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* DreamWeaver: Discord has this ability. He uses it to fight off a [[NightmareFuel horrific]] [[CompleteMonster incarnation]] of himself that Fluttershy encounters in her dreams. He's genuinely disturbed when he first sees it.
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* DreamWeaver: Discord has this ability. He uses it to fight off a [[NightmareFuel horrific]] [[CompleteMonster horrific incarnation]] of himself that Fluttershy encounters in her dreams. He's genuinely disturbed when he first sees it.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Played with. While Discord isn't portrayed as [[CompleteMonster truly evil,]] (though he ''is'' quite callous and spiteful), he initially just can't imagine ''why'' Fluttershy spared his life. He eventually grows out of this somewhat as he comes to like her.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Played with. While Discord isn't portrayed as [[CompleteMonster truly evil,]] evil, (though he ''is'' quite callous and spiteful), he initially just can't imagine ''why'' Fluttershy spared his life. He eventually grows out of this somewhat as he comes to like her.
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* CryForTheDevil: Discord, full stop. He nearly gets ''beaten to death'' in the first chapter, and [[NightmareFuel it isn't pretty.]] He strays into {{Woobie}} territory when we learn about [[StartOfDarkness his]] [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone past]] in Chapter 7.
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* HilariousInHindsight: To Keep Calm and Flutter On.
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* StepfordSmiler/JerkassFacade: Discord is a combination of the two. [[spoiler: He is [[MyGreatestFailure incredibly torn up by guilt and pain over identically murdering his surrogate parents, and failing to revive them]]]], so to hide any sadness he might feel, he acts like an extremely silly and callous individual. Anytime he acts any other way, it's usually [[TearJerker really sad]], or [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming really uplifting]]
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* StepfordSmiler/JerkassFacade: StepfordSmiler[=/=]JerkassFacade: Discord is a combination of the two. [[spoiler: He is [[MyGreatestFailure incredibly torn up by guilt and pain over identically murdering his surrogate parents, and failing to revive them]]]], so to hide any sadness he might feel, he acts like an extremely silly and callous individual. Anytime he acts any other way, it's usually [[TearJerker really sad]], or [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming really uplifting]]
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* DeathGlare/DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Fluttershy tries "The Stare" on Discord in chapter 3. At first, he seems unaffected. Then as soon as she leaves the room…
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* DeathGlare/DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: DeathGlare[=/=]DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Fluttershy tries "The Stare" on Discord in chapter 3. At first, he seems unaffected. Then as soon as she leaves the room…
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* ArrangedMarriage: [[spoiler: King Aegeus and Queen Astraia made the decision to have Discord and Celestia be betrothed when they were children. The two did develop romantic feelings for one another but it all [[ItGotWorse went down hill]] once Discord's penchant for malicious acts of chaos led to his banishment from the kingdom and his attempted coup of the throne.]]
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* ArrangedMarriage: [[spoiler: King Aegeus and Queen Astraia made the decision to have Discord and Celestia be betrothed when they were children. The two did develop romantic feelings for one another but it all [[ItGotWorse went down hill]] hill once Discord's penchant for malicious acts of chaos led to his banishment from the kingdom and his attempted coup of the throne.]]
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The story starts three days after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E2TheReturnOfHarmonyPart2 Discord's defeat]], with Twilight and her friends at a picnic. All is well...except that their friendship seems to be strained, despite them having recovered from Discord's manipulations and sealed him away once again. Even with their regrets, Twilight is sure that Discord is gone forever.
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The story starts three days after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E2TheReturnOfHarmonyPart2 Discord's defeat]], with Twilight and her friends at a picnic. All is well...except well…except that their friendship seems to be strained, despite them having recovered from Discord's manipulations and sealed him away once again. Even with their regrets, Twilight is sure that Discord is gone forever.
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* DeathGlare / DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Fluttershy tries "The Stare" on Discord in chapter 3. At first, he seems unaffected. Then as soon as she leaves the room...
--> ''Discord made sure that the pegaus was out of sight and earshot, then promptly let his ears fall back and his eyes to go wide. He grimaced, rubbing his chilled shoulders with crossed arms, the stare still fresh in his mind and probably would be for ages. "Guh."''
