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* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: [[spoiler: Lex delivers one each to Bruce Wayne and to Superman, but delivers it in a way where he is trying to encourage them to do better, albeit mockingly in Superman's case. It leaves the heroes rather bemused]]



* TheSchizophreniaConspiracy: [[spoiler: In this case it's played with a bit in that it's a conspiracy to cripple humanity by inducing Schizophrenia and other mental disease in humanity.]]



* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: [[spoiler: Lex delivers one each to Bruce Wayne and to Superman, but delivers it in a way where he is trying to encourage them to do better, albeit mockingly in Superman's case. It leaves the heroes rather bemused]]
* TheSchizophreniaConspiracy: [[spoiler: In this case it's played with a bit in that it's a conspiracy to cripple humanity by inducing Schizophrenia and other mental disease in humanity.]]

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* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: Most of the Universe to the Guardians but the Green Lateran corp especially.]]
* {{Villain Teleportation}}: Played with and played straight. Lex does have some access to teleportation and it's better than what the nominal good guys have, but it has its own limitations.



* {{Villain Teleportation}}: Played with and played straight. Lex does have some access to teleportation and it's better than what the nominal good guys have, but it has its own limitations.



* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: Most of the Universe to the Guardians but the Green Lateran corp especially.]]
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* SealedEvilInATeddyBear: Lex puts a defeated [[GreenLantern Manhunter's]] AI in a TeddyRuxpin {{Expy}}.

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* SealedEvilInATeddyBear: Lex puts a defeated [[GreenLantern Manhunter's]] AI in a TeddyRuxpin Toys/TeddyRuxpin {{Expy}}.
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* {{Earth is the Center of the Universe}}: Played with and justified. [[spoiler: We're effectivly a weapons depot of all the survivors of the species they wiped out for the Guardians. All those alien invasions that happen? They are just exercises to keep their weapons ready.]]

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* {{Earth is the Center of the Universe}}: Played with and justified. [[spoiler: We're effectivly effectively a Guardian weapons depot depot. That's why so many [[LastOfHisKind last of all the survivors of the their kind]] aliens keep ending up on Earth and why so many alien species they wiped out for the Guardians. All those alien invasions that happen? They are just exercises to there keep their weapons ready.trying to invade it.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Aliens are Bastards}}: Lex has been of this opinion from day one, and the fic pretty much validates it, once the big bads are revealed.]]

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* [[spoiler:{{Aliens {{Aliens are Bastards}}: [[spoiler: Lex has been of this opinion from day one, and the fic pretty much validates it, once the big bads are revealed.]]



* [[spoiler:AndTheAdventureContinues: Lex, Mercy, and Eve on the newly-upgraded ''Moonraker'' crossing parallel universes in the Journey back to their one.]]

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* [[spoiler:AndTheAdventureContinues: AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler: Lex, Mercy, and Eve on the newly-upgraded ''Moonraker'' crossing parallel universes in the Journey back to their one.]]



* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice]]

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* [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice]]HeroicSacrifice



* [[spoiler: {{Lotus Eater Machine}}]]: Lex goes through [[spoiler:sixteen subjective years of increasingly 'perfect' realities]] as his [[spoiler:mind pushes itself to its limits trying to make him escape]].
* [[spoiler: {{Man Behind the man}}: What gets revealed in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5536346/13/Inviolate chapter 13]].]]

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* [[spoiler: {{Lotus Eater Machine}}]]: Machine}}: Lex goes through [[spoiler:sixteen subjective years of increasingly 'perfect' realities]] as his [[spoiler:mind pushes itself to its limits trying to make him escape]].
* [[spoiler: {{Man Behind the man}}: [[spoiler: What gets revealed in [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5536346/13/Inviolate chapter 13]].]]



* [[spoiler: TheSchizophreniaConspiracy]]: [[spoiler: In this case it's played with a bit in that it's a conspiracy to cripple humanity by inducing Schizophrenia and other mental disease in humanity.]]

