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** Inverted in that [[spoiler: Luna ''knew'' what the nobles might do, but had realized well ahead of time that the masses would end any oppression they might attempt eventually. This was why she was willing to go along with Morning Star's plan. She knew from the outset that tyrants breed their own defeat. Or at least that's what she was apparently ''hoping'' for. The fact that she saw Celestia as both a well intentioned tyrant and a slave to her own interest in being the power behind Equestria probably also went a long way towards convincing her.]] It's worth noting that Luna points to a number of griffon nations on the planet that have had no divine rulers or protection for...possibly ever, and they do fine. One of those nations she also points out, is a successful democracy. Celestia just plain didn't give a damn about this, however, still insisting that she was right and Luna was wrong. That attitude leads into the events that set off the plot of the story in the first chapter.



* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: Luna's support was key to Morning Star's plan to dethrone Celestia.]]

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* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: Luna's support was key to Morning Star's plan to dethrone Celestia. How unwitting she really was is up for debate however, since she seemed to be of the belief that attempts to oppress the general populace would result in the eventual overthrow of the nobles.]]
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*** Later [[spoiler: Celestia's dragon flat out tells her that her side were a bunch of evil monsters who killed thousands. However, since history is WrittenByTheWinners and there is some indication Luna may not have been all that off the mark in believing Celestia was a ManiulativeBitch, his word is suspect on the matter. The fact that he believes Luna was leading the charge against Celestia is a good indicator of the fact that he may be an UnreliableExpositor. Particularly since, by Luna's account, she was banished long before the Civil War he fought in happened, yet she is referenced in several history books as a monster who committed countless crimes, and Ajax himself was more than willing to believe it. Celestia is hinted as far back as ''the first chapter'' as having incited the entire event She makes a comment claiming she spent a hundred and fifty years 'fixing' Luna's 'mistake'. She apparently did this by demonizing her by setting the Civil War in motion, so that when the smoke cleared, Luna was considered Equestria's devil, while Celestia came out smelling like a rose.]]

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*** Later [[spoiler: Celestia's dragon flat out tells her that her side were a bunch of evil monsters who killed thousands. However, since history is WrittenByTheWinners and there is some indication Luna may not have been all that off the mark in believing Celestia was a ManiulativeBitch, his word is suspect on the matter. The fact that he believes Luna was leading the charge against Celestia is a good indicator of the fact that he may be an UnreliableExpositor. Particularly since, by Luna's account, she was banished long before the Civil War he fought in happened, yet she is referenced in several history books as a monster who committed countless crimes, and Ajax himself was more than willing to believe it. Celestia is hinted as far back as ''the first chapter'' as having incited the entire event event. She makes a comment claiming she spent a hundred and fifty years 'fixing' Luna's 'mistake'. She apparently did this by demonizing her by setting the Civil War in motion, so that when the smoke cleared, Luna was considered Equestria's devil, while Celestia came out smelling like a rose.]]
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*** Later [[spoiler: Celestia's dragon flat out tells her that her side were a bunch of evil monsters who killed thousands. However, since history is WrittenByTheWinners and there is some indication Luna may not have been all that off the mark in believing Celestia was a ManiulativeBitch, his word is suspect on the matter. The fact that he believes Luna was leading the charge against Celestia is a good indicator of the fact that he may be an UnreliableExpositor. Particularly since, by Luna's account, she was banished long before the Civil War he fought in happened, yet she is referenced in several history books as a monster who committed countless crimes, and Ajax himself was more than willing to believe it. Celestia is hinted as far back as ''the first chapter'' as having incited the entire event, claiming she spent a hundred and fifty years demonizing her by setting the Civil War in motion, so that when the smoke cleared, Luna was considered Equestria's devil, while Celestia came out smelling like a rose.]]

