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* ScreamsLikeAGirl: Jiraiya lets out one after Tsunade (actually Naruto using a Henge jutsu) catches him peeping on Hinata in the hot springs.
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* OrwellianEditor: In-Universe. The Sysadmins frequently have to wipe Naruto's memory after a major glitch.
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* AmbiguousGender / DudeLooksLikeALady: On some servers, Haku.
* AnchoredShip: Naruto decides, after a talk with Iruka, not to pursue either Sakura or Hinata romantically, considering all the ill-will towards him and the many way's he's been brutally killed, until he's strong enough to deal with the situations that he runs into on a regular basis. [[spoiler:It doesn't stick, though, after Hinata kisses him in a post-sleep delirium. Now the two seem to be going fairly steady.]]
* AnchoredShip: Naruto decides, after a talk with Iruka, not to pursue either Sakura or Hinata romantically, considering all the ill-will towards him and the many way's he's been brutally killed, until he's strong enough to deal with the situations that he runs into on a regular basis. [[spoiler:It doesn't stick, though, after Hinata kisses him in a post-sleep delirium. Now the two seem to be going fairly steady.]]
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* AmbiguousGender / DudeLooksLikeALady: AmbiguousGender[=/=]DudeLooksLikeALady: On some servers, Haku.
* AnchoredShip: Naruto decides, after a talk with Iruka, not to pursue either Sakura or Hinata romantically, considering all the ill-will towards him and the many way's he's been brutally killed, until he's strong enough to deal with the situations that he runs into on a regular basis.[[spoiler:It [[spoiler:[[{{Subverted}} It doesn't stick, though, after Hinata kisses him in a post-sleep delirium. Now the two seem to be going fairly steady.steady]].]]
* AnchoredShip: Naruto decides, after a talk with Iruka, not to pursue either Sakura or Hinata romantically, considering all the ill-will towards him and the many way's he's been brutally killed, until he's strong enough to deal with the situations that he runs into on a regular basis.
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*** [[spoiler: Of course considering that Susano is the main programmer it makes a lot of sense.]]
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*** [[spoiler: Of [[spoiler:Of course considering that Susano is the main programmer it makes a lot of sense.]]
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* JerkassGods: The Game Makers however, they show a tiny bit of kindness; when [[spoiler: Hinata's YamatoNadeshiko subroutine]] is accidentally activated, they leave it on in order to give her a better chance of surviving [[spoiler: the Invasion of Konoha]].
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* JerkassGods: The Game Makers however, they show a tiny bit of kindness; when [[spoiler: Hinata's [[spoiler:Hinata's YamatoNadeshiko subroutine]] is accidentally activated, they leave it on in order to give her a better chance of surviving [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the Invasion of Konoha]].
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*** To make things worse. The god that [[spoiler: apologizes? Susano. Yes that Susano. When you are so much of a Jerkass that Susano apologizes you know this trope is in effect.]]
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*** To make things worse. The god that [[spoiler: apologizes? [[spoiler:apologizes? Susano. Yes that Susano. When you are so much of a Jerkass that Susano apologizes you know this trope is in effect.]]
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* KarmaMeter: One is in place, and as of yet, Naruto is on the Good side. There seem to be no extra powers for being of a particular karma as of yet, but there are certain jutsu and weapons that he must have certain karma to use (the only one seen so far is [[spoiler: Zabuza's sword]]).
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* KarmaMeter: One is in place, and as of yet, Naruto is on the Good side. There seem to be no extra powers for being of a particular karma as of yet, but there are certain jutsu and weapons that he must have certain karma to use (the only one seen so far is [[spoiler: Zabuza's [[spoiler:Zabuza's sword]]).
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* MyGreatestFailure: Naruto has several of these, most recently [[spoiler: failing to get Kin to talk willingly, which leads to Ibiki implementing his own methods.....]]
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* MyGreatestFailure: Naruto has several of these, most recently [[spoiler: failing [[spoiler:failing to get Kin to talk willingly, which leads to Ibiki implementing his own methods.....]]
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* OutOfCharacter: In-Universe. [[spoiler: The glitches sometimes makes people act very strange and completely out of character.]]
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* OutOfCharacter: In-Universe. [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The glitches sometimes makes people act very strange and completely out of character.]]
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A {{Naruto}} fanfiction written by Majin Hentai X. Takes the concept of a PeggySue and adds an interesting twist: what if the character sent back (in this case, Naruto) suddenly finds themselves at a "Game Over" screen, and soon realizes their entire life [[SuddenGameInterface has become a video game]]?
