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''Kyoshi Revolts'' is an ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' DarkFic written by Waterkai and Vaznock on [[http://avatar.wikia.com/wiki/Avatar_Wiki Avatar Wiki]]. The story is set in an AlternateReality in which the Fire Nation won the war and Princess Azula is Supreme Fire Lord of the entire world. People of separate nations are now enslaved, while the only rebels live in a secluded {{Utopia}} known tentatively as [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Rebel City]]. Team Avatar, including [[MessianicArchetype The Avatar himself]], have all died tragic deaths. In general, the world [[DysTopia is a craptastic, dystopian nightmare]].
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''Kyoshi Revolts'' is an ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' DarkFic written by Waterkai and Vaznock on [[http://avatar.wikia.com/wiki/Avatar_Wiki Avatar Wiki]]. The story is set in an AlternateReality AlternateUniverse in which the Fire Nation won the war and Princess Azula is Supreme Fire Lord of the entire world. People of separate nations are now enslaved, while the only rebels live in a secluded {{Utopia}} known tentatively as [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Rebel City]]. Team Avatar, including [[MessianicArchetype The Avatar himself]], have all died tragic deaths. In general, the world [[DysTopia is a craptastic, dystopian nightmare]].
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* BadassNormal: Quanlee, Tam Mee, Mina, Kaila.
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--> -- Mina, "The World Like It Shouldn't Be"
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''Kyoshi Revolts'' is an ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' DarkFic written by Waterkai and Vaznock on [[http://avatar.wikia.com/wiki/Avatar_Wiki Avatar Wiki]]. The story is set in an AlternateReality in which the Fire Nation won the war and Princess Azula is Supreme Fire Lord of the entire world. People of separate nations are now enslaved, while the only rebels live in a secluded {{Utopia}} known tentatively as [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Rebel City]]. Team Avatar, including [[TheMessiah The Avatar himself]], have all died tragic deaths. In general, the world [[DysTopia is a craptastic, dystopian nightmare]].
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''Kyoshi Revolts'' is an ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' DarkFic written by Waterkai and Vaznock on [[http://avatar.wikia.com/wiki/Avatar_Wiki Avatar Wiki]]. The story is set in an AlternateReality in which the Fire Nation won the war and Princess Azula is Supreme Fire Lord of the entire world. People of separate nations are now enslaved, while the only rebels live in a secluded {{Utopia}} known tentatively as [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Rebel City]]. Team Avatar, including [[TheMessiah [[MessianicArchetype The Avatar himself]], have all died tragic deaths. In general, the world [[DysTopia is a craptastic, dystopian nightmare]].
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The fic focuses on Mina, a former slave from Kyoshi Island, as she rebels against the Fire Nation and attempts to defeat Azula's reign once and for all. Along the way, she is joined by fellow rebel Kaila, the former Heir to the Fire Nation thrown Chen ([[spoiler:who is later revealed to be the Avatar]]), and eventually [[SixthRanger three rebels]] from Rebel City: Giu (a womanizer), Ray (a skilled, [[spoiler: deaf]] Waterbender), and Kambi (leader of the city). A CharacterSheet expected to be up soon.
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The fic focuses on Mina, a former slave from Kyoshi Island, as she rebels against the Fire Nation and attempts to defeat Azula's reign once and for all. Along the way, she is joined by fellow rebel Kaila, the former Heir to the Fire Nation thrown throne Chen ([[spoiler:who is later revealed to be the Avatar]]), and eventually [[SixthRanger three rebels]] from Rebel City: Giu (a womanizer), Ray (a skilled, [[spoiler: deaf]] Waterbender), and Kambi (leader of the city). A CharacterSheet expected to be up soon.
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''Kyoshi Revolts'' is an ''AvatarTheLastAirbender'' DarkFic written by Waterkai and Vaznock on [[http://avatar.wikia.com/wiki/Avatar_Wiki Avatar Wiki]]. The story is set in an AlternateReality in which the Fire Nation won the war and Princess Azula is Supreme Fire Lord of the entire world. People of separate nations are now enslaved, while the only rebels live in a secluded {{Utopia}} known tentatively as [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Rebel City]]. Team Avatar, including [[TheMessiah The Avatar himself]], have all died tragic deaths. In general, the world [[DysTopia is a craptastic, dystopian nightmare]].
