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* BigDamnHero: Homura's rescue of the Hiiragis and Konata on board the train.
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** Homura's rescue of the Hiiragis and Konata on board thetrain.train.
** [[spoiler:Konata's transformation and arrival during the final battle.]]
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*** [[spoiler:When she finally ''does'' transform into a Magical Girl, her costume is clearly based on Sailor Moon's, and she gives the full speech as she arrives at the battle.]]
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This fic and its related materials are also posted on [[http://tasakeru828.deviantart.com/gallery/36254251 DeviantArt]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/57599 AO3 (Archive Of Our Own)]], in addition to its home on FanFictionDotNet.
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The problem is, the memory wipe [[NoSell doesn't take.]] The next day at school, Kagami demands answers... and the truth is stranger and more terrible than she could imagine. [[spoiler:Coming back from two years post-Ascension, Homura and Kyubey have fled from their own world, which is on the verge of death due to Kagami's AlternateSelf transforming into a Demon and attacking the Earth. They have crossed over to this new timeline to prevent the apocalypse from happening again... but the Demons have crossed over at well, and are targeting Kagami and Tsukasa.]]
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The problem is, the memory wipe [[NoSell doesn't take.]] The next day at school, Kagami demands answers... and the truth is stranger and more terrible than she could imagine. [[spoiler:Coming back from two years post-Ascension, after Madoka's ascension (thus ignoring the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]), Homura and Kyubey have fled from their own world, which is on the verge of death due to Kagami's AlternateSelf transforming into a Demon and attacking the Earth. They have crossed over to this new timeline to prevent the apocalypse from happening again... but the Demons have crossed over at well, and are targeting Kagami and Tsukasa.]]
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This story's version of Homura has a [[CharacterBlog Tumblr account]], [[http://stars-above-homura.tumblr.com Stars Above Homura]].
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* MeanwhileInTheFuture: Chapters 4 through 9 use this trope.
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* [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseMaiden Apocalypse Maidens]]: Kagami contains the Demon that could destroy TheMultiverse. Overlaps with...]]
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* ArcWords: "The [[TitleDrop stars above]] will fall."
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* [[spoiler:CloningGambit: Desideria pulled this with one of her Spawn. She let it feed until it transformed into a copy of herself, let it read her memories, and allowed the copy to take her place and be killed by Kagami.]]
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''Stars Above'' has BonusMaterial including two side-stories, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522659/1/ My Sunshine]]'' and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9153264/1/ Pioneer]]'', [[spoiler:and profiles for each of the Demons of the Nine, which can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7920813/1/ here]].]]
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''Stars Above'' has BonusMaterial including two side-stories, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522659/1/ My Sunshine]]'' and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9153264/1/ Pioneer]]'', [[spoiler:and profiles for each of the Demons of the Nine, which can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7920813/1/ here]].]]
]] The story is also posted on [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/979513 Archive of Our Own]] and [[http://tasakeru828.deviantart.com/gallery/36254251 DeviantArt]]
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'''WARNING! Here there be spoilers.'''
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'''WARNING! Here there be spoilers.'''
SPOILERS. It is ''highly'' recommended that you finish watching the Madoka anime before reading the story or looking at this page!'''
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** And then done a third time in chapter 25 by [[spoiler: Desideria]].
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** And then done a third time in chapter Chapter 25 by [[spoiler: Desideria]].Desideria]].
** And again in Chapter 28: ''All will come to ruin. The stars above will fall.''
** And again in Chapter 28: ''All will come to ruin. The stars above will fall.''
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* ItCanThink: It's soon revealed that Demons are just as intelligent as humans, and capable of long-term planning. [[spoiler:And sadism, in the Second's case.]]
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* [[spoiler:PreClimaxClimax: Kagami and Homura spend the night together in Chapter 27, just before they go to face the Ninth.]]
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* CosmicHorror / EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler: Vittoria.]]
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* CirclesOfHell: [[spoiler:The Nine modeled themselves after the Circles in Dante's Hell.]]
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* ActorAllusion: In chapter 19, Tsukasa mentions that [[EmiriKatou Kagami and Kyubey]] sound the same. She also brings Kagami a [[Anime/DemashitaPowerpuffGirlsZ Hyper Blossom]] [[TransformationTrinket transformation compact]] as her birthday present, saying that "I thought it would really suit you".
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* ActorAllusion: In chapter 19, Tsukasa mentions that [[EmiriKatou Kagami and Kyubey]] sound the same. She also Later, Konata brings Kagami a [[Anime/DemashitaPowerpuffGirlsZ Hyper Blossom]] [[TransformationTrinket transformation compact]] as her birthday present, saying that "I thought it would really suit you".
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* ActorAllusion: In chapter 19, Tsukasa mentions that [[EmiriKatou Kagami and Kyubey]] sound the same. She also brings Kagami a [[Anime/DemashitaaPowerpuffGirlsZ [[Anime/DemashitaPowerpuffGirlsZ Hyper Blossom]] [[TransformationTrinket transformation compact]] as her birthday present, saying that "I thought it would really suit you".
