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* FlatEarthAtheist: Noriko does not believe in God or Heaven, due to the knowledge of what happens in the Catholic Church (I.E Pedophilia), and believes God is simply luck and nothing more, despite the fact that Kaworu and his general predicament fantastical and unbelievable.
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* FlatEarthAtheist: Noriko does not believe in God or Heaven, due to the knowledge of what happens in the Catholic Church (I.E Pedophilia), and believes God is simply luck and nothing more, despite the fact that Kaworu and his general predicament is fantastical and unbelievable.
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* {FlatEarthAthiest}: Noriko does not believe in God or Heaven, due to the knowledge of what happens in the Catholic Church (I.E Pedophilia), and believes God is simply luck and nothing more, despite the fact that Kaworu and his general predicament fantastical and unbelievable.
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* {FlatEarthAthiest}: FlatEarthAtheist: Noriko does not believe in God or Heaven, due to the knowledge of what happens in the Catholic Church (I.E Pedophilia), and believes God is simply luck and nothing more, despite the fact that Kaworu and his general predicament fantastical and unbelievable.
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* FlatEarthAthiest: {FlatEarthAthiest}: Noriko does not believe in God or Heaven, due to the knowledge of what happens in the Catholic Church (I.E Pedophilia), and believes God is simply luck and nothing more, despite the fact that Kaworu and his general predicament fantastical and unbelievable.
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* FlatEarthAthiest: Noriko does not believe in God or Heaven, due to the knowledge of what happens in the Catholic Church (I.E Pedophilia), and believes God is simply luck and nothing more, despite the fact that Kaworu and his general predicament fantastical and unbelievable.
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* BerserkButton: Kaworu's very ''existence'' seems to be one for Noriko.
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* BerserkButton: Kaworu's very ''existence'' seems to be one for Noriko.Noriko, mostly due to how he appears to be responsible for Noriko's predicament, as well as what appears to be a genuine bias towards his character, though it's not fully explained ''why'' she has this bias against him.
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* CovertPervert: Asuka apparently keeps a collection of "private" magazines beneath her bed, as well as looks at Shinji's ass when he is in his plugsuit.
** Noriko could also qualify, but is not exactly "covert" about it. She can't keep stop thinking about Shinji's "assets" when she sees him in his plugsuit, and masturbates only on the weekends ''at the least'' due to Asuka sleeping in, and even then she is apparently still loud enough for Asuka to notice.
** Noriko could also qualify, but is not exactly "covert" about it. She can't keep stop thinking about Shinji's "assets" when she sees him in his plugsuit, and masturbates only on the weekends ''at the least'' due to Asuka sleeping in, and even then she is apparently still loud enough for Asuka to notice.
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Zig-zagged regarding Noriko, and deconstructed in regards to whether it's good, bad or in-between.
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Zig-zagged ZigZagged regarding Noriko, and deconstructed DeconstructedTrope in regards to whether it's good, bad or in-between.in-between. Her personality was originally an 22-year old Irish Engineer who is now in the body of a 14-year old Japanese student, but she is desperately trying to old onto her past life, for fear of actually losing herself, so whenever something does happen that makes her remember something, she takes two steps back. She doesn't know what will happen, but if Misato's advice is taken, then her personality will be a blend of both her old life and her new one. However, her fear of losing her identity, coupled with her hormones and sexuality being warped because of her body, make her too afraid to consider if it is good or bad.
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya''. [[spoiler: Turns out, she is not actually Haruhi. Her real name was Sakura Ikazuchi, who, [[DespairEventHorizon after her parents were killed during one of the first Eva battles]], was driven insane by grief and ''[[LossOfIdentity fully believed herself to be Haruhi]]'', due to being a major fan of the series. She later forced her friends into her fantasy, forcing the characters roles onto them, as is the case with Kyon.]]
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya''. [[spoiler: Turns out, she is not actually Haruhi. Her real name was Sakura Ikazuchi, who, [[DespairEventHorizon after her parents were killed during one of the first Eva battles]], was driven insane by grief and ''[[LossOfIdentity fully believed believed]] [[LostInCharacter herself to be Haruhi]]'', due to being a major fan of the series. She later forced her friends into her fantasy, forcing the characters roles onto them, as is the case with Kyon.]]
