual variant of this trope is parodied with Rip.
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* AuthorAppeal: Great Pikmin Fan likes ''Total Drama'', ''Homestuck'' (starting after he published chapter 4), and as his username implies ''Pikmin''. Let's just leave it at that. Pikmin Fan also appearantly apparantly doesn't like modern ''Simpsons'', openly mocking it in one of the first lines of the fan fic and [[spoiler:killing or near-killing (in Quimby's case) every character from that series to appear except Wiggim]]. The sexual variant of this trope is parodied with Rip.
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* HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood: Chapter 5 reveals that young Alucard was appearantly [[spoiler:punched so hard by his older brother that he ''flew across an ocean''. To add insult to injury, said older brother causes his phone to explode]].
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* HilariouslyAbusiveChildhood: Chapter 5 reveals that young Alucard was appearantly apparantly [[spoiler:punched so hard by his older brother that he ''flew across an ocean''. To add insult to injury, said older brother causes his phone to explode]].
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* AerithAndBob: Hecksing consists of, at one point or another, Integra, Seras, Alucard, Rip, Zorin, Kamina, and... ''Carl''.
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* AerithAndBob: Hecksing consists of, at one point or another, Integra, Seras, Alucard, Rip, Zorin, Kamina, [[spoiler:Kamina]], and... ''Carl''. And this is especially weird because Carl is a Martian, and thus ''the'' most exotic member of Hecksing by an entire planet.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles''; not ''Hellsing'') is the third installment to the ''SBIG'' series by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first one longer than a one-shot to be completed.[[note]]Also of note, ''Zombie Attack!'', the work before HUC, ended on a CliffHanger[[/note]] Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of the original canon of ''Manga/{{Hellsing}} at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles''; not ''Hellsing'') is the third installment to the ''SBIG'' ''[[FanFic/SBIGSeries SBIG]]'' series by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first one longer than a one-shot to be completed.[[note]]Also of note, ''Zombie Attack!'', the work before HUC, ended on a CliffHanger[[/note]] Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of the original canon of ''Manga/{{Hellsing}} at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
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You see why the English language annoys me sometimes?
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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: Invoked. England is reffered to as the "United Kingdoms of London," and in early chapter 8 (it changes and gets ret-conned mid-chapter, oddly) the author belives that the Grand Canyon was a part of Germany.
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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: Invoked. England is reffered referred to as the "United Kingdoms of London," and in early chapter 8 (it changes and gets ret-conned mid-chapter, oddly) the author belives that the Grand Canyon was a part of Germany.
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** Within the first set of chapters, [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Noah]] is reffered to as being "from a different anime" twice. This gag seems to have been abandoned until the very last line before the closing AN.
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** Within the first set of chapters, [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Noah]] is reffered referred to as being "from a different anime" twice. This gag seems to have been abandoned until the very last line before the closing AN.
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** Section DCLXVI (problems with a ''Catholic military group'' naming themselfs after the NumberOfTheBeast aside)'s units being reffered to as the KKK.
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** Section DCLXVI (problems with a ''Catholic military group'' naming themselfs after the NumberOfTheBeast aside)'s units being reffered referred to as the KKK.
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* DiskOneFinalBoss: [[spoiler:Alexander Anderson. He's reffered to as the "final boss of the fan fic," even though there's the entire Millennium before reaching there.]]
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* DiskOneFinalBoss: [[spoiler:Alexander Anderson. He's reffered referred to as the "final boss of the fan fic," even though there's the entire Millennium before reaching there.]]
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Tubalcain Alhambra is only reffered to as "Card Guy" throughout the entire fan fic. This is presumably because of his name being difficult to spell. Also, Schrodinger is reffered to as "Catboy" from the ending to chapter seven onwards. Then there's Lawyer Guy, who is an OriginalCharacter who's name is never revealed. ([[spoiler:He might not even have a name, due to being a robot.]]) Oddly, "Major" is just called "Leader" until he is properly revealed, but this sudden "name reveal" means absolutley nothing, especially since in canon he's seen as early as the second OVA.
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Tubalcain Alhambra is only reffered referred to as "Card Guy" throughout the entire fan fic. This is presumably because of his name being difficult to spell. Also, Schrodinger is reffered referred to as "Catboy" from the ending to chapter seven onwards. Then there's Lawyer Guy, who is an OriginalCharacter who's name is never revealed. ([[spoiler:He might not even have a name, due to being a robot.]]) Oddly, "Major" is just called "Leader" until he is properly revealed, but this sudden "name reveal" means absolutley nothing, especially since in canon he's seen as early as the second OVA.
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* IAmNotShazam: Invoked. [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo]] is reffered to as "Bleech."
