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* AbusiveParents: Vernon Dursley, like in canon. Unlike in canon, Petunia is ''not'' abusive.
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* AbusiveParents: Vernon Dursley, like in canon. Once his wife and son stop ganging up on Harry with him, he turns his anger on them as well, not helped along by his budding alcoholism. Unlike in canon, Petunia is ''not'' abusive.
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* TheAtoner: Dudley and Petunia Dursley, Severus Snape, Lucius Malfoy, Tom Riddle, Aunt Marge.
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* TheAtoner: Dudley and Petunia Dursley, Severus Snape, Lucius Malfoy, Tom Riddle, and eventually Aunt Marge.
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* BadIsGoodAndGoodIsBad: [[spoiler: Tom]] is terribly embarrassed about being sorted into Gryffindor -- the house of "goodie-two shoes" and "cannon fodder".
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* BadIsGoodAndGoodIsBad: [[spoiler: Tom]] Tom Riddle from the diary]] is terribly embarrassed about being sorted into Gryffindor -- the house of "goodie-two shoes" and "cannon fodder".
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* BadCopIncompetentCop: Scrimgeour's faction of Aurors.
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* BadCopIncompetentCop: Scrimgeour's faction of Aurors. He maintains that anyone marked by Voldemort is permanently guilty (regardless of evidence), directing his faction to bend and twist any law possible to punish anyone they deem "dark". His chosen Aurors are a blend of corrupt and bumbling, such as those only holding onto their rank due to their family connections.
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* BavarianFireDrill: [[WeNeedADistraction Draco throws a tantrum]] and Lucius demands the Ministry workers stop whatever they're doing and assist him so that Arthur Weasley can sneak in to find evidence that Rufus Scrimgeour and Dolores Umbridge are plotting to steal Harry away from his family.
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* BavarianFireDrill: [[WeNeedADistraction Draco throws a tantrum]] about his mother trying to take custody of him, and Lucius demands the Ministry workers stop whatever they're doing and assist him him... so that Arthur Weasley can sneak in to find evidence that Rufus Scrimgeour and Dolores Umbridge are plotting to steal Harry away from his family.
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* BigNo: [[spoiler: Tom]] when he's sorted into Gryffindor. In a more dramatic example, Snape when Harry's name comes out of the Goblet of Fire.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Dumbledore. He hides behind his "kindly old grandfather" persona but he dumped Harry at the Dursleys and [[spoiler: ''paid Vernon to abuse him'' so he can later swoop in and "rescue" Harry and indoctrinate him so that he will gladly die for the greater good.]]
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Dumbledore. He hides behind his "kindly old grandfather" persona but he dumped Harry at the Dursleys and [[spoiler: ''paid Vernon to abuse him'' so he can later swoop in and "rescue" Harry and indoctrinate him so that he will gladly die for the greater good.]]
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* BigNo: [[spoiler: Tom]] Tom Riddle]] when he's sorted into Gryffindor. In a more dramatic example, Snape when Harry's name comes out of the Goblet of Fire.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Dumbledore. He hides behind his "kindly old grandfather" persona but he dumped Harry at the Dursleys and [[spoiler: ''paid Vernon to abuse him'' so he can later swoop in and "rescue" Harry and indoctrinate him so that he will gladly die for the greater good.]] He has some guilt that Vernon went beyond his request to "toughen Harry up" into abuse, but excuses it due to the pressing need for a hero]].
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Dumbledore. He hides behind his "kindly old grandfather" persona but he dumped Harry at the Dursleys and [[spoiler: ''paid Vernon to abuse him'' so he can later swoop in and "rescue" Harry and indoctrinate him so that he will gladly die for the greater good.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Lucius while on the run from the Ministry.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Lucius while on the run from the Ministry. He has to adopt the persona of a halfblood handyman and wear Muggle casual clothing.
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* ConvenientlyUnverifiableCoverStory: Snape and Lucius drop hints that [[LukeYouAreMyFather Tom is Voldemort's son.]] It's such a good lie that they've even got ''Voldemort'' believing it.
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* ConvenientlyUnverifiableCoverStory: Snape and Lucius drop hints that [[LukeYouAreMyFather Tom is Voldemort's son.]] son]] to anyone enquiring about where he came from. It's such a good lie that they've even got ''Voldemort'' believing it.it, since he has a long history of raping witches and can't dismiss the possibility one of his victims living long enough to have a child.
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* CurbStompBattle: Dragons vs. dementors. Dragons win.
* DarkIsNotEvil: As demonstrated by Snape, Lucius, and Tom.
* DarkIsNotEvil: As demonstrated by Snape, Lucius, and Tom.
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* CurbStompBattle: Dragons vs. dementors. Dragons win.
near instantly win due to their fiery breath.
* DarkIsNotEvil: As demonstrated by Snape, Lucius, and Tom. They spend a great deal of time trying to turn Slytherin House into people willing to use manipulation and trickery to protect others, and a great deal of their opposition refuse to believe this at all.
* DarkIsNotEvil: As demonstrated by Snape, Lucius, and Tom. They spend a great deal of time trying to turn Slytherin House into people willing to use manipulation and trickery to protect others, and a great deal of their opposition refuse to believe this at all.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler: Vernon, Uncle Algie, Theodore Nott]].
* DistressedDude: Harry. Frequently.
* DomesticAbuse: Vernon towards Harry, like in canon. And towards Petunia at times, unlike in canon.
* DistressedDude: Harry. Frequently.
* DomesticAbuse: Vernon towards Harry, like in canon. And towards Petunia at times, unlike in canon.
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* DeathByAdaptation: DeathByAdaptation:
**[[spoiler: Vernon, who dies in a drunk driving incident after his family flees him]].
** [[spoiler:Vernon, Uncle Algie, after falling into a bog and being eaten alive by the magical creatures living in it]].
** [[spoiler: TheodoreNott]].
Nott, who is killed by his Death Eater father for refusing to take the Mark and serve his master]].
* DistressedDude:Harry. Frequently.
Harry is, as per usual, frequently in peril and spends most of the story being
* DomesticAbuse: Vernon towards Harry, like in canon. And towards Petunia and (eventually) Dudley at times, unlike in canon.
**[[spoiler: Vernon, who dies in a drunk driving incident after his family flees him]].
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** [[spoiler: Theodore
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* DomesticAbuse: Vernon towards Harry, like in canon. And towards Petunia and (eventually) Dudley at times, unlike in canon.
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* DoubleStandard: When Dumbledore is manipulating everyone around him for a good cause, he gets called out for it. When Snape and Lucius do the same, they get applauded for it.
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* DoubleStandard: When Dumbledore is manipulating everyone around him for a good cause, he gets called out for it. When Snape and Lucius do the same, they get applauded for it. This mostly goes uncommented on in-story.
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** [[spoiler: Tom was molested at the orphanage]].
** Lucius had a terrible relationship with his father.
* FutureMeScaresMe [=/=] EvilMeScaresMe: Tom is horrified when he learns what Voldemort has done.
** Lucius had a terrible relationship with his father.
* FutureMeScaresMe [=/=] EvilMeScaresMe: Tom is horrified when he learns what Voldemort has done.
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** [[spoiler: Tom was almost molested at the orphanage]].
orphanage by an older orphan, only ''just'' managing to avoid it by an accidental spell hurting the older boy and killing his pet rabbit in retaliation]].
