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* {{Shoryuken}}: [[spoiler: Dave pulls one off in Ch163]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6604037/1/Precocious_Crush Precocious Crush]]'' is the story of Mindy Macready, better known as [[LittleMissBadass Hit Girl]], and her attempts to intergrate into normal preteen life while dealing with a growing crush on her closest friend, [[{{Adorkable}} Dave Lizeski]].\\
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6604037/1/Precocious_Crush Precocious Crush]]'' is the story of Mindy Macready, better known as [[LittleMissBadass Hit Girl]], and her attempts to intergrate into normal preteen life while dealing with a growing crush on her closest friend, [[{{Adorkable}} Dave Lizeski]].Lizewski]].\\
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* CombatMedic: White Mage's main purpose is to patch people up after and during fights, but she's been shown to [[DropTheHammer hold her own]].
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Okay, if it\'s only done once, it\'s hardly a hard aversion.
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* WhamLine: Two notable ones, chapter after chapter. [[spoiler:"But, really, how could I have guessed that Jessi was going to go home and kill her family?"]] in Chapter 153, and [[spoiler:"Jessi's father and brother have been raping her for the last three years."]] in 154.
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* OhCrap: At the end of the assault on The Rainbow Factory, Chris hit's a button that drops a few dozen live grenades into the room with Kick-Ass and Hit Girl.
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**Dave will kick your ass if you hurt ANY of his friends, actually.
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*WhyDontYouJustShootHim: Chris even puts the gun to [[spoiler: Mindy's]] head and yells, “Bang” just to show that he could have, except she hasn't suffered enough.
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Based primarily on the [[Film/{{Kick-Ass}} film]], though the author borrows from the [[ComicBook/{{Kick-Ass}} comic]] whenever possible, the story combines humor, drama, and even some romance to create a compelling narrative.
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Based primarily on the [[Film/{{Kick-Ass}} film]], though the author borrows from the [[ComicBook/{{Kick-Ass}} comic]] whenever possible, the story combines humor, drama, and even some romance to create a compelling narrative.
narrative that'll have you rooting for her even if that is kinda [[{{squick}} fucked up]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6604037/1/Precocious_Crush Precocious Crush]]'' is the story of Mindy Macready, better known as [[LittleMissBadass Hit Girl]], and her attempts to intergrate into normal preteen life while dealing with a growing crush on her closest friend, [[{{Adorkable}} Dave Lizeski]].\\
Based primarily on the [[Film/{{Kick-Ass}} film]], though the author borrows from the [[ComicBook/{{Kick-Ass}} comic]] whenever possible, the story combines humor, drama, and even some romance to create a compelling narrative.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
*ACupAngst: Mindy is well aware that Dave is a boob man, and that she doesn't have any.
*{{Adorkable}}: Dave, Marty, and Todd
*AllThereInTheManual: Bonus Chapters will reveal goings on behind the scenes that aren't revealed until much later in the story, if at all.
*BadassAdorable: Mindy, of course.
*BadassLongcoat: Nathan Bush
*BadassNormal: most of the superheroes
*BerserkButton: Do not hurt Mindy. Ever. In any any way. Dave and Angela will destroy you.
*{{BFS}}: The Great White's sword.
*BifurcatedWeapon: Dave gets Mindy a staff that splits into two swords for her birthday.
*BigDamnHeroes: Mindy pulls off a spectacular one in this fic's version of the Times Square Brawl
*WhamEpisode: Ch33 and ch47
*BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Mindy, Jessi, and Angela
*BrickJoke: Mindy's injured leg.
*TheCape: The Guardian. He's kind of an asshole about it though. Dave could be considered one as well, but he's much more pragmatic about it.
*ChekhovsGun: Mindy gives Dave a gun for Christmas in Ch40, it's not seen again [[spoiler: until Ch111]]
**Also, the Mistletoe given to Mindy by Riley
*CompleteMonster: Chris D'Amico
*FakeOutMakeOut: Dave and Mindy when scouting Chris' base
*FireForgedFriends: Dave and Mindy
*GettingCrapPastTheRadar: There are several steamy scenes between Mindy and Dave. They're all either dreams or fantasies
*HiddenDepths: Riley
*KickTheDog: Mindy states that while she may be capable of doing incredibly cruel and sadistic things to those she thinks deserve it, she'd never do this.
**Chris D'Amico on the other hand...
*KnifeNut: Do I even need to say who?
*LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Angela, Jessi, and Riley have all remarked on Mindy's resemblance to Chloe' Grace Moretz
*LittleMissBadass: Mindy
*TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: Inverted. Their secret life seems to be Mindy's only hope.
*MistakenForPedophile: Dave catches a [[PaedoHunt bad case]] of this during Mindy's second year of school
*NintendoHard: All the games Mindy plays seem to be this.
*NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted hard. Once. Mindy hasn't mentioned it since.
*NoSocialSkills: Mindy at first, though she gets better as she goes along
*OnlySaneMan: Marcus makes several valient, if futile, efforts to get Mindy to quit superheroing.
*PrecociousCrush: Mindy, at 11, develops a serious crush on Dave, who was then 17
**[[BlatantLies She doesn't have a crush on him, she just want's to fuck his brains out.]]
*RefugeInAudacity: Chris D'Amico/The Motherfucker
*TheRival: Katie, and later Riley, for Dave's affection
*SilkHidingSteel: Inverted with Mindy, whose tough personality hides a sensitive heart.
*SurvivorsGuilt: Dave still holds himself responsible not only for Damon's death, but for each and every innocent person who died because of the Motherfucker. He hides it pretty well.
**There is fan speculation that this is also why Dave initially refused to wear armor
*TookALevelInBadass: Dave, a few times. Most notably when [[spoiler: he beat a kid to a pulp]] and later [[spoiler: kicked Mindy in the face]]
*UnderTheMistletoe: Dave gives Mindy a chaste kiss while leaving a Christmas party. The kiss she gives him in return is not.
*UnreliableNarrator: Mindy doesn't have any problems with saying how she wishes things had gone.
**Ch[[spoiler:116]] was almost entirely Mindy making shit up.
*WhyCantIHateYou?: Riley again.
