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* RelationshipUpgrade / ShipTease: Rarity promises to give Spike a chance in a few years. Cadence assures her that it's not a false hope; they have ways of overcoming differences in species, size, shape, and eventually age.

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* RelationshipUpgrade / ShipTease: RelationshipUpgrade: Rarity promises to give Spike a chance in a few years. Cadence assures her that it's not a false hope; they have ways of overcoming differences in species, size, shape, and eventually age.
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: King Sombra didn't just "banish" the Crystal Empire when he was defeated 1000 years ago: he actually sent it and the Crystal Ponies that lived there ''forwards'' in time, hoping that the Royal Sisters would have forgotten all about the Empires' very existence when it arrived so he could continue to rule it unopposed.

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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: King Sombra didn't just "banish" the Crystal Empire when he was defeated 1000 years ago: he actually sent it and the Crystal Ponies that lived there ''forwards'' ''forward'' in time, hoping that the Royal Sisters would have forgotten all about the Empires' Empire's very existence when it arrived so he could continue to rule it unopposed.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Luna rips Triton a new one verbally when his poor choice of words concerning [[spoiler:Nyx causing the sun to stay in place for several weeks leads to the poor filly thinking that the citizens of Formosa died because of her. To assuage her wrath, he has to clarify that because Formosa's residents are selkies, they all escaped easily, and the only real damage was to the property on the island]].
** A variant in the vein of "Stop with this nonsense and ''think'' for a second!" is given by Celestia in Chapter 22. After [[spoiler:the ponies discover the false gossip the Bluebloods have planted in the news]], Rarity, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash are prepared to blame the CMC, bringing up [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E23PonyvilleConfidential the fillies' stint as Gabby Gums on the Foal Free Press]]. When Celestia hears about this, she brings up how the adults shunned the CMC upon finding out, and calls them out on [[{{Hypocrite}} how they'd ignored that]] ''[[{{Hypocrite}} they]]'' [[{{Hypocrite}} were the ones who'd paid for more of the gossip column in the first place]]. To their credit, the adults in the room quickly get the message and promptly drop their accusations, along with apologizing to the CMC for their harsh reactions in the first place.

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* WhatTheHellHero: Luna rips Triton a new one verbally when his poor choice of words concerning [[spoiler:Nyx causing the sun to stay in place for several weeks leads to the poor filly thinking that the citizens of Formosa died because of her. To assuage her wrath, he has to clarify that because Formosa's residents are selkies, they all escaped into the ocean easily, and the only real damage was to the property on the island]].
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** A variant in the vein of "Stop with this nonsense and ''think'' for a second!" is given by Celestia in Chapter 22. After [[spoiler:the the ponies discover the [[spoiler:the false gossip the Bluebloods have planted in the news]], newspapers]], Rarity, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash are prepared to blame the CMC, bringing up [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E23PonyvilleConfidential the fillies' stint as Gabby Gums on the Foal Free Press]]. When Celestia hears about this, she brings up how the adults shunned the CMC upon finding out, and calls them out on [[{{Hypocrite}} how they'd ignored that]] ''[[{{Hypocrite}} they]]'' [[{{Hypocrite}} were the ones who'd paid for more of the gossip column in the first place]]. To their credit, the adults in the room quickly get the message and promptly drop their accusations, along with apologizing to the CMC for their harsh reactions in the first place.

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** Luna rips Triton a new one verbally when he [[spoiler: accidentally makes Nyx think thousands died because of her]].


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* WhatTheHellHero: Luna rips Triton a new one verbally when his poor choice of words concerning [[spoiler:Nyx causing the sun to stay in place for several weeks leads to the poor filly thinking that the citizens of Formosa died because of her. To assuage her wrath, he has to clarify that because Formosa's residents are selkies, they all escaped easily, and the only real damage was to the property on the island]].
** A variant in the vein of "Stop with this nonsense and ''think'' for a second!" is given by Celestia in Chapter 22. After [[spoiler:the ponies discover the false gossip the Bluebloods have planted in the news]], Rarity, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash are prepared to blame the CMC, bringing up [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E23PonyvilleConfidential the fillies' stint as Gabby Gums on the Foal Free Press]]. When Celestia hears about this, she brings up how the adults shunned the CMC upon finding out, and calls them out on [[{{Hypocrite}} how they'd ignored that]] ''[[{{Hypocrite}} they]]'' [[{{Hypocrite}} were the ones who'd paid for more of the gossip column in the first place]]. To their credit, the adults in the room quickly get the message and promptly drop their accusations, along with apologizing to the CMC for their harsh reactions in the first place.
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* ApocalypseNot: A big deal is made over how devastating the effects of two weeks of Night Eternal (and consequently Day Eternal on the other side of the planet) were on several areas. However, as the fic progresses, we see that the whole thing has been blown out of proportion. The best example is perhaps the selkie settlement of Formosa as follows:
** The whole settlement was completely wiped out by the resulting storms except…
** The inhabitants are amphibious and evacuated underwater, so only buildings were lost. Additionally…
** The main selkie settlement is underwater anyway and Formosa was mainly a trading outpost. Furthermore…
** The selkies' land forms are awkward and clumsy compared to their more graceful aquatic forms, so they never put much effort into their surface buildings and consider their loss no big deal.
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* AwesomeByAnalysis: Professor I. M. Dubious of all ponies, who was initially presented as skeptical of everything, is the one who manages to deduce the existence of [[spoiler:a second Crystal Heart using context clues in the Tomb of the Founders.]]
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* GenerationXerox: Twilight gets her SuperOCD traits from her mother, and Nyx seems to have inherited a few from her.

