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''[[http://www.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=384 Of Mares and Magic]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Shipping}} fic between Twilight Sparkle and Trixie Lulamoon, involving Trixie's attempts to prove her superiority in magic to Twilight.
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The story was originally posted on the Pony Fiction Archive, but was moved to the AO3 as part of the Open Doors project in 2022 when the Archive shut down. As such, it can be read ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/43012752/chapters/108078585 here]]'' now.
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The story was originally posted on the Pony Fiction Archive, but was moved to the AO3 Archive of Our Own as part of the Open Doors project in 2022 when the Archive shut down. As such, it can be read ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/43012752/chapters/108078585 here]]'' now.
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* GlowingGem: Prism stars are very rare, spherical gems suffused with light magic and glowing with every color of the rainbow. Twilight and Trixie use one as part of her visual effects during their WizardDuel.
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[[http://www.ponyfictionarchive.net/viewstory.php?sid=384 Of Mares and Magic]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Shipping}} fic between Twilight Sparkle and Trixie Lulamoon, involving Trixie's attempts to prove her superiority in magic to Twilight.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: These are what [[spoiler:Trixie]] ends up fighting when [[spoiler:she leaves Ponyville to become stronger at magic.]]
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* TheMagnificent: Unicorns use a fairly complex system of honorifics which one formally earns under specific circumstances.
** "The Magnificent" is awarded to top students from Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns -- both Twilight and Trixie can use it; Twilight avoids it because she thinks it sounds gaudy.
** "Great and Powerful" is held by only a single pony at a time, and is obtained by defeating the previous holder in a formal magical duel.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: These are what [[spoiler:Trixie]] ends up fighting when [[spoiler:she leaves Ponyville to become stronger atmagic.]]magic]].
** "The Magnificent" is awarded to top students from Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns -- both Twilight and Trixie can use it; Twilight avoids it because she thinks it sounds gaudy.
** "Great and Powerful" is held by only a single pony at a time, and is obtained by defeating the previous holder in a formal magical duel.
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-->'''Trixie:''' "I suppose next you’ll tell me Applejack and Rarity are-"
-->'''Pinkie:''' “Oh ho ho, oh no, ha ha ha, noooooo no, wow, that’s just...that’s probably the silliest thing I’ve ever heard, those two? Ha HA, that’d be a laugh. Ahhhh, oh Trixie, you’ve got some crazy ideas.”
-->'''Pinkie:''' “Oh ho ho, oh no, ha ha ha, noooooo no, wow, that’s just...that’s probably the silliest thing I’ve ever heard, those two? Ha HA, that’d be a laugh. Ahhhh, oh Trixie, you’ve got some crazy ideas.”
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-->'''Trixie:''' "I I suppose next you’ll you'll tell me Applejack and Rarity are-"
-->'''Pinkie:''' “Ohare-\\
'''Pinkie:''' Oh ho ho, oh no, ha ha ha, noooooo no, wow,that’s just...that’s that's just... that's probably the silliest thing I’ve I've ever heard, those two? Ha HA, that’d that'd be a laugh. Ahhhh, oh Trixie, you’ve you've got some crazy ideas.”
-->'''Pinkie:''' “Oh
'''Pinkie:''' Oh ho ho, oh no, ha ha ha, noooooo no, wow,
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Trixie is this to her father as part of her [[FreudianExcuse backstory as to why she was a bully]].
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** The first two rules of Rainbow Dash’s Ultimate Unicorn Obstacle Course Deluxe, Mark Three [[Film/FightClub sound suspiciously familiar.]] It gets lampshaded, too.
--->'''Trixie:''' Where is she getting these rules? This sounds like a crazy pony's checklist.
--->'''Twilight:''' Why is the second rule the same as the first?
--->'''Rainbow Dash:''' It's not! It’s more menacing, since I shouted the ‘do not’ part.
--->'''Trixie:''' Where is she getting these rules? This sounds like a crazy pony's checklist.
--->'''Twilight:''' Why is the second rule the same as the first?
--->'''Rainbow Dash:''' It's not! It’s more menacing, since I shouted the ‘do not’ part.
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* ConnectedAllAlong: Twilight concludes that [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E23TheCutieMarkChronicles Rainbow Dash's first Sonic Rainbow]] caused Trixie to get her Cutie Mark as well.
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* ConnectedAllAlong: Twilight concludes that [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E23TheCutieMarkChronicles Rainbow Dash's first Sonic Rainbow]] Rainboom]] caused Trixie to get her Cutie Mark as well.
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-->'''Trixie:''' "You can't be serious. Of all the convoluted, contrived, ''confounding'' coincidences, this one has to be the least profound, least precise, least ''possible'' possibility ever postulated by ponykind. It was just somepony setting off...a firework or something. Nothing at all like this...phenomenon you call a Rainboom. Puerile! Psychotic! ''Preposterous!''"
-->'''Trixie:''' "You can't be serious. Of all the convoluted, contrived, ''confounding'' coincidences, this one has to be the least profound, least precise, least ''possible'' possibility ever postulated by ponykind. It was just somepony setting off...a firework or something. Nothing at all like this...phenomenon you call a Rainboom. Puerile! Psychotic! ''Preposterous!''"
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* TechnicianVersusPerformer: Methodical, by-the-book Twilight is the Technician to flashy, showy Trixie's Performer.
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* CompetitiveBalance: The purpose of the seven tasks in a Magician's Duel is in acknowledgement that magical prowess can manifest in different ways, and the three most prominent unicorns in the story illustrate this in different ways.
** UnskilledButStrong: Twilight Sparkle has the most raw magical power known to exist short of the Princesses, but is more likely to rely on that than any sort of finesse.
** WeakButSkilled: Rarity is capable of incredibly fine detailed work as part of her fashion business, but can't come anywhere near Twilight's or Trixie's strength levels.
** JackOfAllStats: Trixie has neither Rarity's precision nor Twilight's raw strength, but still performs very well in both areas, [[spoiler:and that balance allows her to officially retain the title of Great and Powerful.]]
** UnskilledButStrong: Twilight Sparkle has the most raw magical power known to exist short of the Princesses, but is more likely to rely on that than any sort of finesse.
** WeakButSkilled: Rarity is capable of incredibly fine detailed work as part of her fashion business, but can't come anywhere near Twilight's or Trixie's strength levels.
** JackOfAllStats: Trixie has neither Rarity's precision nor Twilight's raw strength, but still performs very well in both areas, [[spoiler:and that balance allows her to officially retain the title of Great and Powerful.]]
