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* BrattyHalfPint: Filly Celestia, at times.
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* BullyHunter: Gusty.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: For generations, the [[JustForPun Pie Clan]] has hidden their true heritage from Celestia, seeing as how the vengeful tyrant will gladly kill them to erase any mention of their [[spoiler: and Kuchen's]] existence. [[spoiler: Turns out Celestia ''could'' have done something about that curse if they had just '''asked''' her.]]
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: For generations, the [[JustForPun Pie Clan]] Clan has hidden their true heritage from Celestia, seeing as how the vengeful tyrant will gladly kill them to erase any mention of their [[spoiler: and Kuchen's]] existence. [[spoiler: Turns out Celestia ''could'' have done something about that curse if they had just '''asked''' her.]]
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* HulkSpeak: How the ancient pony tribes spoke in one flashback. Luna was not impressed.
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* RaiseHimRightThisTime: The plot of the sequel.
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Has Two Mommies is now a disambig. Dewicking
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* HasTwoMommies: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by Celestia in Chapter 3 of the sequel, after she asks Luna to assist her in raising [[spoiler: Blueblood.]] Luna quickly asks her to [[{{Squick}} call it something else.]]
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%% please rephrase. Entry only made sense when Has Two Mommies was a trope * HasTwoMommies: PlatonicCoParenting: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by Celestia in Chapter 3 of the sequel, after she asks Luna to assist her in raising [[spoiler: Blueblood.]] Luna quickly asks her to [[{{Squick}} call it something else.]]
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* AwesomeMcCoolName: Celestia names a pair of toys Lady Pinkinstuff and General Smashemup. [[spoiler: She still refers to the latter by this name at the end.]]
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* DeadFic: Due to [[AuthorExistenceFailure the author passing away on June 10th 2018]], the sequel ''Waning Moon'' will never be finished. Even prior to that the story had been on hiatus for nearly 5 years.
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* DeadFic: Due to [[AuthorExistenceFailure [[DiedDuringProduction the author passing away on June 10th 2018]], the sequel ''Waning Moon'' will never be finished. Even prior to that the story had been on hiatus for nearly 5 years.
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Luna, much to her chagrin. [[spoiler: It's starting to get better, though.]]
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%% * ZeroPercentApprovalRating: HatedByAll: Luna, much to her chagrin. [[spoiler: It's starting to get better, though.]]
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After getting [[{{Troll}} trolled]] by Celestia one too many times, Luna decides to have some revenge. She steals the Arcanus E Draconus, the most forbidden spellbook in Equestrian history, and uses one of its spells to [[FountainOfYouth age regress Celestia into a foal.]] To make things even more humiliating, she invites Twilight Sparkle over to unwittingly share in her teacher’s torment.
Then Luna finds out she can’t ''reverse'' the spell.
Now Celestia is stuck as a small, powerless filly, while Luna has found herself catapulted into ruling Equestria both day and night. And while all that is going on, Twilight works to find a way to bring Celestia back to normal, only to discover a deeper secret connecting the spell's creator with one of her friends. And then there's Blueblood's schemes to get revenge for that Grand Galloping Gala incident…
Then Luna finds out she can’t ''reverse'' the spell.
Now Celestia is stuck as a small, powerless filly, while Luna has found herself catapulted into ruling Equestria both day and night. And while all that is going on, Twilight works to find a way to bring Celestia back to normal, only to discover a deeper secret connecting the spell's creator with one of her friends. And then there's Blueblood's schemes to get revenge for that Grand Galloping Gala incident…
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After getting [[{{Troll}} trolled]] by Celestia one too many times, Luna decides to have some revenge. She steals the Arcanus E Draconus, the most forbidden spellbook in Equestrian history, and uses one of its spells to [[FountainOfYouth age regress Celestia into a foal.]] To make things even more humiliating, she invites Twilight Sparkle over to unwittingly share in her teacher’s teacher's torment.
Then Luna finds out shecan’t can't ''reverse'' the spell.
Now Celestia is stuck as a small, powerless filly, while Luna has found herself catapulted into ruling Equestria both day and night. And while all that is going on, Twilight works to find a way to bring Celestia back to normal, only to discover a deeper secret connecting the spell's creator with one of her friends. And then there's Blueblood's schemes to get revenge for that Grand Galloping Galaincident…
incident...
Then Luna finds out she
Now Celestia is stuck as a small, powerless filly, while Luna has found herself catapulted into ruling Equestria both day and night. And while all that is going on, Twilight works to find a way to bring Celestia back to normal, only to discover a deeper secret connecting the spell's creator with one of her friends. And then there's Blueblood's schemes to get revenge for that Grand Galloping Gala
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* APupilOfMineUntilHeTurnedToEvil: [[spoiler:Before Kuchen embarked on his quest for alicornhood, he was Celestia’s student.]]
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* APupilOfMineUntilHeTurnedToEvil: [[spoiler:Before Kuchen embarked on his quest for alicornhood, he was Celestia’s Celestia's student.]]
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* BigNo: Celestia gives one of these when she realizes that Twilight is about to discover her as a filly. [[spoiler: Later, she does this again when Pinkie uses the Anti-Smile Equation to make her realize that she’ll never be a normal pony, even as a filly.]]
* BigShutUp: Kuchen accused Celestia of being an unworthy fraud, and of ruining his and Luna’s lives. She responded with this trope and a NeckSnap.
* BigShutUp: Kuchen accused Celestia of being an unworthy fraud, and of ruining his and Luna’s lives. She responded with this trope and a NeckSnap.
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* BigNo: Celestia gives one of these when she realizes that Twilight is about to discover her as a filly. [[spoiler: Later, she does this again when Pinkie uses the Anti-Smile Equation to make her realize that she’ll she'll never be a normal pony, even as a filly.]]
