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Added context, removed first-person writing, updated beginning of page since the last chapter was released back in 2010 which means that it's most likely discontinued, and kept First Episode Twist example since, due to browsing the page history, it was added back when it was First Episode Spoiler and I don't know how much of an impact the character's death has on the story, especially because it never finished.
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''[[http://forum.starmen.net/forum/Fan/Writing/Because-I-Love-You-CHAPTER-1/page/1#post1655615 Because I Love You]]'' is a still-in-progress fanfic (written by {{Tropers/CherryLugia300}}) featuring several main characters from the ''VideoGame/{{Mother}}'' series, quite a few Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, and a whole load of other characters whom the author [[OriginalCharacter made up herself]]. It's one of them AlternateContinuity things.
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''[[http://forum.starmen.net/forum/Fan/Writing/Because-I-Love-You-CHAPTER-1/page/1#post1655615 Because I Love You]]'' is a still-in-progress most likely discontinued fanfic (written by {{Tropers/CherryLugia300}}) featuring several main characters from the ''VideoGame/{{Mother}}'' series, quite a few Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, and a whole load of other characters whom the author [[OriginalCharacter made up herself]]. It's one of them AlternateContinuity things.
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However, a bunch of young teens growing up in an OrphanageOfLove are destined to prevent the destruction, and take on Giygas' vast army of minions. The team consists of Ness, an adventurous boy who leads the group, Paula, his personal love interest ([[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend although he denies it]]), Ninten, Ness' other roommate, Lucas, a shy, gentle kid who sleeps in the room next door to Ness', and Claus, Lucas' older twin brother. They must gather the Seven Rainbow Shards and forge them into the Spectral Crystal, the only item powerful anough to defeat Giygas.
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However, a bunch of young teens growing up in an OrphanageOfLove are destined to prevent the destruction, and take on Giygas' vast army of minions. The team consists of Ness, an adventurous boy who leads the group, Paula, his personal love interest ([[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend although he denies it]]), Ninten, Ness' other roommate, Lucas, a shy, gentle kid who sleeps in the room next door to Ness', and Claus, Lucas' older twin brother. They must gather the Seven Rainbow Shards and forge them into the Spectral Crystal, the only item powerful anough enough to defeat Giygas.
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%%* ApocalypseHow: As mentioned above, destroying the Life Crystal results in Class 6.
%%* CrystalDragonJesus: Arceus.
%%* CueTheSun: The sun rises as Ness and his friends set off on their journey.
%%* TheEmpire: The Nokturian Empire.
%%* EverythingsBetterWithRainbows: The Seven Rainbow Shards.
%%* CrystalDragonJesus: Arceus.
%%* CueTheSun: The sun rises as Ness and his friends set off on their journey.
%%* TheEmpire: The Nokturian Empire.
%%* EverythingsBetterWithRainbows: The Seven Rainbow Shards.
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* CrystalDragonJesus:
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* CueTheSun: The sun rises as Ness and his friends set off on their
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* TheEmpire: The Nokturian
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* EverythingsBetterWithRainbows: The Seven Rainbow
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%%* GoodMorningCrono: How the story introduces Ness.
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%%* LaResistance: The Order of the White Rose.
%%* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The Saviours themselves.
%%* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler: Tolkien.]]
%%* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The Saviours themselves.
%%* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler: Tolkien.]]
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The Saviours
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* SacrificialLamb:
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: The first time we see Grace, Zeruel's ears and back fur perk up. I'm sure something else of his perked up, if you catch my drift.
%%* TalkingAnimal: Pick a non-human character. ''Any'' non-human character. Regular dragons (and numerous {{Mooks}}) are an exception, though.
%%* WalkingTheEarth: Throughout the story.
%%* TalkingAnimal: Pick a non-human character. ''Any'' non-human character. Regular dragons (and numerous {{Mooks}}) are an exception, though.
%%* WalkingTheEarth: Throughout the story.
