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-->"I am a very old pony. I’ve seen things. And banishment? Isn’t ''nearly'' creative enough."

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-->"I am a very old pony. I’ve I’ve seen things. And banishment? Isn’t ''nearly'' creative enough."



* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: While viewing television in "Luna vs. Ponyville, Part 1", Luna is transfixed by a show with [[MisterRogersNeighborhood an older-looking colt who plays piano while singing, asking viewers if they want to be his neighbor.]]

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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed: While viewing television in "Luna vs. Ponyville, Part 1", Luna is transfixed by a show with [[MisterRogersNeighborhood [[Series/MisterRogersNeighborhood an older-looking colt who plays piano while singing, asking viewers if they want to be his neighbor.]]



** In "Luna vs Ponyville, Part 1: Television", where the first show that Luna watches on Pinkie's television is a pony version of MisterRogersNeighborhood, and after changing the channel and trying to find it, she apparently stumbles across a horror movie known as FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}.

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** In "Luna vs Ponyville, Part 1: Television", where the first show that Luna watches on Pinkie's television is a pony version of MisterRogersNeighborhood, Series/MisterRogersNeighborhood, and after changing the channel and trying to find it, she apparently stumbles across a horror movie known as FanFic/{{Cupcakes}}.
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* DeadFic: The last update was in 2012.

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* DeadFic: The last update was in 2012. It is listed as "Complete" on ''Website/{{FIMFiction}}'', with the final chapter featuring Luna declaring herself, Sundance, and Hoyden all married.
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It can be found [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-progress-luna-versus-microwave.html here]].

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It can be found on Equestria Daily [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-progress-luna-versus-microwave.html here]], and FIMFiction.net [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/339/progress here]].
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** "Luna vs. The Dreamlands 2" has a lot of shoutouts to ''{{Inception}}'', primarily in the accelerated time the deeper you go into the Dreamlands and the abrupt transitions between dreams.

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** "Luna vs. The Dreamlands 2" has a lot of shoutouts to ''{{Inception}}'', ''Film/{{Inception}}'', primarily in the accelerated time the deeper you go into the Dreamlands and the abrupt transitions between dreams.
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* {{Badass}}: The unnamed warrior stallion from Luna Vs. Storytelling; see [[Awesome/{{Progress}} the Crowning Moment of Awesome entry of this page]] for details.
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** Also, "[[PiratesOfTheCaribbean AHA! Gentlecolts! You will always remember this as the day you almost caught Captain]] [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/ Sethisto-!]]"

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** Also, "[[PiratesOfTheCaribbean "[[Film/PiratesOfTheCaribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl AHA! Gentlecolts! You will always remember this as the day you almost caught Captain]] [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/ Sethisto-!]]"
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**** Killer space monkeys and killer space tigers, mentioned together, almost sound like a WingCommander reference...
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* GlassesPull: Celestia at the end of "Luna vs. The Heat". [[CSIMiami Horatio Caine]] would be proud.

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* GlassesPull: Celestia at the end of "Luna vs. The Heat". [[CSIMiami [[Series/CSIMiami Horatio Caine]] would be proud.



** At the end of "Luna versus The Heat", Celestia does the infamous [[CSIMiami Horatio Caine]] GlassesPull.

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** At the end of "Luna versus The Heat", Celestia does the infamous [[CSIMiami [[Series/CSIMiami Horatio Caine]] GlassesPull.
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-->'''Luna:''' Through my senses it feels like a great [[DoctorWho wibbly wobbly... Timey Wimey... Bubble of... Stuff]]. Note to self, find a better metaphor.

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-->'''Luna:''' Through my senses it feels like a great [[DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho wibbly wobbly... Timey Wimey... Bubble of... Stuff]]. Note to self, find a better metaphor.
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* DeadFic: The last update was in 2012.
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''Progress'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic by Andrew J. Talon, which originally started as a one-shot titled ''Luna vs. the Microwave''. The story [[StealthPun stars]] Princess Luna as she attempts to catch up on how much life has changed in Equestria.

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''Progress'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by Andrew J. Talon, which originally started as a one-shot titled ''Luna vs. the Microwave''. The story [[StealthPun stars]] Princess Luna as she attempts to catch up on how much life has changed in Equestria.



!! This WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic contains the following tropes:

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!! This WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic contains the following tropes:
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** Also in that chapter, Luna's "TO THE MOON" imagine spot is likely one to [[FriendshipIsMagicBitch a certain fan video]].