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* IAmNotShazam: Invoked. [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Ichigo]] is reffered referred to as "Bleech."
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* SelfDeprecation: The last chapter pokes fun at the author's own slow update rates; [[FanFic/TotalZeksmitSeries one of his fan fics]] (going by its former title), which in the [=HUCverse=] appears to be a show, is nominated, but the clip consists of "clip not ready yet" on a black screen.[[labelnote:Note]]For reffrence, that mentioned chapter in question (chapter 4) ''was'' published on fanfiction.net, but [[DevelopmentHell there was a whopping space of over seven months between it and the last chapter, three of which were after this chapter of HUC was published.]][[/labelnote]]
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* SelfDeprecation: The last chapter pokes fun at the author's own slow update rates; [[FanFic/TotalZeksmitSeries one of his fan fics]] (going by its former title), which in the [=HUCverse=] appears to be a show, is nominated, but the clip consists of "clip not ready yet" on a black screen.[[labelnote:Note]]For reffrence, reference, that mentioned chapter in question (chapter 4) ''was'' published on fanfiction.net, but [[DevelopmentHell there was a whopping space of over seven months between it and the last chapter, three of which were after this chapter of HUC was published.]][[/labelnote]]
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** "I WILL VENGE YOU BRO!" Al shooted to [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} skaia.]] Among many, many others (to the point where Rip avoids making a mention and actually says the author can "suck it..." only to make a reffrence in the last chapter when she calls Captain "good dog, best friend").
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** "I WILL VENGE YOU BRO!" Al shooted to [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} skaia.]] Among many, many others (to the point where Rip avoids making a mention and actually says the author can "suck it..." only to make a reffrence refrence in the last chapter when she calls Captain "good dog, best friend").
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** The David Hasselhoff ride is a blatant refference to the ''TheSpongebobSquarepantsMovie''.
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** Alucard vs Luke is a refference to ''KungFuHustle''.
** Alucard and Seras are, at one point, reffered to as [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland "Sierra and Alejandro."]] Alucard later on sings a ripoff of ''This is How we Will end it'' in his battle with Jan.
** Alucard and Seras are, at one point, reffered to as [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland "Sierra and Alejandro."]] Alucard later on sings a ripoff of ''This is How we Will end it'' in his battle with Jan.
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** Alucard vs Luke is a refference reference to ''KungFuHustle''.
** Alucard and Seras are, at one point,reffered refered to as [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland "Sierra and Alejandro."]] Alucard later on sings a ripoff of ''This is How we Will end it'' in his battle with Jan.
** Alucard and Seras are, at one point,
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** Jan and Luke, in their first appearance, are reffered to as "[[GrandTheftAutoEscanaba Jean-Luc LeMans]]."
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** There are a few reffrences to ''UndercoverBrother'', such as Rip taking the role of White She Devil during the end of chapter 7.
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* EverybodyKnewAlready: Walter finds out about the Millennium by ''Google searching them''. Though given that [[spoiler:he is really working for them all along, he could have just been lying. ''Then again'', we ''have'' seen him lie before about not secretly working for them and he's really bad at it.]]
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* TheNotSecret: Walter finds out about the Millennium by ''Google searching them''. Though given that [[spoiler:he is really working for them all along, he could have just been lying. ''Then again'', we ''have'' seen him lie before about not secretly working for them and he's really bad at it.]]
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* SelfDeprecation: The last chapter pokes fun at the author's own slow update rates; [[FanFic/TotalFanServiceSeries one of his fan fics]], which in the [=HUCverse=] appears to be a show, is nominated, but the clip consists of "clip not ready yet" on a black screen.[[labelnote:Note]]For reffrence, that mentioned chapter in question (chapter 4) ''was'' published on fanfiction.net, but [[DevelopmentHell there was a whopping space of over seven months between it and the last chapter, three of which were after this chapter of HUC was published.]][[/labelnote]]
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* SelfDeprecation: The last chapter pokes fun at the author's own slow update rates; [[FanFic/TotalFanServiceSeries [[FanFic/TotalZeksmitSeries one of his fan fics]], fics]] (going by its former title), which in the [=HUCverse=] appears to be a show, is nominated, but the clip consists of "clip not ready yet" on a black screen.[[labelnote:Note]]For reffrence, that mentioned chapter in question (chapter 4) ''was'' published on fanfiction.net, but [[DevelopmentHell there was a whopping space of over seven months between it and the last chapter, three of which were after this chapter of HUC was published.]][[/labelnote]]
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', ''{{Pikmin}}'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/MegaMan''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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* {{Crossover}}: With ''TheSimpsons'', ''WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons'', ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}'', ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'', ''{{Pikmin}}'', and briefly with ''EdEddNEddy'', ''WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy'', ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'', ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'', ''Manga/OnePiece'', ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'', ''WesternAnimation/SouthPark'', and ''VideoGame/MegaMan''. But not ''[[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Total Drama]]''. That's a different anime.