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* GenerationXerox: Twilight gets her SuperOCD ObsessivelyOrganized traits from her mother, and Nyx seems to have inherited a few from her.
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* SuicideAttack: [[spoiler: Attempted by a lone terrorist. He ends up being the only casualty due to ''five'' layers of unicorn shields being clapped down over him -- and he survives because what he thought was the Equestrian equivalent of ''The Anarchist's Cookbook'' turned out to be a book of pranks. He just ends up covered in shaving cream]].

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* SuicideAttack: [[spoiler: Attempted by a lone terrorist. He ends up being the only casualty due to ''five'' layers of unicorn shields being clapped down over him -- and he survives because what he thought was the Equestrian equivalent of ''The Anarchist's Cookbook'' turned out to be a book of pranks. He The "bomb" he's built just ends up covered covers him in shaving cream]].cream. To make matters worse, he says he's taken a dose of poison that will kill him before he can be questioned. Twilight realizes he's actually taken Poison Joke, which just causes a crop of daisies to sprout from his coat overnight.]]
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** Cadence has gotten into the habit of ordering two of every outfit she and Shining Armor wear, just in case something goes wrong. The policy proves useful when her ball gown and his dress uniform meet their end at Nyx's hooves, in an incident involving a spilled bottle of ink and two full boxes of detergent.

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** Cadence has gotten into the habit of ordering two of every outfit she and Shining Armor wear, just in case something goes wrong. The policy proves useful when her ball gown and his dress uniform meet their end at Nyx's hooves, in an incident involving a some spilled bottle of ink and two full boxes of way too much laundry detergent.



* DomesticApplianceDisaster: After an accident with an inkwell, Nyx tries to wash her aunt and uncle's fancy outfits in one washing machine, and the bedspread in another, but dumps an entire box of soap pods into each machine because she can't believe just one pod is enough for an entire ink-stained load. The laundry room floods with both water and foam as a result, and Nyx herself has to be rescued because she can't see through all the foam.

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* DomesticApplianceDisaster: After an accident with an inkwell, a bottle of ink, Nyx tries to wash her aunt and uncle's fancy outfits dress clothes in one a couple of washing machine, and the bedspread in another, but dumps an entire machines, dumping half a box of soap detergent pods into each machine because she can't believe that just one pod is enough for to clean an entire ink-stained load. She then stuffs their bedspread into a third machine and throws in a full box of pods. The laundry room quickly floods with both water and foam as a result, soap suds, and Nyx herself has to be rescued because she can't see through all the foam.

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* AuthorAppeal: Immortality. Both the concept itself and the means to achieve it. Luna and Celestia are on a quest to bring immortality to the citizens of Equestria. The astute reader will pick up on several hints that this quest is eventually successful. For example, near the end of ''Nyx's Family'', Rarity and Cadance get into a conversation over the peculiar beverage they are drinking. Rarity will eventually find herself thinking back on that talk more than a century later.

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* AuthorAppeal: Immortality. Both the concept itself and the means to achieve it. Luna and Celestia are on a quest to bring immortality to the citizens of Equestria. The astute reader will pick up on several hints that this quest is eventually successful. For example, near the end of ''Nyx's Family'', Rarity and Cadance Cadence get into a conversation over the peculiar beverage they are drinking. Rarity will eventually find herself thinking back on that talk more than a century later.



* CrazyPrepared: Nyx keeps an emergency sewing kit within reach in case she needs to fix up her Smarty Pants doll, given to her by Twilight. She ends up using it to repair Bright Eyes' Bilbo Burro doll after the movie theater bullies rip it open.