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*** Later [[spoiler: Celestia's dragon flat out tells her that her side were a bunch of evil monsters who killed thousands. However, since history is WrittenByTheWinners and there is some indication Luna may not have been all that off the mark in believing Celestia was a ManiulativeBitch, his word is suspect on the matter. The fact that he believes Luna was leading the charge against Celestia is a good indicator of the fact that he may be an UnreliableExpositor. Particularly since, by Luna's account, she was banished long before the Civil War he fought in happened, yet she is referenced in several history books as a monster who committed countless crimes, and Ajax himself was more than willing to believe it. Celestia is hinted as far back as ''the first chapter'' as having incited the entire event, event She makes a comment claiming she spent a hundred and fifty years 'fixing' Luna's 'mistake'. She apparently did this by demonizing her by setting the Civil War in motion, so that when the smoke cleared, Luna was considered Equestria's devil, while Celestia came out smelling like a rose.]]
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*** Later [[spoiler: Celestia's dragon flat out tells her that her side were a bunch of evil monsters who killed thousands. However, since history is WrittenByTheWinners and there is some indication Luna may not have been all that off the mark in believing Celestia was a ManiulativeBitch, his word is suspect on the matter. The fact that he believes Luna was leading the charge against Celestia is a good indicator of the fact that he may be an UnreliableExpositor. Particularly since, by Luna's account, she was banished long before the Civil War he foguth in happened, yet she is referenced in several hiostory books as a monster who committed countless crimes, and Ajax himself was more than willing to believe it. Celestia is hinted as far back as ''the first chapter'' as having incited the entire event, claiming she spent a hundred and fifty years demonizing her by setting the Civil War in motion, so that when the smoke cleared, Luna was considered Equestria's devil, while Celestia came out smelling like a rose.]]

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*** Later [[spoiler: Celestia's dragon flat out tells her that her side were a bunch of evil monsters who killed thousands. However, since history is WrittenByTheWinners and there is some indication Luna may not have been all that off the mark in believing Celestia was a ManiulativeBitch, his word is suspect on the matter. The fact that he believes Luna was leading the charge against Celestia is a good indicator of the fact that he may be an UnreliableExpositor. Particularly since, by Luna's account, she was banished long before the Civil War he foguth fought in happened, yet she is referenced in several hiostory history books as a monster who committed countless crimes, and Ajax himself was more than willing to believe it. Celestia is hinted as far back as ''the first chapter'' as having incited the entire event, claiming she spent a hundred and fifty years demonizing her by setting the Civil War in motion, so that when the smoke cleared, Luna was considered Equestria's devil, while Celestia came out smelling like a rose.]]
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*** Later [[spoiler: Celestia's dragon flat out tells her that her side were a bunch of evil monsters who killed thousands. However, since history is WrittenByTheWinners and there is some indication Luna may not have been all that off the mark in believing Celestia was a ManiulativeBitch, his word is suspect on the matter. The fact that he believes Luna was leading the charge against Celestia is a good indicator of the fact that he may be an UnreliableExpositor.]]

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*** Later [[spoiler: Celestia's dragon flat out tells her that her side were a bunch of evil monsters who killed thousands. However, since history is WrittenByTheWinners and there is some indication Luna may not have been all that off the mark in believing Celestia was a ManiulativeBitch, his word is suspect on the matter. The fact that he believes Luna was leading the charge against Celestia is a good indicator of the fact that he may be an UnreliableExpositor. Particularly since, by Luna's account, she was banished long before the Civil War he foguth in happened, yet she is referenced in several hiostory books as a monster who committed countless crimes, and Ajax himself was more than willing to believe it. Celestia is hinted as far back as ''the first chapter'' as having incited the entire event, claiming she spent a hundred and fifty years demonizing her by setting the Civil War in motion, so that when the smoke cleared, Luna was considered Equestria's devil, while Celestia came out smelling like a rose.]]
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*** Later [[spoiler: Celestia's dragon flat out tells her that her side were a bunch of evil monsters who killed thousands]]

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*** Later [[spoiler: Celestia's dragon flat out tells her that her side were a bunch of evil monsters who killed thousands]]thousands. However, since history is WrittenByTheWinners and there is some indication Luna may not have been all that off the mark in believing Celestia was a ManiulativeBitch, his word is suspect on the matter. The fact that he believes Luna was leading the charge against Celestia is a good indicator of the fact that he may be an UnreliableExpositor.]]
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** [[spoiler:Luna's old advisor was one.]]

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** [[spoiler:Luna's [[spoiler: Celestia believes Luna's old advisor was one.one, and believed she turned Luna against her. Luna is starting to have some doubts about it as well, but still believes that even if she had been manipulating her, she still had the right reasons for it due to her own views of Celestia.]]
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I\'m sporking this story. There are about thirty instances of this mistake by the time you get into Chapter 2.

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* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Grey Prophet apparently doesn't know that, when a line of dialogue's attribution follows it, you use a comma and not a period in the dialogue proper. He also doesn't like to use commas between narrative text and dialogue when the attribution precedes it. This is a ''very'' talky story.