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* [[spoiler: TheSchizophreniaConspiracy]]: TheSchizophreniaConspiracy: [[spoiler: In this case it's played with a bit in that it's a conspiracy to cripple humanity by inducing Schizophrenia and other mental disease in humanity.]]
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* AIIsACrapshoot: [[spoiler: Horribly horribly adverted. The Manhunters never rebelled. This whole time they were under the orders of the Guardians.]]

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* AIIsACrapshoot: [[spoiler: Horribly Horribly, horribly adverted.averted. The Manhunters never rebelled. This whole time they were under the orders of the Guardians.]]
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A podfic of the story is also available [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2658290?show_comments=true here]].

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* [[spoiler:AndTheAdventureContinues: Lex, Mercy, and Eve on the newly-upgraded ''Moonraker'' crossing parallel universes in the Journey back to their one.]]



* {{Badass Normal}}: Lex all the way.

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* {{Badass Normal}}: Lex all the way. Mercy as well.


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* CuteAsABouncingBetty: The "Toastmaster" and "Party Crasher" are {{BFG}}s, a giant laser cannon and a Antimatter cannon respectively.


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* ScienceHero: Lex is most definitely one, with a side of GuileHero to back it up. Even when he's StormingTheCastle, he mostly relies on gadgets, and being prepared.
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** The device that actually kicked off the plot (the Slide) is a low-energy teleporter that also functions as a microscope, telescope, MRI, spy camera, and video telephone. Perhaps it could do more, but that's everything Lex uses it for.
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** [[spoiler:''"It's not as important to me as you'd think. I've got bigger fish to fry. I can and will wreck this country if you push me. You know I could. You worked for me and you know what I'm capable of. I'll do it and make everyone believe it was your fault. With the push of a few buttons, I can break you. Do not test me, Waller." A smile bloomed on his face as worry began to break out on her expression.'']]
** [[spoiler:''"Your men are dead. I killed them on my way here. Your cameras are under my control. This entire facility is set to self-destruct at my word. There will be no body for them to find, you have my word on that. There will be no investigation. No one will know what happened to you. My name will be clean, I will be praised to the high heavens. Your conspiracy will die in flames as I disassemble it." Lex cocked the gun dramatically. He spoke slowly. Deliberately. Menacingly. "There is no carrot. There is only stick. Answer me or die in agony."'']]

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** [[spoiler:''"It's not as important to me as you'd think. I've got bigger fish to fry. I can and will wreck this country if you push me. You know I could. You worked for me and you know what I'm capable of. I'll do it and make everyone believe it was your fault. With the push of a few buttons, I can break you. Do not test me, Waller." A smile bloomed on his face as worry began to break out on her expression.'']]
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** [[spoiler:''"Your men are dead. I killed them on my way here. Your cameras are under my control. This entire facility is set to self-destruct at my word. There will be no body for them to find, you have my word on that. There will be no investigation. No one will know what happened to you. My name will be clean, I will be praised to the high heavens. Your conspiracy will die in flames as I disassemble it." Lex cocked the gun dramatically. He spoke slowly. Deliberately. Menacingly. "There There is no carrot. There is only stick. Answer me or die in agony."'']]



--> Lex: "I got a little bored while Teddy was telling me everything he knew and built a holographic display projector."

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--> Lex: "I '''Luthor:''' I got a little bored while Teddy was telling me everything he knew and built a holographic display projector."



--> Lex: ""No one move. I have a bear." Lex declared forcefully,"

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--> Lex: ""No '''Luthor:''' No one move. I have a bear." Lex declared forcefully,"

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* {{Continuity Nod}}: Bunches of them.



* {{Continuity Nod}}: Bunches of them.



* HollywoodGenetics: Throughly mocked with [[spoiler: Lex telling guy that Vuldarian DNA would not try to destroy Human DNA.]]