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** Cadence has gotten into the habit of ordering two of every outfit she and Shining Armor wear, just in case something goes wrong. The policy proves useful when her ball gown and his dress uniform meet their end at Nyx's hooves, in an incident involving a spilled bottle of ink and two full boxes of detergent.
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* ThePurge: The main reason there are little to no crystal unicorns and pegasi is due to Sombra killing the other royal families [[WouldHurtAChild down to the last child]] and slaughtering most of the royal guards during his initial rise to power.

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* PoisonousFriend: [[spoiler: Silver Spoon's nanny traumatized her so badly, she was left with fear of the dark. So Diamond Tiara torpedoed her reputation so badly, the mare has been reduced to collecting bottles for loose change]].


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* PsychoSupporter: [[spoiler: Silver Spoon's nanny traumatized her so badly, she was left with fear of the dark. So Diamond Tiara torpedoed her reputation so badly, the mare has been reduced to collecting bottles for loose change]].
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* AbdicateTheThrone: One of the main concerns that Twilight immediately faces after her Ascendancy is that she (and by-extension her daughter [[IJustWantToBeNormal Nyx]]) are now both Royalty; and that there is literally nothing that she can do about it since Ponies will invariably try to make her into a leader right now. [[spoiler: Turns out at the end of the story; this was part of a BatmanGambit engineered by Celestia and Luna in-order for them ''all'' to Abdicate the Throne and transform Equestria into a new form of government where Alicorns like them are no longer in total control over everything just because.]]

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* AbdicateTheThrone: One of the main concerns that Twilight immediately faces after her Ascendancy is that she (and by-extension her daughter [[IJustWantToBeNormal Nyx]]) are now both Royalty; and that there is literally nothing that she can do about it since Ponies will invariably try to make her into a leader right now. [[spoiler: Turns out at the end of the story; story, this was part of a BatmanGambit engineered by Celestia and Luna in-order for them ''all'' to Abdicate the Throne and transform Equestria into a new form of government where Alicorns like them are no longer in total control over everything just because.]]
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: Shining and Cadence, chapter 5.
--> '''Shining:''' That's a thought for me to sleep on, I guess.
--> '''Cadence:''' Not yet you don't.
--> '''Shining:''' Ohoho...
** Their room is soundproof for ''exactly'' that reason.
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* ​SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: This occurs with [[spoiler:Nyx causing an extended night in ''Fanfic/PastSins'']], ThereAreNoGlobalConsequences being entirely averted.

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* CriticalResearchFailure: InUniverse, even taking into account the fact that they were only allowed to do a loose adaptation to protect Spike and Bright Eye's identities, the makers of the anime version of the dragon battle in ''Nyx's Family'' apparently got a number of details wrong.


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* InUniverseFactoidFailure: Even taking into account the fact that they were only allowed to do a loose adaptation to protect Spike and Bright Eye's identities, the makers of the anime version of the dragon battle in ''Nyx's Family'' apparently got a number of details wrong.
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* ModestRoyalty: Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Shining, and Twilight are all, of course, this, since it is one of their defining character traits in the show itself. But it's ''really'' taken UpToEleven with Nyx, who dislikes being reminded ''at all'' of the fact that she is royalty. Understandable, given how much she detested her tenure as Queen of Equestria and how her birthright to the title of Dark Queen of Equestria has been the source of ''every'' major trauma in her life, including [[spoiler: kidnappings, multiple assassination attempts]], and being feared and despised by many. Her royal status is essentially [[BerserkButton a trigger]] for her. The typical result when someone brings up the fact that she will inevitably be granted a royal title of some sort is as follows:

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* ModestRoyalty: Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Shining, and Twilight are all, of course, this, since it is one of their defining character traits in the show itself. But it's ''really'' taken UpToEleven with Nyx, who Nyx dislikes being reminded ''at all'' of the fact that she is royalty. Understandable, given how much she detested her tenure as Queen of Equestria and how her birthright to the title of Dark Queen of Equestria has been the source of ''every'' major trauma in her life, including [[spoiler: kidnappings, multiple assassination attempts]], and being feared and despised by many. Her royal status is essentially [[BerserkButton a trigger]] for her. The typical result when someone brings up the fact that she will inevitably be granted a royal title of some sort is as follows:
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** The "little black dress" and earrings that Twilight dons in Chapter 6 for the Nightmare Night Ball bear a striking similarity to what her character [[KickingAssInAllHerFinery wore]] in ''Fanfic/EakinsHardReset''. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Rainbow Dash's comment on seeing her dress.

