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''A Pony Out of Place'' is a crossover/romance fanfic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}''. It is published on [=FIMFiction=] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/34694/a-pony-out-of-place here]] and written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ausbrony Ausbrony]].
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''A Pony Out of Place'' is a crossover/romance fanfic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}''.''Anime/PokemonTheSeries''. It is published on [=FIMFiction=] [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/34694/a-pony-out-of-place here]] and written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ausbrony Ausbrony]].
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* CooldownHug: Flare gives one to stop Twilight's BurningWithAnger moment above.
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* DraggedIntoDrag: When trying to find his Cutie Mark with The Cutie Mark Crusaders, Flare was almost force into an dress by Sweetie Belle but it was stop when The Cutie Mark Crusaders start to argue and he bailed on them.
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* DraggedIntoDrag: When trying to find his Cutie Mark with The the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Flare was is almost force forced into an a dress by Sweetie Belle Belle, but it was stop he escapes unnoticed when The Cutie Mark Crusaders start to argue and he bailed on them.the group starts arguing.
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* AccidentalPervert: Twilight gives Flare a massage after the race, not realizing the book she's going by is intended for couples. HilarityEnsues.
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* AccidentalPervert: Twilight gives Flare a massage after the race, not realizing the book she's going by is intended for couples. HilarityEnsues.
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* BehindTheBlack[=/=]FailedASpotCheck: Much like in “Fall Weather Friends”, Twilight fails to notice the large crowd of spectators until Pinkie points them out to her.
-->'''Pinkie''': All right everypony! Let's all give a hoof to our two competitors!
-->'''Twilight''': Pinkie? Who the hay are you talking to?
-->'''Pinkie''': (''pointing'') Them.
-->'''Twilight''': One of these days... I'm going to learn not to ask.
-->'''Pinkie''': All right everypony! Let's all give a hoof to our two competitors!
-->'''Twilight''': Pinkie? Who the hay are you talking to?
-->'''Pinkie''': (''pointing'') Them.
-->'''Twilight''': One of these days... I'm going to learn not to ask.
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* [[spoiler: DeadlyUpgrade:]] Averted in the nick of time. [[spoiler: Flare's evolution into a Rapidash also gives him access to unicorn magic. Sadly, as a Pokemon, his body is incompatible with such powers and will kill him painfully if something isn't done. This is safely averted through Arceus and Celestia transforming him into a unicorn.]]
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* [[spoiler: DeadlyUpgrade:]] DeadlyUpgrade: Averted in the nick of time. [[spoiler: Flare's [[spoiler:Flare's evolution into a Rapidash also gives him access to unicorn magic. Sadly, as a Pokemon, his body is incompatible with such powers and will kill him painfully if something isn't done. This is safely averted through Arceus and Celestia transforming him into a unicorn.]]
* FailedASpotCheck: Twilight fails to notice a large crowd of spectators until Pinkie points them out to her.
-->'''Pinkie''': All right everypony! Let's all give a hoof to our two competitors!\\
'''Twilight''': Pinkie? Who the hay are you talking to?\\
'''Pinkie''': (''pointing'') Them.\\
'''Twilight''': One of these days... I'm going to learn not to ask.
-->'''Pinkie''': All right everypony! Let's all give a hoof to our two competitors!\\
'''Twilight''': Pinkie? Who the hay are you talking to?\\
'''Pinkie''': (''pointing'') Them.\\
'''Twilight''': One of these days... I'm going to learn not to ask.
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* IChooseToStay: Flare. [[spoiler:Arceus does not take it well.]]
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-->'''Flare Blitz''': So are there any rules? Or just an all-out dash to the finish?
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Oh, hadeeharhar!
* NiceGuy: Flare Blitz.
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Oh, hadeeharhar!
* NiceGuy: Flare Blitz.
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-->'''Flare Blitz''': So are there any rules? Or just an all-out dash to the finish?
-->'''Rainbowfinish?\\
'''Rainbow Dash''': Oh, hadeeharhar!
* %%* NiceGuy: Flare Blitz.
-->'''Rainbow
'''Rainbow Dash''': Oh, hadeeharhar!
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** Dinky and Sparkler, too. Same universe.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld
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* WillTheyOrWontThey: Flare and Twilight.