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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Philomena in chapter 11.]]



* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Braveheart, surprisingly enough, in chapter 11. After Nightshade leads him and his men to Zecora's hut, Braveheart gets an up close look at Luna's injuries after pinning her to the ground with the intention of running her through with Celestia's sword, capable of killing immortals. Luna recognizes the sword and is noticeably terrified of it, which Braveheart also notices. Luckily, Philomena bursts in and allows her and Twilight to escape, and gives Applejack an opening to buck him in the face. Finally, Pinkie convinces him to listen to reason (with s'mores), and he ultimately decides to help everypony track the trio after getting input from his men, though he still hates Luna personally.]]



** In Chapter 7, Applejack has one when she realizes [[spoiler:her telling the guard that Luna was at Sweet Apple Acres led to Big Mac's injuries]].

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** In Chapter 7, Applejack has one when she realizes [[spoiler:her [[spoiler: her telling the guard that Luna was at Sweet Apple Acres led to Big Mac's injuries]].


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** Applejack has another in chapter 11: [[spoiler: she gets angry at Rainbow Dash due to her willingness to give Luna a chance, berates her, and finally abandons her in the Everfree Forest. Not long after, she regrets her decision, but Rainbow isn't the Element of Loyalty for nothing...]]
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** Dispite this, Luna goes right back to praising her veiws, as if this never happen in Chapter 11.

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** Dispite Despite this, Luna goes right back to praising her veiws, views, as if this never happen happened, in Chapter 11.
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** Dispite this, Luna goes right back to praising her veiws, as if this never happen in Chapter 11.

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* CloserToEarth: After meeting Big Mac and seeing his calm compassion firsthand, Luna compliments him thusly:
-->'''Luna:''' You may think yourself a simple farmer, but you're more the gentlepony than any prince, duke, or knight in Celestia's court.
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* GrayAndGreyMorality: Neither sister is painted as completely in the wrong... or completely in the right. Mistakes were made on both ends, and are only exacerbated by PoorCommunicationKills.

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* GrayAndGreyMorality: Neither sister is painted as completely in the wrong... or nor completely in the right. Mistakes were made on both ends, and are only exacerbated by PoorCommunicationKills.
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*** Same chapter [[spoiler: Luna has a minor freak out wend Ajax tells her all her actions did was cause a bloody civil war that only ended thanks to Celestia.]]

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*** Same chapter [[spoiler: Luna has a minor freak out wend when Ajax tells her all her actions did was cause a bloody civil war that only ended thanks to Celestia.]]



* NeverSayThatAgain: Fluttershy does not appreciate Twilight mentioning [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E22ABirdInTheHoof the Philemena incident]].

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* NeverSayThatAgain: Fluttershy does not appreciate Twilight mentioning [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E22ABirdInTheHoof the Philemena Philomena incident]].



* TeamDad: Just as his sister AJ tends to serve as TeamMom for the mane cast, Big Macintosh shows his talent as a caretaker.
* TheMenFirst: Captain Braveheart cares more about the security of the young pegasi under his command than about that of the citizens he's supposed to protect, to the point that he thinks his duty is to [[ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption preemptively and violently]] incapacitate any threat ''before'' they get the slightest chance of hurting them. His line of thinking is far closer to that of a soldier rather than a law-enforcer.

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* TeamDad: Just as his sister AJ tends to serve as TeamMom for the mane cast, Mane Cast, Big Macintosh shows his talent as a caretaker.
* TheMenFirst: Captain Braveheart cares more about the security of the young pegasi Pegasi under his command than about that of the citizens he's supposed to protect, to the point that he thinks his duty is to [[ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption preemptively and violently]] incapacitate any threat ''before'' they get the slightest chance of hurting them. His line of thinking is far closer to that of a soldier rather than a law-enforcer.
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* GiantSpider:[[A variant of these attacks Rainbow Dash and Applejack in Everfree. Rainbow Dash emerges victorious over the tarantulion but is wounded during the struggle, the beast having slashed her with its lion-like claws and poisoned her with its irritating hairs.]]