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** Hitler acts like a combination of [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} Eridan]] and [[spoiler:[[EdEddNEddy Eddy's brother]]]], to the point where Rip's conversation with him resembles a talk with the latter.
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** Hitler acts like a combination of [[Webcomic/{{Homestuck}} Eridan]] and [[spoiler:[[EdEddNEddy [[spoiler:[[WesternAnimation/EdEddNEddy Eddy's brother]]]], to the point where Rip's conversation with him resembles a talk with the latter.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles''; not ''Hellsing'') is the third installment to the ''SBIG'' series by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first one longer than a one-shot to be completed.[[hottip:*:Also of note, ''Zombie Attack!'', the work before HUC, ended on a CliffHanger]] Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of the original canon of ''Manga/{{Hellsing}} at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380145/1/Hecksing_Ulumate_Crconikals Hecksing Ulumate Crconikals]]'' (Which is supposed to be ''Hecksing Ultimate Chronicles''; not ''Hellsing'') is the third installment to the ''SBIG'' series by Tropers/GreatPikminFan and the first one longer than a one-shot to be completed.[[hottip:*:Also [[note]]Also of note, ''Zombie Attack!'', the work before HUC, ended on a CliffHanger]] CliffHanger[[/note]] Unlike its other installments, this one actually follows the story of the original canon of ''Manga/{{Hellsing}} at first'' before slowly turning into an unusual adventure.
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* KillEmAll: The number of important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barley, though.[[hottip:*:Carl, Seras, Rip, Quimby, and technically the Captain]]
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* KillEmAll: The number of important characters left alive can be counted on one hand. Barley, though.[[hottip:*:Carl, [[note]]Carl, Seras, Rip, Quimby, and technically the Captain]]Captain[[/note]]
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* ThirteenIsUnlucky: There's thirteen chapters, and the fan fic both begun and ended on a 13th.[[hottip:*:The "beginning" publish date is more of a happy coincidence. It begun on 9/13 so that chapter 3, the introduction of Carl, will be on the same day that ''Two and a Half Men'''s season priemere showing Charlie's replacement airs. It ending on 4/13 was because the author had gotten an intrest in ''Homestuck'' sometime between the making of chapters 4 and 5 and wanted the fan fic to conclude on HS's third anaversary. The ending date is not a coincidence, since 413 is an ArcNumber for said comic.]]
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* ThirteenIsUnlucky: There's thirteen chapters, and the fan fic both begun and ended on a 13th.[[hottip:*:The [[note]]The "beginning" publish date is more of a happy coincidence. It begun on 9/13 so that chapter 3, the introduction of Carl, will be on the same day that ''Two and a Half Men'''s season priemere showing Charlie's replacement airs. It ending on 4/13 was because the author had gotten an intrest in ''Homestuck'' sometime between the making of chapters 4 and 5 and wanted the fan fic to conclude on HS's third anaversary. The ending date is not a coincidence, since 413 is an ArcNumber for said comic.]][[/note]]
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* UnexpectedGenreChange: Each "season"[[hottip:*:Which are grouped by chapters 1-4, 5-7, 8 and 9, and 10-13]] has a vastly different tone to it. Season 1 is more of a VillainOfTheWeek, kill-all-the-badguys type of adventure. Season 2 is focused mainly on a single battle and has more of a war series feel to it. Season 3 is similar to an action movie, and finally introduces a few more characters like Quimby. Season 4 is somewhat like a disaster movie parody, reverting back to its villain of the week ways. It doesn't help that previously major character in both canon and early in this fic Alucard [[spoiler:dies at the end of season 1.]]
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* UnexpectedGenreChange: Each "season"[[hottip:*:Which "season"[[note]]Which are grouped by chapters 1-4, 5-7, 8 and 9, and 10-13]] 10-13[[/note]] has a vastly different tone to it. Season 1 is more of a VillainOfTheWeek, kill-all-the-badguys type of adventure. Season 2 is focused mainly on a single battle and has more of a war series feel to it. Season 3 is similar to an action movie, and finally introduces a few more characters like Quimby. Season 4 is somewhat like a disaster movie parody, reverting back to its villain of the week ways. It doesn't help that previously major character in both canon and early in this fic Alucard [[spoiler:dies at the end of season 1.]]
