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* UncannyFamilyResemblance: The guild masters of the various Sailor’s Guild outposts are all related and look identical at casual inspection, but have distinct differences (like the Nasrad guild master having a scar and a glass eye). He even makes a joke that could be a TakeThat against the Nurse Joys and Officer Jennys from ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}''.
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* UncannyFamilyResemblance: The guild masters of the various Sailor’s Guild outposts are all related and look identical at casual inspection, but have distinct differences (like the Nasrad guild master having a scar and a glass eye). He even makes a joke that could be a TakeThat against the Nurse Joys and Officer Jennys from ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}''.''Anime/PokemonTheSeries''.
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Overprotective Dad has been disambiguated. Also this seems like a valid concern and not really overprotectiveness
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* OverprotectiveDad: Centime isn’t as receptive to his adoptive daughter Clara dating the known [[TheCasanova skirt-chaser]] Gilder, and his wife Carol isn’t either. It takes Clara showing her mother an intimate portrait that Gilder painted for her and Gilder saying that they would leave if he couldn’t be in a family portrait for them to come around.
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trope merge with Recruiters Always Lie
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* JoinTheArmyTheySaid: Aika makes a joke when she hears how many people now want to join the Blue Rogues, [[spoiler: now the Blue Merchant Marines]], especially considering how many of them found love while part of it.
--> ''"Join the [[spoiler:Merchant Marine]], see the world, find a worthy mate!"''
--> ''"Join the [[spoiler:Merchant Marine]], see the world, find a worthy mate!"''
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* AdaptationOriginConnection: There was no indication of any such connection in canon, but in this fic, Lord Zivilyn Bane has some connection to [[spoiler:the Black Moon Stone, with the implication he is the last remnants of a civilisation under some black moon that was wiped out by the Silvians. He carries two [[BlackSwordsAreJustBetter black blades]] that set Fina's nerves on edge, and the mere sight of any Silver magic sends him into a rage]].
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* WartimeWedding: The day before the attack on Galcian's Eternal Empire, Fina, in her capacity as a Silver Priestess, conducts several marriages. And then later, she, Vyse and Aika confirm their own.
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* WartimeWedding: The day before the attack on Galcian's Eternal Empire, Fina, in her capacity as a Silver Priestess, conducts several marriages. And then later, marriages, including between Gilder and Clara and between [[spoiler: Lawrence and Lapen]]. Also, she, Vyse and Aika confirm have their own.own private ceremony beneath the Silver Moon later that night.
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** No EasilyForgiven for Drachma’s canon ChangedMyMindKid moment in Nasr here - after his rescue, Vyse confronts him in private, practically stages a mutiny for leaving him and the girls behind on Maramba, and demands that Drachma show that he can trust him. Drachma, having regretted his decision the moment he made it, does so by acceding command of the ship to him.
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** No EasilyForgiven for Drachma’s canon ChangedMyMindKid moment in Nasr here - after his rescue, Vyse confronts him in private, practically stages a mutiny for leaving him and the girls behind on Maramba, and demands that Drachma show that he can trust him. Drachma, having regretted his decision the moment he made it, does so by acceding giving command of the ship to him.
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* TheyDo: Chapter 57 has several {{Wartime Wedding}}s, including between Gilder and Clara and between [[spoiler: Lawrence and Lapen]]. The Trio have their own private ceremony beneath the Silver Moon later that night.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Belleza is ''not'' happy when she hears that Vigoro and his men had tried finding companionship amongst the locals during their occupation of Yafutoma, arrested one when she rebuffed them and all the men who tried to defend her, and almost caused a riot as a result. She immediately arrests all the Valuan men responsible for starting it, and when Vigoro tries to protest, she ''slaps'' him.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: EveryoneHasStandards:
** Belleza is ''not'' happy when she hears that Vigoro and his men had tried finding companionship amongst the locals during their occupation of Yafutoma, arrested one when she rebuffed them and all the men who tried to defend her, and almost caused a riot as a result. She immediately arrests all the Valuan men responsible for starting it, and when Vigoro tries to protest, she ''slaps''him.him.
** [[spoiler:The Glacians regret turning Rhaknam into Plergoth. They gave the beast a regenerative power to make it able to stand a chance against the other Gigas, but they realized too late it would also mean Plergoth would never be able to die, even though it wishes to.]]
** Belleza is ''not'' happy when she hears that Vigoro and his men had tried finding companionship amongst the locals during their occupation of Yafutoma, arrested one when she rebuffed them and all the men who tried to defend her, and almost caused a riot as a result. She immediately arrests all the Valuan men responsible for starting it, and when Vigoro tries to protest, she ''slaps''
** [[spoiler:The Glacians regret turning Rhaknam into Plergoth. They gave the beast a regenerative power to make it able to stand a chance against the other Gigas, but they realized too late it would also mean Plergoth would never be able to die, even though it wishes to.]]
