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An AlternativeCharacterInterpretation story written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1504180/ Windschild8178]] and told from the focus of Guruko, it is a well-written story that can invoke strong emotions from the reader.
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An AlternativeCharacterInterpretation story written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1504180/ Windschild8178]] and told from the focus of Guruko, it is a well-written story that can invoke strong emotions from the reader.
reader. It can be read on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5745473/1/Accidental-Companions here]]
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* SexSlave: Naruto, technically, as [[spoiler:Syne's his landlady]]
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* SexSlave: Naruto, technically, as [[spoiler:Syne's his landlady]]landlady and the alternative is that he'd be homeless]]
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* AWolfInSheepsClothing: Syne pretends to be nice and caring but don't be fooled.
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* AWolfInSheepsClothing: Syne pretends to be nice and caring but don't be fooled. At one point, she tells Naruto that she's not a nice and caring person without changing her tone.
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* NotSoDifferent: Several of the characters think this, such as Naruto and Sasuke and [[spoiler: Syne and Naruto]]. Now, as to the truths of the comparisons...
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* LaserGuidedKarma: [[spoiler: After all the unforgivable shit she pulled with Naruto, Syne's last moment in the story is spent being tortured to unconsciousness and back by Anko. When she tries to be defiant by attempting to pull a TakingYouWithMe with Naruto via a death hold jutsu, Anko simply responds by stating she'll have [[MindRape the Yamanaka]] take over for her while she watches.]]
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* BloodFromTheMouth:As per Naruto's illness
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* BloodFromTheMouth:As per Naruto's illness illness, [[spoiler: this trope is a sign that things are getting worse]].
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* DealWithTheDevil: Naruto makes one with Syne.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Naruto makes one with Syne. [[spoiler: To keep from being homeless, he puts up with her abuse and doesn't have too much of a way out of it, as she'd do far worse if he refused]].
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* {{Jerkass}}: Kakashi, Sasuke, and Sakura, as they all treat him as a nuisance, push him aside, and, in the case of second, even [[spoiler:beats him up when he's not able to fight back]] .
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* {{Jerkass}}: Kakashi, Sasuke, and Sakura, Sakura to Naruto, as they all treat him as a nuisance, push him aside, and, in the case of second, even [[spoiler:beats him up when he's not able to fight back]] .
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* SexSlave: Naruto, technically, as [[spoiler:Syne's his landlady]].
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* SexSlave: Naruto, technically, as [[spoiler:Syne's his landlady]].
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* SexualExtortion: [[spoiler: Syne is Naruto's landlady and so abuses him the way she does because 1) he'll be homeless otherwise, 2)her abuse is the closest thing that Naruto has to affection, and 3)she'd do far worse to him if he refuses, so he puts up with it]].
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* SexualExtortion: [[spoiler: Syne is Naruto's landlady and so abuses him the way she does because 1) he'll be homeless otherwise, 2)her abuse is the closest thing that Naruto has to affection, and 3)she'd do far worse to him if he refuses, so he puts up with it]].
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** After beating him up, [[spoiler:Sasuke realizes ''why'' Naruto didn't want to fight him. When he goes to see him at the end, he finds an empty hospital room.]
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** After beating him up, [[spoiler:Sasuke realizes ''why'' Naruto didn't want to fight him. When he goes to see him at the end, he finds an empty hospital room.]]]
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* {{Determinator}}: Naruto is a darker take on the trope.
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* {{Determinator}}: Naruto is a darker take on the trope.trope, serving as something of a deconstruction, as him being so determined isn't doing wonders for his health.
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* DownerEnding: Implied, assuming chapter 18 is supposed to be the last chapter.
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* DownerEnding: Implied, assuming chapter 18 is supposed to be the last chapter.chapter, as [[spoiler: Sasuke comes to an empty hospital room]].
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* FreudianExcuse: Naruto, several times over.
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* FreudianExcuse: Naruto, several times over. He acts up because he wants attention but, more importantly, he just wanted to be loved, as he doesn't have any parents and he's ostracized because he's a jinchuuriki
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* {{Jerkass}}: Kakashi, Sasuke, and Sakura.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Kakashi, Sasuke, and Sakura.Sakura, as they all treat him as a nuisance, push him aside, and, in the case of second, even [[spoiler:beats him up when he's not able to fight back]] .
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Sakura, Sasuke, and Kakashi]] realize too late how badly they’ve messed up.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Sakura, Sasuke, and Kakashi]] The rest of Team 7 realize too late how badly they’ve messed up.up.
** In Kakashi's case, [[spoiler: he realizes that Naruto was trying to ask him for help and that the latter was sick the whole time, along with that, due to finding him annoying, he failed to help him]].
**After a prank, [[spoiler: Sakura realizes how much that prank really hurt him, especially since she remembered that she never even apologized]].
**After beating him up, [[spoiler:Sasuke realizes ''why'' Naruto didn't want to fight him. When he goes to see him at the end, he finds an empty hospital room.]