** Lucius had a terrible relationship with hisfather.
father, who molded him to become a "proper" head of the family by literally beating him into shape. Anything he actually enjoyed was cast aside as unnecessary.
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** Lucius had a terrible relationship with his
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* HeelFaceTurn: Lucius Malfoy, after learning that the Dark Lord is a lying {{Hypocrite}}.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Lucius Malfoy, after learning that the Dark Lord is a lying (half-blood) {{Hypocrite}}.
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** Lucius covertly hexes Hermione for annoying him. He accidentally hexes himself as well.
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** Lucius covertly hexes Hermione for annoying him. He accidentally hexes himself as well.well, due to how he had to hold his wand while casting the hex.
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** [[spoiler: Harry ends up dragged along with Sirius into the Veil.]] This is remedied with Harry's invisibility cloak and the Resurrection Stone (which Harry had planned to use to talk to his parents for Christmas.) This also solves the plot line of Harry's Horcrux scar.
** After the final battle, Dumbledore forfeits the Elder Wand back to Death in exchange for Tom, who [[spoiler: stepped in front of an Avada Kedavra to sever his link to Voldemort.]]
** After the final battle, Dumbledore forfeits the Elder Wand back to Death in exchange for Tom, who [[spoiler: stepped in front of an Avada Kedavra to sever his link to Voldemort.]]
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** [[spoiler: Harry ends up dragged along with Sirius into the Veil.]] This is remedied with Harry's invisibility cloak and the Resurrection Stone (which Harry had planned to use to talk to his parents for Christmas.) Christmas) [[spoiler: by trading both to Death as compensation for letting them live]]. This also solves the plot line of Harry's Horcrux scar.
** After the final battle, Dumbledore [[spoiler: forfeits the Elder Wand back toDeath Death]] in exchange for Tom, who [[spoiler: stepped in front of an Avada Kedavra to sever his link to Voldemort.]]
** After the final battle, Dumbledore [[spoiler: forfeits the Elder Wand back to
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** Albus Dumbledore. [[spoiler: He encouraged and ''paid for'' Vernon to abuse Harry in order to turn Harry into a weapon that would be completely loyal to him and would be okay with dying.]]
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** Albus Dumbledore. [[spoiler: He encouraged and ''paid for'' Vernon to abuse Harry in order to turn Harry into a weapon that would be completely loyal to him and would be okay with dying.]] Albus has some guilt for how far Vernon took his vague request to "toughen him up", but quickly justifies it with the threat of Voldemort looming]].
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%% ** Rufus Scrimgeour.
* [[LikeFatherLikeSon Like Father, Like Daughter]]: [[spoiler: Lucius and Victoria.]]
* [[LikeFatherLikeSon Like Father, Like Daughter]]: [[spoiler: Lucius and Victoria.]]
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* [[LikeFatherLikeSon Like Father, Like Daughter]]: [[spoiler: Lucius and
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** Fugitives can seek asylum at Gringott's because "Gringott's customers are allowed to count their gold for as long as they like."
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** Fugitives can seek asylum at Gringott's because "Gringott's customers are allowed to count their gold for as long as they like."like". They can continue counting so long as they pay the goblin's fees, of course.
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* DoorStopper
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* {{Emo}}: Tom has his moments.
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%% * {{Emo}}: Tom has his moments.
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: [[spoiler: Neville.]]
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%% * HeWhoFightsMonsters: [[spoiler: Neville.]]
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** Alice Longbottom. Neville inherited it.
** Rufus Scrimgeour.
** Rufus Scrimgeour.
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%% ** Alice Longbottom. Neville inherited it.
%% ** Rufus Scrimgeour.
%% ** Rufus Scrimgeour.
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* TheMentallyDisturbed: Sirius Black.
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* MuggingTheMonster: Anyone who picks a fight with Tom.
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* OrphansOrdeal: Harry, Tom, Beth, and Victoria.
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: Lucius, on more than one occasion.
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: Lucius, on more than one occasion. Snape, when Petunia's owl-carried letter pleading for help reaches him.
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* ActionGirl:
** Dora.
** Jennifer the Juggernaut.
** Rosemerta.
** Dora.
** Jennifer the Juggernaut.
** Rosemerta.
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler: Neville's uncle Algie.]]
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* CoolPet: Seti.
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* CatsAreSnarkers: Seti.
* TheChessmaster: Lucius, Snape, Dumbledore, and Tom.
* ChickMagnet: Tom.
* TheChessmaster: Lucius, Snape, Dumbledore, and Tom.
* ChickMagnet: Tom.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Hugo Savage.
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* SmugSnake: Scrimgeour.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Tom, Dora.
* SpiritAdvisor: Yvane for Tom.
* SpiritAdvisor: Yvane for Tom.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Dora.
* UnknownRival: [[spoiler: Neville for Harry.]]
* UnknownRival: [[spoiler: Neville for Harry.]]
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Lucius with his father Abraxas.
* WomanScorned: Fleur.
* WomanScorned: Fleur.
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* YouAreWhatYouHate: Voldemort is a half-blood himself. Rufus Scrimgeour, who is very suspicious of Slytherins, is a former Slytherin.
* [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Rainbow Hair]]: Dora.
* [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Rainbow Hair]]: Dora.
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* YouAreWhatYouHate: Voldemort is a half-blood himself. Rufus Scrimgeour, who is very suspicious of Slytherins, is a former Slytherin.
* [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Rainbow Hair]]: Dora.Slytherin..
* [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Rainbow Hair]]: Dora.
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* JustifiedExtraLives: The Deathly Hallows, the three gifts of Death to the clever Peverell brothers. Returning these items becomes a plot point on two occasions.
** [[spoiler: Harry ends up dragged along with Sirius into the Veil.]] This is remedied with Harry’s invisibility cloak and the Resurrection Stone (which Harry had planned to use to talk to his parents for Christmas.) This also solves the plot line of Harry’s Horcrux scar.
** After the final battle, Dumbledore forfeits the Elder Wand back to Death in exchange for Tom, who [[spoiler: stepped in front of an Avada Kedavra to sever his link to Voldemort.]]
** [[spoiler: Harry ends up dragged along with Sirius into the Veil.]] This is remedied with Harry’s invisibility cloak and the Resurrection Stone (which Harry had planned to use to talk to his parents for Christmas.) This also solves the plot line of Harry’s Horcrux scar.
** After the final battle, Dumbledore forfeits the Elder Wand back to Death in exchange for Tom, who [[spoiler: stepped in front of an Avada Kedavra to sever his link to Voldemort.]]
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Heroic sacrifices. Also, there is no dedicated trope for trading Death some material object for resurrecting someone.
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* HeroicSacrifice: Two especially stand out.
** Yvane presses Tom into using [[spoiler: his Animagus form]] to save Harry at the graveyard, at the cost of his consciousness passing on.
** [[spoiler: Tom, unfortunately, had to sacrifice himself to break the last Horcrux - his own body. Thanks to the return of the Elder Wand, Death is happy to return him on Dumbledore’s prompting.]]
** Yvane presses Tom into using [[spoiler: his Animagus form]] to save Harry at the graveyard, at the cost of his consciousness passing on.
** [[spoiler: Tom, unfortunately, had to sacrifice himself to break the last Horcrux - his own body. Thanks to the return of the Elder Wand, Death is happy to return him on Dumbledore’s prompting.]]