--> ''Discord made sure that the pegaus was out of sight and earshot, then promptly let his ears fall back and his eyes to go wide. He grimaced, rubbing his chilled shoulders with crossed arms, the stare still fresh in his mind and probably would be for ages. "Guh."''
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* DeathGlare / DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: DeathGlare/DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Fluttershy tries "The Stare" on Discord in chapter 3. At first, he seems unaffected. Then as soon as she leaves the room...
room…
--> ''Discord made sure that thepegaus Pegasus was out of sight and earshot, then promptly let his ears fall back and his eyes to go wide. He grimaced, rubbing his chilled shoulders with crossed arms, the stare still fresh in his mind and probably would be for ages. "Guh."''
--> ''Discord made sure that the
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* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler: Discord as a kid, by Celestia and Luna's parents.]] Didn't last long, though...
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* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler: Discord as a kid, by Celestia and Luna's parents.]] Didn't last long, though...though…
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* IUhYouToo: A running joke in the story is Discord's inability to articulate how much he cares about Fluttershy, [[spoiler: despite the fact that he risks his life to save her]]. It's only after [[spoiler: Discord goes back to living with Celestia and Luna]] that he's able to explicitly state how much he cares for the pegasus.
* {{Jerkass}} / JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Discord's either one or the other, and he switches ''constantly''. Sometimes he manages to be ''both''.
* {{Jerkass}} / JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Discord's either one or the other, and he switches ''constantly''. Sometimes he manages to be ''both''.
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* IUhYouToo: A running joke in the story is Discord's inability to articulate how much he cares about Fluttershy, [[spoiler: despite the fact that he risks his life to save her]]. It's only after [[spoiler: Discord goes back to living with Celestia and Luna]] that he's able to explicitly state how much he cares for the pegasus.Pegasus.
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* LighterAndSofter: Played with in the case of Discord. He ''does'' mellow out a bit in later chapters, getting a more friendly demeanor and his chaos consisting of lighthearted pranks... but really only towards Fluttershy. He's also a ''big'' JerkAss towards Twilight, [[spoiler: and Luna]] [[spoiler: for the majority of the story]].
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* LighterAndSofter: Played with in the case of Discord. He ''does'' mellow out a bit in later chapters, getting a more friendly demeanor and his chaos consisting of lighthearted pranks... but pranks…but really only towards Fluttershy. He's also a ''big'' JerkAss towards Twilight, [[spoiler: and Luna]] [[spoiler: for the majority of the story]].
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* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 3 begins with Fluttershy leaving Discord in Pinkie Pie's care so she can go run some errands and Pinkie begins making cookies...[[spoiler:and then [[IllBoy Discord passes out from blood poisoning]].]]
* MoralEventHorizon: An universe example. [[spoiler: If Discord's conversation with Twilight in chapter 15 is anything to go by, he seems to view his accidental murder of King Aegeus and Queen Astraia as his personal crossing of it.]] To the extent that he basically [[spoiler: flat out tells Twilight he's a bad person in spite of trying to bring his adoptive parents back.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: An universe example. [[spoiler: If Discord's conversation with Twilight in chapter 15 is anything to go by, he seems to view his accidental murder of King Aegeus and Queen Astraia as his personal crossing of it.]] To the extent that he basically [[spoiler: flat out tells Twilight he's a bad person in spite of trying to bring his adoptive parents back.]]
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* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 3 begins with Fluttershy leaving Discord in Pinkie Pie's care so she can go run some errands and Pinkie begins making cookies...[[spoiler:and cookies…[[spoiler:and then [[IllBoy Discord passes out from blood poisoning]].]]
* MoralEventHorizon: An universe example. [[spoiler: If Discord's conversation with Twilight in chapter 15 is anything to go by, he seems to view his accidental murder of King Aegeus and Queen Astraia as his personal crossing of it.]] To the extent that he basically [[spoiler: flat out tells Twilight he's a bad person in spite of trying to bring his adoptive parents back.]]]]