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* HollywoodGenetics: Throughly mocked with [[spoiler: Lex telling guy Guy that Vuldarian DNA would not try to destroy Human DNA.]]
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The parasite universe, if fully charged, would have let him recreate our own or dominate other one.


* TheCape: [[spoiler: Lex slowly becomes this over the course of the story and clinches it in the Final. He could rule over a parasite universe as a God at the cost of his own universe. Instead he scarfices his own life to save his universe.]]

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* TheCape: [[spoiler: Lex slowly becomes this over the course of the story and clinches it in the Final. He could rule over a parasite new universe as a God at the cost of his own universe. Instead he scarfices sacrifices his own life to save his universe.]]

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* {{Earth is the Center of the Universe}}: Played with and justified. [[spoiler: We're effective a weapons depot of all the survivors of the species they wiped out for the Guardians. All those alien invasions that happen? They are just exercises to keep their weapons ready.]]

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* {{Earth is the Center of the Universe}}: Played with and justified. [[spoiler: We're effective effectivly a weapons depot of all the survivors of the species they wiped out for the Guardians. All those alien invasions that happen? They are just exercises to keep their weapons ready.]]
**[[spoiler: Eventually becomes literal.
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* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: [[spoiler: Lex delivers one each to Bruce Wayne and to Superman, but delivers it in a way where he is trying to encourage them to do better, albeit mockingly in Superman's case. It leaves the heroes rather bemused

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* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: [[spoiler: Lex delivers one each to Bruce Wayne and to Superman, but delivers it in a way where he is trying to encourage them to do better, albeit mockingly in Superman's case. It leaves the heroes rather bemusedbemused]]
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* CynicismCatalyst: Lex's memory of Lena keeps coming back to him again and again, and is ultimately not only [[spoiler: the clue that makes him realize his world is fake[[hottip:*:(a la ComicBook/ForTheManWhoHasEverything)]]]], but is also [[spoiler: his ultimate motivation for his WhatYouAreInTheDark.]]

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* CynicismCatalyst: Lex's memory of Lena keeps coming back to him again and again, and is ultimately not only [[spoiler: the clue that makes him realize his world is fake[[hottip:*:(a fake[[note]](a la ComicBook/ForTheManWhoHasEverything)]]]], ComicBook/ForTheManWhoHasEverything)[[/note]]]], but is also [[spoiler: his ultimate motivation for his WhatYouAreInTheDark.]]
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* {{Mundane Utility}}: A good example shows up in the first chapter when Lex is talking about his sonic weapon: "I've never actually hit anyone with it at level ten, but I tried it on a steak once. Vibrated the thing so hard the meat not only cooked to medium rare, but I ended up with quite possibly the most tender cut of beef you could imagine as the connective tissues and bones were practically liquified." A gruesomely amused grin crossed the man's face. "I could cut it with a plastic fork. [[NightmareFuel Can you imagine what it would do to a human body?"]]

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* {{Mundane Utility}}: A good example shows up in the first chapter when Lex is talking about his sonic weapon: "I've never actually hit anyone with it at level ten, but I tried it on a steak once. Vibrated the thing so hard the meat not only cooked to medium rare, but I ended up with quite possibly the most tender cut of beef you could imagine as the connective tissues and bones were practically liquified." A gruesomely amused grin crossed the man's face. "I could cut it with a plastic fork. [[NightmareFuel Can you imagine what it would do to a human body?"]]body?"
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* [[DeadLittleSister Dead Little Daughter]]: Lex's memory of Lena keeps coming back to him again and again, and is ultimately not only [[spoiler: the clue that makes him realize his world is fake[[hottip:*:(a la ComicBook/ForTheManWhoHasEverything)]]]], but is also [[spoiler: his ultimate motivation for his WhatYouAreInTheDark.]]