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* DoubleStandard: When Dumbledore is manipulating everyone around him for a good cause, he gets called out for it. When Snape and Lucius do the same, they get applauded for it.
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* IWishedYouWereDead: The moment that kicked off the plot was when a girl named Lila verbally tore into Dudley for being such a bully to Harry, capping it off by wishing that he and his family would die. In a later chapter, while investigating the boys' disappearance, Dumbledore comes across Lila, who is clearly upset by the whole affair.
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Petunia Dursley, Dudley Dursley, and Harry Potter leave 4 Privet Drive and -- after Petunia recovers from being shot -- take shelter on a dragon reserve, thanks to Severus Snape. With help from Lucius and Draco Malfoy, Rosmerta, Tom [[spoiler: Riddle]], ex-Auror Hugo Savage and a dragon named Yvane, they start hunting Voldemort's Horcruxes.
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Petunia Dursley, Dudley Dursley, and Harry Potter leave 4 Privet Drive and -- after Petunia recovers from being shot -- take shelter on a dragon reserve, thanks to Severus Snape. With help from Lucius and Draco Malfoy, Rosmerta, Tom [[spoiler: Riddle]], Riddle, ex-Auror [[OriginalCharacter Hugo Savage Savage]] and a dragon named Yvane, they start hunting Voldemort's Horcruxes.
Horcruxes.
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* AnimalStereotypes: [[spoiler: Dora is a cheetah animagus, [[CunningLikeAFox Lucius is an arctic fox]], Harry is an osprey, Draco is a gyrefalcon, and [[OneWingedAngel Tom's is a black dragon.]] Also Dudley's patronus is a [[BearsAreBadNews bear.]]]]
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* AnimalStereotypes: [[spoiler: Dora is a cheetah animagus, [[CunningLikeAFox Lucius is an arctic fox]], Harry is an osprey, Draco is a gyrefalcon, and [[OneWingedAngel Tom's is a black dragon.]] Also Dudley's patronus is a [[BearsAreBadNews bear.]]]]]]
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* ConvenientlyUnverifiableCoverStory: spoiler: Snape and Lucius drop hints that [[LukeYouAreMyFather Tom is Voldemort's son.]] It's such a good lie that they've even got ''Voldemort'' believing it.
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* ConvenientlyUnverifiableCoverStory: spoiler: Snape and Lucius drop hints that [[LukeYouAreMyFather Tom is Voldemort's son.]] It's such a good lie that they've even got ''Voldemort'' believing it.
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* UnknownRival: [[spoiler: Neville is this for Harry.]]
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* UnknownRival: [[spoiler: Neville is this for Harry.]]
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Voldemort is already wondering how he can get Tom under his thumb and accept his place as his heir.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Voldemort is already wondering how he can started making plans to get Tom under his thumb and accept his place as his heir.heir from the moment he found out about his existence.
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* YouAreWhatYouHate: Voldemort is a half-blood himself. Also Rufus Scrimgeour, who is very suspicious of Slytherins, is a graduate of Slytherin House.
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* YouAreWhatYouHate: Voldemort is a half-blood himself. Also Rufus Scrimgeour, who is very suspicious of Slytherins, is a graduate of Slytherin House.former Slytherin.
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''3 Slytherin Marauders'' is an in-progress [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] Franchise/HarryPotter fanfiction written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/714311/severusphoenix severusphoenix]], found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4923158/1/3-Slytherin-Marauders here]].
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''3 Slytherin Marauders'' is an in-progress [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] Franchise/HarryPotter fanfiction written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/714311/severusphoenix severusphoenix]], found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4923158/1/3-Slytherin-Marauders here]].
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Dudley and Petunia Dursley, Severus Snape, Lucius Malfoy, Tom Riddle, Aunt Marge.]]
* AwfulTruth: [[spoiler: When confronted by Dora regarding his cover story Tom just can't bear to lie to her and tells her the truth about his origins.]]
* AwfulTruth: [[spoiler: When confronted by Dora regarding his cover story Tom just can't bear to lie to her and tells her the truth about his origins.]]
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Dudley and Petunia Dursley, Severus Snape, Lucius Malfoy, Tom Riddle, Aunt Marge.]]
Marge.
* AwfulTruth:[[spoiler: When confronted by Dora regarding his cover story Tom just can't bear to lie to her and tells her the truth about his origins.]]
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* BadassFamily: [[spoiler: Harry, Snape, Rosemerta, Dudley, Petunia, Lucius, Draco, Tom, Dora, Beth, and Victoria become one through adoption or marriage.]]
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* BadassFamily: [[spoiler: Harry, Snape, Rosemerta, Dudley, Petunia, Lucius, Draco, Tom, Dora, Beth, and Victoria become one through adoption or marriage.]]
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* TheBait: [[spoiler: The Aurors have Lucius the "Death Eater traitor" spend a night in lockup in order to lure more Death Eaters out of the woodwork.]]
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* TheBait: [[spoiler: The Aurors have Lucius the "Death Eater traitor" spend a night in lockup in order to lure more Death Eaters out of the woodwork.]]
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* BearsAreBadNews: [[spoiler: Dudley's patronus is a bear.]]
* BestFriendsInLaw: Snape and Lucius-- [[spoiler: Snape adopts Harry and Lucius marries Petunia and adopts Dudley.]]
* BestFriendsInLaw: Snape and Lucius-- [[spoiler: Snape adopts Harry and Lucius marries Petunia and adopts Dudley.]]
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* BearsAreBadNews: [[spoiler: Dudley's patronus is a bear.]]
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* BestFriendsInLaw: Snape andLucius-- [[spoiler: Lucius; Snape adopts Harry and Lucius marries Petunia and adopts Dudley.]]
* BestFriendsInLaw: Snape and
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* BigNo: [[spoiler: Tom when he's sorted into Gryffindor.]] In a more dramatic example, Snape when Harry's name comes out of the Goblet of Fire.
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* BigNo: [[spoiler: Tom Tom]] when he's sorted into Gryffindor.]] Gryffindor. In a more dramatic example, Snape when Harry's name comes out of the Goblet of Fire.
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* BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler: Lucius while on the run from the Ministry.]]
* BullyingADragon: Literally, when a Death Eater attacks a dragon that has befriended Harry Potter-he got his JustDesserts though the dragon later complained that he gave her indigestion.
* BullyingADragon: Literally, when a Death Eater attacks a dragon that has befriended Harry Potter-he got his JustDesserts though the dragon later complained that he gave her indigestion.
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* BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler: Lucius while on the run from the Ministry.]]
Ministry.
* BullyingADragon: Literally, when a Death Eater attacks a dragon thathas befriended Harry Potter-he Harry. He got his JustDesserts though (though the dragon later complained that he gave her indigestion.indigestion).
* BullyingADragon: Literally, when a Death Eater attacks a dragon that
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* ClonesArePeopleToo: [[spoiler: Tom, who grows to become a very different person from his other self.]]
* ConvenientlyUnverifiableCoverStory: [[spoiler: Snape and Lucius drop hints that [[LukeYouAreMyFather Tom is Voldemort's son.]] It's such a good lie that they've even got ''Voldemort'' believing it.]]
* ConvenientlyUnverifiableCoverStory: [[spoiler: Snape and Lucius drop hints that [[LukeYouAreMyFather Tom is Voldemort's son.]] It's such a good lie that they've even got ''Voldemort'' believing it.]]