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** Also in that chapter, Luna's "TO THE MOON" imagine spot is likely one to [[FriendshipIsMagicBitch [[WebAnimation/FriendshipIsMagicBitch a certain fan video]].
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** It gets worse. At one point, the batter hits autographed baseballs INTO the stands. Which count for the spell. Also, isntead of casting the spell on Applebloom's MITT...she accidentally cast it on her own HORN.
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** Celestia gets this. And knows it. And uses it.
-->''Sometimes I just see a colt and I think to myself, 'Oh, if only I was an immortal, beautiful, sexy goddess that all would love to mate until I couldn't stand up.' And then I think 'Oh wait! I totally am!'''
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** Celestia times her announcement in 'Luna vs the Facts of Life' to get one of these from Luna.
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** In "Luna vs. Storytelling", the old movie Sundance is watching is a pony version of ''ItHappenedOneNight''. There are also references made to ''Fanfic/FalloutEquestria'', [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamarena]], and [[MyLittlePony the Smooze]].

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** In "Luna vs. Storytelling", the old movie Sundance is watching is a pony version of ''ItHappenedOneNight''.''Film/ItHappenedOneNight''. There are also references made to ''Fanfic/FalloutEquestria'', [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamarena]], and [[MyLittlePony the Smooze]].
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** Also in the same chapter, the Cutie Mark Crusaders crash to the rescue in a [[CharliesAngels familiar pose.]]

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** Also in the same chapter, the Cutie Mark Crusaders crash to the rescue in a [[CharliesAngels [[AngelsPose familiar pose.]]
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** Chapter 21 features the ponified MythBusters as scientists in the space program.

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** Chapter 21 features the ponified MythBusters Series/MythBusters as scientists in the space program.
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** "Luna vs. Vigilantism" opens with Luna reading a [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Batpony]] comic (which appears to be inspired by TheKillingJoke). Later Luna (as Mare-Do-Well) performs a dead ringer for the entrance of WesternAnimation/DarkwingDuck.
*** Her checklist also contains elements from other famous superheroes. Let's see, [[Comicbook/{{Superman}} Love Interest as a reporter, with a bald archenemy]], an origin story that is either vague or [[TheKillingJoke multiple choice]], [[Franchise/{{Batman}} cool car and toys]]...

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** "Luna vs. Vigilantism" opens with Luna reading a [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Batpony]] comic (which appears to be inspired by TheKillingJoke).''ComicBook/TheKillingJoke''). Later Luna (as Mare-Do-Well) performs a dead ringer for the entrance of WesternAnimation/DarkwingDuck.
*** Her checklist also contains elements from other famous superheroes. Let's see, [[Comicbook/{{Superman}} Love Interest as a reporter, with a bald archenemy]], an origin story that is either vague or [[TheKillingJoke [[ComicBook/TheKillingJoke multiple choice]], [[Franchise/{{Batman}} cool car and toys]]...
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* ArmchairPsychology
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* AbortedArc: For the time being, Andrew has abandoned "PONIES IN SPACE" in order to focus more on Luna as a character; he mentioned plans to resume it at some later point, but later removed it entirely from the [=FIMFiction=] version of the story.

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* AbortedArc: For the time being, Andrew has abandoned "PONIES IN SPACE" in order to focus more on Luna as a character; he mentioned plans to resume it at some later point, but later removed it entirely from the [=FIMFiction=] Website/FimfictionDotNet version of the story.
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-->"Nooooo!" Rainbow Dash, the greatest flyer in Equestria, wrapped her hooves around Pinkie Pie and shook her. "Nooo! You can’t leave me alone! What about..." She sobbed dramatically but wiped her eyes, "what about our future?! Our dreams and hopes?! Our... Our child!"\\
"Wait, you have a child?" Twilight asked.\\
"We were going to adopt, you got a problem with that?!" Rainbow Dash snarled. Twilight raised her hooves.\\
"N-No! No! No problem!"\\
"We’re not gay if that’s what you’re thinking! I’M NOT GAY! I’LL DO EVERY COLT IN EQUESTRIA IF I HAVE TO PROVE IT!"\\
[[ComedicSociopathy "Rainbow Dash, sugah, yer makin’ her die faster,"]] Applejack pointed out.