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya''. [[spoiler: Turns out, she is not actually Haruhi. Her real name was Sakura Ikazuchi, who, [[DespairEventHorizon after her parents were killed during one of the first Eva battles]], was driven insane by grief and [[LossOfIdentity''fully believed herself to be Haruhi'']], due to being a major fan of the series. She later forced her friends into her fantasy, forcing the characters roles onto them, as is the case with Kyon.]]
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya''. [[spoiler: Turns out, she is not actually Haruhi. Her real name was Sakura Ikazuchi, who, [[DespairEventHorizon after her parents were killed during one of the first Eva battles]], was driven insane by grief and [[LossOfIdentity''fully ''[[LossOfIdentity fully believed herself to be Haruhi'']], Haruhi]]'', due to being a major fan of the series. She later forced her friends into her fantasy, forcing the characters roles onto them, as is the case with Kyon.]]
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya''. [[Turns out, she is not actually Haruhi. Her real name was Sakura Ikazuchi, who, [[DespairEventHorizon after her parents were killed during one of the first Eva battles]], was driven insane by grief and [[LossOfIdentity''fully believed herself to be Haruhi'']], due to being a major fan of the series. She later forced her friends into her fantasy, forcing the characters roles onto them, as is the case with Kyon.]]
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya''. [[Turns [[spoiler: Turns out, she is not actually Haruhi. Her real name was Sakura Ikazuchi, who, [[DespairEventHorizon after her parents were killed during one of the first Eva battles]], was driven insane by grief and [[LossOfIdentity''fully believed herself to be Haruhi'']], due to being a major fan of the series. She later forced her friends into her fantasy, forcing the characters roles onto them, as is the case with Kyon.]]
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya''. [[spoiler:WordOfGod indicates it's not really a crossover -- the girl who thinks she's Haruhi really ''is'' delusional, and the ''Haruhi'' elements have no real bearing on the plot.]]
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya''. [[spoiler:WordOfGod indicates it's [[Turns out, she is not really a crossover -- the girl who thinks she's Haruhi really ''is'' delusional, and the ''Haruhi'' elements have no actually Haruhi. Her real bearing on name was Sakura Ikazuchi, who, [[DespairEventHorizon after her parents were killed during one of the plot.first Eva battles]], was driven insane by grief and [[LossOfIdentity''fully believed herself to be Haruhi'']], due to being a major fan of the series. She later forced her friends into her fantasy, forcing the characters roles onto them, as is the case with Kyon.]]
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* ShrinkingViolet: Noriko. Due to being originally an Irish man and Evangelion fan, being put into a teenage girl's body and being in the Evangelion universe severely tarnished her sense of self. It's to the point where '''[[TheEeyore Shinji]]''' '''[[HeroicSelfDeprecation Ikari]]''' has more self-esteem then her.
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* BringMyBrownPants: Noriko wets herself after [[spoiler: stopping Shinji and Asuka's cable from falling further into Mt. Asama]].
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* GenreSavvy: Noriko, natch. (Also Kaworu, but to a lesser extent)
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I'm fairly sure there's no version that even got to the 11th angel, let alone the 14th.
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* EvilAllAlong: [[spoiler:Kaworu, who orchestrated everything, manipulating Noriko to ensure that only his form of Angel-life would survive.]]
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* OffTheRails: After Bardiel, all bets are off. [[spoiler:Shinji leaves afterwards. The 14th Angel is defeated without him, giving him no reason to return. The 15th Angel doesn't attack Asuka....]]
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* YouShallNotPass: Angel 14, meet Noriko.
* WhamEpisode: Hikari is chosen as pilot of Unit 05. [[spoiler: It is destroyed on Commander Ikari's orders after the Evangelion pilots are defeated by Bardiel, killing her in the process.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Hikari is chosen as pilot of Unit 05. [[spoiler: It is destroyed on Commander Ikari's orders after the Evangelion pilots are defeated by Bardiel, killing her in the process.]]
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Hasn't been updated since October 2016.
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* SelfInsert: a shockingly ''good'' one at that!
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* SelfInsert: a A shockingly ''good'' one at that!
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* TheDeadliestMushroom: What happens to Minamiizu.
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* UsefulNotes/NuclearWeapons: What happens to Minamiizu.