* MoralEventHorizon: An universe example. [[spoiler: If Discord's conversation with Twilight in chapter 15 is anything to go by, he seems to view his accidental murder of King Aegeus and Queen Astraia as his personal crossing of it.]] To the extent that he basically [[spoiler: flat out tells Twilight he's a bad person in spite of trying to bring his adoptive parents back.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Twilight...doesn't take nearly killing Discord well. [[HeroicBSOD At]] [[TearJerker all.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatDown: Twilight does this ''unintentionally'' to Discord: a binding spell goes wrong and slams him around a cave. Near the end Discord is injured so horribly he can't even ''move''. The narration points out just how ''close'' he is to dying:
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatDown: NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Twilight does this ''unintentionally'' to Discord: a binding spell goes wrong and slams him around a cave. Near the end Discord is injured so horribly he can't even ''move''. The narration points out just how ''close'' he is to dying:
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* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler: Discord.]] Granted, he didn't ''mean'' to kill his parents, but [[spoiler: he was still planning a coup...]]
* ShipperOnDeck: Later on in the story Fluttershy [[spoiler: tries to rekindle the flame that existed between Celstia and Discord]]. Her first attempt fails miserably but she eventually [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming succeeds.]]
* ShoutOut: To be expected from an MLP fanfiction. For example, chapter 2 gives us one for ''FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}'', when Discord is teasing Fluttershy: ''"I wonder what ponies would taste like.. Maybe I'll bake them into cupcakes."''
* ShipperOnDeck: Later on in the story Fluttershy [[spoiler: tries to rekindle the flame that existed between Celstia and Discord]]. Her first attempt fails miserably but she eventually [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming succeeds.]]
* ShoutOut: To be expected from an MLP fanfiction. For example, chapter 2 gives us one for ''FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}'', when Discord is teasing Fluttershy: ''"I wonder what ponies would taste like.. Maybe I'll bake them into cupcakes."''
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* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler: Discord.]] Granted, he didn't ''mean'' to kill his parents, but [[spoiler: he was still planning a coup...]]
coup…]]
* ShipperOnDeck: Later on in the story Fluttershy [[spoiler: tries to rekindle the flame that existed betweenCelstia Celestia and Discord]]. Her first attempt fails miserably but she eventually [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming succeeds.]]
* ShoutOut: To be expected from an MLP fanfiction. For example, chapter 2 gives us one for ''FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}'', when Discord is teasing Fluttershy: ''"I wonder what ponies would tastelike.. Maybe like…Maybe I'll bake them into cupcakes."''
* ShipperOnDeck: Later on in the story Fluttershy [[spoiler: tries to rekindle the flame that existed between
* ShoutOut: To be expected from an MLP fanfiction. For example, chapter 2 gives us one for ''FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}'', when Discord is teasing Fluttershy: ''"I wonder what ponies would taste
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* StepfordSmiler /JerkassFacade: Discord is a combination of the two. [[spoiler: He is [[MyGreatestFailure incredibly torn up by guilt and pain over identically murdering his surrogate parents, and failing to revive them]]]], so to hide any sadness he might feel, he acts like an extremely silly and callous individual. Anytime he acts any other way, it's usually [[TearJerker really sad]], or [[CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming really uplifting]]
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* StepfordSmiler /JerkassFacade: StepfordSmiler/JerkassFacade: Discord is a combination of the two. [[spoiler: He is [[MyGreatestFailure incredibly torn up by guilt and pain over identically murdering his surrogate parents, and failing to revive them]]]], so to hide any sadness he might feel, he acts like an extremely silly and callous individual. Anytime he acts any other way, it's usually [[TearJerker really sad]], or [[CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming really uplifting]]
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* UnstoppableRage: Why Twilight lost control of her spell. It was ''supposed'' to just restrain Discord, but to cast it properly, you need a calm mind...
* [[spoiler: UsedToBeASweetKid:]] [[spoiler: ''Discord'', of all people.]] Of course, [[StartOfDarkness things]] [[SelfMadeOrphan went]] [[VillainousBreakdown downhill]] at some point...
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* UnstoppableRage: Why Twilight lost control of her spell. It was ''supposed'' to just restrain Discord, but to cast it properly, you need a calm mind...
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* [[spoiler: UsedToBeASweetKid:]] [[spoiler: ''Discord'', of all people.]] Of course, [[StartOfDarkness things]] [[SelfMadeOrphan went]] [[VillainousBreakdown downhill]] at somepoint...point…
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* WeakSauceWeakness: Discord, the [[TheOmnipotent all powerful]] spirit of chaos can be easily subdued if he's tickled. Fluttershy [[spoiler: and later on Celestia]] both take advantage of this whenever he acts out.
