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** [[Film/TheDarkKnight "Wei he zhao ji?"]][[hottip:*:"Why So Serious" in Chinese]] .... "Don't so serious!" .... “Will you be wanting the sundae, ma’am?” .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... “Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not.”
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** [[Film/TheDarkKnight "Wei he zhao ji?"]][[hottip:*:"Why So Serious" in Chinese]] .... "Don't so serious!" .... “Will you be wanting the sundae, ma’am?” ....ma’am?” .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... “Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not.”
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** [[Film/TheDarkKnight "Wei he zhao ji?"]][[hottip:*:"Why So Serious" in Chinese]] .... "Don't so serious!" .... “Will you be wanting the sundae, ma’am?” .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... “Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not.”
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** [[Film/TheDarkKnight "Wei he zhao ji?"]][[hottip:*:"Why So Serious" in Chinese]] .... "Don't so serious!" .... “Will “Will you be wanting the sundae, ma’am?” .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... “Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not.”
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** [[Film/TheDarkKnight "Wei he zhao ji?"]][[hottip:*:"Why So Serious" in Chinese]] .... "Don't so serious!" .... “Will you be wanting the sundae, ma’am?” .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... “Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not.”
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** [[Film/TheDarkKnight "Wei he zhao ji?"]][[hottip:*:"Why So Serious" in Chinese]] .... "Don't so serious!" .... “Will “Will you be wanting the sundae, ma’am?” .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... “Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not.”
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** [[AllStarBatmanAndRobinTheBoyWonder Are you dense? What, are you retarded? Who the hell do you think you are?]]
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** [[AllStarBatmanAndRobinTheBoyWonder [[ComicBook/AllStarBatmanAndRobinTheBoyWonder Are you dense? What, are you retarded? Who the hell do you think you are?]]
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* CelebrityParadox: Acknowledged in-universe. Ken-ba-ne says "Any similarity to a ''[[strike:GetBackers]] [=ReTrievers=]'' character are coincidental", to which Spadotto shoots back "No more than my similarities to a ''[[strike:{{Bleach}}]] Whitener'' character?"
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* CelebrityParadox: Acknowledged in-universe. Ken-ba-ne says "Any similarity to a ''[[strike:GetBackers]] [=ReTrievers=]'' character are coincidental", to which Spadotto shoots back "No more than my similarities to a ''[[strike:{{Bleach}}]] ''[[strike:Manga/{{Bleach}}]] Whitener'' character?"
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** Ken-ba-ne likes the term [[{{Touhou}} nineball]].
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** “Is this some [[MetalGear Tactical Espionage Action]] you’re involved in....?”
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** “Is this some [[MetalGear [[Franchise/MetalGear Tactical Espionage Action]] you’re involved in....?”
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* RetiredBadass: [[spoiler: Asuoui's]] proficiency with a knife, combined with some self-admittedly loose-tongued comments, suggest that he once carried out wetwork for Mother Sharo. Whether he served in GRU, KGB-now-FSB, Spetznaz or something else has not been revealed.
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* RetiredBadass: [[spoiler: Asuoui's]] Asuoui]]'s proficiency with a knife, combined with some self-admittedly loose-tongued comments, suggest that he once carried out wetwork for Mother Sharo. Whether he served in GRU, KGB-now-FSB, Spetznaz or something else has not been revealed.
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** [[HPLovecraft Hatework]]
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** [[HPLovecraft [[Creator/HPLovecraft Hatework]]
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** [[TheDarkKnightSaga "Wei he zhao ji?"]][[hottip:*:"Why So Serious" in Chinese]] .... "Don't so serious!" .... “Will you be wanting the sundae, ma’am?” .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... “Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not.”
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** [[TheDarkKnightSaga [[Film/TheDarkKnight "Wei he zhao ji?"]][[hottip:*:"Why So Serious" in Chinese]] .... "Don't so serious!" .... “Will you be wanting the sundae, ma’am?” .... “Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! We’re tonight’s… entertainment!”.... Very poor choice of words, [she was] afraid .... “Not very subtle. I most certainly hope not.”
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** "[[StarWars It]]'s It's]] [[MemeticMutation a]] [[GuiltyGear Bridget]]."
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** [[{{Warhammer 40000}} Tactical]] [[{{Terminator}} Dreadnought]], complete with trademark OutOfTheInferno. Also, Battlenail 1,600,000,000[[hottip:*:War -> Battle, Hammer -> Nail, 1.6 mil is 40k squared]]
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** [[{{Warhammer [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} Tactical]] [[{{Terminator}} Dreadnought]], complete with trademark OutOfTheInferno. Also, Battlenail 1,600,000,000[[hottip:*:War -> Battle, Hammer -> Nail, 1.6 mil is 40k squared]]
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* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: [[spoiler: Hei-gu-la-shi being made to give up her powers.]] "Negotiating from such a position of weakness... is not."