** In Kakashi's case, [[spoiler: he realizes that Naruto was trying to ask him for help and that the latter was sick the whole time, along with that, due to finding him annoying, he failed to help him]].
**After a prank, [[spoiler: Sakura realizes how much that prank really hurt him, especially since she remembered that she never even apologized]].
**After beating him up, [[spoiler:Sasuke realizes ''why'' Naruto didn't want to fight him. When he goes to see him at the end, he finds an empty hospital room.]
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Subverted. Sakura's 'funny abuse' against Naruto is shown to affect Naruto severely.
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Subverted. Sakura's 'funny abuse' against Naruto is shown to affect Naruto him severely.
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* TheMillstone: Team 7’s opinion on Naruto, including Naruto.
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* TheMillstone: Team 7’s opinion on of Naruto, including Naruto.Naruto's .
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* NotEvenHuman: The justification used for Naruto’s abuse
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* NotEvenHuman: The justification used for Naruto’s abuseabuse (most of it).
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* StepfordSmiler: Naruto hides hi upset (and condition) behind a smile.
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* StepfordSmiler: Naruto hides hi his upset (and condition) behind a smile.
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* TraumaCongaLine: Naruto endures a rather brutal one that doesn't.
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* TraumaCongaLine: Naruto endures a rather brutal one that doesn't.doesn't end.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Sasuke]] delivers one on Naruto [[spoiler:because Naruto refuses to fight him]].
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Sasuke]] delivers one on Naruto [[spoiler:because Naruto refuses the latter refused to fight him]].
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*SoapOperaDisease: Whatever Naruto is sick with isn't really described but it's very serious and he's had it for a while.
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* TalkingAnimal: Guruko, like most of the summoned animals in Naruto.
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* TalkingAnimal: Guruko, like most of the summoned animals in Naruto. However, he didn't talk to Naruto at first.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Sakura and Kakashi]] realize too late how badly they’ve messed up.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Sakura Sakura, Sasuke, and Kakashi]] realize too late how badly they’ve messed up.
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* TooDumbToLive: How Team 7 sees Naruto
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An AlternateCharacterInterpretation story written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1504180/ Windschild8178]] and told from the focus of Guruko, it is a well-written story that can invoke strong emotions from the reader.
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An AlternateCharacterInterpretation AlternativeCharacterInterpretation story written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1504180/ Windschild8178]] and told from the focus of Guruko, it is a well-written story that can invoke strong emotions from the reader.
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* AWolfInSheepsClothing: Syne.
* AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale: Subverted. Sakura's 'funny abuse' against Naruto is shown to affect Naruto severely.
* AnOfferYouCantRefuse
* AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale: Subverted. Sakura's 'funny abuse' against Naruto is shown to affect Naruto severely.
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* TheComplainerIsAlwaysWrong: Team 7’s attitude, even when Naruto the complainer is right or just asking for help.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: SO averted. It is all levels of wrong in the fic
** However, invoked in the author's notes. "One more thing. I'm not describing male on male. The rapist is a female for my sanities sake..."
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Naruto thinks he’s in one of these kinds of stories when it’s a [[PowerOfTrust completely]] [[PowerOfFriendship different]] [[AFriendInNeed one]].
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Naruto thinks he’s in one of these kinds of stories when it’s a [[PowerOfTrust completely]] [[PowerOfFriendship different]] [[AFriendInNeed one]].
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* TheDogBitesBack
* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Subverted. Sakura's 'funny abuse' against Naruto is shown to affect Naruto severely.
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: SO averted. It is all levels of wrong in thefic
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** However, invoked in the author's notes. "One more thing. I'm not describing male on male. The rapist is a female for mysanities sanity's sake..."
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Naruto thinks he’s in one of these kinds of stories when it’s a [[PowerOfTrust completely]][[PowerOfFriendship [[ThePowerOfFriendship different]] [[AFriendInNeed one]].
* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Subverted. Sakura's 'funny abuse' against Naruto is shown to affect Naruto severely.
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: SO averted. It is all levels of wrong in the
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Naruto thinks he’s in one of these kinds of stories when it’s a [[PowerOfTrust completely]]
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Naruto needs to learn just when to stop struggling painfully and get a little help from some friends, though [[FreudianExcuse that’s not Naruto’s fault]]
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Naruto needs to learn just when to stop struggling painfully and get a little help from some friends, though [[FreudianExcuse that’s not Naruto’s fault]]fault]].
* TheMillstone: Team 7’s opinion on Naruto, including Naruto.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Sasuke]] delivers one on Naruto [[spoiler:because Naruto refuses to fight him.]]
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* SecurityCling: Poor Naruto; shame his first experience with this is [[spoiler: after a [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil ‘session’]] with Syne]]
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* SecurityCling: Poor Naruto; shame his first experience with this is [[spoiler: after a [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil ‘session’]] with Syne]]
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* SexSlave: Naruto,technicallytechnically.