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* ClonesArePeopleToo: [[spoiler: Tom, who grows to become a very different person from his other self.]]
self.
* ConvenientlyUnverifiableCoverStory:[[spoiler: spoiler: Snape and Lucius drop hints that [[LukeYouAreMyFather Tom is Voldemort's son.]] It's such a good lie that they've even got ''Voldemort'' believing it.]]
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Tom hates it when someone flirts with Dora. Though she's just as bad at times.
* CunningLikeAFox: [[spoiler: Lucius's animagus form is an arctic fox.]]
* CurbStompBattle: dragons vs. dementors. [[spoiler: Dragons win.]]
* CunningLikeAFox: [[spoiler: Lucius's animagus form is an arctic fox.]]
* CurbStompBattle: dragons vs. dementors. [[spoiler: Dragons win.]]
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Tom hates it when someone flirts with Dora. Though she's She's just as bad at times.
when someone flirts with him.
* CunningLikeAFox:[[spoiler: Lucius's animagus form is an arctic fox.]]
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* CurbStompBattle:dragons Dragons vs. dementors. [[spoiler: Dragons win.]]
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* CurbStompBattle:
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* DatingCatwoman: {{Lampshaded}} with Tom and Dora. She's an Auror-in-Training and he hails from a "dark family", and unknown to the wizarding world [[spoiler: is an alternate copy of Voldemort himself.]]
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* DarkMistress: Mrs. Zabini becomes this (unwillingly) for Voldemort.
* DatingCatwoman: {{Lampshaded}} with Tom and Dora. She's an Auror-in-Training and he hails from a "dark family", and unknown to the wizarding world[[spoiler: is an alternate copy of Voldemort himself.]]
* DatingCatwoman: {{Lampshaded}} with Tom and Dora. She's an Auror-in-Training and he hails from a "dark family", and unknown to the wizarding world
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler: Vernon]].
* DistressedDude: Harry is this much of the time.
* DistressedDude: Harry is this much of the time.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler: Vernon]].
Vernon, Uncle Algie, Theodore Nott]].
* DistressedDude:Harry is this much of the time.Harry. Frequently.
* DistressedDude:
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* EvilCounterpart: InvertedTrope [[spoiler: with Tom being Voldemort's Good Counterpart.]]
* ExactEavesdropping: [[spoiler: Dora overhears Dumbledore and Moody's speculation that "Tom" is the Dark Lord's son.]]
* ExactEavesdropping: [[spoiler: Dora overhears Dumbledore and Moody's speculation that "Tom" is the Dark Lord's son.]]
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* EvilCounterpart: InvertedTrope [[spoiler: with {{Inverted|Trope}} since Tom being is Voldemort's Good Counterpart.]]
Counterpart.
* ExactEavesdropping:[[spoiler: Dora overhears Dumbledore and Moody's speculation that "Tom" is the Dark Lord's son.]]
* ExactEavesdropping:
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* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler: Tom was molested at the orphanage]]. Also, Lucius had a terrible relationship with his father.
* FutureMeScaresMe [=/=] EvilMeScaresMe: [[spoiler: Tom]] is horrified when he learns what [[spoiler: Voldemort]] has done.
* FutureMeScaresMe [=/=] EvilMeScaresMe: [[spoiler: Tom]] is horrified when he learns what [[spoiler: Voldemort]] has done.
to:
* FreudianExcuse: FreudianExcuse:
** [[spoiler: Tom was molested at theorphanage]]. Also, orphanage]].
** Lucius had a terrible relationship with his father.
* FutureMeScaresMe [=/=] EvilMeScaresMe:[[spoiler: Tom]] Tom is horrified when he learns what [[spoiler: Voldemort]] Voldemort has done.
** [[spoiler: Tom was molested at the
** Lucius had a terrible relationship with his father.
* FutureMeScaresMe [=/=] EvilMeScaresMe:
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* GraveMarkingScene: [[spoiler: After venting about his [[ParentalAbandonment abandonment]] issues Tom gets some closure and leaves flowers on his father's grave. Later when Voldemort stumbles across the flowers, he's greatly puzzled as to who would give that S.O.B. flowers.]]
* GroinAttack: When her ex showed up and threatened Harry, Rosmerta hit him with a hex that would "tie his penis in a knot."
* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler: Harry, Tom, and Beth by Snape and Rosemerta. And Lucius and Petunia get married so Dudley and Draco become step-brothers, and after finding her they adopt Lucius's daughter Victoria as well.]]
* GroinAttack: When her ex showed up and threatened Harry, Rosmerta hit him with a hex that would "tie his penis in a knot."
* HappilyAdopted: [[spoiler: Harry, Tom, and Beth by Snape and Rosemerta. And Lucius and Petunia get married so Dudley and Draco become step-brothers, and after finding her they adopt Lucius's daughter Victoria as well.]]
to:
* GraveMarkingScene: [[spoiler: After venting about his [[ParentalAbandonment abandonment]] issues issues, Tom gets some closure and leaves flowers on his father's grave. Later when Voldemort stumbles across the flowers, he's greatly puzzled as to flowers and can't figure out who would give that S.O.B. flowers.]]
flowers.
* GroinAttack: When her ex showed up and threatened Harry, Rosmerta hit him with a hex thatwould "tie his penis in a knot."
does this.
* HappilyAdopted:[[spoiler: Harry, Tom, and Beth by Snape and Rosemerta. And Lucius and Petunia get married so Dudley and Draco become step-brothers, and after finding her they adopt Lucius's daughter Victoria as well.]]
* GroinAttack: When her ex showed up and threatened Harry, Rosmerta hit him with a hex that
* HappilyAdopted:
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: When Lucius covertly hexes Hermione Granger for annoying him, he accidentally hexes himself as well. Earlier, [[spoiler: Vernon]] gets himself killed via drunken road-rage.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: When HoistByHisOwnPetard:
** Lucius covertly hexes HermioneGranger for annoying him, he him. He accidentally hexes himself as well. Earlier, well.
** [[spoiler: Vernon]] gets himself killed via drunken road-rage.
** Lucius covertly hexes Hermione
** [[spoiler: Vernon]] gets himself killed via drunken road-rage.
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* IWantGrandkids: [[spoiler: Voldemort begins making these plans soon after learning of Tom's existence.]]
* IdenticalGrandson: Snape makes everyone (even Dumbledore) think that [[spoiler: Tom Riddle]] is Voldemort's son to explain the resemblance.
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: {{Lampshaded}} with [[spoiler: Tom Riddle]]. When some of the Weasley clan meet [[spoiler: Tom]] they assume him to be an arrogant, wealthy, pure-blood {{Jerkass}}. They're later informed that he grew up in an orphanage and is overcompensating.
* IdenticalGrandson: Snape makes everyone (even Dumbledore) think that [[spoiler: Tom Riddle]] is Voldemort's son to explain the resemblance.
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: {{Lampshaded}} with [[spoiler: Tom Riddle]]. When some of the Weasley clan meet [[spoiler: Tom]] they assume him to be an arrogant, wealthy, pure-blood {{Jerkass}}. They're later informed that he grew up in an orphanage and is overcompensating.
to:
* IWantGrandkids: [[spoiler: Voldemort begins making these plans soon after learning ''Voldemort'', of all people, when he learns of Tom's existence.]]
existence.