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* AnachronicOrder: Part 13. Starts with Tokyo-3 in flames, then alternates between the buildup to the Angel attack, and to its eventual defeat.
* ChildSoldiers: The Evangelion pilots. Moreso than the original series since their training is delved into in more detail.
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya''. [[spoiler:WordOfGod indicates it's not really a crossover -- the girl who thinks she's Haruhi really ''is'' delusional, and the ''Haruhi'' elements have no real bearing on the plot.]]
* TheDeadliestMushroom: What happens to Minamiizu.
* TheDeadliestMushroom: What happens to Minamiizu.
* EagleLand: A mix of Type-1, and Type-2, when the Americans come to visit to negotiate the release of Evangelion Unit 04.
* EarthShatteringKaboom: What the Tenth Angel attempts. What happens to Minamiizu.
* EarthShatteringKaboom: What the Tenth Angel attempts. What happens to Minamiizu.
* EvilAllAlong: [[spoiler:Kaworu, who orchestrated everything, manipulating Noriko to ensure that only his form of Angel-life would survive.]]
* IChooseToStay: Noriko comes to this conclusion, believing she would feel guilty for abandoning real people who'd become her friends.
* MajorlyAwesome: Major Katsuragi, who orders the largest nuclear strike in fifteen years, without blinking.
* MajorlyAwesome: Major Katsuragi, who orders the largest nuclear strike in fifteen years, without blinking.
* OffTheRails: After Bardiel, all bets are off. [[spoiler:Shinji leaves afterwards. The 14th Angel is defeated without him, giving him no reason to return. The 15th Angel doesn't attack Asuka....]]
** Shinji played a [[TabletopGame/CthulhuTech RPG about biomechs called Engels]] in Kensuke's club.
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* YouShallNotPass: Angel 14, meet Noriko.
* WhamEpisode: Hikari is chosen as pilot of Unit 05. [[spoiler: It is destroyed on Commander Ikari's orders after the Evangelion pilots are defeated by Bardiel, killing her in the process.]]
* WhamEpisode: Hikari is chosen as pilot of Unit 05. [[spoiler: It is destroyed on Commander Ikari's orders after the Evangelion pilots are defeated by Bardiel, killing her in the process.]]
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* OceanicAirlines: The plane crash was an Oceanic Airlines flight, and the airline is apparently run by one John Locke.
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* BerserkButton: Kaworu's very ''existence'' seems to be one for Noriko.
* DeadpanSnarker: Noriko's inner thoughts are surprisingly sarcastic.
* EloquentInMyNativeTongue: Subverted. The original Noriko was a native Japanese speaker who could barely speak English, but the poor sod controlling her reigns now is a native English speaker who must ''re''learn Japanese. Something that very nearly gets her into trouble with the NERV higher-ups.
* GenreSavvy: Noriko, natch. (Also Kaworu, but to a lesser extent)
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* {{Tsundere}}: Noriko notes herself as one, but also thoroughly deconstructs the concept.
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FFN gives the following summary: Newton's First law. An Object in motion will remain in motion until acted on by an external force. The events of Neon Genesis Evangelion, as seen by the Fourth Child. Self Insert:ACC.
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Meant to say: the tropes about the ending are MASSIVE spoilers that can\'t be avoided if you try to edit the page. They\'ve been moved to the discussion page pending the fic\'s conclusion.
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* AbusiveParents: Asuka's father is the classic "tear your kid down if they're less than perfect" parent.