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A {{Naruto}} ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction written by Majin Hentai X. Takes the concept of a PeggySue and adds an interesting twist: what if the character sent back (in this case, Naruto) suddenly finds themselves at a "Game Over" screen, and soon realizes their entire life [[SuddenGameInterface has become a video game]]?
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Jiraiya's rant at Naruto in Chapter 18 to get back at him after Naruto tried to get out of the "road trip" to find Tsunade. Crosses with ClusterFBomb.
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* MonsterArena: The Hellspawn Pit, fashioned in a similar matter to the Bloody Palace from the ''Franchise/DevilMayCry'' games; a bonus area that Naruto finds in the Forest of Death filled with one hundred floors, with a BossBattle [[OhCrap against a tailed beast every ten floors.]] Of course, Naruto is a bit confused when he looks around and only counts nine doors...[[spoiler:then Kyuubi tells him to look down...]] The place is so terrifying that '''Kyuubi himself''' ''begs'' Naruto never to go back to it.
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* MonsterArena: The Hellspawn Pit, fashioned in a similar matter to the Bloody Palace from the ''Franchise/DevilMayCry'' ''VideoGame/DevilMayCry'' games; a bonus area that Naruto finds in the Forest of Death filled with one hundred floors, with a BossBattle [[OhCrap against a tailed beast every ten floors.]] Of course, Naruto is a bit confused when he looks around and only counts nine doors...[[spoiler:then Kyuubi tells him to look down...]] The place is so terrifying that '''Kyuubi himself''' ''begs'' Naruto never to go back to it.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Jiraiya's rant at Naruto in Chapter 18 to get back at him after Naruto tried to get out of the "road trip" to find Tsunade. Crosses with ClusterFBomb.
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* GenreSavvy: Naruto’s team is careful to dispose of bodies inside which great powers are stored, so that no one will be able to either revive the bodies or steal those powers.
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** Also [[AManIsNotAVirgin "Died a virgin: -1000 points"]]. That's biggest penalty he gets for ''any'' single infraction!
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** Also [[AManIsNotAVirgin [[MustNotDieAVirgin "Died a virgin: -1000 points"]]. That's biggest penalty he gets for ''any'' single infraction!
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** For some example: Kakashi tortures Sasuke, Sasuke dresses up in a [[RanmaOneHalf tiger stripe shirt and attacks Naruto with an umbrella]], Sakura tries to kill Hinata and Anko and Guy have sex.
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** For some example: Kakashi tortures Sasuke, Sasuke dresses up in a [[RanmaOneHalf [[Manga/RanmaOneHalf tiger stripe shirt and attacks Naruto with an umbrella]], Sakura tries to kill Hinata and Anko and Guy have sex.
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* AmbiguousGender / DudeLooksLikeALady: On some servers, Haku.
* AttackItsWeakPoint: Plant!Zabuza’s protruding plant parts.
* BadFuture: When Naruto summons a female older version of himself, she tells that her world has almost reached its approaching bad end. It doesn’t help that Naruto’s interference causes fatal injuries to her already weakened body.
* BadFuture: When Naruto summons a female older version of himself, she tells that her world has almost reached its approaching bad end. It doesn’t help that Naruto’s interference causes fatal injuries to her already weakened body.
* CannibalismSuperpower: Bijū can apparently devour chakras of demons or other bijū.
* CompellingVoice: One of the sound village ninjas uses this on Naruto.
* DeusExMachina: Since Naruto’s inside a game, the author feels free to hand-wave some plot advancements onward through convenient glitches that power-up the needed [=NPCs=].
* DramaPreservingHandicap: Naruto acquires an [=OPed=] demonic sword, but it gets [[PutOnABus stored away in a bus luggage compartment]] shortly after.
* DramaPreservingHandicap: Naruto acquires an [=OPed=] demonic sword, but it gets [[PutOnABus stored away in a bus luggage compartment]] shortly after.
* GenderFlip: Haku’s gender first gets changed from an [[AmbiguousGender ambiguous male]] into a Schrodinger’s gender (he keeps switching between male and femlae with each reset of the universe), then gets locked in the female mode.
* GenreSavvy: Naruto’s team is careful to dispose of bodies inside which great powers are stored, so that no one will be able to either revive the bodies or steal those powers.
* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: Zabuza.
* {{Hermaphrodite}}: Naruto seems to have troubles even ''reading'' about one’s existence, which seems at least strange, given some of the techniques he’s fond of using.
