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* AdaptationalBadass: Zig-Zagged with Ben. On the one hand he did not defeat Toro as he did in canon, however, as detailed in ''Recap/JurassicWorldCampCretaceousS2E05Brave'' Ben initially remained the same wimp he was originally, until he was backed into a corner, whereas here he immediately switches to survivalist mode upon realizing he's stranded on the Island.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Zig-Zagged with Ben. On the one hand he did not defeat Toro as he did in canon, however, as detailed in ''Recap/JurassicWorldCampCretaceousS2E05Brave'' ''[[Recap/JurassicWorldCampCretaceousS2E05Brave Brave]]'' Ben initially remained the same wimp he was originally, until he was backed into a corner, whereas here he immediately switches to survivalist mode upon realizing he's stranded on the Island.
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Canonically Brooklyn HasTwoDaddies, and no mention is made of her mother. Here she lives with her mother after her father died overseas.
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Canonically Brooklyn HasTwoDaddies, has two dads, and no mention is made of her mother. Here she lives with her mother after her father died overseas.
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Isla Nublar is a tropical Island, so while the Dinos are the main threat to the campers, they are not the only threat. Of note Brooklyn is nearly bitten by a venomous Fer-de-lance snake, while Ben actually ''is'' bitten by a Brazilian Wandering Spider.
** Isla Nublar is a tropical Island, so while the Dinos are the main threat to the campers, they are not the only threat. Of note Brooklyn is nearly bitten by a venomous Fer-de-lance snake, while Ben actually ''is'' bitten by a Brazilian Wandering Spider.
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* AdaptationDeviation: A couple that don't really fit below have come up.
** In season 2 the campers ultimately base themselves out of a treehouse they construct on the site of Camp Cretaceous. Here they instead take refuge in a hotel.
** Ben in canon, before reuniting with the others simply made a small shelter in the jungle next to a rock, whereas here he sets up camp in [[spoiler:the Jurassic Park Visitor Center.]]
** Speaking of the [[spoiler:Visitor Center, season 3 establishes that Blue claimed it as her territory until itis destroyed in the battle between Blue and the Campers against the Scorpius Rexes. Here Toro claims it instead.]]
** In season 2 the campers ultimately base themselves out of a treehouse they construct on the site of Camp Cretaceous. Here they instead take refuge in a hotel.
** Ben in canon, before reuniting with the others simply made a small shelter in the jungle next to a rock, whereas here he sets up camp in [[spoiler:the Jurassic Park Visitor Center.]]
** Speaking of the [[spoiler:Visitor Center, season 3 establishes that Blue claimed it as her territory until itis destroyed in the battle between Blue and the Campers against the Scorpius Rexes. Here Toro claims it instead.]]
* AlasPoorVillain: Upon discovering the remains of [[spoiler:the velociraptor from Jurassic Park, locked in the freezer]] Ben just feels sympathy for the way the creature died.
* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Upon catching a glimpse of Rexy Darius is able to identify the scars on her as being caused by the Indominus, correctly assuming that if Rexy fought the hybrid and is still alive, then it must not be.
* CallBack: To both ''Film/JurassicPark'' and ''Film/JurassicWorld''.
** In chapter 3, The campers find the [[spoiler:corpse of Dennis Nedry]] while Ben sets up camp in [[spoiler:the Visitor's Center, where he finds the remains of the raptor Lex and Tim locked in the freezer]]
** In chapter 5 Yaz [[spoiler:takes a security key from the corpse of Vic Hoskins.]]
** In chapter 3, The campers find the [[spoiler:corpse of Dennis Nedry]] while Ben sets up camp in [[spoiler:the Visitor's Center, where he finds the remains of the raptor Lex and Tim locked in the freezer]]
** In chapter 5 Yaz [[spoiler:takes a security key from the corpse of Vic Hoskins.]]
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* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted, after [[spoiler: passing out after falling down the stairs]] Yaz realizes her period has started with Sammy noting she and Brooklyn will probably be in the same situation soon.
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** Darius not telling Brooklyn that he and Sammy were leaving the Hotel to collect firewood results in her suffering a panic attack, her resulting WhatTheHellHero accidentally triggers Darius to have a panic attack himself.
* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted, after [[spoiler: passing out after falling down the stairs]] Yaz realizes her period has started with Sammy noting she and Brooklyn will probably be in the same situationsoon.soon.
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Isla Nublar is a tropical Island, so while the Dinos are the main threat to the campers, they are not the only threat. Of note Brooklyn is nearly bitten by a venomous Fer-de-lance snake, while Ben actually ''is'' bitten by a Brazilian Wandering Spider.
* ThatCameOutWrong: Darius panics when his attempt to explain why he's having a hard time looking at Brooklyn (because the bruises she got when she fell over make it look like someone beat her up, making Darius feel irrationally angry) consist of him telling her that her face is the problem.
* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted, after [[spoiler: passing out after falling down the stairs]] Yaz realizes her period has started with Sammy noting she and Brooklyn will probably be in the same situation
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Isla Nublar is a tropical Island, so while the Dinos are the main threat to the campers, they are not the only threat. Of note Brooklyn is nearly bitten by a venomous Fer-de-lance snake, while Ben actually ''is'' bitten by a Brazilian Wandering Spider.
* ThatCameOutWrong: Darius panics when his attempt to explain why he's having a hard time looking at Brooklyn (because the bruises she got when she fell over make it look like someone beat her up, making Darius feel irrationally angry) consist of him telling her that her face is the problem.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Zig-Zagged with Ben. On the one hand he did not defeat Toro as he did in canon, however, as detailed in ''JurassicWorldCampCretaceousS2E05Brave'' Ben initially remained the same wimp he was originally, until he was backed into a corner, whereas here he immediately switches to survivalist mode upon realizing he's stranded on the Island.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Zig-Zagged with Ben. On the one hand he did not defeat Toro as he did in canon, however, as detailed in ''JurassicWorldCampCretaceousS2E05Brave'' ''Recap/JurassicWorldCampCretaceousS2E05Brave'' Ben initially remained the same wimp he was originally, until he was backed into a corner, whereas here he immediately switches to survivalist mode upon realizing he's stranded on the Island.
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* AllForNothing: All [[spoiler:Yaz sneaking out on her own to find Ben]] achieved was finding no evidence of [[spoiler:Ben where he fell, leaving her assuming that he died and was eaten, and her own existing injuries being made much worse.]]
** The excursion to the communication building only reveals [[spoiler:that it was destroyed, making the fact that Brooklyn nearly dies and Kenji is badly burned worse.]]
* AssholeVictim: Upon discovering that the corpse they've discovered is [[spoiler:Denis Nedry, the man who brought down Jurassic Park]] Yaz declares that he had what happened coming to him.
** The excursion to the communication building only reveals [[spoiler:that it was destroyed, making the fact that Brooklyn nearly dies and Kenji is badly burned worse.]]
* AssholeVictim: Upon discovering that the corpse they've discovered is [[spoiler:Denis Nedry, the man who brought down Jurassic Park]] Yaz declares that he had what happened coming to him.
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Canonically BroTwoLinesNoWaitingoklyn HasTwoDaddies, and no mention is made of her mother. Here she lives with her mother after her father died overseas.
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Canonically BroTwoLinesNoWaitingoklyn Brooklyn HasTwoDaddies, and no mention is made of her mother. Here she lives with her mother after her father died overseas.
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* AdultFear: If you thought the series was bad this story goes "Hold My Beer." Two major examples stand out.
** Chapter 7: [[spoiler:after being badly wounded while seeking for Ben, Yaz slips into a coma, and while discussing her condition, and the possibility of her not survivng, Kenji brings up the possibility that they will have to perform a MercyKill]]
** Chapter 10: [[spoiler:after their escape from the tunnel Brooklyn suffers several broken ribs and a collapsed lung, and Darius can only comfort her as she nearly dies if not for Kenji knowing how to save her.]]
** Chapter 7: [[spoiler:after being badly wounded while seeking for Ben, Yaz slips into a coma, and while discussing her condition, and the possibility of her not survivng, Kenji brings up the possibility that they will have to perform a MercyKill]]
** Chapter 10: [[spoiler:after their escape from the tunnel Brooklyn suffers several broken ribs and a collapsed lung, and Darius can only comfort her as she nearly dies if not for Kenji knowing how to save her.]]
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** Chapter 10: [[spoiler:after their escape from the tunnel Brooklyn suffers several broken ribs and a collapsed lung, and Darius can only comfort her as she nearly dies if not for Kenji knowing how to save her.]]
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33784372/chapters/83982268 Camp Cretaceous: Survial]] Is a ''WesternAnimation/JurassicWorldCampCretaceous'' fanfic deviating from the end of season 1, exploring the Campers attempts to survive after living on Isla Nublar.
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!! Contains the following tropes:
* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Canonically BroTwoLinesNoWaitingoklyn HasTwoDaddies, and no mention is made of her mother. Here she lives with her mother after her father died overseas.
* AdaptationalBadass: Zig-Zagged with Ben. On the one hand he did not defeat Toro as he did in canon, however, as detailed in ''JurassicWorldCampCretaceousS2E05Brave'' Ben initially remained the same wimp he was originally, until he was backed into a corner, whereas here he immediately switches to survivalist mode upon realizing he's stranded on the Island.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In season 2, aside from Darius' nightmare in episode 1, Ben does not reappear until the end of episode 4, with Episode 5 detailing his exploits between falling from the monorail up to his reunion with Kenji and Brooklyn. By comparison the author employs a TwoLinesNoWaiting style; regularly switching between focusing on the other Campers exploits and Ben's.