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''Kyoshi Revolts'' is an ''AvatarTheLastAirbender'' ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' DarkFic written by Waterkai and Vaznock on [[http://avatar.wikia.com/wiki/Avatar_Wiki Avatar Wiki]]. The story is set in an AlternateReality in which the Fire Nation won the war and Princess Azula is Supreme Fire Lord of the entire world. People of separate nations are now enslaved, while the only rebels live in a secluded {{Utopia}} known tentatively as [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Rebel City]]. Team Avatar, including [[TheMessiah The Avatar himself]], have all died tragic deaths. In general, the world [[DysTopia is a craptastic, dystopian nightmare]].
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* CompleteMonster: Arguably, Azula. She fits her father’s shoes very well.
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* NightmareFuel: AZULA is in charge of the world. Avatar fans will back me up on this one.
** [[spoiler:Also, Aang going into a berserk form of the Avatar State and killing Toph, then himself]]
** [[spoiler:Also, Aang going into a berserk form of the Avatar State and killing Toph, then himself]]
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*AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Chen and Kaila when Kaila doesn't trust Chen in the first half of Book 1.
*BadassNormal: Quanlee, Tam Mee, Mina, Kaila.
*BelligerentSexualTension: Chen and Kaila.
*CompleteMonster: Arguably, Azula. She fits her father’s shoes very well.
*CrapsackWorld: The world is under control of an oppressive empire, two thirds of the world’s land and a great many of its population have been wiped out in a fiery holocaust; the first chapter’s even called “The World Like It Shouldn’t Be”
*DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Revealed to be what happened to Aang]]
*EvilOverlord: Azula, taking the place of Ozai after he died.
*GenerationXerox
*GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Azula
*NightmareFuel: AZULA is in charge of the world. Avatar fans will back me up on this one.
**[[spoiler:Also, Aang going into a berserk form of the Avatar State and killing Toph, then himself]]
*ShootTheShaggyDog: The story’s premise makes it clear that the original Team Avatar failed in their effort to stop Ozai. In flashbacks, it is revealed just how tragic it was.
*BadassNormal: Quanlee, Tam Mee, Mina, Kaila.
*BelligerentSexualTension: Chen and Kaila.
*CompleteMonster: Arguably, Azula. She fits her father’s shoes very well.
*CrapsackWorld: The world is under control of an oppressive empire, two thirds of the world’s land and a great many of its population have been wiped out in a fiery holocaust; the first chapter’s even called “The World Like It Shouldn’t Be”
*DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Revealed to be what happened to Aang]]
*EvilOverlord: Azula, taking the place of Ozai after he died.
*GenerationXerox
*GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Azula
*NightmareFuel: AZULA is in charge of the world. Avatar fans will back me up on this one.
**[[spoiler:Also, Aang going into a berserk form of the Avatar State and killing Toph, then himself]]
*ShootTheShaggyDog: The story’s premise makes it clear that the original Team Avatar failed in their effort to stop Ozai. In flashbacks, it is revealed just how tragic it was.
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Azula
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The fic focuses on Mina, a former slave from Kyoshi Island, as she rebels against the Fire Nation and attempts to defeat Azula's reign once and for all. Along the way, she is joined by fellow rebel Kaila, the former Heir to the Fire Nation thrown Chen ([[spoiler: who ([[spoiler:who is later revealed to be the Avatar]]), and eventually [[SixthRanger three rebels]] from Rebel City: Giu (a womanizer), Ray (a skilled, [[spoiler: [[spoiler: deaf]] Waterbender), and Kambi (leader of the city). A CharacterSheet expected to be up soon.
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*CrapsackWorld: The world is under control of an oppressive empire, Two thirds of the world’s land and a great many of its population have been wiped out in a fiery holocaust; the first chapter’s even called “The World Like It Shouldn’t Be”
*DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: Revealed to be what happened to Aang]]
*EvilOverlord: Azula, taking the place of Ozai after he died at a mysteriously young age
*DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: Revealed to be what happened to Aang]]
*EvilOverlord: Azula, taking the place of Ozai after he died at a mysteriously young age
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*CrapsackWorld: The world is under control of an oppressive empire, Two two thirds of the world’s land and a great many of its population have been wiped out in a fiery holocaust; the first chapter’s even called “The World Like It Shouldn’t Be”
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