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** The "little black dress" and earrings that Twilight dons in Chapter 6 for the Nightmare Night Ball bear a striking similarity to what her character [[KickingAssInAllHerFinery wore]] in ''Fanfic/EakinsHardReset''.''Fanfic/HardResetEakin''. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Rainbow Dash's comment on seeing her dress.
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* AdultFear: Flitter goes off without her parents. They come looking for her in forbidden, decidedly dangerous territory.
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* PoisonousFriend: [[spoiler: Silver Spoon's nanny traumatized her so badly, she was left with fear of the dark. So Diamond Tiara torpedoed her reputation so badly, the mare has been reduced to collecting bottles for loose change]].
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* FateWorseThanDeath: The nobles caught up in the conspiracy, if and when convicted, will have their names and titles stripped and punished accordingly. [[spoiler:Duke Blueblood, after being found out, has a stroke and will be treated in a nursing home as a child for the rest of his natural life. Compassion of the Crown is granted to his wife, who will most likely be his primary caretaker.]]

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* FateWorseThanDeath: The nobles caught up in the conspiracy, if and when convicted, will have their names and titles stripped and punished accordingly. [[spoiler:Duke Blueblood, after being found out, has a stroke and will be treated in a nursing home as a child for spend the rest of his natural life. Compassion of the Crown is granted life as an invalid in a nursing home. Celestia decides not to file any charges against his wife, who will most likely be his primary caretaker.since she'll have to either take care of him herself or pay somepony else to do it.]]

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* [[spoiler:CoolShip]]: [[spoiler:It turns out that in the ancient past (so ancient that the knowledge doesn’t even survive as ''myth'') the ''entire planet'' was turned into a star ship to travel to a new star system and slot itself into orbit around a younger star (with expected arrival in around 200,000 years). The entire purpose of the celestial council is to maintain critical ship systems, and the conflicts they’ve had over the ages that result in disasters are largely a result of error accumulation. Twilight’s idea to pay Equestria’s debt over the ‘Nightmare Nyx’ fiasco involves crafting devices that will synchronize the celestial systems to stop future error accumulation.]]

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* [[spoiler:CoolShip]]: CoolShip: [[spoiler:It turns out that in the ancient past (so ancient that the knowledge doesn’t even survive as ''myth'') the ''entire planet'' was turned into a star ship to travel to a new star system and slot itself into orbit around a younger star (with expected arrival in around 200,000 years). The entire purpose of the celestial council is to maintain critical ship systems, and the conflicts they’ve had over the ages that result in disasters are largely a result of error accumulation. Twilight’s idea to pay Equestria’s debt over the ‘Nightmare Nyx’ fiasco involves crafting devices that will synchronize the celestial systems to stop future error accumulation.]]


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** This actually turns out to be some rather epic {{Foreshadowing}} regarding [[spoiler:the true nature of the planet and the problems that plague it.]]
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* [[spoiler:CoolShip]]: [[It turns out that in the ancient past (so ancient that the knowledge doesn’t even survive as ''myth'') the ''entire planet'' was turned into a star ship to travel to a new star system and slot itself into orbit around a younger star (with expected arrival in around 200,000 years). The entire purpose of the celestial council is to maintain critical ship systems, and the conflicts they’ve had over the ages that result in disasters are largely a result of error accumulation. Twilight’s idea to pay Equestria’s debt over the ‘Nightmare Nyx’ fiasco involves crafting devices that will synchronize the celestial systems to stop future error accumulation.]]

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* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:As Twilight points out, the Western Kingdoms have hurricanes ''already'', and they shouldn't blame Nyx for the fact that they live in hurricane territory.]]



* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler:As Twilight points out, the Western Kingdoms have hurricanes ''already'', and they shouldn't blame Nyx for the fact that they live in hurricane territory.]]
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* CrazyPrepared: Nyx keeps an emergency sewing kit within reach in case she needs to fix up her Smarty Pants doll, given to her by Twilight. She ends up using it to repair Bright Eyes' Bilbo Burro doll after the movie theater bullies rip it open.

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* RankUp / TookALevelInBadass: Happens twice to Diamond Bright, introduced as a second lieutenant in the Crystal Guard. His quick thinking in the face of a laundry emergency caused by Nyx impresses Shining Armor enough to promote him to first lieutenant. Later, he gets bumped up to captain after directing the Guard's Sappers and Saboteurs crew (a.k.a. "Builders and Busters") in the fight against the dragons.