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* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler: A young Nicholas Galcian's belief in honor and his father's creed of family reputation and image lasts until he walks in on his father raping one of their maids.]]
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* {{Hypocrite}}: [[spoiler: A young Nicholas Galcian's belief in honor and his father's creed of family reputation and image lasts until he walks in on his father raping one of their maids.]]
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Galcian's father was one, and it's the reason of Galician's current philosophy. [[spoiler: A young Nicholas Galcian's belief in honor and his father's creed of family reputation and image lasts indeed lasted until he walks in on his father raping one of their maids.]]
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Belleza gives Vigoro one of these after he tries to protest her arresting his men, after they almost caused a riot with the Yafutomans when they mistook a teahouse serving girl for a prostitute.
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: After the trio's throuple relationship is perfected, all three are shown sleeping together and are shown very satisfied and content afterwards.
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* AtomicFBomb: Aika screams "Fuck you, Valua!" as the ''Delphinus's'' Moonstone Cannon burns its way out of the Grand Fortress. Considering what she had to endure at Vigoro's hands a while before, it's perfectly understandable.
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* TheBabyTrap: Discussed and defied by Moegi. While counting down the days before Enrique says he'll depart from Vyse's crew back to Valua to inform them of Galcian's treachery, she remembers pleading with him to stay but is eventually convinced by his duty to his kingdom. In her thoughts, she wishes (but knows she could never go through) that she hadn't been so rigorous with her birth control, for a pregnant paramour might be the one thing to make him stay.
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* TheBabyTrap: Discussed and defied by Moegi. While counting down the days before Enrique says he'll depart from Vyse's crew back to Valua to inform them of Galcian's treachery, she remembers pleading with him to stay but is eventually convinced by his duty to his kingdom. In her thoughts, she wishes (but knows she could never go through) through with it) that she hadn't been so rigorous with her birth control, for a pregnant paramour might be the one thing to make him stay.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Maybe [[CostumeCopycat Vize, Anita and Faina]] should've thought of the consequences of trying to impersonate the most wanted crew in Mid-Ocean before the Valuan Armada came for them and tried to drag them off for execution.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Maybe [[CostumeCopycat Vize, Anita and Faina]] should've thought of the consequences of trying to impersonate the most wanted crew in Mid-Ocean before the Valuan Armada came for them and tried to drag them off for execution. Or even trying to impersonate Vyse in a city like Nasrad that knows his deeds and looks very well.
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* EasyLogistics: Averted. Moonstone fuel, provisions and supplies are all things that need to be traded for along the journey, which is why Osman’s presence on Vyse’s crew is such a boon to them.
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* EasyLogistics: Averted. Moonstone fuel, provisions and supplies are all things that need to be managed and traded for along the journey, which is why Osman’s presence on Vyse’s crew is such a boon to them.them.
** Another aversion happens with a dash of GameplayAndStorySegregation. On Vyse’s second escape from the Valuan Grand Fortress, the ''Delphinus’s'' ammo stores are limited (no torpedoes and only one salvo in the cannons), so he has to make every shot count.
** Another aversion happens with a dash of GameplayAndStorySegregation. On Vyse’s second escape from the Valuan Grand Fortress, the ''Delphinus’s'' ammo stores are limited (no torpedoes and only one salvo in the cannons), so he has to make every shot count.
* HatOfPower: The Captain's Hat equip item. In-game, it's just an exceptionally powerful piece of equipment, while lore-wise in this fic, it carries a bit of spiritual power from every past wearer, from [[spoiler: its original wearer Daccat, to the Larso clan head, and finally to Vyse]]. It even bears two red and blue ribbons that [[spoiler: correspond to Daccat's two wives, and now that it's Vyse's, he plans to add a silver ribbon to it]].
* MortonsFork: The crew of the ''Delphinus'' are faced with one when De Loco and his ''Chameleon'' confront them in the Abyss at the world's surface. With their cooling systems not able to last much longer, they're stuck between facing him here and succumbing to the heat, or fleeing for the surface and allow him to pick them off. [[spoiler: Luckily, Moegi comes through with a way to make the first option much more bearable]].
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* SadisticChoice: The crew of the ''Delphinus'' are faced with one when De Loco and his ''Chameleon'' confront them in the Abyss at the world's surface. With their cooling systems not able to last much longer, they're caught between facing him here and succumbing to the heat, or flee for the surface and allow him to pick them off. [[spoiler: Luckily, Moegi comes through with a way to make the first option much more bearable]].