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: Parodied/invoked. The first chapter was supposedly rated K+[[hottip:*:The fan fic was always rated "T."]], which explains why Hellsing is called "Hecksing" and why Alucard cuts off Anderson from swearing. Eight chapters full of unfriendly deaths and (offscreen) sex later, and we have the Captain's "actor" ''telling kids not to pick up random mushrooms'', something which should be obvious to anyone reading the fan fic.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: Parodied/invoked. The first chapter was supposedly rated K+[[hottip:*:The K+[[note]]The fan fic was always rated "T."]], "[[/note]], which explains why Hellsing is called "Hecksing" and why Alucard cuts off Anderson from swearing. Eight chapters full of unfriendly deaths and (offscreen) sex later, and we have the Captain's "actor" ''telling kids not to pick up random mushrooms'', something which should be obvious to anyone reading the fan fic.
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* TheNotSecret: Walter finds out about the Millennium by ''Google searching them''. Though given that [[spoiler:he is really working for them all along, he could have just been lying. ''Then again'', we ''have'' seen him lie before about not secretly working for them and he's really bad at it.]]
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Now that this has been moved to the proper namespace...
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[[caption-width-right:220:Yeah, [[CrackFic it's]] [[StylisticSuck a]] [[NoCelebritiesWereHarmed little]] [[CrackPairing like]] [[UndercoverBrother that.]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:220:Yeah, [[CrackFic it's]] [[StylisticSuck a]] [[NoCelebritiesWereHarmed little]] [[CrackPairing like]] [[UndercoverBrother [[Film/UndercoverBrother that.]]]]
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I don\'t think I have \"officially\" said that the chips were retconned. But they are.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Rip, in a rather glaring example. [[spoiler:Detonation chips were ret-conned out of this fan fic, as stated by WordOfGod. So, instead of being blown up, Jan leaps out of the mansion and survives a three story fall. He then proceeds to trick Rip off of her original mission through Rip having an IdiotBall. Eventually, through a chain of events, Rip gets hired as part of Hecksing and avoids death several times.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: SparedByTheAdaptation:
** Rip, in a rather glaring example. [[spoiler:Detonation chips were ret-conned out of this fanfic, as stated by WordOfGod.fic. So, instead of being blown up, Jan leaps out of the mansion and survives a three story fall. He then proceeds to trick Rip off of her original mission through Rip having an IdiotBall. Eventually, through a chain of events, Rip gets hired as part of Hecksing and avoids death several times.]]
** Jan [[spoiler:subverts this. Twice. He survives the Valentine invasion, only to seemingly be killed off in the aircraft fight. Chapter 8 reveals that he survived ''that'', only for him to get killed by Carl.]]
** Zorin [[spoiler:''Also'' subverts this, surviving the second manor invasion but dies in the following chapter.]]
** Rip, in a rather glaring example. [[spoiler:Detonation chips were ret-conned out of this fan
** Jan [[spoiler:subverts this. Twice. He survives the Valentine invasion, only to seemingly be killed off in the aircraft fight. Chapter 8 reveals that he survived ''that'', only for him to get killed by Carl.]]
** Zorin [[spoiler:''Also'' subverts this, surviving the second manor invasion but dies in the following chapter.]]
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I\'m thinking about spoiling the fact that this crosses over with TTGL because Kamina is the only character from that to crossover and the reveal that he\'s the Master Cheif was supposed to be a surprise.
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** ''Ren and Stimpy''[='=]s clips consist of a disturbing grossout joke and a ''Sweet Bro and Hella Jeff'' refference.
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** ''Ren and Stimpy''[='=]s clips consist of a disturbing grossout joke and a ''Sweet Bro and Hella Jeff'' refference.reference. ''Housestuck'' reveals a third clip that consists mainly of using shock value for humor.
* SuspiciouslySimilarSubstitute: ''Three examples''. Carl to Pip (especially given that the former's introduction is him [[spoiler:accidentally killing the latter]]), Master Cheif/[[spoiler:Kamina]] to Alucard (Integra flat-out said that she wanted to hire someone to replace Alucard [[spoiler:after his death]]), and Quimby to Integra.
* SuspiciouslySimilarSubstitute: ''Three examples''. Carl to Pip (especially given that the former's introduction is him [[spoiler:accidentally killing the latter]]), Master Cheif/[[spoiler:Kamina]] to Alucard (Integra flat-out said that she wanted to hire someone to replace Alucard [[spoiler:after his death]]), and Quimby to Integra.
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Turns out that trope isn\'t just for any mispellings.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: ''Just look at the title''.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: ''Just look at Several. Perhaps one of the title''.worst is "coitus" being used instead of "courtesey."