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Happens twice to Diamond Bright, introduced as a second lieutenant in the Crystal Guard. His quick thinking in the face of a laundry emergency caused by Nyx impresses Shining Armor enough to promote him to first lieutenant. Later, he gets bumped up to captain after directing the Guard's Sappers and Saboteurs crew (a.k.a. "Builders and Busters") in the fight against the dragons.



** Also happens to Rock Steady, a brawny Guard recruit with a serious lack of self-confidence. It takes him two tries to pass an equivalency exam so he can sign up. Once the battle against the dragons is over, Shining Armor promotes him from private to lieutenant for leading three charges without losing any troops.



* TookALevelInBadass: In ''Nyx's Family'', Rock Steady was brawny but not very educated or sure of himself; it took him two tries to pass an equivalency exam so he could join the Royal Guard. Shining Armor promoted him from Private to Lieutenant for his bravery in the battle against the dragons -- leading three charges against them without losing a single soldier. As of ''Alicornundrum'', he has been put in command of the "Heavy Platoon" and begun to display leadership and confidence.

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* TookALevelInBadass: In Since the events of ''Nyx's Family'', Rock Steady was brawny but not very educated or sure of himself; it took him two tries to pass an equivalency exam so he could join the Royal Guard. Shining Armor promoted him from Private to Lieutenant for his bravery in the battle against the dragons -- leading three charges against them without losing a single soldier. As of ''Alicornundrum'', he has been put in command of the "Heavy Platoon" (a support unit for Spike and Bright Eyes) and begun to display leadership and confidence.confidence. When a Canterlot guard mocks the two youngsters' training program, Rock faces him down without a blink.



* NotTheIntendedUse: Based on Spike's success in teleporting dragons with his mail-sending flame in ''Nyx's Family'', Rock Steady and his men get to work on a way to use it for moving troops. They can't stay at their destination for more than a few minutes before the magic snaps them back to where they started, but it works great for hit-and-run attacks and for getting casualties off the battlefield in a hurry.

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* NotTheIntendedUse: Based on Spike's success in teleporting dragons with his mail-sending flame in ''Nyx's Family'', Rock Steady and his men troops get to work on a way to use it for moving troops.personnel. They can't stay at their destination for more than a few minutes before the magic snaps them back to where they started, but it works great for hit-and-run attacks and for getting casualties off the battlefield in a hurry.

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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: King Sombra didn't just "banish" the Crystal Empire when he was defeated 1000 years ago: he actually sent it and the Crystal Ponies that lived there ''forwards'' in time, hoping that the Royal Sisters will have forgotten all about the Empires' very existence when it arrives so he could continue to rule it unopposed.

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* ExactEavesdropping: Twilight sends Nyx and Spike out of the room so she can discuss her plans to find Level Head's tomb with Shining Armor and Cadence in private. Spike promptly listens in with the help of a drinking glass held against the wall.
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: King Sombra didn't just "banish" the Crystal Empire when he was defeated 1000 years ago: he actually sent it and the Crystal Ponies that lived there ''forwards'' in time, hoping that the Royal Sisters will would have forgotten all about the Empires' very existence when it arrives arrived so he could continue to rule it unopposed.



--> '''Shining:''' I'll think about it tonight.
--> '''Cadence:''' Not yet, you don't.
--> '''Shining:''' Oooh...

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--> '''Shining:''' I'll think about it tonight.
That's a thought for me to sleep on, I guess.
--> '''Cadence:''' Not yet, yet you don't.
--> '''Shining:''' Oooh...Ohoho...
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* BigEntrance: When Ink Spot hears about the above mentioned ArrangedMarriage, he uses a network of unicorn teleportation to get to Canterlot, and bursts into the throne room wearing gryphon armor (loaned by a sympathetic gryphon), and challenges Prince Blueblood to a duel for Twilight's hoof in marriage. [[TheCavalryArrivesLate Even though the whole thing had been resolved already]], it's still impressive.

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* BigEntrance: When Ink Spot hears about the above mentioned ArrangedMarriage, he uses a network of unicorn teleportation express unicorn/pegasus couriers to get to Canterlot, and bursts into the throne room wearing gryphon armor (loaned by a sympathetic gryphon), and challenges Prince Blueblood to a duel for Twilight's hoof in marriage. [[TheCavalryArrivesLate Even though the whole thing had been resolved already]], it's still impressive.
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* OhCrap: Prince Blueblood had this when he learned Rarity is a Element of Harmony after the Gala.

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* OhCrap: Prince Blueblood had this when he learned after the Grand Galloping Gala that Rarity is a was an Element of Harmony after Harmony. In present time, he has one upon learning that [[spoiler:his father is leading a plot to overthrow the Gala.Princesses]].

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