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* WeakSauceWeakness: WeaksauceWeakness: Discord, the [[TheOmnipotent all powerful]] spirit of chaos can be easily subdued if he's tickled. Fluttershy [[spoiler: and later on Celestia]] both take advantage of this whenever he acts out.
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** [[ShapedLikeItself Uhhhh...]]
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** [[ShapedLikeItself Uhhhh...]]Uhhhh…]]
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* UngratefulBastard: Discord refuses to forgive Twilight for grievously injuring him by accident. Even after [[spoiler: she saves his life when he gets a bad of blood poisoning]] and despite her attempts to be cordial towards him, he still antagonizes her every chance he gets. [[spoiler: he eventually does come around to forgiving her however.]]
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* UngratefulBastard: Discord refuses to forgive Twilight for grievously injuring him by accident. Even after [[spoiler: she saves his life when he gets a really bad case of blood poisoning]] and despite her attempts to be cordial towards him, he still antagonizes her every chance he gets. [[spoiler: he eventually does come around to forgiving her however.]]
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* Manchild: Despite being eons older than any character in the story with the exceptions of Celestia and Luna, Discord is prone to acting extremely immature most of the time, and the way Fluttershy treats him is similar to how a mother would treat a child.
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* Manchild: ManChild: Despite being eons older than any character in the story with the exceptions of Celestia and Luna, Discord is prone to acting extremely immature most of the time, and the way Fluttershy treats him is similar to how a mother would treat a child.
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* WeakSauceWeakness: Discord, the [[TheOmnipotent all powerful]] spirit of chaos can be easily subdued if he's tickled. Fluttershy [[spoiler: and later on Celestia]] both take advantage of this whenever he acts out.
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* Manchild: Despite being eons older than any character in the story with the exceptions of Celestia and Luna, Discord is prone to acting extremely immature most of the time, and the way Fluttershy treats him is similar to how a mother would treat a child.
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* MoralEventHorizon: An universe example. [[spoiler: If Discord's conversation with Twilight in chapter 15 is anything to go by, he seems to view his accidental murder of King Aegeus and Queen Astraia as his personal crossing of it.]] To the extent that he basically [[spoiler: flat out tells Twilight he's a bad person in spite of trying to bring his adoptive parents back.]]
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* StepfordSmiler /JerkassFacade: Discord is a combination of the two. [[spoiler: He is [[MyGreatestFailure incredibly torn up by guilt and pain over identically murdering his surrogate parents, and failing to revive them]]]], so to hide any sadness he might feel, he acts like an extremely silly and callous individual. Anytime he acts any other way, it's usually [[TearJerker really sad]], or [[CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming really uplifting]]
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* IUhYouToo: A running joke in the story is Discord's inability to articulate how much he cares about Fluttershy, [[spoiler: despite the fact that he risks his life to save her]]. It's only after [[spoiler: Discord goes back to living with Celestia and Luna]] that he's able to explicitly state how much he cares for the pegasus.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: [[spoiler: Discord and Luna have a type II sibling version of this trope going on after they finally reconcile.]]
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* LighterAndSofter: Played with in the case of Discord. He ''does'' mellow out a bit in later chapters, getting a more friendly demeanor and his chaos consisting of lighthearted pranks... but really only towards Fluttershy. He's also a ''big'' JerkAss towards Twilight [[spoiler: and Luna]].
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* LighterAndSofter: Played with in the case of Discord. He ''does'' mellow out a bit in later chapters, getting a more friendly demeanor and his chaos consisting of lighthearted pranks... but really only towards Fluttershy. He's also a ''big'' JerkAss towards Twilight Twilight, [[spoiler: and Luna]].Luna]] [[spoiler: for the majority of the story]].
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* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 3 begins with Fluttershy leaving Discord in Pinkie Pie's care so she can go run some errands and Pinkie begins making cookies...[[spoiler:and then [[IllBoy Discord passes out from blood poisoning]].]]
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* StaringDownCthulhu: Fluttershy and Discord in chapter 3. Hard to say who's actually Cthulhu in this case.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Played with. While Disocrd isn't portrayed as [[CompleteMonster truly evil,]] (though he ''is'' quite callous and spiteful), he initially just can't imagine ''why'' Fluttershy spared his life. He eventually grows out of this somewhat as he comes to like her.