* IdenticalGrandson: Snape makes everyone (even Dumbledore) think that[[spoiler: Tom Riddle]] Riddle is Voldemort's son to explain the resemblance.
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: {{Lampshaded}} with[[spoiler: Tom Riddle]]. Riddle. When some of the Weasley clan meet [[spoiler: Tom]] Tom they assume him to be an arrogant, wealthy, pure-blood {{Jerkass}}. They're They later informed that find out he grew up in an orphanage and is overcompensating.
* IdenticalGrandson: Snape makes everyone (even Dumbledore) think that
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: {{Lampshaded}} with
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* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler: Because of his desire to protect Harry, Tom Riddle is sorted into Gryffindor]]. And because of his resentment and scheming Neville is sorted into Slytherin. Also because Lucius Malfoy insists on [[EvilGloating gloating]] to Arthur Weasley, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Arthur's bosses assume he must be very important and well-connected and this has greatly advanced Arthur Weasley's career.]]
to:
* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler: {{Irony}}:
** Because of his desire to protect Harry, [[spoiler: TomRiddle Riddle]] is sorted into Gryffindor]]. And because Gryffindor.
** Because of his resentment and scheming Neville is sorted intoSlytherin. Also because Slytherin.
** Because Lucius Malfoy insists on [[EvilGloating gloating]] to Arthur Weasley, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Arthur's bosses assume he must be very important andwell-connected and this has greatly advanced Arthur Weasley's career.]]well-connected]].
** Because of his desire to protect Harry, [[spoiler: Tom
** Because of his resentment and scheming Neville is sorted into
** Because Lucius Malfoy insists on [[EvilGloating gloating]] to Arthur Weasley, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Arthur's bosses assume he must be very important and
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** Alice Longbottom, and Neville has inherited these tendencies as well.
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** Alice Longbottom, and Longbottom. Neville has inherited these tendencies as well.it.
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* LiteralSplitPersonality: [[spoiler: Voldemort and the Tom Riddle who came out of the diary horcrux.]]
* LivingWithTheVillain: [[spoiler: Tom with everyone.]] Though he's made a HeelFaceTurn it would still be ''very messy'' if his true BackStory was known.
* LongRunners: Started in 2009 and still isn't finished as of 2015.
* LoopholeAbuse: [[spoiler: The Goblins inform Tom that he can't ''completely'' empty out Voldemort's Gringott's vaults... so they leave him a single Knut.]] Also fugitives can seek asylum at Gringott's because "Gringott's customers are allowed to count their gold for as long as they like."
* LukeYouAreMyFather: An exploited trope when Snape and Lucius [[spoiler: pass off Tom as Voldemort's son. Later played straight when Lucius discovers Victoria, a little girl that bears an uncanny resemblance to him.]]
* LivingWithTheVillain: [[spoiler: Tom with everyone.]] Though he's made a HeelFaceTurn it would still be ''very messy'' if his true BackStory was known.
* LongRunners: Started in 2009 and still isn't finished as of 2015.
* LoopholeAbuse: [[spoiler: The Goblins inform Tom that he can't ''completely'' empty out Voldemort's Gringott's vaults... so they leave him a single Knut.]] Also fugitives can seek asylum at Gringott's because "Gringott's customers are allowed to count their gold for as long as they like."
* LukeYouAreMyFather: An exploited trope when Snape and Lucius [[spoiler: pass off Tom as Voldemort's son. Later played straight when Lucius discovers Victoria, a little girl that bears an uncanny resemblance to him.]]
to:
* LiteralSplitPersonality: [[spoiler: Voldemort and the Tom Riddle who came out of Riddle, previously known as the diary horcrux.]]
Horcrux.
* LivingWithTheVillain:[[spoiler: Tom with everyone.]] everyone. Though he's made a HeelFaceTurn it would still be ''very messy'' if his true BackStory was known.
* LongRunners: Started in 2009 andstill isn't finally finished as of in 2015.
*LoopholeAbuse: [[spoiler: LoopholeAbuse:
** The Goblins inform Tom that he can't ''completely'' empty out Voldemort's Gringott's vaults... so they leave him a singleKnut.]] Also fugitives Knut.
** Fugitives can seek asylum at Gringott's because "Gringott's customers are allowed to count their gold for as long as they like."
* LukeYouAreMyFather:An exploited trope {{Exploited|Trope}} when Snape and Lucius [[spoiler: pass off Tom as Voldemort's son. Later played straight when [[spoiler: Lucius discovers Victoria, a little girl that bears an uncanny resemblance to him.]]
* LivingWithTheVillain:
* LongRunners: Started in 2009 and
*
** The Goblins inform Tom that he can't ''completely'' empty out Voldemort's Gringott's vaults... so they leave him a single
** Fugitives can seek asylum at Gringott's because "Gringott's customers are allowed to count their gold for as long as they like."
* LukeYouAreMyFather:
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* OneWingedAngel [=/=] ScaledUp: [[spoiler: Tom's animagus form is that of a great black dragon.]]
to:
* OneWingedAngel [=/=] ScaledUp: [[spoiler: Tom's animagus form is that of a great huge black dragon.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler: Tom has these issues with his muggle father because as far as he knows his father just abandoned his mother for no reason. He also realizes that because his other self killed his father years ago he'll probably never know the full story.]]
to:
* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler: Tom has these issues with his muggle father because as far as he knows his father just abandoned his mother for no reason. He also realizes that because his other self killed his father years ago he'll probably never know the full story.]]
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* ReadingsAreOffTheScale: Many older wizards recognize how powerful Tom is and find it a shame [[{{Irony}} he just wants to work at the Dragon Reserve library instead of chaging the world.]]
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* ReadingsAreOffTheScale: Many older wizards recognize how powerful Tom is and find it a shame [[{{Irony}} he just wants to work at the Dragon Reserve library instead of chaging changing the world.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Tom Riddle]].
* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler: Yvane for Tom.]]
* SpiritAdvisor: [[spoiler: Yvane for Tom.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Tom Riddle]].
Tom, Dora.
* SpiritAdvisor:[[spoiler: Yvane for Tom.]]
* SpiritAdvisor:
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* TalkingToTheDead: [[spoiler: Harry and Snape visits James and Lily's graves at Godric's Hollow. Later Tom resolves some of his emotional issues after he visits and vents at his father's grave.]]
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* TalkingToTheDead: [[spoiler: Harry and Snape visits James and Lily's graves at Godric's Hollow. Later Tom resolves some of his emotional issues after he visits and vents at his father's grave.]]
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* WeCanRuleTogether: [[spoiler: Voldemort is already wondering how he can get Tom under his thumb and accept his place as his heir.]]
* WellDoneSonGuy: [[spoiler: Lucius with his father Abraxas.]]
* WellDoneSonGuy: [[spoiler: Lucius with his father Abraxas.]]
to:
* WeCanRuleTogether: [[spoiler: Voldemort is already wondering how he can get Tom under his thumb and accept his place as his heir.]]
heir.
* WellDoneSonGuy:[[spoiler: Lucius with his father Abraxas.]] Abraxas.
* WellDoneSonGuy:
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* LongRunners: Started in 2009 and still isn't finished as of 2015.
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* AbusiveParents: Vernon Dursley, like in canon. [[spoiler: Unlike in canon, Petunia is ''not'' abusive.]]