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* InTheBack: How [[spoiler: Asuoui kills the gang leader.]]
* InTheBack: How [[spoiler: Asuoui kills the gang leader.]]
* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: [[spoiler: Hei-gu-la-shi being made to give up her powers.]] "Negotiating from such a position of weakness... is not."
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* RetCon: The ''Nanoha'' parody was originally called '' '''Mundane''' Girl Tonedeaf Gigaha'', but was changed to '''''Empath''' Girl'' after the author used the latter in another, unconnected work of his.
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* RetCon: {{Retcon}}: The ''Nanoha'' parody was originally called '' '''Mundane''' Girl Tonedeaf Gigaha'', but was changed to '''''Empath''' Girl'' after the author used the latter in another, unconnected work of his.
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* SophisticatedAsHell: The gang leader in the seventh chapter. Broken English, more broken English, [[spoiler: ''OrderOfTheStick'' reference]], {{Poirot Spe|ak}}- ''What?''
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* SophisticatedAsHell: The gang leader in the seventh chapter. Broken English, more broken English, [[spoiler: ''OrderOfTheStick'' ''Webcomic/TheOrderOfTheStick'' reference]], {{Poirot Spe|ak}}- ''What?''
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Used by Spadotto when speaking to the mystery viewer, who throws it back at him promptly.
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* ThisIsSPARTA: Used by Spadotto when speaking to the mystery viewer, who throws it back at him promptly.
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** In the fourth chapter, Sommerhoffnung quotes FriedrichNietzsche at length.
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** In the fourth chapter, Sommerhoffnung quotes FriedrichNietzsche Creator/FriedrichNietzsche at length.
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* StealthPun: Shortly after He-mu-la mentioned "bad girl", Sommerhoffnung hums a bit of "Pleather for Breakfast", [[spoiler: the theme of Bad Girl from ''NoMoreHeroes''.]]
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* StealthPun: Shortly after He-mu-la mentioned "bad girl", Sommerhoffnung hums a bit of "Pleather for Breakfast", [[spoiler: the theme of Bad Girl from ''NoMoreHeroes''.]] ]]
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** Susanoo's beatdown of the sixth chapter's Childless riffs on the game version of [[JoJosBizarreAdventure Dio Brando's ZA WARUDO combo]].
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** Susanoo's beatdown of the sixth chapter's Childless riffs on the game version of [[JoJosBizarreAdventure [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Dio Brando's ZA WARUDO combo]].
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* [=~An Offer You Can't Refuse~=]: [[spoiler: Hei-gu-la-shi being made to give up her powers.]] "Negotiating from such a position of weakness... is not."
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* [=~An Offer You Can't Refuse~=]: AnOfferYouCantRefuse: [[spoiler: Hei-gu-la-shi being made to give up her powers.]] "Negotiating from such a position of weakness... is not."
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* [=~Don't You Dare Pity Me~=]: Musterteklang is interpreted as being of this sort.
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* HannibalLecture: When Sommerhoffnung tries to do a [=~What The Hell, Hero?~=] in chapter seven, Ywiu and Romea shoot her down harshly.
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* HannibalLecture: When Sommerhoffnung tries to do a [=~What The Hell, Hero?~=] WhatTheHellHero in chapter seven, Ywiu and Romea shoot her down harshly.
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** [[TheManYourManCouldSmellLike Having the feeling that something was off, Hei-gu-la-shi looked at her, then at Rondeng, then back at her, before looking back to Rondeng again. She had the feeling that something was off and it was certainly not just the fact that Wedey was not her.]]
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** [[TheManYourManCouldSmellLike [[Advertising/TheManYourManCouldSmellLike Having the feeling that something was off, Hei-gu-la-shi looked at her, then at Rondeng, then back at her, before looking back to Rondeng again. She had the feeling that something was off and it was certainly not just the fact that Wedey was not her.]]
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* SincerityMode: When Sommerhoffnung [[spoiler: shoots a District Ten {{MIB}}]], Ywiu claps and assures her that she was being genuinely appreciative. Also done when [[spoiler: Ywiu agrees with Romea's HannibalLecture against Sommerhoffnung.]]
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* SincerityMode: When Sommerhoffnung [[spoiler: shoots a District Ten {{MIB}}]], [[TheMenInBlack Man In Black]], Ywiu claps and assures her that she was being genuinely appreciative. Also done when [[spoiler: Ywiu agrees with Romea's HannibalLecture against Sommerhoffnung.]]