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* [[spoiler: EarnYourHappyEnding]]: By the end of the story things finally start looking up for Discord. He's able to [[spoiler: come to terms with his accidental murder of his parents and confess it to the princesses after eons, reconcile with Celestia and Luna]]. [[spoiler: Forgive Twilight for injuring him, and befriend her along with the rest of the mane cast]], and [[spoiler: rekindle his [[ChildhoodFriendRomance relationship with Celestia]]]]. It comes after a large amount of struggle on his part but by the end he's defiantly deserved it.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Played with. WhileDisocrd Discord isn't portrayed as [[CompleteMonster truly evil,]] (though he ''is'' quite callous and spiteful), he initially just can't imagine ''why'' Fluttershy spared his life. He eventually grows out of this somewhat as he comes to like her.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Played with. While
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Read it [[http://cryssy-miu.deviantart.com/gallery/30277077?offset=72#/d4cv8x2 here.]]
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Read it [[http://cryssy-miu.deviantart.com/gallery/30277077?offset=72#/d4cv8x2 [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5569/Broken-Spirit here.]]
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Now has a sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&search=Distorted+Worlds Distorted Worlds]]''
Now has a sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&search=Distorted+Worlds Distorted Worlds]]''
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* HeelFaceTurn: The entire fic is basically a gradual one for [[ChaoticEvil Discord]].
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* BadDreams: Discord has several of them, stemming from [[spoiler: his guilt over inadvertently killing Celestia and Luna's parents. The nightmare only stop when he confesses to the princess's what he did and reconciles with them.]]
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* BadDreams: Discord has several of them, stemming from [[spoiler: his guilt over inadvertently killing Celestia and Luna's parents. The nightmare His nightmares only stop when he confesses to the princess's what he did and reconciles with them.]]
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*InterspeciesRomance: [[spoiler: Celestia and Discord as of chapter 16.]]
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* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove: Discord provides an interesting example. It's not that he doesn't understand love, it's that he believes that he's lost the capacity for it ever since [[spoiler: inadvertently murdering his surrogate parents]]. [[spoiler: When he tells Celestia he's forgotten how to love , [[AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther she's able help him remember how.]]]]
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* DefrostingIceKing: A non romantic example. After spending a prolonged amount of time under the care of Fluttershy, Discord gradually starts to find himself befriending her and becoming [[TookALevelInKindness less callous in the process.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Discord of course!
* DeadpanSnarker: Discord of course!
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* ShoutOut: To be expected from an MLP fanfiction. For example, chapter 2 gives us one for ''FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}', when Discord is teasing Fluttershy: ''"I wonder what ponies would taste like.. Maybe I'll bake them into cupcakes."''
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* ShoutOut: To be expected from an MLP fanfiction. For example, chapter 2 gives us one for ''FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}', ''FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}'', when Discord is teasing Fluttershy: ''"I wonder what ponies would taste like.. Maybe I'll bake them into cupcakes."''
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* ShoutOut: To be expected from an MLP fanfiction. For example, chapter 2 gives us one for {{Fanfic/Cupcakes Cupcakes}}, when Discord is teasing Fluttershy: ''"I wonder what ponies would taste like.. Maybe I'll bake them into cupcakes."''
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* ShoutOut: To be expected from an MLP fanfiction. For example, chapter 2 gives us one for {{Fanfic/Cupcakes Cupcakes}}, ''FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}', when Discord is teasing Fluttershy: ''"I wonder what ponies would taste like.. Maybe I'll bake them into cupcakes."''
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* ShoutOut: To be expected from an MLP fanfiction. For example, chapter 2 gives us one for [[Fanfic/Cupcakes Cupcakes]], when Discord is teasing Fluttershy: ''"I wonder what ponies would taste like.. Maybe I'll bake them into cupcakes."''
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* ShoutOut: To be expected from an MLP fanfiction. For example, chapter 2 gives us one for [[Fanfic/Cupcakes Cupcakes]], {{Fanfic/Cupcakes Cupcakes}}, when Discord is teasing Fluttershy: ''"I wonder what ponies would taste like.. Maybe I'll bake them into cupcakes."''