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* MegatonPunch: While hiding behind [[spoiler:Celestia from an enraged Flare and Twilight, Discord notices that Celestia's flanks were larger than before. This causes Celestia to buck him into a wall before convincing Twilight and Flare to spare him.]]
* MoreThanMindControl: In "Love is Chaos" [[spoiler:Discord hypnotized Flare to made him think that Rainbow Dash was Twilight]].
* MoreThanMindControl: In "Love is Chaos" [[spoiler:Discord hypnotized Flare to made him think that Rainbow Dash was Twilight]].
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* MegatonPunch: While hiding behind [[spoiler:Celestia from an enraged Flare and Twilight, Discord notices that Celestia's flanks were are larger than before. This causes Celestia to buck him into a wall before convincing Twilight and Flare to spare him.]]
* MoreThanMindControl: In "Love is Chaos" [[spoiler:Discordhypnotized hypnotizes Flare to made him think that Rainbow Dash was Twilight]].
* MoreThanMindControl: In "Love is Chaos" [[spoiler:Discord
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* [[spoiler:RelationshipUpgrade: Flare and Twilight, at the end of “Of Suns, Moons and Stars”]]
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* ShoutOut: Mention is made of [[Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony the Kicker Clan]], a prestigious Pegasus family, mostly connected with the military.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Mention is made of [[Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony the Kicker Clan]], a prestigious Pegasus family, mostly connected with the military.
** Mention is made of [[Fanfic/TheLifeAndTimesOfAWinningPony the Kicker Clan]], a prestigious Pegasus family, mostly connected with the military.
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-->[[spoiler:'''Zecora''': You have threatened my friends and borne witness to this form. Now you face Equestria's other Pokemon: for I am the embodiment of lightning. I am Zebstrika!]]
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-->[[spoiler:'''Zecora''': You have threatened my friends and borne witness to this form. Now you face Equestria's other Pokemon: for I am the embodiment of lightning. I am Zebstrika!]]Zebstrika!]]
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* ArmorPiercingSlap[=/=]MegatonPunch: While hiding behind [[spoiler:Celestia from an enraged Flare and Twilight, Discord notices that Celestia's flanks were larger than before. This causes Celestia to buck him into a wall before convincing Twilight and Flare to spare him.]]
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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[OlympusMons the Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal [[BadDreams nightmare]] and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”
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-->“Space, Time and Distortion, worlds beyond worlds and all are linked to [[OlympusMons the Creator]]. Born form nothing and encompassing everything, the fate of light and darkness, the bearer and destined. The eternal [[BadDreams nightmare]] nightmare and the light of destiny. One born from the union of love and will, dreams given form and hope eternal.”
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* VillainSong: In "Chaos Rising Part Two", [[spoiler: Chrysalis and some of her Changelings sang a parody of [[Disney/TheLittleMermaid Under the Sea]].]]
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* VillainSong: In "Chaos Rising Part Two", [[spoiler: Chrysalis and some of her Changelings sang a parody of [[Disney/TheLittleMermaid [[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989 Under the Sea]].]]
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* CrowdSong: In Chapter 6 of the revision Flare sang the theme song of {{The Greatest American Hero}} with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.
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* CrowdSong: In Chapter 6 of the revision Flare sang the theme song of {{The Greatest American Hero}} ''Series/TheGreatestAmericanHero'' with the rest Ponyville and the Mane 6 sang along.
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* TheManBehindTheMan: In "A Prelude of Things to Come" [[spoiler:Darkrai is revealed to be working for a [[BiggerBad more evil creature]] who then drained the life from Darkrai because he [[YouHaveFailedMe failed the creature twice now]].]]
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* TheManBehindTheMan: In "A Prelude of Things to Come" [[spoiler:Darkrai is revealed to be working for a [[BiggerBad [[GreaterScopeVillain more evil creature]] who then drained the life from Darkrai because he [[YouHaveFailedMe failed the creature twice now]].]]
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* AlchemyIsMagic: In the Epilogue, Flare's favor to [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is to bring her back to life and not only that He brought her back into a Filly and loses the Alicorn Amulet forever, and is given a [[FanNickname new name]].]]
