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The basic plot is the tale of how Cyrus becomes an OmnicidalManiac. Along the way, he deals with [[TheMafia Team]] [[TheEmpire Rocket's invasion]], [[FiveBadBand five Rocket commanders out to get him]], [[TheChessmaster a mysterious politician]], and [[DysfunctionalFamily his family falling apart]].
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The basic plot is the tale of how Cyrus becomes an OmnicidalManiac. Along the way, he deals with [[TheMafia Team]] [[TheEmpire Rocket's invasion]], [[FiveBadBand [[FiveManBand five Rocket commanders out to get him]], [[TheChessmaster a mysterious politician]], and [[DysfunctionalFamily his family falling apart]].
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* FiveBadBand: The Team Rocket commanders
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* FiveBadBand: FiveManBand: The Team Rocket commanders
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''Speargun: the Untold Story of Cyrus'' is a fan work chronicling [[{{Pokemon}} Cyrus's]] StartOfDarkness. It is written by @/SithDroideka2, otherwise known as Sith Droideka on FF.net and Bulbagarden. It can be found [[http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?t=60088 here]].
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''Speargun: the Untold Story of Cyrus'' is a fan work chronicling [[{{Pokemon}} [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Cyrus's]] StartOfDarkness. It is written by @/SithDroideka2, otherwise known as Sith Droideka on FF.net and Bulbagarden. It can be found [[http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/showthread.php?t=60088 here]].
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* DarkIsNotEvil: So far Siber the Sneasel and [[KnightsTemplar Templar the Absol]] are the only members of Cyrus' team, and both of them are Dark-type.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: So far Siber the Sneasel and [[KnightsTemplar [[UsefulNotes/TheKnightsTemplar Templar the Absol]] are the only members of Cyrus' team, and both of them are Dark-type.
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* AerisAndBob: Balthasar and Fred
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* AerisAndBob: AerithAndBob: Balthasar and Fred
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* StealthExpert: [[PokemonMysteryDungeon Dusknoir]]
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* StealthExpert: [[PokemonMysteryDungeon [[VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon Dusknoir]]
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* AngstWhatAngst: Archie doesn't show too many signs of being deeply affected by the destruction of his [[DoomedHometown home village]].
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* CompleteMonster:
** [[TheBrute Sputnik]] had no problem with executing hundreds of peaceful protesters for getting on his nerves during his [[NewEraSpeech speech]], orders parts of Celestic Town destroyed, and pretends that his killings came from a disease.
** [[TheEvilGenius Mir]] [[spoiler: decided to hold Eternal and Fantina hostage]], prepared to use an entire team of trained-to-kill pokémon to kill one boy, and murdered over a dozen people who didn't agree with his views and had the courage to attack him while he was drinking his morning coffee, [[ForTheEvulz even though they didn't really do anything and were clearly egged on to attack by him]].
* CoolOldGuy: Solari Akagi (Cyrus' grandfather) and Agent Dynamo
** [[TheBrute Sputnik]] had no problem with executing hundreds of peaceful protesters for getting on his nerves during his [[NewEraSpeech speech]], orders parts of Celestic Town destroyed, and pretends that his killings came from a disease.
** [[TheEvilGenius Mir]] [[spoiler: decided to hold Eternal and Fantina hostage]], prepared to use an entire team of trained-to-kill pokémon to kill one boy, and murdered over a dozen people who didn't agree with his views and had the courage to attack him while he was drinking his morning coffee, [[ForTheEvulz even though they didn't really do anything and were clearly egged on to attack by him]].
* CoolOldGuy: Solari Akagi (Cyrus' grandfather) and Agent Dynamo
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* DownerEnding: It's the story of [[OmnicidalManiac Cy]][[CompleteMonster rus]]! What do you expect?
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* DownerEnding: It's the story of [[OmnicidalManiac Cy]][[CompleteMonster rus]]! Cyrus]]! What do you expect?
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* MemeticBadass: Shard the Charizard
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* MoralEventHorizon: Sputnik's murder of several hundred peaceful protesters
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* FollowTheLeader: of [[BetterThanCanon Rival's]] [[GenreLaunch Story]], although somewhat accidentally since the author didn't actually read Rival's Story until Chapter XII had been finished.
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* FollowTheLeader: of [[BetterThanCanon Rival's]] [[GenreLaunch Story]], Rival's Story, although somewhat accidentally since the author didn't actually read Rival's Story until Chapter XII had been finished.
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* CrapsackWorld: [[{{Understatement}} Sinnoh is not a nice place to live]].
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* CrapsackWorld: [[{{Understatement}} Sinnoh is not a nice place to live]].live.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: descriptions of war can be quite terrifying, although [[YourMileageMayVary YMMV]].
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* SceneryPorn: usually, the location is described in great detail
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* SceneryPorn: usually, SmallNameBigEgo: the location author, obviously. He, by himself, created this page and is described in great detailthe only one to update it.
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* ChekovsGun: The titular speargun
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* ChekovsGun: ChekhovsGun: The titular speargun
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* BlindIdiotTranslation: [[spoiler: Handsome]] speaks like this
* DepravedKidsShowHost: [[spoiler: Buddy the Torterra, Mir's main pokémon, was once a kid's show host. He is actually a [[GentleGiant subversion]], however.]]
* DishingOutDirt: Pericles the Larvitar's specialty
* DishingOutDirt: Pericles the Larvitar's specialty
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** Between [[TheEvilGenius Mir]] and [[spoiler: Handsome]] against Cyrus in a study beneath the Eterna Gym, with bookcases, a [[BattleInTheRain rainstorm]], and a balcony.
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** Between [[TheEvilGenius Mir]] and [[spoiler: Handsome]] against Cyrus and [[ThoseTwoGuys Balthasar and Fred]] in a study beneath the Eterna Gym, with bookcases, a [[BattleInTheRain rainstorm]], and a balcony. balcony.
* KatanasAreJustBetter: Mir tries to kill Cyrus with an old katana
* KatanasAreJustBetter: Mir tries to kill Cyrus with an old katana
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* PrivateMilitaryContractors: [[PresidentEvil The Prime Minister]] hired some Russian ones
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* TheSmartGuy: Pericles the Larvitar