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* AbusiveParents: Asuka's father is the classic "tear your kid down if they're less than perfect" parent.parent and, according to Asuka, only acknowledges her as his daughter when it's to give himself some attention or fame.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Third Impact is prevented. But with thousands left dead by the preceding battle, including some of the Pilots.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: Hikari. Rei]]
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Hikari Horaki, Pilot of Unit 05 ]]. This is [[ForWantOfaNail because]] [[spoiler: Noriko is able to convince Shinji and Asuka to fight the 13th Angel and attempt a rescue. Commander Ikari doesn't need to trigger the Dummy Plug. All tree Eva's are beaten by the Angel before Unit 05 self-destructs]]
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Hikari Horaki, Pilot of Unit 05 ]]. This is [[ForWantOfaNail because]] [[spoiler: Noriko is able to convince Shinji and Asuka to fight the 13th Angel and attempt a rescue. Commander Ikari doesn't need to trigger the Dummy Plug. All tree Eva's are beaten by the Angel before Unit 05 self-destructs]]
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Hikari Horaki, Pilot of Unit 05 ]]. This is [[ForWantOfaNail because]] [[spoiler: Noriko is able to convince Shinji and Asuka to fight the 13th Angel and attempt a rescue. Commander Ikari doesn't need to trigger the Dummy Plug. All tree Eva's are beaten by the Angel before Unit 05 self-destructs]]''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya''.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Hikari Horaki, Pilot of Unit 05 ]]. This is [[ForWantOfaNail because]] [[spoiler: Noriko is able to convince Shinji and Asuka to fight the 13th Angel and attempt a rescue. Commander Ikari doesn't need to trigger the Dummy Plug. All tree Eva's are beaten by the Angel before Unit 05 self-destructs]]
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* NuclearOption: After N2 Weapons fail to destroy the orbiting Tenth Angel, an attack using more powerful Nuclear munitions is ordered.
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* NuclearOption: After N2 Weapons fail to destroy the [[spoiler:the orbiting Tenth Angel, Angel]], an attack using more powerful Nuclear nuclear munitions is ordered.
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''New Persective Evangelion'' is a NeonGenesisEvangelion fanfic by Dartz-IRL.
[[http://fanfiction.net/s/3322840/1/ You can read it here.]]
[[http://fanfiction.net/s/3322840/1/ You can read it here.]]
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* AbusiveParents: Asuka's father is the classic "tear your kid down if they're less than perfect" parent.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Third Impact is prevented. But with thousands left dead by the preceeding preceding battle, including some of the Pilots.]] ]]
* BoomHeadshot: Noriko name-drops the trope when, during the mission to secure Unit 04 from the Americans, she takes out Asuka during the first combat simulation with her Eva's pistol.
* BoomHeadshot: Noriko name-drops the trope when, during the mission to secure Unit 04 from the Americans, she takes out Asuka during the first combat simulation with her Eva's pistol.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Third Impact is prevented. But with thousands left dead by the preceeding battle, including some of the Pilots.]]
* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: Hikari. Rei]]
* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: Hikari. Rei]]
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Hikari Horaki, Pilot of Unit 05 ]]. This is [[ForWantOfaNail because]] [[spoiler: Noriko is able to convince Shinji and Asuka to fight the 13th Angel and attempt a rescue. Commander Ikari doesn't need to trigger the Dummy Plug. All tree Eva's are beaten by the Angel before Unit 05 self-destructs]]
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* GenderBender: {{Deconstructed}}. This ''is'' Eva, after all.
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* FollowTheLeader: Quietly based on the original ''I was a Teenage Dummy Plug'' by Foxboy.
* GenderBender: {{Deconstructed}}.This ''is'' Eva, after all.Takes a rather more realistic approach than others.
* NuclearOption: After N2 Weapons fail to destroy the orbiting Tenth Angel, an attack using more powerful Nuclear munitions is ordered.
* GenderBender: {{Deconstructed}}.
* NuclearOption: After N2 Weapons fail to destroy the orbiting Tenth Angel, an attack using more powerful Nuclear munitions is ordered.
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* ShoutOut: Shinji played a [[CthulhuTech RPG about biomechs called Engels]] in Kensuke's club.
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* ShoutOut: Shinji At times played a [[CthulhuTech RPG about biomechs called Engels]] in Kensuke's club.with jarring unsubtlety.
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with HaruhiSuzumiya.
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* {{Crossover}}: Kinda one with HaruhiSuzumiya.LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya.
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Just a little addition. I know it\'s a bit lame to edit your own fic article but this one has to be added.
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* DoorStopper: It's twelve chapters in and over 100,000 words long. ''There've only been two Angels.''
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* DoorStopper: It's twelve chapters in and over 100,000 150,000 words long. ''There've only been two Angels.''Angels featured'' so far (the 8th and 9th, but still).
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Zig-zagged regarding Noriko, and deconstructed in regards to whether it's good, bad or in-between.
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* DoorStopper: It's eleven chapters in and over 100,000 words long. ''There've only been two Angels.''
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* DoorStopper: It's eleven twelve chapters in and over 100,000 words long. ''There've only been two Angels.''