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* GiantSpider:[[A GiantSpider:[[spoiler: A variant of these attacks Rainbow Dash and Applejack in Everfree. Rainbow Dash emerges victorious over the tarantulion but is wounded during the struggle, the beast having slashed her with its lion-like claws and poisoned her with its irritating hairs.]] ]]
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* GiantSpider:[[A variant of these attacks Rainbow Dash and Applejack in Everfree. Rainbow Dash emerges victorious over the tarantulion but is wounded during the struggle, the beast having slashed her with its lion-like claws and poisoned her with its irritating hairs.]]
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* GeneralRipper: Captain Braveheart hasn't found a problem yet that he can't somehow blame Luna for. He's hell-bent on protecting the citizens of Equestria from her, no matter how many of them he has to hurt to do it.
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** Seems to be a common mindset, as another guard flat out says they don't have even the slightest care about the welfare of citizens, wend Twilihgt calls him out on it he simply assume she's just brainwash.

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** Seems to be a common mindset, as another guard flat out says they don't have even the slightest care about the welfare of citizens, wend Twilihgt when Twilight calls him out on it he simply assume she's just brainwash.brainwashed.



-->'''Big Mac:''' Ah don't talk all that much, only when Ah really need to. In fact, I don't think Ah've talked this much in months, but it ain't everyday that a goddess pops up outta nowhere askin' me fer help an' [[spoiler: the sun don't rise]].

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-->'''Big Mac:''' Ah don't talk all that much, only when Ah really need to. In fact, I don't think Ah've talked this much in months, but it ain't everyday that a goddess pops up outta nowhere askin' me fer help an' [[spoiler: the sun don't rise]].

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* SwissMessenger: Prince Blueblood, already disliked after his showing at the canonical [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver Grand Galloping Gala]], is responsible here for informing Princess Luna ''precisely'' how she's been painted in the public eye, out of [[HanlonsRazor both idiocy]] ''[[HanlonsRazor and]]'' [[HanlonsRazor malice]].


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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Prince Blueblood, already disliked after his showing at the canonical [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver Grand Galloping Gala]], is responsible here for informing Princess Luna ''precisely'' how she's been painted in the public eye, out of [[HanlonsRazor both idiocy]] ''[[HanlonsRazor and]]'' [[HanlonsRazor malice]].
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* MeaningfulName: Celestial's distrust of Luna's advisor is more understandable when you realize that the Latin word for Morning Star is ''Lucifer''.
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!!This ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic contains examples of:

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!!This ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic contains examples of:

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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Despite her 'redemption', Princess Luna isn't trusted by the public. Prince Blueblood exposes this ElephantInTheLivingRoom after she slights him. [[ItGotWorse Things go downhill from there]].



* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Despite her 'redemption', Princess Luna isn't trusted by the public. Prince Blueblood exposes this ElephantInTheLivingRoom after she slights him. [[ItGotWorse Things go downhill from there]].

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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Despite her 'redemption', Princess Luna isn't trusted by the public. Prince Blueblood exposes this ElephantInTheLivingRoom after she slights him. [[ItGotWorse Things go downhill from there]].
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A ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic.

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A ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic.
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** The reason doesn't make any sence wend you remember the since Rarity got her cutie mark ''after'' seeing the finish outfits on stage, her cutie mark doesn't mean "finding glems" but "making outfits the dazzie like glems".

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* TheBully: Braveheart is more or less one. He insults and attacks others to make himself feel better and abuses his power.



* StrawFeminist: Storm Cloud's introduction involves her giving Rarity a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech for being too stereotypically 'girly'. According to WordOfGod, this wasn't about sexism at all (an absurdity in patently matriarchal Equestria), but about ScrewDestiny and YouCantFightFate, as pertains to social roles: Storm is annoyed that Rarity allows herself to be defined by a very narrow understanding of what a "lady" is, while Rarity replies that she's ''chosen'' her profession when, at the base, her Cutie Mark only showed that she was good at finding gems, something that's more optimal for a miner than a tailor: Storm, on the other hand, assumed that since her cutie mark represented a weapon she was destined to be in the Guard, and has never looked back since. Basically one subverted her expected gender role while the other subverted her expected profession,

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* StrawFeminist: Storm Cloud's introduction involves her giving Rarity a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech for being too stereotypically 'girly'. According to WordOfGod, this wasn't about sexism at all (an absurdity in patently matriarchal Equestria), but about ScrewDestiny and YouCantFightFate, as pertains to social roles: Storm is annoyed that Rarity allows herself to be defined by a very narrow understanding of what a "lady" is, while Rarity replies that she's ''chosen'' her profession when, at the base, her Cutie Mark only showed that she was good at finding gems, something that's more optimal for a miner than a tailor: Storm, on the other hand, assumed that since her cutie mark represented a weapon she was destined to be in the Guard, and has never looked back since. Basically one subverted her expected gender role while the other subverted her expected profession,profession.
** The reason doesn't make any sence wend you remember the since Rarity got her cutie mark ''after'' seeing the finish outfits on stage, her cutie mark doesn't mean "finding glems" but "making outfits the dazzie like glems".
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ArmiesAreEvil: Zig-zag between chapters.