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: The first time we see Grace, Zeruel's ears and back fur perk up. I'm sure something else of his perked up, if you catch my drift.
%%*indicating attraction.
* TalkingAnimal:Pick a A lot of non-human character. ''Any'' non-human character.characters can talk, such as Tolkien (a pigeon), Zeruel (a jackal), and some Pokémon such as Lucario. Regular dragons (and numerous {{Mooks}}) are an exception, though.
%%* * WalkingTheEarth: Throughout the story.story; first the protagonists venture to the castle to meet up with the Order, and then they venture across Hikami in search of the Rainbow Shards.
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''[[http://forum.starmen.net/forum/Fan/Writing/Because-I-Love-You-CHAPTER-1/page/1#post1655615 Because I Love You]]'' is a still-in-progress fanfic (written by {{Tropers/CherryLugia300}}) featuring several main characters from the ''VideoGame/EarthBound'' series, quite a few Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, and a whole load of other characters whom the author [[OriginalCharacter made up herself]]. It's one of them AlternateContinuity things.
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''[[http://forum.starmen.net/forum/Fan/Writing/Because-I-Love-You-CHAPTER-1/page/1#post1655615 Because I Love You]]'' is a still-in-progress fanfic (written by {{Tropers/CherryLugia300}}) featuring several main characters from the ''VideoGame/EarthBound'' ''VideoGame/{{Mother}}'' series, quite a few Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, and a whole load of other characters whom the author [[OriginalCharacter made up herself]]. It's one of them AlternateContinuity things.
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''[[http://forum.starmen.net/forum/Fan/Writing/Because-I-Love-You-CHAPTER-1/page/1#post1655615 Because I Love You]]'' is a still-in-progress fanfic (written by {{Tropers/CherryLugia300}}) featuring several main characters from the ''VideoGame/EarthBound'' series, quite a few Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a whole load of other characters]] whom the author [[OriginalCharacter made up herself]]. It's one of them AlternateContinuity things.
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''[[http://forum.starmen.net/forum/Fan/Writing/Because-I-Love-You-CHAPTER-1/page/1#post1655615 Because I Love You]]'' is a still-in-progress fanfic (written by {{Tropers/CherryLugia300}}) featuring several main characters from the ''VideoGame/EarthBound'' series, quite a few Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a whole load of other characters]] characters whom the author [[OriginalCharacter made up herself]]. It's one of them AlternateContinuity things.
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Along the way, the Saviours meet [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a whole bunch of critters]], [[PalsWithJesus befriend godlike beings]] who were once believed to only be legends, and experience [[CharacterDevelopment changes in character]].
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Along the way, the Saviours meet [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a whole bunch of critters]], critters, [[PalsWithJesus befriend godlike beings]] who were once believed to only be legends, and experience [[CharacterDevelopment changes in character]].
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* ApocalypseHow: As mentioned above, destroying the Life Crystal results in Class 6.
* CrystalDragonJesus: Arceus.
* CueTheSun: The sun rises as Ness and his friends set off on their journey.
* TheEmpire: The Nokturian Empire.
* EverythingsBetterWithRainbows: The Seven Rainbow Shards.
* FirstEpisodeTwist: [[spoiler: Tolkien dies.]]
* FiveManBand
** TheHero: Ness
** TheLancer: Paula
** TheBigGuy: Claus
** TheSmartGuy: Ninten
** TheChick: Lucas
* GoodMorningCrono: How the story introduces Ness.
* CrystalDragonJesus: Arceus.
* CueTheSun: The sun rises as Ness and his friends set off on their journey.
* TheEmpire: The Nokturian Empire.
* EverythingsBetterWithRainbows: The Seven Rainbow Shards.
* FirstEpisodeTwist: [[spoiler: Tolkien dies.]]
* FiveManBand
** TheHero: Ness
** TheLancer: Paula
** TheBigGuy: Claus
** TheSmartGuy: Ninten
** TheChick: Lucas
* GoodMorningCrono: How the story introduces Ness.
