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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3906166/chapters/8741683 A Not Quite Smooth Wooing]]'' is a ''Literature/TheHobbit'' fanfic written for a prompt on the Hobbit Kink Meme, that asked for a story wherein dwarves are all about consent in their sex lives.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3906166/chapters/8741683 A Not Quite Smooth Wooing]]'' is a ''Literature/TheHobbit'' fanfic written for a prompt on the Hobbit Kink Meme, that asked for a story wherein dwarves are all about place a premium on consent in their sex lives.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3906166/chapters/8741683 A Not Quite Smooth Wooing]]'' is a fanfic written for a prompt on the Hobbit Kink Meme, that asked for a story wherein dwarves are all about consent in their sex lives. The story follows Gerrun, a woman from Laketown, who falls in love with Fíli.
One would think that a consent culture would reduce the problems faced in a cross-culture relationship, but while Gerrun initially likes Fíli's respectful behaviour, she begins to wonder if he really likes her when he doesn't come running after her after they had a fight.
One would think that a consent culture would reduce the problems faced in a cross-culture relationship, but while Gerrun initially likes Fíli's respectful behaviour, she begins to wonder if he really likes her when he doesn't come running after her after they had a fight.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3906166/chapters/8741683 A Not Quite Smooth Wooing]]'' is a ''Literature/TheHobbit'' fanfic written for a prompt on the Hobbit Kink Meme, that asked for a story wherein dwarves are all about consent in their sex lives. lives.
The story follows Gerrun, a woman from Laketown, who falls in love withFíli.
Fíli. One would think that a consent culture would reduce the problems faced in a cross-culture relationship, but while Gerrun initially likes Fíli's respectful behaviour, she begins to wonder if he really likes her when he doesn't come running after her after they had a fight.
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* TheMatchmaker: Dís is a regular customer of Gerrun, and sent Fíli specifically to that market stall. She is also very much in favour of the match.
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* TheMatchmaker: Dís is a regular customer of Gerrun, and sent Fíli specifically to that market stall. She is also very much in favour of the match.match.
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''A Not Quite Smooth Wooing'' is a fanfic written for a prompt on the Hobbit Kink Meme, that asked for a story wherein dwarves are all about consent in their sex lives. The story follows Gerrun, a woman from Laketown, who falls in love with Fíli.
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* DiamondsAreAGirlsBestFriend: Parodied. Gerrun would be offended if a man gave her diamonds, as she would suspect his intentions to be less than honourable. She's a commoner, and the men who would intend to marry her simply cannot afford diamonds.
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* DiamondsAreAGirlsBestFriend: Parodied.DistractedByTheLuxury: Subverted. Gerrun would be offended if a man gave her diamonds, as she would suspect his intentions to be less than honourable. She's a commoner, and the men who would intend to marry her simply cannot afford diamonds.
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* LoveAtFirstSight: When Fíli turns up at Gerrun's market stall to buy something, they both think each other incredibly attractive and try to not embarrass themselves in front of the other.
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* TheMatchmaker: Dís is a regular customer of Gerrun, and sent Fíli specifically to that market stall. She is also very much in favour of the match.
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''A Not Quite Smooth Wooing'' is a fanfic written for a prompt on the Hobbit Kink Meme, that asked for a story wherein dwarves are all about consent in their sex lives. The story follows Gerrun, a woman from Laketown, who falls in love with Fíli.
One would think that a consent culture would reduce the problems faced in a cross-culture relationship, but while Gerrun initially likes Fíli's respectful behaviour, she begins to wonder if he really likes her when he doesn't come running after her after they had a fight.
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* FixFic: Everyone lives, and Kíli remained single. The author seems to think that Tauriel was a superfluous addition.
* FirstLove: Gerrun was worried about becoming an old maiden, and Fíli, too, has no prior love interest.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Dís, Thorin, Fíli and Kíli all are this, they are busy repairing the dragon damage.
* IKissYourHand: Fíli to Gerrun.
* DiamondsAreAGirlsBestFriend: Parodied. Gerrun would be offended if a man gave her diamonds, as she would suspect his intentions to be less than honourable. She's a commoner, and the men who would intend to marry her simply cannot afford diamonds.
* InterspeciesRomance: Fíli and Gerrun.
* FlowersOfRomance: Explained to Fíli by one of Bard's daughters. Dwarves use stones for that purpose.
* GrandRomanticGesture: Deconstructed. Dwarves don't do those, on the grounds that the receiver might feel indebted to the giver, and that would be bad manners.
* SerenadeYourLover: The fic is mostly based on the film, but here uses the book fact that all the dwarves can play an instrument.
* LoveAtFirstSight: When Fíli turns up at Gerrun's market stall to buy something, they both think each other incredibly attractive and try to not embarrass themselves in front of the other.
One would think that a consent culture would reduce the problems faced in a cross-culture relationship, but while Gerrun initially likes Fíli's respectful behaviour, she begins to wonder if he really likes her when he doesn't come running after her after they had a fight.
!! Contains Examples Of:
* FixFic: Everyone lives, and Kíli remained single. The author seems to think that Tauriel was a superfluous addition.
* FirstLove: Gerrun was worried about becoming an old maiden, and Fíli, too, has no prior love interest.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Dís, Thorin, Fíli and Kíli all are this, they are busy repairing the dragon damage.
* IKissYourHand: Fíli to Gerrun.
* DiamondsAreAGirlsBestFriend: Parodied. Gerrun would be offended if a man gave her diamonds, as she would suspect his intentions to be less than honourable. She's a commoner, and the men who would intend to marry her simply cannot afford diamonds.
* InterspeciesRomance: Fíli and Gerrun.
* FlowersOfRomance: Explained to Fíli by one of Bard's daughters. Dwarves use stones for that purpose.
* GrandRomanticGesture: Deconstructed. Dwarves don't do those, on the grounds that the receiver might feel indebted to the giver, and that would be bad manners.
* SerenadeYourLover: The fic is mostly based on the film, but here uses the book fact that all the dwarves can play an instrument.
* LoveAtFirstSight: When Fíli turns up at Gerrun's market stall to buy something, they both think each other incredibly attractive and try to not embarrass themselves in front of the other.