** This is also counts as a ShoutOut since this is similar to the plot of [[Fanfic/PastSins Past Sins]] since it has [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is brought back to life as a Filly and is given a [[FanNickname new name]].]]
* ArmorPiercingSlap/ MegatonPunch: While hiding behind [[spoiler:Celestia from an enraged Flare and Twilight, Discord notices that Celestia's flanks were larger than before. This causes Celestia to buck him into a wall before convincing Twilight and Flare to spare him.]]
* BerserkButton: Do not tell [[spoiler:Celestia that she's gotten fat as Discord learned the hard way when he attempted to hide behind her, and within the range of her hind legs, from Flare and Twilight.]]
* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: When Celestia declares that Flare and Luna are going to be punished for [[spoiler: destroying most of the castle grounds,]] they both fearfully wonder what punishment is in store: Banishment? Imprisonment? Imprisonment in the place she would banish them to?
** This is also counts as a ShoutOut since this is similar to the plot of [[Fanfic/PastSins Past Sins]] since it has [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is brought back to life as a Filly and is given a [[FanNickname new name]].]]
* ArmorPiercingSlap/ MegatonPunch: While hiding behind [[spoiler:Celestia from an enraged Flare and Twilight, Discord notices that Celestia's flanks were larger than before. This causes Celestia to buck him into a wall before convincing Twilight and Flare to spare him.]]
* BerserkButton: Do not tell [[spoiler:Celestia that she's gotten fat as Discord learned the hard way when he attempted to hide behind her, and within the range of her hind legs, from Flare and Twilight.]]
* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: When Celestia declares that Flare and Luna are going to be punished for [[spoiler: destroying most of the castle grounds,]] they both fearfully wonder what punishment is in store: Banishment? Imprisonment? Imprisonment in the place she would banish them to?
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* AlchemyIsMagic: In the Epilogue, Flare's favor to [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is to bring her back to life and not only that He brought her back into in the form of a Filly and loses filly, losing the Alicorn Amulet forever, forever and is being given a [[FanNickname new name]].name.]]
** This is also counts as a ShoutOut since this is similar to the plot of [[Fanfic/PastSins Past Sins]] since it has [[spoiler: Nightmare Moon is brought back to life as a Filly and is given a [[FanNickname new name]].]]
* ArmorPiercingSlap/ MegatonPunch: ArmorPiercingSlap[=/=]MegatonPunch: While hiding behind [[spoiler:Celestia from an enraged Flare and Twilight, Discord notices that Celestia's flanks were larger than before. This causes Celestia to buck him into a wall before convincing Twilight and Flare to spare him.]]
* BerserkButton: Do not tell [[spoiler:Celestia that she's gottenfat fat, as Discord learned the hard way when he attempted to hide behind her, and within the range of her hind legs, from Flare and Twilight.]]
* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: When Celestia declares that Flare and Luna are going to be punished for [[spoiler: destroying most of the castle grounds,]] they both fearfully wonder what punishment is in store: Banishment? Imprisonment? [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E22ABirdInTheHoof Imprisonment in the place she would banish themto?to]]?
* BerserkButton: Do not tell [[spoiler:Celestia that she's gotten
* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: When Celestia declares that Flare and Luna are going to be punished for [[spoiler: destroying most of the castle grounds,]] they both fearfully wonder what punishment is in store: Banishment? Imprisonment? [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E22ABirdInTheHoof Imprisonment in the place she would banish them
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* ShipTease: When [[spoiler:Discord teasingly tells Celestia to stop eating so much cake upon seeing her larger flanks, he asked if she missed him, causing Celestia to blush. Although it is not clear if she blushed because she did miss him or because she was ashamed of her weight gain, her response to the inquiry was to buck him into a wall before talking to Flare and Twilight.]]
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* ArmorPiercingSlap/MegatonPunch: ArmorPiercingSlap/ MegatonPunch: While hiding behind [[spoiler:Celestia from an enraged Flare and Twilight, Discord notices that Celestia's flanks were larger than before. This causes Celestia to buck him into a wall before convincing Twilight and Flare to spare him.]]
* BerserkButton: Do not tell [[spoiler:Celestia that she's gotten fat as Discord learned the hard way when he attempted to hide behind her, and within the range of her hind legs, from Flare and Twilight.]]