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** "Are you so sure of your success, or will you say [[DeathNote 'damnit, he got me']] when it falls apart?"
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** "Are you so sure of your success, or will you say [[DeathNote [[Manga/DeathNote 'damnit, he got me']] when it falls apart?"
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** [[{{Stardust}} "I am a star! And what do stars do? Shine!]] [[BlazBlue Shine shine shine shine shine....!"]]
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** [[{{Stardust}} [[Film/{{Stardust}} "I am a star! And what do stars do? Shine!]] [[BlazBlue Shine shine shine shine shine....!"]]
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** [[TeamFortress2 "Let's have a go at it!"]]
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** "[[{{Ptitlew5cf1us4}} Fuck it!]] [[MemeticMutation We'll do it live!]]"
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** "Does he still [[{{Ptitleqggcng93}} Remembah]] [[MemeticMutation Me]]?"
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* [=~Why Don't Ya Just Shoot Him?~=]: Asuoui asks Ywiu why she did not start the fight against the gangsters with torching them. Her reply fails to convince even herself.
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* [=~Why Don't Ya Just Shoot Him?~=]: WhyDontYouJustShootHim: Asuoui asks Ywiu why she did not start the fight against the gangsters with torching them. Her reply fails to convince even herself.
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** [[UnrealTournament Very Real Competition]]
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** [[UnrealTournament [[VideoGame/UnrealTournament Very Real Competition]]
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** Sommerhoffnung sings a few lines from [[RhapsodyOfFire Emerald Sword]] before naming her Parent [[SignificantAnagram Draysoph]], and names her guns [[{{U2}} U3]] and [[{{Aerosmith}} Airmaker]].
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** Sommerhoffnung sings a few lines from [[RhapsodyOfFire Emerald Sword]] before naming her Parent [[SignificantAnagram Draysoph]], and names her guns [[{{U2}} U3]] and [[{{Aerosmith}} [[Music/{{Aerosmith}} Airmaker]].
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** [[SchlockMercenary "There is no such thing as overkill, only open fire and I need to reload?"]]
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** [[SchlockMercenary [[Webcomic/SchlockMercenary "There is no such thing as overkill, only open fire and I need to reload?"]]
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Currently stands at eight chapters, but updates have been... [[{{Understatement}} very sporadic]].
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Currently stands at eight chapters, but updates have been... [[{{Understatement}} very sporadic]].
sporadic.
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* ViewersAreGeniuses: And how! To state just one point, how many of the more disguised/subtle ShoutOuts will the average reader recognise? Lampshade Hung in OneOfUs fashion at the end of the fifth chapter via author's notes.
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* ViewersAreGeniuses: And how! To state just one point, how How many of the more disguised/subtle ShoutOuts {{Shout Out}}s will the average reader recognise? Lampshade Hung in OneOfUs fashion at the end of the fifth chapter via author's notes.
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* EldritchAbomination: Subverted. Spadotto notes that the Childless, while StarfishAliens, do not have the BrownNote effects commonly associated with [[strike:Lovecraftian]] Hateworkian Horrors.
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* EldritchAbomination: Subverted. Spadotto notes that the Childless, while StarfishAliens, do not have the BrownNote effects commonly associated with [[strike:Lovecraftian]] Hateworkian Horrors.
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*** PS^2N plays Dusk Horizon from the [[Game/{{Unreal}} Very Real]] soundtrack.
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*** PS^2N plays Dusk Horizon from the [[Game/{{Unreal}} [[VideoGame/{{Unreal}} Very Real]] soundtrack.
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* EldritchAbomination: Subverted. Spadotto notes that the Childless, while StarfishAliens, do not have the BrownNote effects commonly associated with [[strike:Lovecraftian]] Hateworkian Horrors.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3291350/1/Prinz_von_Sommerhoffnung Prinz von Sommerhoffnung]]'' by Warp Ligia Obscura is ''supposed to be'' an AlternateUniverse {{Novelisation}} ''{{Mai-HiME}}'' fanfic. It's so alternate that the character names are different... It is best described as a MegaCrossover. It follows TheStationsOfTheCanon[=/=]BroadStrokes without adhering tightly.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3291350/1/Prinz_von_Sommerhoffnung Prinz von Sommerhoffnung]]'' by Warp Ligia Obscura ([[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=180855 also available at SpaceBattles]]) is ''supposed to be'' an AlternateUniverse {{Novelisation}} ''{{Mai-HiME}}'' fanfic. It's so alternate that the character names are different... It is best described as a MegaCrossover. It follows TheStationsOfTheCanon[=/=]BroadStrokes without adhering tightly.
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* DramatisPersonae: There's one in progress at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?p=5602756#post5602756 SpaceBattles thread]].