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** To be more specific, he's usually the latter towards [[MoralityPet Fluttershy]], and the former towards practically everyone else.
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** To be more specific, he's usually the latter towards [[MoralityPet Fluttershy]], and the former towards practically everyone else. He eventually slides more toward the latter after [[spoiler: reconciling with Celestia and Luna]] but he still retains traits of the former.
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* BadDreams: Discord has several of them, stemming from [[spoiler: his guilt over inadvertently killing Celestia and Luna's parents.]]
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*ArrangedMarriage: [[spoiler: King Aegeus and Queen Astraia made the decision to have Discord and Celestia be betrothed when they were children. The two did develop romantic feelings for one another but it all [[ItGotWorse went down hill]] once Discord's penchant for malicious acts of chaos led to his banishment from the kingdom and his attempted coup of the throne.]]
* BadDreams: Discord has several of them, stemming from [[spoiler: his guilt over inadvertently killing Celestia and Luna's parents. The nightmare only stop when he confesses to the princess's what he did and reconciles with them.]]
* BadDreams: Discord has several of them, stemming from [[spoiler: his guilt over inadvertently killing Celestia and Luna's parents. The nightmare only stop when he confesses to the princess's what he did and reconciles with them.]]
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* MoralityPet: Fluttershy [[spoiler: and eventually becomes Celestia and Luna]] become this for Discord. This point is driven home in the 16th chapter when Discord comes to the realization that [[spoiler: they are just as important, if not more important to him than his ability to cause chaos.]]
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* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler: Discord.]] Granted, he didn't ''mean'' to kill his parents, but [[spoiler: he was still planning a coup...]]
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* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler: Discord.]] Granted, he didn't ''mean'' to kill his parents, but [[spoiler: he was still planning a coup...]] ]]
*ShipperOnDeck: Later on in the story Fluttershy [[spoiler: tries to rekindle the flame that existed between Celstia and Discord]]. Her first attempt fails miserably but she eventually [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming succeeds.]]
*ShipperOnDeck: Later on in the story Fluttershy [[spoiler: tries to rekindle the flame that existed between Celstia and Discord]]. Her first attempt fails miserably but she eventually [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming succeeds.]]
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*** YourMileageMayVary on how much ground it holds, but Discord himself does this towards [[spoiler: Celestia when she states that "You only got what you deserved" by being imprisoned. He also calls her out for banishing Luna among other things.]]
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*** YourMileageMayVary on how much ground it holds, but Discord himself does this towards [[spoiler: Celestia when she states that "You only got what you deserved" by being imprisoned. He also calls her out for banishing Luna among other things.]]
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* MoralityPet: Fluttershy eventually becomes this for Discord.
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* UngratefulBastard: Discord refuses to forgive Twilight for grievously injuring him by accident. Even after [[spoiler: she saves his life when he gets a bad of blood poisoning]] and despite her attempts to be cordial towards him, he still antagonizes her every chance he gets. [[spoiler: he eventually does come around to forgiving her however.]]
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*** YourMileageMayVary on how much ground it holds, but Discord himself does this towards [[spoiler: Celestia when she states that "You only got what you deserved" by being imprisoned. He also calls her out for banishing Luna among other things.]]
-->[[spoiler: "Did I really? Did a little chaotic sprinkles here and there truly call for full body petrification until the end of time? Did a few innocent pranks like causing it to rain chocolate and 'fertilizing' the apples call for a repeat of that punishment? "Did merely playing a harmless little game of peek-a-boo with your teacher's pet justify breaking every bone in my body?" "Did a little bit of sister rebellion really call for a thousand year banishment to the moon? To the point that your poor sister returns a misunderstood, frightened mess that has no idea how to face the world?]]
-->[[spoiler: "Did I really? Did a little chaotic sprinkles here and there truly call for full body petrification until the end of time? Did a few innocent pranks like causing it to rain chocolate and 'fertilizing' the apples call for a repeat of that punishment? "Did merely playing a harmless little game of peek-a-boo with your teacher's pet justify breaking every bone in my body?" "Did a little bit of sister rebellion really call for a thousand year banishment to the moon? To the point that your poor sister returns a misunderstood, frightened mess that has no idea how to face the world?]]
