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* AndroidsArePeopleToo: In the Trade Order, AI's are considered legal citizens, and are usually treated with as much respect as those of flesh and blood.
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* AndroidsArePeopleToo: In the Trade Order, AI's AIs are considered legal citizens, and are usually treated with as much respect as those of flesh and blood.
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* ColonelBadass: Colonel Rekav.
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* FusionFic.
* GattacaBabies: Twilight Sparkle is a particularly [[TearJerker tragic]] version of this trope.
* GattacaBabies: Twilight Sparkle is a particularly [[TearJerker tragic]] version of this trope.
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* GeneticEngineering: Deconstructed with Twilight Sparkle. It is implied that she is genuinely dangerous with her mental block restricting most of her potential disabled, and a great deal of her personality is based around this fact of her life.
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* LegoGenetics: Deconstructed with Twilight Sparkle. It is implied that she is genuinely dangerous with her mental block restricting most of her potential disabled, and a great deal of her personality is based around this fact of her life.
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* CassandraTruth: [[MySignificanceSenseIsTingling Pinkie Pie]] keeps telling high command that their orbital fighter bays could ''really'' do with some flak-cannons. Predictably they take no notice.
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* CassandraTruth: [[MySignificanceSenseIsTingling Pinkie Pie]] keeps telling high command that their orbital fighter bays could ''really'' do with some flak-cannons. Predictably they take no notice.notice (Funny enough, this is an upgrade in one of the expansion packs).
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A crossover between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''SinsOfASolarEmpire'', written by Dalek Ix.
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A crossover between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''SinsOfASolarEmpire'', ''VideoGame/SinsOfASolarEmpire'', written by Dalek Ix.
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* MythologyGag: Possibly accidental, but there is an achievement in "SinsOfASolarEmpire" called Space Ponies, which you get via a random event, namely discovering one of your planets has, well, space ponies.
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* MythologyGag: Possibly accidental, but there is an achievement in "SinsOfASolarEmpire" ''VideoGame/SinsOfASolarEmpire'' called Space Ponies, which you get via a random event, namely discovering one of your planets has, well, space ponies.
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** Averted when [[GodEmperor Celestia]] tells the TEC that her currently insane sister will be returning to wreak vengeance soon. [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy They send a battlefleet.]] And Admiral Kol.
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: The Trade Order. Their response to Discord was to [[AndIMustScream stick him into an autonomous ship and kick on the FTL, sending into intergalactic space, the emptiest place in existance.]]
** Their response to [[PhysicalGod Nightmare Moon]] was to send a battlefleet.
** The Horizon Corporation, who were very, ''very'' thorough in creating a magical supersoldier that wouldn't disobey. Poor Twilight.
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: The Trade Order. Their response to Discord was to [[AndIMustScream stick him into an autonomous ship and kick on the FTL, sending into intergalactic space, the emptiest place in existance.]]
** Their response to [[PhysicalGod Nightmare Moon]] was to send a battlefleet.
** The Horizon Corporation, who were very, ''very'' thorough in creating a magical supersoldier that wouldn't disobey. Poor Twilight.
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** Averted when [[GodEmperor Celestia]] tells the TEC that her currently insane sister will be returning to wreak vengeance soon. [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy They send a battlefleet.]] battlefleet. And Admiral Kol.
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: The Trade Order. Their response to Discord was to [[AndIMustScream stick him into an autonomous ship and kick on the FTL, sending into intergalactic space, the emptiest place in existance.]]
** Their response to [[PhysicalGod Nightmare Moon]] was to send a battlefleet.
** The Horizon Corporation, who were very, ''very'' thorough in creating a magical supersoldier that wouldn't disobey. Poor Twilight.Kol.
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: The Trade Order. Their response to Discord was to [[AndIMustScream stick him into an autonomous ship and kick on the FTL, sending into intergalactic space, the emptiest place in existance.]]
** Their response to [[PhysicalGod Nightmare Moon]] was to send a battlefleet.
** The Horizon Corporation, who were very, ''very'' thorough in creating a magical supersoldier that wouldn't disobey. Poor Twilight.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Trade Order's Investigation Directorate. Their response to the actions of the [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Horizon Corporation]] was to hire a [[MoreDakka Marza-class dreadnought]] to blow up the asteroid their facility had been built on, and then ban the rest of the Traders from doing business with them. Not even to buy ''food''.