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* [[DeadLittleSister Dead Little Daughter]]: CynicismCatalyst: Lex's memory of Lena keeps coming back to him again and again, and is ultimately not only [[spoiler: the clue that makes him realize his world is fake[[hottip:*:(a la ComicBook/ForTheManWhoHasEverything)]]]], but is also [[spoiler: his ultimate motivation for his WhatYouAreInTheDark.]]
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* HollywoodGenetics: Throughly mocked with [[spoiler: Lex telling guy that Vuldarian DNA would not try to destroy Human DNA.]]
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* LargeHam: Lex all the way.
--> Lex: ""No one move. I have a bear." Lex declared forcefully,"
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* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: Most of the Universe to the Guardians but the Green Lateran corp especially.]]
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* {{Earth is the Center of the Universe}}: Played with and justified.

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* {{Earth is the Center of the Universe}}: Played with and justified. [[spoiler: We're effective a weapons depot of all the survivors of the species they wiped out for the Guardians. All those alien invasions that happen? They are just exercises to keep their weapons ready.]]
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* AIIsACrapshoot: [[spoiler: Horribly horribly adverted. The Manhunters never rebelled. This whole time they were under the orders of the Guardians.]]
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** [[spoiler: Thought it's only the Guardians of Oa that are the Bastards. Lex has gotten over his pathological hatred of Superman.]]
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* TheCape: [[spoiler: Lex slowly becomes this over the course of the story and clinches it in the Final. He could rule over a parasite universe as a God at the cost of his own universe. Instead he scarfices his own life to save his universe.]]


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* GadgeteerGenius: Lex shows throughout the entire story. This line clinches it.
--> Lex: "I got a little bored while Teddy was telling me everything he knew and built a holographic display projector."
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* WhamLine: [[spoiler: When Lex is interrogating the Manhunter AI that is running the Conspiracy.]]
--> [[spoiler: "The Manhunters serve the Guardians."]]

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* {{Deadpan Snarker}}: Mercy does this on occasion, but mostly when she's "off-duty".

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* {{Deadpan Snarker}}: Mercy does this on occasion, but mostly when she's "off-duty".
** Lex do after he's gone through some Character Development.
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** Which belongs to his secretary/manager/love interest. She doesn't take it too well that he ripped apart her childhood toy.
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** Lex also weaponizes one by pumping Doctor Psycho full of Fear Toxin and putting him inside [[spoiler: the Cadmus building.]]

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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Cassandra as Batgirl saves Lex from the exploding Cadmus building.]]



* DespairEventHorizon: Lex goes through one of these once he [[spoiler: finds out that his entire life he has been manipulated. This causes him to to get over his hatred of Superman and take all that hate and point it at the Conspiracy.]]



* {{No Hero To His Valet}}: Mercy has pretty much seen Lex at his best and worst.

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* {{No Hero To His Valet}}: Mercy has pretty much seen Lex at his best and worst. Despite it all it is heavily hinted that she wants him.
* OneTrueThreesome: Very heavily hinted that both Eve and Mercy would be fine with this with Lex.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Lex once he gets over his DespairEventHorizon starts acting really OOC. This cause both Superman and Batman to start wondering what the hell is going on.



* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: [[spoiler: Lex delivers one each to Bruce Wayne and to Superman, but delivers it in a way where he is trying to encourage them to do better, albeit mockingly in Superman's case. It leaves the heroes rather baffled.]]

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* {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}: [[spoiler: Lex delivers one each to Bruce Wayne and to Superman, but delivers it in a way where he is trying to encourage them to do better, albeit mockingly in Superman's case. It leaves the heroes rather baffled.]] bemused
* [[spoiler: TheSchizophreniaConspiracy]]: [[spoiler: In this case it's played with a bit in that it's a conspiracy to cripple humanity by inducing Schizophrenia and other mental disease in humanity.]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation



* {{Genius Bonus}}: The author uses a lot of references back to canon comics continuity, even though the story has struck out into its own territory. In many cases there are references to events and characters from comics from the 40's onwards.



* {{Magnificent Bastard}}: Lex Luthor. Oh, so very much.

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