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** TheHero: Ness
** TheLancer: Paula
** TheBigGuy: Claus
** TheSmartGuy: Ninten
** TheChick: Lucas
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* LaResistance: The Order of the White Rose.
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Although most of them haven't been introduced yet.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The Saviours themselves.
* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler: Tolkien.]]
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Although most of them haven't been introduced yet.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The Saviours themselves.
* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler: Tolkien.]]
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* TalkingAnimal: Pick a non-human character. ''Any'' non-human character. Regular dragons (and numerous {{Mooks}}) are an exception, though.
* WalkingTheEarth: Throughout the story.
* WalkingTheEarth: Throughout the story.
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: [[spoiler: Tolkien dies.]]
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: FirstEpisodeTwist: [[spoiler: Tolkien dies.]]
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* WatchOutForThatTree: Zeruel crashes into a tree while walking off into the woods... [[CrowningMomentOfFunny and carries on as if nothing had happened]].
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* WatchOutForThatTree: Zeruel crashes into a tree while walking off into the woods... [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments and carries on as if nothing had happened]].
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: See [[Funny/BecauseILoveYou here]].
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Hikami is a peaceful continent. Everyone there lives in peace and harmony... [[CrapsaccharineWorld or at least they seem to be]]. An EldritchAbomination known as Giygas is sleeping in a lair in the most sacred canyon in Hikami. When he wakes up, he shall break out, and destroy the Life Crystal in Arceus' Temple, [[CaptainObvious thus ending all life]].
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Hikami is a peaceful continent. Everyone there lives in peace and harmony... [[CrapsaccharineWorld or at least they seem to be]]. An EldritchAbomination known as Giygas is sleeping in a lair in the most sacred canyon in Hikami. When he wakes up, he shall break out, and destroy the Life Crystal in Arceus' Temple, [[CaptainObvious thus ending all life]].
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''[[http://forum.starmen.net/forum/Fan/Writing/Because-I-Love-You-CHAPTER-1/page/1#post1655615 Because I Love You]]'' is a still-in-progress fanfic (written by {{Tropers/CherryLugia300}}) featuring several main characters from the ''EarthBound'' series, quite a few Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a whole load of other characters]] whom the author [[OriginalCharacter made up herself]]. It's one of them AlternateContinuity things.
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''[[http://forum.starmen.net/forum/Fan/Writing/Because-I-Love-You-CHAPTER-1/page/1#post1655615 Because I Love You]]'' is a still-in-progress fanfic (written by {{Tropers/CherryLugia300}}) featuring several main characters from the ''EarthBound'' ''VideoGame/EarthBound'' series, quite a few Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a whole load of other characters]] whom the author [[OriginalCharacter made up herself]]. It's one of them AlternateContinuity things.
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''[[http://forum.starmen.net/forum/Fan/Writing/Because-I-Love-You-CHAPTER-1/page/1#post1655615 Because I Love You]]'' is a still-in-progress fanfic (written by {{Tropers/CherryLugia300}}) featuring several main characters from the ''EarthBound'' series, quite a few {{Pokemon}}, Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, and [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a whole load of other characters]] whom the author [[OriginalCharacter made up herself]]. It's one of them AlternateContinuity things.
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: [[spoiler: Tolkein dies.]]
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: [[spoiler: Tolkein Tolkien dies.]]
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* InstantMessengerPigeon: Tolkein delivers letters quickly and flawlessly.
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* InstantMessengerPigeon: Tolkein Tolkien delivers letters quickly and flawlessly.
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* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler: Tolkein.]]
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* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler: Tolkein.Tolkien.]]
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: The first time we see Grace, Zeruel's ears and back fur perk up. I'm sure something else of his perked up, [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean if you catch my drift]].
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: The first time we see Grace, Zeruel's ears and back fur perk up. I'm sure something else of his perked up, [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean if you catch my drift]].drift.