* AdultFear: If you thought the series was bad this story goes "Hold My Beer." Two major examples stand out.
** Chapter 7: [[spoiler:after being badly wounded while seeking for Ben, Yaz slips into a coma, and while discussing her condition, and the possibility of her not survivng, Kenji brings up the possibility that they will have to perform a MercyKill]]
** Chapter 10: [[spoiler:after their escape from the tunnel Brooklyn suffers several broken ribs and a collapsed lung, and Darius can only comfort her as she nearly dies if not for Kenji knowing how to save her.
* BloodierAndGorier: The story details the wounds the kids suffer, which is significantly worse than the ones from canon.
* DarkerAndEdgier: In canon, the only actual injuries the camper's suffer is Yaz's ankle in season 1, and [[spoiler:Sammy being hit by a ''Scorpius Rex'' quill]] in season 3. By comparison [[spoiler:Kenji, Yaz and Brooklyn are all badly wounded over the course of the story, with the later two nearly dying, while Ben is laid up for several days because of a poisonous spider bite.]]
* DrivenToSuicide: Discussed. In Chapter 10, Darius admits he didn't know what he'd have done [[spoiler:if Kenji hadn't arrived to save Brooklyn,]] while looking over the waterfall, with the clear indication that he would've probably killed himself.
* MercyKill: Discussed but thankfully averted, when [[spoiler:Yaz slips into a coma]] in chapter 7. Faced with the reality that they do not have the means to keep her alive if she doesn't wake up, Kenji brings up the possibility of them having to put her out of her misery. Thankfully she wakes up.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: Yaz going off on her own to try and find Ben, already suffering from her bad ankle, and a bite on her arm, results in her getting attacked, ending up so injured she cannot even make it down stairs.]]
* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted, after [[spoiler: passing out after falling down the stairs]] Yaz realizes her period has started with Sammy noting she and Brooklyn will probably be in the same situation soon.
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!! Contains the following tropes:
* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Canonically BroTwoLinesNoWaitingoklyn HasTwoDaddies, and no mention is made of her mother. Here she lives with her mother after her father died overseas.
* AdaptationalBadass: Zig-Zagged with Ben. On the one hand he did not defeat Toro as he did in canon, however, as detailed in ''JurassicWorldCampCretaceousS2E05Brave'' Ben initially remained the same wimp he was originally, until he was backed into a corner, whereas here he immediately switches to survivalist mode upon realizing he's stranded on the Island.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: In season 2, aside from Darius' nightmare in episode 1, Ben does not reappear until the end of episode 4, with Episode 5 detailing his exploits between falling from the monorail up to his reunion with Kenji and Brooklyn. By comparison the author employs a TwoLinesNoWaiting style; regularly switching between focusing on the other Campers exploits and Ben's.
* AdultFear: If you thought the series was bad this story goes "Hold My Beer." Two major examples stand out.
** Chapter 7: [[spoiler:after being badly wounded while seeking for Ben, Yaz slips into a coma, and while discussing her condition, and the possibility of her not survivng, Kenji brings up the possibility that they will have to perform a MercyKill]]
** Chapter 10: [[spoiler:after their escape from the tunnel Brooklyn suffers several broken ribs and a collapsed lung, and Darius can only comfort her as she nearly dies if not for Kenji knowing how to save her.
* BloodierAndGorier: The story details the wounds the kids suffer, which is significantly worse than the ones from canon.
* DarkerAndEdgier: In canon, the only actual injuries the camper's suffer is Yaz's ankle in season 1, and [[spoiler:Sammy being hit by a ''Scorpius Rex'' quill]] in season 3. By comparison [[spoiler:Kenji, Yaz and Brooklyn are all badly wounded over the course of the story, with the later two nearly dying, while Ben is laid up for several days because of a poisonous spider bite.]]
* DrivenToSuicide: Discussed. In Chapter 10, Darius admits he didn't know what he'd have done [[spoiler:if Kenji hadn't arrived to save Brooklyn,]] while looking over the waterfall, with the clear indication that he would've probably killed himself.
* MercyKill: Discussed but thankfully averted, when [[spoiler:Yaz slips into a coma]] in chapter 7. Faced with the reality that they do not have the means to keep her alive if she doesn't wake up, Kenji brings up the possibility of them having to put her out of her misery. Thankfully she wakes up.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: Yaz going off on her own to try and find Ben, already suffering from her bad ankle, and a bite on her arm, results in her getting attacked, ending up so injured she cannot even make it down stairs.]]
* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted, after [[spoiler: passing out after falling down the stairs]] Yaz realizes her period has started with Sammy noting she and Brooklyn will probably be in the same situation soon.