* BigShutUp: Kuchen accused Celestia of being an unworthy fraud, and of ruining his andLuna’s Luna's lives. She responded with this trope and a NeckSnap.
* BigShutUp: Kuchen accused Celestia of being an unworthy fraud, and of ruining his and
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* CerebusSyndrome: The early chapters are mostly the silly adventures of Luna, Twilight and a filly Celestia. And then the Kuchen subplot comes along…
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* CerebusSyndrome: The early chapters are mostly the silly adventures of Luna, Twilight and a filly Celestia. And then the Kuchen subplot comes along…along...
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* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler: After Kuchen (or at least the part of Kuchen in Pinkie's mind) has been shown the magic of friendship in Twilight’s mind, Pinkie decides that five hundred years of floating around in his descendants’ minds is enough punishment for the slaughter of countless ponies.]]
* EntertaininglyWrong: Spike knows something’s up when he receives Twilight’s letter about Celestia’s “absence” and Luna taking her place, since as far as he knows Celestia has never taken a vacation before. So he [[WrongGenreSavvy assumes]] that Luna has become evil again and enslaved Twilight, which prompts him to bring the other five to Canterlot.
* EntertaininglyWrong: Spike knows something’s up when he receives Twilight’s letter about Celestia’s “absence” and Luna taking her place, since as far as he knows Celestia has never taken a vacation before. So he [[WrongGenreSavvy assumes]] that Luna has become evil again and enslaved Twilight, which prompts him to bring the other five to Canterlot.
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* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler: After Kuchen (or at least the part of Kuchen in Pinkie's mind) has been shown the magic of friendship in Twilight’s Twilight's mind, Pinkie decides that five hundred years of floating around in his descendants’ descendants' minds is enough punishment for the slaughter of countless ponies.]]
* EntertaininglyWrong: Spike knowssomething’s something's up when he receives Twilight’s Twilight's letter about Celestia’s “absence” Celestia's "absence" and Luna taking her place, since as far as he knows Celestia has never taken a vacation before. So he [[WrongGenreSavvy assumes]] that Luna has become evil again and enslaved Twilight, which prompts him to bring the other five to Canterlot.
* EntertaininglyWrong: Spike knows
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* FakeOutOpening: The first chapter treats everything like a very straight RevengeFic…only for the last line to reveal it was a joke.
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* FakeOutOpening: The first chapter treats everything like a very straight RevengeFic…only RevengeFic...only for the last line to reveal it was a joke.
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** [[spoiler:Later Luna has one when she realizes that Blueblood's attempt to redeem himself is genuine…and she sabotaged it out of RevengeBeforeReason.]]
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** [[spoiler:Later Luna has one when she realizes that Blueblood's attempt to redeem himself is genuine…and genuine...and she sabotaged it out of RevengeBeforeReason.]]
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* HumiliationConga: Luna’s first daytime court does not go well.
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* HumiliationConga: Luna’s Luna's first daytime court does not go well.
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** Even earlier, [[spoiler: Celestia's reaction to the nobles apologizing for their behavior…after she had almost poisoned them all with Poison Joke ''because'' of said behavior. [[HeroicBSOD She really didn't take it well at all.]] ]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler: Kuchen murders his former friend Stormwind in cold blood. He later blames this on Celestia, claiming that she “made [him]” do it. While she did bear some responsibility in making him focus strictly on his work, that doesn’t change the fact that he was almost eager to kill ponies in the first place.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler: Kuchen murders his former friend Stormwind in cold blood. He later blames this on Celestia, claiming that she “made [him]” do it. While she did bear some responsibility in making him focus strictly on his work, that doesn’t change the fact that he was almost eager to kill ponies in the first place.]]
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** Even earlier, [[spoiler: Celestia's reaction to the nobles apologizing for their behavior…after behavior...after she had almost poisoned them all with Poison Joke ''because'' of said behavior. [[HeroicBSOD She really didn't take it well at all.]] ]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler: Kuchen murders his former friend Stormwind in cold blood. He later blames this on Celestia, claiming that she“made [him]” "made [him]" do it. While she did bear some responsibility in making him focus strictly on his work, that doesn’t doesn't change the fact that he was almost eager to kill ponies in the first place.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler: Kuchen murders his former friend Stormwind in cold blood. He later blames this on Celestia, claiming that she
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-->'''Celestia:''' ''Wait… does a vest and glasses count as a disguise?''
* TemptingFate: At the start of the dinner party, Luna confidently thinks [[ItsTheBestWhateverEver it’s going to be the best night ever.]] [[RuleOfThree Three times.]] The aristocracy is quick to prove her wrong.
* TemptingFate: At the start of the dinner party, Luna confidently thinks [[ItsTheBestWhateverEver it’s going to be the best night ever.]] [[RuleOfThree Three times.]] The aristocracy is quick to prove her wrong.
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-->'''Celestia:''' ''Wait… ''Wait... does a vest and glasses count as a disguise?''
* TemptingFate: At the start of the dinner party, Luna confidently thinks [[ItsTheBestWhateverEverit’s it's going to be the best night ever.]] [[RuleOfThree Three times.]] The aristocracy is quick to prove her wrong.
* TemptingFate: At the start of the dinner party, Luna confidently thinks [[ItsTheBestWhateverEver
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Played with. Celestia’s adult memories and personality are all still with her, but also compete with her younger mindset.
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: Played with. Celestia’s Celestia's adult memories and personality are all still with her, but also compete with her younger mindset.
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'''Octavia''': It's best that you don't know. Believe me, I wish I still did not.
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'''Octavia''': It's best that you don't know. Believe me, I wish I still did not.not.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Filly Celestia. [[spoiler:And in the last chapter, filly Twilight.]]