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* [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseMaiden Apocalypse Maidens]]: Kagami contains the Demon that could destroy TheMultiverse. Overlaps with...]]
* [[spoiler:[[BarrierMaiden Barrier Maidens]]: Both of the Hiiragitwins.twins are this to TheMultiverse.]]
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** [[spoiler:Minami Iwasaki cameos as aChekovsGunman ChekhovsGunman in Chapter 20.]]
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* EnemyWithin: [[spoiler:It seems like Vittoria already exists in Kagami's head, clouding her mind and making her almost lash out at the already beaten up Homura for letting Jovanni's monks take Konata hostage]].
** [[spoiler: A more obvious example is probably when Kagami accidentally strangles one of Kyubey's bodies when she's freaking out about Tsukasa going missing.]]
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** [[spoiler: A more obvious example is probably when Kagami accidentallystrangles snaps the neck of one of Kyubey's bodies when she's freaking out about Tsukasa going missing.]]
** [[spoiler:She nearly gets loose at the end of Chapter 25 after Kagami's ExtremeMeleeRevenge against the Second.]]
** [[spoiler: A more obvious example is probably when Kagami accidentally
** [[spoiler:She nearly gets loose at the end of Chapter 25 after Kagami's ExtremeMeleeRevenge against the Second.]]
* [[spoiler:ExtremeMeleeRevenge: Kagami turns the Second into a ''bloody smear'' with her bokken.]]
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* [[spoiler:RapeAsDrama: The Second implies she was doing this when she was playing played with Homura's Soul Gem. Combined with the ''psycholoigical'' torture she Homura was put through, it's no wonder she was catatonic by the end of it.]]
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** Konata and [[OccidentalOtaku Patty]] put on a show featuring [[FutariWaPrettyCure the original Pretty Cure]] at the cosplay cafe in Akihabara.
** Konata gives Tsukasa a [[Anime/CardcaptorSakura Cardcaptor Sakura]] costume for her birthday. It's the infamous pink-and-black rubber catsuit.
** [[spoiler:When visiting Miyuki in the rehab hospital, Konata plays [[VideoGame/MonsterHunter Monster Hunter Portable]], and later quotes [[Anime/DigimonTamers Terriermon's]] trademark ''[[GratuitousForeignLanguage "Moumantai."]]'']]
** Konata and [[OccidentalOtaku Patty]] put on a show featuring [[FutariWaPrettyCure the original Pretty Cure]] at the cosplay cafe in Akihabara.
** Konata gives Tsukasa a [[Anime/CardcaptorSakura Cardcaptor Sakura]] costume for her birthday. It's the infamous pink-and-black rubber catsuit.
** [[spoiler:When visiting Miyuki in the rehab hospital, Konata plays [[VideoGame/MonsterHunter Monster Hunter Portable]], and later quotes [[Anime/DigimonTamers Terriermon's]] trademark ''[[GratuitousForeignLanguage "Moumantai."]]'']]
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** And then done a third time in chapter 25 by [[spoiler: Desideria]].
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** Kagami's ringtone is the OP from the first FullMetalPanic anime.
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* BonusMaterial: ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522659/1/ My Sunshine]]'', a side-story set during the early days of the war between the Puellae Magi and Vittoria. The second side-story, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9153264/1/ Pioneer]]'', takes place months after the war's end and stars [[PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Nico Kanna]]. [[spoiler:[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7920813/1/ There are also the Demon Profiles,]] written in the style of the Witch Cards.]]
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* BonusMaterial: ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522659/1/ My Sunshine]]'', a side-story set during the early days of the war between the Puellae Magi and Vittoria. The second side-story, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9153264/1/ Pioneer]]'', takes place months after the war's end and stars [[PuellaMagiKazumiMagica [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Nico Kanna]]. [[spoiler:[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7920813/1/ There are also the Demon Profiles,]] written in the style of the Witch Cards.]]
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''Stars Above'' has BonusMaterial including a side-story, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522659/1/ My Sunshine]]'', [[spoiler:and profiles for each of the Demons of the Nine, which can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7920813/1/ here]].]]
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''Stars Above'' has BonusMaterial including a side-story, two side-stories, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522659/1/ My Sunshine]]'', Sunshine]]'' and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9153264/1/ Pioneer]]'', [[spoiler:and profiles for each of the Demons of the Nine, which can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7920813/1/ here]].]]
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** [[spoiler:Mami and Kyoko's relationship, hinted at in Chapter 9, 9 and explored in ''My Sunshine'', is a shout-out to [[WordOfGod one of the authors' favorite fanfic writers, who specializes in writing about that couple.]]]]
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* CallingYourAttacks: Mami, of course, continues to do this as well as the [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi girls]]. [[spoiler: Homura also takes to naming her ultimate attack, and credits Mami for it.]]