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Can be [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6980435/1/Bittersweets found]] [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-bittersweet.html here]].
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One more thing to add, coming from a diabetic.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: The portrayal of diabetes is inaccurate. The commentary for ''[[Funny/MyLittlePonyTheMentallyAdvancedSeries Rainbow Dash Presents: Bittersweet]]'' notes that a diabetic trying to sugar themselves to death would take hours, if not days, and due to how [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diabetic_ketoacidosis the serious illness]] that would result from it works[[note]]Which in short [[BodyHorror involves the body basically]] ''[[BodyHorror eating itself]]'', and was in fact considered [[ThereIsNoCure a horror condition with a near-certain death rate]] before widespread insulin treatment became available from the 1920s onward[[/note]], would be [[CruelAndUnusualDeath an absolutely horrific way to go]]. That, and diabetics ''can'' safely consume foods with carbs and sugar much the same as anyone else, as long as factors like exercise, diet, their current blood glucose levels, and the required insulin to take are all accounted for.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: The portrayal of diabetes is inaccurate. The commentary for ''[[Funny/MyLittlePonyTheMentallyAdvancedSeries Rainbow Dash Presents: Bittersweet]]'' notes that a diabetic trying to sugar themselves to death would take hours, days, if not days, within two weeks, and due to how [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diabetic_ketoacidosis the serious illness]] that would result from it works[[note]]Which in short [[BodyHorror involves the body basically]] ''[[BodyHorror eating itself]]'', and was in fact considered [[ThereIsNoCure a horror condition with a near-certain death rate]] before widespread insulin treatment became available from the 1920s onward[[/note]], would be [[CruelAndUnusualDeath an absolutely horrific way to go]]. That, and diabetics ''can'' safely consume foods with carbs and sugar much the same as anyone else, as long as factors like exercise, diet, their current blood glucose levels, and the required insulin to take are all accounted for.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: The portrayal of diabetes is inaccurate. The commentary for ''[[Funny/MyLittlePonyTheMentallyAdvancedSeries Rainbow Dash Presents: Bittersweet]]'' notes that a diabetic trying to sugar herself to death would take hours or even days and would be a horrific way to go.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: The portrayal of diabetes is inaccurate. The commentary for ''[[Funny/MyLittlePonyTheMentallyAdvancedSeries Rainbow Dash Presents: Bittersweet]]'' notes that a diabetic trying to sugar herself themselves to death would take hours or even days hours, if not days, and due to how [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diabetic_ketoacidosis the serious illness]] that would result from it works[[note]]Which in short [[BodyHorror involves the body basically]] ''[[BodyHorror eating itself]]'', and was in fact considered [[ThereIsNoCure a horror condition with a near-certain death rate]] before widespread insulin treatment became available from the 1920s onward[[/note]], would be a [[CruelAndUnusualDeath an absolutely horrific way to go.go]]. That, and diabetics ''can'' safely consume foods with carbs and sugar much the same as anyone else, as long as factors like exercise, diet, their current blood glucose levels, and the required insulin to take are all accounted for.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Pinkie decides she can't make the changes required to live with diabetes and gives herself one final binge on sweets.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Pinkie decides she can't make the changes required to live with diabetes and gives herself one final binge on sweets.sweets, eventually dying from [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diabetic_ketoacidosis Diabetic ketoacidosis.]]
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: The portrayal of diabetes is inaccurate. The commentary for ''Rainbow Dash Presents' notes that a diabetic trying to sugar herself to death would take hours or even days and would be a horrific way to go.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: The portrayal of diabetes is inaccurate. The commentary for ''Rainbow ''[[Funny/MyLittlePonyTheMentallyAdvancedSeries Rainbow Dash Presents' Presents: Bittersweet]]'' notes that a diabetic trying to sugar herself to death would take hours or even days and would be a horrific way to go.
* HeDidntMakeIt: Unwilling to explain to his little sister about death, Big Mac tells her that Pinkie's "on vacation". When she finds out, she's not happy.
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* HeDidntMakeIt: Unwilling to explain to his little sister about death, Big Mac tells her that Pinkie's "on vacation". When she finds out, she's not happy.
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* [[{{HeDidntMakeIt}} She Didn't Make It]]: Unwilling to explain to his little sister about death, Big Mac tells her that Pinkie's "on vacation". When she finds out, she's not happy.
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* [[{{HeDidntMakeIt}} She Didn't Make It]]: HeDidntMakeIt: Unwilling to explain to his little sister about death, Big Mac tells her that Pinkie's "on vacation". When she finds out, she's not happy.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Diabetes. The commentary for Rainbow Dash Presents notes that a diabetic trying to sugar herself to death would take hours or even days and would be a horrific way to go.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Diabetes. The portrayal of diabetes is inaccurate. The commentary for Rainbow ''Rainbow Dash Presents Presents' notes that a diabetic trying to sugar herself to death would take hours or even days and would be a horrific way to go.