* BerserkButton: Do not tell [[spoiler:Celestia that she's gotten fat as Discord learned the hard way when he attempted to hide behind her, and within the range of her hind legs, from Flare and Twilight.]]
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* CooldownHug: Flare gives one to stop Twilight's BurningWithAnger moment above.
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** Comes up again when Mocha Latte mentions what would happen if someone were to gave Pinky Pie coffee.
-->'''Mocha''': “I’m sorry; the Princesses said it was best that the whole thing to be forgotten, and that giving that particular mare coffee again was punishable by banishment and then imprisonment in the place you were banished too.”
-->'''Mocha''': “I’m sorry; the Princesses said it was best that the whole thing to be forgotten, and that giving that particular mare coffee again was punishable by banishment and then imprisonment in the place you were banished too.”
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* TheManBehindTheMan: In "A Prelude of Things to Come" [[spoiler:Darkrai is revealed to be working for a more evil creature who then drained the life from Darkrai because he [[YouHaveFailedMe failed the creature twice now]].]]
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* TheManBehindTheMan: In "A Prelude of Things to Come" [[spoiler:Darkrai is revealed to be working for a [[BiggerBad more evil creature creature]] who then drained the life from Darkrai because he [[YouHaveFailedMe failed the creature twice now]].]]
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* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: [[spoiler:Set up but subverted when Shining pulls Flare in for a friendly hug after learning that he's daring Twilight. DoubleSubverted when he tells Flare that he's obligated and required to threaten to have him gelded and quarted if he hurts her.]]
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* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: [[spoiler:Set up but subverted when Shining pulls Flare in for a friendly hug after learning that he's daring dating Twilight. DoubleSubverted when he tells Flare that he's obligated and required to threaten to have him gelded and quarted if he hurts her.]]
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-->Flare looked up, his eyes swirling a bit. “Hey there, Fairy~ ♫Doo doo do doooo♪! Fairy learned Double Team!” Flare giggled as Twilight sighed. Yeah, he was fine.
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-->Flare looked up, [[WingdingEyes his eyes swirling a bit.bit]]. “Hey there, Fairy~ ♫Doo doo do doooo♪! Fairy learned Double Team!” Flare giggled as Twilight sighed. Yeah, he was fine.
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* NonSequiturThud: In the Epilogue, after Flare [[spoiler:brought Nightmare Moon back to life as a Filly]] this happens.
-->Flare looked up, his eyes swirling a bit. “Hey there, Fairy~ ♫Doo doo do doooo♪! Fairy learned Double Team!” Flare giggled as Twilight sighed. Yeah, he was fine.
-->Flare looked up, his eyes swirling a bit. “Hey there, Fairy~ ♫Doo doo do doooo♪! Fairy learned Double Team!” Flare giggled as Twilight sighed. Yeah, he was fine.
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* TheManBehindTheMan: In "A Prelude of Things to Come" [[spoiler:Darkrai is revealed to be working for a more evil creature who then drained the life from Darkrai because he [[YouHaveFailedMe failed the creature twice now]].]]
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* [[spoiler:DeadlyUpgrade: It appears Flare only has months left to live, as the effects from Darkrai's, Nightmare Moon's, and Mew's intervention on his body are causing him to slowly die. He doesn't know yet, but Twilight, Celestia, Dreamy, and Luna do.]]
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: Two cases. [[spoiler:He bonds with Nightmare Moon to combat Darkrai at first. This proves to be effective, but when he nearly dies, Mew then grants him every move in his moveset to fully put Darkrai away.]]
* EmbarrassingNickname: Per WordOfGod, Twilight really likes the pet name "Fairy" that Flare gave her. [[NoodleIncident But then there was that time he accidentally said it in public]]...
* EmbarrassingNickname: Per WordOfGod, Twilight really likes the pet name "Fairy" that Flare gave her. [[NoodleIncident But then there was that time he accidentally said it in public]]...
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* TakingYouWithMe: In "Chapter Nine – Darkness before the Dawn", [[spoiler: After Darkrai released He had lost He said this:]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: In "Chapter Nine – Darkness before the Dawn", [[spoiler: After Darkrai released realize He had lost He said this:]]this.]]