* GenreSavvy: Naruto’s team is careful to dispose of bodies inside which great powers are stored, so that no one will be able to either revive the bodies or steal those powers.
* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: Zabuza.
* {{Hermaphrodite}}: Naruto seems to have troubles even ''reading'' about one’s existence, which seems at least strange, given some of the techniques he’s fond of using.
* IdiotBall: Naruto has some, occasionally, when the author isn’t sure how to push the plot in the needed direction (e.g not remembering many important details from his first life; letting Zabusa’s body be taken away; dying from slipping a foot, falling into river and ''drowning'', etc);
* IKnowYourTrueName: The Fourth Hokage is said to have known the name of lightning, which implies that natural phenomena have true names in this world.
* IKnowYourTrueName: The Fourth Hokage is said to have known the name of lightning, which implies that natural phenomena have true names in this world.
* MadeOfPlasticine: On different occasioncs, Naruto manages to both render himself unconscious and get himself killed merely by slipping a foot.
* MarionetteMaster: Naruto even gets a long-term quest to find who this person is.
* MindControlMusic: Haku has such a technique.
* MarionetteMaster: Naruto even gets a long-term quest to find who this person is.
* MindControlMusic: Haku has such a technique.
* PeoplePuppets: Ingrown tentacles variety.
* PoorCommunicationKills: Zabuza’s last words of warning are frustratingly vague.
* PoorCommunicationKills: Zabuza’s last words of warning are frustratingly vague.
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* StatusQuoIsGod: Naruto quickly finds out that doing anything out of the ordinary as a baby gets him killed, it takes him about five or so times.
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* RPGMechanicsVerse: Skill points, skill checks, perk unlocks, achievements, etc.
* StatusQuoIsGod:Naruto quickly finds out that doing anything out of As it often happens in PeggySue rewrites, the ordinary main plotline advances almost the same way as in canon, with Naruto’s actions seemingly having no real long-lasting effects at all, except passing through the plot arcs with a baby gets him killed, it takes him about five or so times. better style and saving more people on the way (e.g. Gaara and his siblings still run away during the Chūnin exam finals, even though Gaara wasn’t seriously injured this time around).
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* SweatDrop: The author is apparently unaware that they’re writing a story and not a script for an anime adaptation.
* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Naruto manages to “covertly” deliver a whole paragraph of text of warning to a character without anyone thinking their unnatural interaction strange.
* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Naruto manages to “covertly” deliver a whole paragraph of text of warning to a character without anyone thinking their unnatural interaction strange.
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* MonsterArena: The Hellspawn Pit, fashioned in a similar matter to the Bloody Palace from the DevilMayCry games; a bonus area that Naruto finds in the Forest of Death filled with one hundred floors, with a BossBattle [[OhCrap against a tailed beast every ten floors.]] Of course, Naruto is a bit confused when he looks around and only counts nine doors...[[spoiler:then Kyuubi tells him to look down...]] The place is so terrifying that '''Kyuubi himself''' ''begs'' Naruto never to go back to it.
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* MonsterArena: The Hellspawn Pit, fashioned in a similar matter to the Bloody Palace from the DevilMayCry ''Franchise/DevilMayCry'' games; a bonus area that Naruto finds in the Forest of Death filled with one hundred floors, with a BossBattle [[OhCrap against a tailed beast every ten floors.]] Of course, Naruto is a bit confused when he looks around and only counts nine doors...[[spoiler:then Kyuubi tells him to look down...]] The place is so terrifying that '''Kyuubi himself''' ''begs'' Naruto never to go back to it.
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A {{Naruto}} fanfiction written by Majin Hentai X. Takes the concept of a PeggySue and adds an interesting twist: what if the character sent back (in this case, Naruto) suddenly finds themselves at a "Game Over" screen, and soon realizes their entire life [[SuddenGameInterface has become a video game?
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* SuddenGameInterface: The TropeMaker.
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* SuddenGameInterface: The TropeMaker.option to PeggySue only appears after his first death, in the form of floating text boxes.
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** For some example: Kakashi tortures Sasuke, Sasuke dresses up in a tiger suit and attacks Naruto with an umbrella, Sakura tries to kill Hinata and Anko and Guy have sex.
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** For some example: Kakashi tortures Sasuke, Sasuke dresses up in a [[RanmaOneHalf tiger suit stripe shirt and attacks Naruto with an umbrella, umbrella]], Sakura tries to kill Hinata and Anko and Guy have sex.