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* [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even Jerks Have Standards:]] [[spoiler: Gilda doesn't quite like the fact that Rainbow Dash left Ponyville after Pinkie's death.]]
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* [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even EvenEvilHasStandards: In this case, "Even Jerks Have Standards:]] [[spoiler: Gilda Standards". [[spoiler:Gilda]] doesn't quite like the fact that Rainbow [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash left Ponyville Ponyville]] after Pinkie's death.]]
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* [[SpinOff Side Story]]: [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-apple-blossom.html Apple Blossom]] revolves around Apple Bloom's reaction to learning Big Mac lied to her about Pinkie's death.
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* [[SpinOff Side Story]]: [[http://www.SpinOff: The side story ''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-apple-blossom.html Apple Blossom]] Blossom]]'' revolves around Apple Bloom's reaction to learning Big Mac lied to her about Pinkie's death.death.
* ShipTease: Hinted at in the main story. The final part before the epilogue has some [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie/Rainbow Dash]] hints. It's also implied very heavily in the alternate ending.
* ShipTease: Hinted at in the main story. The final part before the epilogue has some [[spoiler:Pinkie Pie/Rainbow Dash]] hints. It's also implied very heavily in the alternate ending.
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* SweetTooth: [[{{Deconstruction}} Deconstructed]].
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* SweetTooth: [[{{Deconstruction}} Deconstructed]]. Pinkie's sweet tooth led to type 2 diabetes. She, however, doesn't want to live with the dietary restrictions and ends up [[DrivenToSuicide killing herself]] by binging on sweets.
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* AlternateEnding: Much like [[Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} another]] infamous Pinkie Pie DarkFic, has one where [[spoiler: the events of the main story are AllJustADream... though Pinkie still has diabetes, and simply chooses to live with it rather than leave her friends behind]].
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** DeconReconSwitch: The story switches to {{Reconstruction}} [[spoiler:in the AlternateEnding, when Pinkie Pie comes to terms with her diabetes]].
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** DeconReconSwitch: The story switches to {{Reconstruction}} [[spoiler:in the AlternateEnding, alternate ending, when Pinkie Pie comes to terms with her diabetes]].
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* RevisedEnding: An alternate ending was posted after the epilogue where [[spoiler: it was AllJustADream...except Pinkie having diabetes, but she doesn't die from it, at least]].
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* RevisedEnding: An alternate ending was posted after the epilogue where [[spoiler: it was AllJustADream...except Pinkie having diabetes, but she doesn't die from it, at least]].least, and simply chooses to live with it rather than leave her friends behind]].
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* AlternateEnding: Much like [[{{Cupcakes}} another]] infamous Pinkie Pie DarkFic, has one where [[spoiler: the events of the main story are AllJustADream... though Pinkie still has diabetes, and simply chooses to live with it rather than leave her friends behind]].
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* AlternateEnding: Much like [[{{Cupcakes}} [[Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} another]] infamous Pinkie Pie DarkFic, has one where [[spoiler: the events of the main story are AllJustADream... though Pinkie still has diabetes, and simply chooses to live with it rather than leave her friends behind]].
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* ShoutOut: The first chapter heavily draws from the ''{{Scrubs}}'' episode "My Screw Up", including the line "Where do you think we are?"
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* ShoutOut: The first chapter heavily draws from the ''{{Scrubs}}'' ''Series/{{Scrubs}}'' episode "My Screw Up", including the line "Where do you think we are?"
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* CrapsaccharineWorld
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Can be found [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-bittersweet.html here]].
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Can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6980435/1/Bittersweets found]] [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-bittersweet.html here]].
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Diabetes.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Diabetes. The commentary for Rainbow Dash Presents notes that a diabetic trying to sugar herself to death would take hours or even days and would be a horrific way to go.
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Tropes cannot be averted/subverted/whatever \"brutally\"
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* SweetTooth: Brutally [[{{Deconstruction}} deconstructed]].
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* SweetTooth: Brutally [[{{Deconstruction}} deconstructed]].Deconstructed]].
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* FridgeHorror
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* ItsWhatIDo: Pinkie Pie's explanation for her [[DrivenToSuicide choice]] in the first chapter.
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* [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even Jerks Have Standards:]] [[spoiler: Gilda doesn't quite like the fact that Rainbow Dash left Ponyville after Pinkie's death.]]
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A rather infamous ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic where Pinkie Pie dies of diabetes. The story revolves around [[DeathFic everyone's reactions to her death]], as each of her friends handle the loss differently. Unfortunately, they aren't left to their grieving; a new crisis threatens another one of their friends... but can they face it without Pinkie Pie?
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A rather infamous ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic where Pinkie Pie dies of diabetes. The story revolves around [[DeathFic everyone's reactions to her death]], as each of her friends handle the loss differently. Unfortunately, they aren't left to their grieving; a new crisis threatens another one of their friends... but can they face it without Pinkie Pie?