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* TheComplainerIsAlwaysWrong: Team 7’s attitude, even when Naruto the complainer is right or just asking for help.
* TheDogBitesBack
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* TheUnfavorite: Naruto is a student version of this to Kakashi.
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* AWolfInSheepsClothing: Syne.
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** However, invoked in the author's notes. "One more thing. I'm not describing male on male. The rapist is a female for my sanities[sic] sake..."
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** However, invoked in the author's notes. "One more thing. I'm not describing male on male. The rapist is a female for my sanities[sic] sanities sake..."
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* INeverToldYouMyName: Gives Naruto a real BSOD moment when a [[CompleteMonster certain]] [[AxCrazy someone]] knew his name before he told them it.
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* INeverToldYouMyName: Gives Naruto a real BSOD moment when a [[CompleteMonster certain]] certain [[AxCrazy someone]] knew his name before he told them it.
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* NotSoDifferent: Several of the characters think this, such as Naruto and Sasuke and [[spoiler: Syne and Naruto]]. Now, as to [[YourMileageMayVary the truths of the comparisons...]]
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* NotSoDifferent: Several of the characters think this, such as Naruto and Sasuke and [[spoiler: Syne and Naruto]]. Now, as to [[YourMileageMayVary the truths of the comparisons...]]
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: SO averted. It is all levels of wrong in the fic
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* RapeIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale: SO averted. It is all levels of wrong in the fic
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* CompleteMonster: Syne
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* FairWeatherMentor: Dammit, Kakashi and Jiraiya, you’re spitting all over Minato’s sacrifice!
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* FairWeatherMentor: Dammit, Kakashi and Jiraiya, Jiraiya; you’re spitting all over Minato’s sacrifice!
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* TheWoobie: Guess who?
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However, as he spends time with Naruto, he learns more about the 13-year old blonde and what eactly life is like for Naruto.
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However, as he spends time with Naruto, he learns more about the 13-year old blonde and what eactly exactly life is like for Naruto.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Sakura and Kakashi]] realize too late how badly they’ve messed up.
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* AnOfferYouCantRefuse
* BeautyIsBad: Syne
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Might Gai]] seems to have this as a special ability.
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Might Gai]] seems to have this as a special ability.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Naruto thinks he’s in one of these kinds of stories when it’s a [[PowerOfTrust completely]] [[PowerOfFriendship different]] [[AFriendInNeed one]].
* FairWeatherMentor: Dammit, Kakashi and Jiraiya, you’re spitting all over Minato’s sacrifice!
* FalseFriend: Naruto’s view on Team 7
* FairWeatherMentor: Dammit, Kakashi and Jiraiya, you’re spitting all over Minato’s sacrifice!
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* FreudianExcuse: Naruto, several times over.
* GreaterNeedThanMine: How Naruto sees everyone around him after years of being pushed aside
* GoldFever: In the sense of greed for money. It actually works out in Naruto’s favor.
* HeroicBSOD: Naruto after Ino’s prank and the resulting reaction from the villagers.
* GreaterNeedThanMine: How Naruto sees everyone around him after years of being pushed aside
* GoldFever: In the sense of greed for money. It actually works out in Naruto’s favor.
* HeroicBSOD: Naruto after Ino’s prank and the resulting reaction from the villagers.
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* InTheEndYouAreOnYourOwn: Naruto’s view after years of abuse and neglect by the entire village.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Naruto needs to learn just when to stop struggling painfully and get a little help from some friends, though [[FreudianExcuse that’s not Naruto’s fault]]
* LonersAreFreaks: But it’s not like Naruto can help it; he’s tried making friends with Team 7, which failed.
* LonersAreFreaks: But it’s not like Naruto can help it; he’s tried making friends with Team 7, which failed.
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* SexSlave: Naruto, technically
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* TheComplainerIsAlwaysWrong: Team 7’s attitude, even when Naruto the complainer is right or just asking for help.
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* TheWoobie: Guess who?
* ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself: In probably the worst interpretation of the trope possible.
* TooDumbToLive: How Team 7 sees Naruto
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* BlatantLies: Pretty much everything that comes out of Naruto’s mouth when he’s around his precious people.
* CompleteMonster: Syne
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* NotSoDifferent: Several of the characters think this, such as Naruto and Sasuke and [[spoiler: Syne and Naruto]]. Now, as to [[YourMileageMayVary the truths of the comparisons...]]
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: [[spoiler: Syne]]’s connections keep any sort of retaliation from happening, nor does Naruto have an opening for escape. [[spoiler: At least, until the [[StatusQuoIsGod status quo]] falls to pieces.]]
* SecurityCling: Poor Naruto; shame his first experience with this is [[spoiler: after a [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil ‘session’]] with Syne]]
* StepfordSmiler: Naruto
* SecurityCling: Poor Naruto; shame his first experience with this is [[spoiler: after a [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil ‘session’]] with Syne]]
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