* ActionGirl: Dora. Also Jennifer the Juggernaut.
* ActionGirl: Dora. Also Jennifer the Juggernaut.
to:
* AbusiveParents: Vernon Dursley, like in canon. [[spoiler: Unlike in canon, Petunia is ''not'' abusive.]]
abusive.
*ActionGirl: Dora. Also ActionGirl:
** Dora.
** Jennifer theJuggernaut.Juggernaut.
** Rosemerta.
*
** Dora.
** Jennifer the
** Rosemerta.
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* TheBait: [[spoiler: the Aurors have Lucius the "Death Eater traitor" spend a night in lockup in order to lure more Death Eaters out of the woodwork.]]
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* TheBait: [[spoiler: the The Aurors have Lucius the "Death Eater traitor" spend a night in lockup in order to lure more Death Eaters out of the woodwork.]]
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* BigNo: [[spoiler: Tom when he's sorted into Gryffindor. Also, in a more dramatic example, Snape when Harry's name comes out of the Goblet of Fire.]]
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* BigNo: [[spoiler: Tom when he's sorted into Gryffindor. Also, in ]] In a more dramatic example, Snape when Harry's name comes out of the Goblet of Fire.]]
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* BondCreatures: the house elves. Also Yvane.
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* BondCreatures: the The house elves. Also Yvane.
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* CatsAreSnarkers: Seti
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* CatsAreSnarkers: Seti Seti.
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* ChickMagnet: Tom
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* ChickMagnet: Tom Tom.
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* CoolPet: Seti
* CrazyJealousGuy: [[spoiler: Tom]] hates it when someone flirts with [[spoiler: Dora]]. Though she's just as bad at times.
* CrazyJealousGuy: [[spoiler: Tom]] hates it when someone flirts with [[spoiler: Dora]]. Though she's just as bad at times.
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* CoolPet: Seti
Seti.
* CrazyJealousGuy:[[spoiler: Tom]] Tom hates it when someone flirts with [[spoiler: Dora]].Dora. Though she's just as bad at times.
* CrazyJealousGuy:
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* DarkIsNotEvil: as demonstrated by Snape, Lucius, and [[spoiler: Tom]].
* DatingCatwoman: {{Lampshaded}} with [[spoiler: Tom]] and Dora, with Dora being an Auror-in-Training and [[spoiler: Tom]] who the Wizarding world knows hails from a "dark family" and unknown to the wizarding world [[spoiler: is an alternate copy of Voldemort himself.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Snape, naturally.
* DatingCatwoman: {{Lampshaded}} with [[spoiler: Tom]] and Dora, with Dora being an Auror-in-Training and [[spoiler: Tom]] who the Wizarding world knows hails from a "dark family" and unknown to the wizarding world [[spoiler: is an alternate copy of Voldemort himself.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Snape, naturally.
to:
* DarkIsNotEvil: as As demonstrated by Snape, Lucius, and [[spoiler: Tom]].
Tom.
* DatingCatwoman: {{Lampshaded}} with[[spoiler: Tom]] Tom and Dora, with Dora being Dora. She's an Auror-in-Training and [[spoiler: Tom]] who the Wizarding world knows he hails from a "dark family" family", and unknown to the wizarding world [[spoiler: is an alternate copy of Voldemort himself.]]
]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Snape, naturally.
* DatingCatwoman: {{Lampshaded}} with
* DeadpanSnarker: Snape, naturally.
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* DrowningMySorrows: [[spoiler: After learning the truth about the Dark Lord, Lucius gets very drunk... and stays that way for a very long time.]]
* {{Emo}}: Tom has his moments.
* EngineeredHeroics: Dumbledore. He's engineering a catastrophe when he leaves Harry with the Dursleys so he can "save" him later.
* {{Emo}}: Tom has his moments.
* EngineeredHeroics: Dumbledore. He's engineering a catastrophe when he leaves Harry with the Dursleys so he can "save" him later.
to:
* DrowningMySorrows: [[spoiler: After learning the truth about the Dark Lord, Lucius gets very drunk... and stays that way for a very long time.]]
time.
* {{Emo}}: Tom has hismoments.
moments.
* EngineeredHeroics: Dumbledore. He's engineering a catastrophe when he leaves Harry with the Dursleys so he can "save" him later.
* {{Emo}}: Tom has his
* EngineeredHeroics: Dumbledore. He's engineering a catastrophe when he leaves Harry with the Dursleys so he can "save" him later.
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* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler: Tom was molested at the orphanage. Also Lucius had a terrible relationship with his father.]]
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* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler: Tom was molested at the orphanage. Also orphanage]]. Also, Lucius had a terrible relationship with his father.]]
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* GroinAttack: when her ex showed up and threatened Harry, Rosmerta hit him with a hex that would "tie his penis in a knot."
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* GroinAttack: when When her ex showed up and threatened Harry, Rosmerta hit him with a hex that would "tie his penis in a knot."
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy after learning that the Dark Lord is a lying {{Hypocrite}}.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Lucius Malfoy Malfoy, after learning that the Dark Lord is a lying {{Hypocrite}}.]]
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: when Lucius covertly hexes Hermione Granger who is annoying him, Lucius accidentally hexed himself as well. Earlier Vernon gets himself killed via drunken roardrage.]]
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Lucius, on more than one occassion.
* IWantGrandkids: [[spoiler: Voldemort begins making these plans soon after learning of Tom's existence.]]
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Lucius, on more than one occassion.
* IWantGrandkids: [[spoiler: Voldemort begins making these plans soon after learning of Tom's existence.]]
to:
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: when When Lucius covertly hexes Hermione Granger who is for annoying him, Lucius he accidentally hexed hexes himself as well. Earlier Vernon Earlier, [[spoiler: Vernon]] gets himself killed via drunken roardrage.]]
road-rage.
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Lucius, on more than oneoccassion.
occasion.
* IWantGrandkids: [[spoiler: Voldemort begins making these plans soon after learning of Tom's existence.]] ]]
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Lucius, on more than one
* IWantGrandkids: [[spoiler: Voldemort begins making these plans soon after learning of Tom's existence.
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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: {{Lampshaded}} with [[spoiler: Tom Riddle]]. When some of the Weasley clan meet [[spoiler: Tom]] they assume him to be an arrogant, wealthy, pure-blood JerkAss. They're later informed that he grew up in an orphanage and is overcompensating.
* InsistentTerminology: Dumbledore and other members of the Hogwarts staff often uses words like "pranks" and "schoolboy spirits" for what normal people know as "bullying."
* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler: Because of his desire to protect Harry, Tom Riddle is sorted into Gryffindor. And because of his resentment and scheming Neville is sorted into Slytherin. Also because Lucius Malfoy insists on [[EvilGloating gloating]] to Arthur Weasley, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Arthur's bosses assume he must be very important and well-connected and this has greatly advanced Arthur Weasley's career.]]]]
* InsistentTerminology: Dumbledore and other members of the Hogwarts staff often uses words like "pranks" and "schoolboy spirits" for what normal people know as "bullying."
* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler: Because of his desire to protect Harry, Tom Riddle is sorted into Gryffindor. And because of his resentment and scheming Neville is sorted into Slytherin. Also because Lucius Malfoy insists on [[EvilGloating gloating]] to Arthur Weasley, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Arthur's bosses assume he must be very important and well-connected and this has greatly advanced Arthur Weasley's career.]]]]
to:
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: {{Lampshaded}} with [[spoiler: Tom Riddle]]. When some of the Weasley clan meet [[spoiler: Tom]] they assume him to be an arrogant, wealthy, pure-blood JerkAss. {{Jerkass}}. They're later informed that he grew up in an orphanage and is overcompensating.
overcompensating.
* InsistentTerminology: Dumbledore and other members of the Hogwarts staff often uses words like "pranks" and "schoolboy spirits" for what normal people know as "bullying."
"
* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler: Because of his desire to protect Harry, Tom Riddle is sorted intoGryffindor.Gryffindor]]. And because of his resentment and scheming Neville is sorted into Slytherin. Also because Lucius Malfoy insists on [[EvilGloating gloating]] to Arthur Weasley, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Arthur's bosses assume he must be very important and well-connected and this has greatly advanced Arthur Weasley's career.]]]] ]]
* InsistentTerminology: Dumbledore and other members of the Hogwarts staff often uses words like "pranks" and "schoolboy spirits" for what normal people know as "bullying.
* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler: Because of his desire to protect Harry, Tom Riddle is sorted into
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* KnightTemplar: Albus Dumbledore [[spoiler: he encouraged and ''paid for'' Vernon to abuse Harry in order to turn Harry into a weapon that would be completely loyal to him and would be okay with dying.]] Also[[spoiler: Alice Longbottom and Neville has inherited these tendencies as well.]] And Rufus Scrimgeour.
to:
* KnightTemplar: KnightTemplar:
** AlbusDumbledore Dumbledore. [[spoiler: he He encouraged and ''paid for'' Vernon to abuse Harry in order to turn Harry into a weapon that would be completely loyal to him and would be okay with dying.]] Also[[spoiler: ]]
** AliceLongbottom Longbottom, and Neville has inherited these tendencies as well.]] And well.
** Rufus Scrimgeour.
** Albus
** Alice
** Rufus Scrimgeour.
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* LivingWithTheVillain: [[spoiler: Tom with everyone. Though he's made a HeelFaceTurn it would still be ''very messy'' if his true BackStory was known.]]
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* LivingWithTheVillain: [[spoiler: Tom with everyone. ]] Though he's made a HeelFaceTurn it would still be ''very messy'' if his true BackStory was known.]]
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* LukeYouAreMyFather: [[spoiler: An exploited trope when Snape and Lucius pass off Tom as Voldemort's son. Later played straight when Lucius discovers Victoria, a little girl that bears an uncanny resemblence to him.]]
* TheMentallyDisturbed: [[spoiler: Sirius Black]]
* MiscarriageOfJustice: [[spoiler: Scrimgeour throws Snape and Lucius into Azkaban without even charging them of any crime. One would think the Ministry would no longer try to do something like that after Sirius Black was cleared.]]
* MuggingTheMonster: Anyone who picks a fight with Tom.
* TheMentallyDisturbed: [[spoiler: Sirius Black]]
* MiscarriageOfJustice: [[spoiler: Scrimgeour throws Snape and Lucius into Azkaban without even charging them of any crime. One would think the Ministry would no longer try to do something like that after Sirius Black was cleared.]]
* MuggingTheMonster: Anyone who picks a fight with Tom.
to:
* LukeYouAreMyFather: [[spoiler: An exploited trope when Snape and Lucius [[spoiler: pass off Tom as Voldemort's son. Later played straight when Lucius discovers Victoria, a little girl that bears an uncanny resemblence resemblance to him.]]
* TheMentallyDisturbed:[[spoiler: Sirius Black]]
Black.
* MiscarriageOfJustice: [[spoiler: Scrimgeour throws Snape and Lucius into Azkaban without even charging them of any crime. ]] One would think the Ministry would no longer try to do something like that after Sirius Black was cleared.]]
cleared.
* MuggingTheMonster: Anyone who picks a fight with Tom.
* TheMentallyDisturbed:
* MiscarriageOfJustice: [[spoiler: Scrimgeour throws Snape and Lucius into Azkaban without even charging them of any crime.
* MuggingTheMonster: Anyone who picks a fight with Tom.
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* OddFriendship: [[spoiler: Tom Riddle with Percy Weasley and Hugo Savage.]]
* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler: Tom's animagus form is that of a great black dragon.]]
* OrphansOrdeal: Harry, Tom, [[spoiler: Beth, and Victoria.]]
* OrphanageOfFear: Where [[spoiler: Tom]] grew up. [[spoiler: Also Tom and Harry rescue Beth and Tori from one.]]
* PapaWolf: If you try and hurt Harry Snape will ''end you'' if Tom doesn't do it first. Same goes for Draco and [[spoiler:Victoria]]
* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler: Tom's animagus form is that of a great black dragon.]]
* OrphansOrdeal: Harry, Tom, [[spoiler: Beth, and Victoria.]]
* OrphanageOfFear: Where [[spoiler: Tom]] grew up. [[spoiler: Also Tom and Harry rescue Beth and Tori from one.]]
* PapaWolf: If you try and hurt Harry Snape will ''end you'' if Tom doesn't do it first. Same goes for Draco and [[spoiler:Victoria]]
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* OddFriendship: [[spoiler: Tom Riddle with Percy Weasley and Hugo Savage.Savage.
* OneWingedAngel [=/=] ScaledUp: [[spoiler: Tom's animagus form is that of a great black dragon.]]
* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler: Tom's animagus form is that of a great black dragon.]]
* OrphansOrdeal: Harry, Tom, [[spoiler: Beth, and Victoria.]]
Victoria.
* OrphanageOfFear: Where [[spoiler: Tom]] grew up.[[spoiler: Also Tom and Harry rescue Beth and Tori from one.]]
one.
* PapaWolf: If you try and hurt Harry Snape will ''end you'' if Tom doesn't do it first.Same goes Lucius is the same for Draco [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:Victoria]]Victoria]].
* OneWingedAngel [=/=] ScaledUp: [[spoiler: Tom's animagus form is that of a great black dragon.]]
* OrphanageOfFear: Where [[spoiler: Tom]] grew up.
* PapaWolf: If you try and hurt Harry Snape will ''end you'' if Tom doesn't do it first.
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* PityTheKidnapper: [[spoiler: after Voldemort possesses Lockhart, Lockhart begins driving Voldemort (more) insane.]]
* ReadingsAreOffTheScale: many older wizards recognize how powerful Tom is and find it a shame [[spoiler: [[{{Irony}} he just wants to work at the Dragon Reserve library instead of chaging the world.]]]]
* ReadingsAreOffTheScale: many older wizards recognize how powerful Tom is and find it a shame [[spoiler: [[{{Irony}} he just wants to work at the Dragon Reserve library instead of chaging the world.]]]]
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* PityTheKidnapper: [[spoiler: after After Voldemort possesses Lockhart, Lockhart begins driving Voldemort (more) insane.]]
insane.
* ReadingsAreOffTheScale:many Many older wizards recognize how powerful Tom is and find it a shame [[spoiler: [[{{Irony}} he just wants to work at the Dragon Reserve library instead of chaging the world.]]]] ]]
* ReadingsAreOffTheScale:
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* SmugSnake: Scrimgeour
* SnarkyNonHumanSidekick: Yvane, Hazelette, and Seti.