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* ArmiesAreEvil: Zig-zag between chapters.
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** Seems to be a common mindset, as another guard flat out says they don't have even the slightest care about the welfare of citizens, wend Twilihgt calls him out on it he simply assume she's just brainwash.
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-->'''As it was, Luna saw everywhere the ponies in chains. The best she could hope for them was a semblance of that bygone liberty and community through self-governance and reliance.'''

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* NobleSavage: Played with. Luna seems to think that the ideal society is one with minimal government and a strong spiritual connection to the Earth. This view is challenged by Zecora's revelation that[[spoiler: her tribal lands are characterized by instability and conflict]].



* RousseauWasRight: Luna's own personal philosophy. She believes that her subjects are predisposed towards good and that political society is a necessary evil to combat discord. Like Rousseau, Luna's views are more abstract, and laced with emotion than [[HobbesWasRight Celestia's]] more calculated and defined prescription for society.

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* RousseauWasRight: Luna's own personal philosophy. She believes that her subjects are predisposed towards good and that political society is a necessary evil to combat discord. Like Rousseau, Luna's views ideas are more abstract, and laced with emotion than [[HobbesWasRight Celestia's]] more calculated and defined prescription for society.society.
-->'''As it was, Luna saw everywhere the ponies in chains. The best she could hope for them was a semblance of that bygone liberty and community through self-governance and reliance.'''

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* {{Hypocrite}}: [[spoiler:Luna, despite all her talk about how much she hates the DeadlyDecadentCourt and loves free will, was working with them to give them the nation when she stepped down.]]
** [[spoiler: She also seems to think that Dragons shouldn't be seen as equals to ponies.]]
* InsaneTrollLogic: Braveheart has a knack for leaping to conclusions. Twilight protests his attacking Luna? Nevermind explaining ''why'', she '''MUST''' be a traitor and should be arrested and [[ColdBloodedTorture tortured]]! Rarity is Twilight's friend? Just because she doesn't have a clue what's going on doesn't mean she's not automatically a traitor, too! Arrest her!

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* HobbesWasRight: Princess Celestia is the Leviathan of Thomas Hobbes. Combating the forces of discord requires a strong, centralized government and an unassailable sovereign. This is in stark contrast with her [[RousseauWasRight sister's beliefs]] and is a source of considerable tension between the two.
* {{Hypocrite}}: [[spoiler:Luna, despite all her talk about how much she hates the DeadlyDecadentCourt and loves free will, was working with them to give them the nation when she stepped down.]]
** [[spoiler: She also seems to think that Dragons shouldn't be seen as equals to ponies.]]
* InsaneTrollLogic: Braveheart has a knack for leaping to conclusions. Twilight protests his attacking Luna? Nevermind explaining ''why'', she '''MUST''' be a traitor and should be arrested and [[ColdBloodedTorture tortured]]! Rarity is Twilight's friend? Just because she doesn't have a clue what's going on doesn't mean she's not automatically a traitor, too! Arrest her!


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* [[ThePrince The Princess]]: Celestia's personal political philosophy (in the story it is a book that codifies her type of statecraft). The association with this treatise played a role in [[DidNotDotheResearch compelling many people to believe]] [[MachiavelliWasWrong Celestia to be a ruthless tyrant]] despite the fact little of this "tyranny" can be gleaned from the story or show. It better describes her pragmatic character and impressive political mastery.
** Celestia [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E22ABirdInTheHoof keeps close ties with the public]] to ensure their support, love, and fear as a buffer against the nobility's own power drives.


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* RousseauWasRight: Luna's own personal philosophy. She believes that her subjects are predisposed towards good and that political society is a necessary evil to combat discord. Like Rousseau, Luna's views are more abstract, and laced with emotion than [[HobbesWasRight Celestia's]] more calculated and defined prescription for society.

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