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-->"Nooooo!" Rainbow Dash, the greatest flyer in Equestria, wrapped her hooves around Pinkie Pie and shook her. "Nooo! -->'''Rainbow Dash''': Nooooo! Nooo! You can’t leave me alone! What about..." She sobbed dramatically but wiped her eyes, "what about… What about our future?! Our dreams and hopes?! Our... Our child!"\\
"Wait,
child!\\
'''Twilight Sparkle''': Wait,
you have a child?" Twilight asked.\\
"We
child?\\
'''Rainbow''': We
were going to adopt, you got a problem with that?!" Rainbow Dash snarled. Twilight raised her hooves.\\
"N-No!
that?!\\
'''Twilight''': N-No!
No! No problem!"\\
"We’re
problem!\\
'''Rainbow''': We’re
not gay if that’s what you’re thinking! I’M NOT GAY! I’LL DO EVERY COLT IN EQUESTRIA IF I HAVE TO PROVE IT!"\\
IT!\\
'''Applejack''':
[[ComedicSociopathy "Rainbow Rainbow Dash, sugah, yer makin’ her die faster,"]] Applejack pointed out.faster.]]
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* [[CluelessChickMagnet Clueless Dude Magnet]]: Numerous characters remark on Luna's beauty, but she's so out-of-touch, being from a time when affection was not openly displayed, that she's oblivious to their flirting and innuendos.


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* HotGoddess: Characters, particularly Hoyden, regularly comment that Luna is a very attractive pony.
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* {{Troll}}: Celestia has a ''mean'' sense of humor. She truly does love her sister and wants to see her loosen up and become more accustomed to modern life, but she rarely spares a moment to crack jokes and embarrass her in the process.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Luna is sweet, awkward, meek and intelligent. But she is also a PhysicalGod of TheSacredDarkness and you do '''not''' want to make her angry.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Princess Luna. She finds math and paperwork fun and is incredibly awkward and naive in social situations.

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* {{Adorkable}}: Princess Luna. She finds math and paperwork fun and is incredibly awkward and naive in social situations. Celestia even notes that she finds her cute when embarrassed and goes out of her way to tease her and play tricks on her to get her in such a state.
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* CargoShip:[[invoked]] Invoked with Luna's abacus, who she has a bed for, reads bedtime stories to, takes with her almost everywhere, and loves to work on. She even has dreams about it cheating on her with Celestia and dueling Big Mac for her love.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Princess Luna.

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* {{Adorkable}}: Princess Luna. She finds math and paperwork fun and is incredibly awkward and naive in social situations.
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** "Luna vs. Vigilantism" opens with Luna reading a [[Comicbook/{{Batman}} Batpony]] comic (which appears to be inspired by TheKillingJoke). Later Luna (as Mare-Do-Well) performs a dead ringer for the entrance of WesternAnimation/DarkwingDuck.
*** Her checklist also contains elements from other famous superheroes. Let's see, [[Comicbook/{{Superman}} Love Interest as a reporter, with a bald archenemy]], an origin story that is either vague or [[TheKillingJoke multiple choice]], [[Comicbook/{{Batman}} cool car and toys]]...

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** "Luna vs. Vigilantism" opens with Luna reading a [[Comicbook/{{Batman}} [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Batpony]] comic (which appears to be inspired by TheKillingJoke). Later Luna (as Mare-Do-Well) performs a dead ringer for the entrance of WesternAnimation/DarkwingDuck.
*** Her checklist also contains elements from other famous superheroes. Let's see, [[Comicbook/{{Superman}} Love Interest as a reporter, with a bald archenemy]], an origin story that is either vague or [[TheKillingJoke multiple choice]], [[Comicbook/{{Batman}} [[Franchise/{{Batman}} cool car and toys]]...



** Celestia has a butler by the name of [[Comicbook/{{Batman}} Pennyworth]] in "Luna vs The Heat".

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** Celestia has a butler by the name of [[Comicbook/{{Batman}} [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Pennyworth]] in "Luna vs The Heat".
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* ShipTease: Between Luna and Big Mac.
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* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Squick Squick]]: An In-Universe example as this is Luna's reaction when Celestia reveals [[ReallyGetsAround what she was doing]] while Luna was trapped on the moon.

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* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Squick Squick]]: {{Squick}}: An In-Universe example as this is Luna's reaction when Celestia reveals [[ReallyGetsAround what she was doing]] while Luna was trapped on the moon.

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