* SmugSnake: Scrimgeour
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* SnarkyNonHumanSidekick: Yvane, Hazelette, and Seti.
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* TalkingToTheDead: [[spoiler: Harry and Snape visits James and Lily's graves at Godrics Hollow. Later Tom resolves some of his emotional issues after he visits and vents at his father's grave.]]
* {{Tsundere}}: Dora
* UnknownRival: [[spoiler: Neville is this for Harry.]]
* WasItAllALie: [[spoiler: Lucius had loyally served the dark lord and believed in his cause. Then Lucius learns that the dark lord is a half-blood himself...]]
* {{Tsundere}}: Dora
* UnknownRival: [[spoiler: Neville is this for Harry.]]
* WasItAllALie: [[spoiler: Lucius had loyally served the dark lord and believed in his cause. Then Lucius learns that the dark lord is a half-blood himself...]]
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* TalkingToTheDead: [[spoiler: Harry and Snape visits James and Lily's graves at Godrics Godric's Hollow. Later Tom resolves some of his emotional issues after he visits and vents at his father's grave.]]
* {{Tsundere}}:Dora
Dora.
* UnknownRival: [[spoiler: Neville is this for Harry.]]
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* WasItAllALie:[[spoiler: Lucius had loyally served the dark lord Dark Lord and believed in his cause. Then Lucius learns that the dark lord Dark Lord is a half-blood himself...]]
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* UnknownRival: [[spoiler: Neville is this for Harry.
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* WomanScorned: [[spoiler: Fleur]]
* WorthyOpponent: [[spoiler: Lucius felt this way about Frank Longbottom.]]
* YouAreWhatYouHate: Voldemort who is a half-blood himself. Also Rufus Scrimgeour who is very suspicious of Slytherins is a graduate of Slytherin House.
* [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Rainbow Hair]]: Dora
* WorthyOpponent: [[spoiler: Lucius felt this way about Frank Longbottom.]]
* YouAreWhatYouHate: Voldemort who is a half-blood himself. Also Rufus Scrimgeour who is very suspicious of Slytherins is a graduate of Slytherin House.
* [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Rainbow Hair]]: Dora
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* WomanScorned: [[spoiler: Fleur]]
* WorthyOpponent: [[spoiler: Lucius felt this way about Frank Longbottom.]]
* YouAreWhatYouHate: Voldemort who is a half-blood himself. Also Rufus Scrimgeour who is very suspicious of Slytherins is a graduate of Slytherin House.Fleur.
* WorthyOpponent: Lucius felt this way about Frank Longbottom.
* YouAreWhatYouHate: Voldemort is a half-blood himself. Also Rufus Scrimgeour, who is very suspicious of Slytherins, is a graduate of Slytherin House.
* [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Rainbow Hair]]:Dora
Dora.
* WorthyOpponent: [[spoiler: Lucius felt this way about Frank Longbottom.]]
* YouAreWhatYouHate: Voldemort who is a half-blood himself. Also Rufus Scrimgeour who is very suspicious of Slytherins is a graduate of Slytherin House.
* WorthyOpponent: Lucius felt this way about Frank Longbottom.
* YouAreWhatYouHate: Voldemort is a half-blood himself. Also Rufus Scrimgeour, who is very suspicious of Slytherins, is a graduate of Slytherin House.
* [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Rainbow Hair]]:
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* DoorStopper: 133 chapters so far.
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* DoorStopper: 133 chapters so far.DoorStopper
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--> ...[R]egistering one's [Animagus] form was really just [...] ensuring the wizard knew the magic well enough that ministry obliviators and curse breakers would not be summoned to a muggle's garden to deal with a partially transformed flamingo - one time of that was more than enough.
--> ...[R]egistering one's [Animagus] form was really just [...] ensuring the wizard knew the magic well enough that ministry obliviators and curse breakers would not be summoned to a muggle's garden to deal with a partially transformed flamingo - one time of that was more than enough.
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Petunia Dursley, Dudley Dursley, and Harry Potter leave 4 Privet Drive and - after Petunia recovers from being shot - take shelter on a dragon reserve, thanks to Severus Snape. With help from Lucius and Draco Malfoy, Rosmerta, Tom [[spoiler: Riddle]], ex-Auror Hugo Savage and a dragon named Yvane, they start hunting Voldemort's Horcruxes.
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Petunia Dursley, Dudley Dursley, and Harry Potter leave 4 Privet Drive and - -- after Petunia recovers from being shot - -- take shelter on a dragon reserve, thanks to Severus Snape. With help from Lucius and Draco Malfoy, Rosmerta, Tom [[spoiler: Riddle]], ex-Auror Hugo Savage and a dragon named Yvane, they start hunting Voldemort's Horcruxes.
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* AnimalStereotypes: [[spoiler: Dora is a cheetah animgaus, [[CunningLikeAFox Lucius is an arctic fox]], Harry is an osprey, Draco is a gyrefalcon, and [[OneWingedAngel Tom's is a black dragon.]] Also Dudley's patronus is a [[BearsAreBadNews bear.]]]]
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* AnimalStereotypes: [[spoiler: Dora is a cheetah animgaus, animagus, [[CunningLikeAFox Lucius is an arctic fox]], Harry is an osprey, Draco is a gyrefalcon, and [[OneWingedAngel Tom's is a black dragon.]] Also Dudley's patronus is a [[BearsAreBadNews bear.]]]]
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* BadIsGoodAndGoodIsBad: [[spoiler: Tom]] is terribly embarrassed about being sorted into Gryffindor- the house of "goodie-two shoes" and "cannon fodder."
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* BadIsGoodAndGoodIsBad: [[spoiler: Tom]] is terribly embarrassed about being sorted into Gryffindor- Gryffindor -- the house of "goodie-two shoes" and "cannon fodder."fodder".
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The original trope name was intentionally misspelled. The trope is about villains *getting eaten* at the end (like a dessert
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* BullyingADragon: Literally, when a Death Eater attacks a dragon that has befriended Harry Potter-he got his JustDeserts though the dragon later complained that he gave her indigestion.
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* BullyingADragon: Literally, when a Death Eater attacks a dragon that has befriended Harry Potter-he got his JustDeserts JustDesserts though the dragon later complained that he gave her indigestion.
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* JustDeserts: [[spoiler: [=McNair=]]] learns too late why you don't meddle in the affairs of dragons...
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* JustDeserts: JustDesserts: [[spoiler: [=McNair=]]] learns too late why you don't meddle in the affairs of dragons...
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* DoorStopper: 132 133 chapters so far.
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* [[CopBoyfriend Cop Girlfriend]]: Dora, who's training to be an Auror, to [[spoiler: Tom]].
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* CaptainObvious: In Chapter 116, Draco called Dudley that, prompting Dudley to call him "Lieutenant Sarcasm".
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* EngineeredHeroics: Dumbledore. He's engineering a catastrophe when he leaves Harry with the Dursleys so he can "save" him later.
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* MiscarriageOfJustice: [[spoiler: Scrimgeour throws Snape and Lucius into Azkaban without even charging them of any crime.]]
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* MiscarriageOfJustice: [[spoiler: Scrimgeour throws Snape and Lucius into Azkaban without even charging them of any crime. One would think the Ministry would no longer try to do something like that after Sirius Black was cleared.]]