** [[AssholeVictim ...Disproportionate?]]
** To clarify? "Rest of the Traders" is the entire known galaxy.
** [[AssholeVictim ...Disproportionate?]]
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Trade Order's Investigation Directorate. Their response to the actions of the [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Horizon Corporation]] was to hire a [[MoreDakka Marza-class dreadnought]] to blow up the asteroid their facility had been built on, and then ban the rest of the Traders from doing business with them. Not even to buy ''food''.
** [[AssholeVictim ...Disproportionate?]]
**''food''. To clarify? "Rest of the Traders" is the entire known galaxy. galaxy.
** [[AssholeVictim ...Disproportionate?]]
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* ShoutOut: Several, mostly to ''[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Battlestar Galactica]]'', such as Rainbow Dash's callsign (Starbuck), the Everfree Forest Cloudbase, which superficially resembles a squared off Cylon Basestar, and the use of the word "[[UnusualEuphemism frak]]".
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* ShoutOut: Several, mostly to ''[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Battlestar Galactica]]'', ''Series/{{Battlestar Galactica|2003}}'', such as Rainbow Dash's callsign (Starbuck), the Everfree Forest Cloudbase, which superficially resembles a squared off Cylon Basestar, and the use of the word "[[UnusualEuphemism frak]]".
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* CruelMercy: By WordOfGod what happened to the people running the lab that Twilight came from.
** It's less CruelMercy and more an indirectly-caused FateWorseThanDeath. Not they they didn't deserve it, in any case.
** It's less CruelMercy and more an indirectly-caused FateWorseThanDeath. Not they they didn't deserve it, in any case.
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* MythologyGag: Possibly accidental, but there is an achievement in "SinsOfASolarEmpire" called Space Ponies, which you get via a random event, namely discovering one of your planets has, well, space ponies.
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* {{Expy}}: Fluttershy runs into an old friend who acts very much like [[VideoGame/TeamFortress2 Heavy Weapons Guy]].
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** It's less CruelMercy and more an indirectly-caused FateWorseThanDeath. [[CompleteMonster Not they they didn't deserve it, in any case.]]
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** It's less CruelMercy and more an indirectly-caused FateWorseThanDeath. [[CompleteMonster Not they they didn't deserve it, in any case.]]
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Trade Order's Investigation Directorate. Their response to the actions of the [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Horizon]] [[CompleteMonster Corporation]] was to hire a [[MoreDakka Marza-class dreadnought]] to blow up the asteroid their facility had been built on, and then ban the rest of the Traders from doing business with them. Not even to buy ''food''.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Trade Order's Investigation Directorate. Their response to the actions of the [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Horizon]] [[CompleteMonster Horizon Corporation]] was to hire a [[MoreDakka Marza-class dreadnought]] to blow up the asteroid their facility had been built on, and then ban the rest of the Traders from doing business with them. Not even to buy ''food''.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: How the Traders dealt with the [[CompleteMonster Horizon Corporation]]. Along with their lab (and the asteroid it was on) being blown to smithereens, the entire organization was essentially ''erased'': all of Horizon's money and resources were seized, and ''everyone'' who worked for them was either killed or arrested. Moreover, the Traders were ''completely'' banned from doing business with Horizon's employees, via the Universal Trade Sanction--the bastards can't even buy '''food.''' And that's not all: the UTC was handed down by the Traders as a whole, so the various members also laid down their own punishments ''in addition'' to all of the above. Literally ''nothing'' is left of Horizon by the time the story starts.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: How the Traders dealt with the [[CompleteMonster Horizon Corporation]].Corporation. Along with their lab (and the asteroid it was on) being blown to smithereens, the entire organization was essentially ''erased'': all of Horizon's money and resources were seized, and ''everyone'' who worked for them was either killed or arrested. Moreover, the Traders were ''completely'' banned from doing business with Horizon's employees, via the Universal Trade Sanction--the bastards can't even buy '''food.''' And that's not all: the UTC was handed down by the Traders as a whole, so the various members also laid down their own punishments ''in addition'' to all of the above. Literally ''nothing'' is left of Horizon by the time the story starts.
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* TranshumanTreachery: A predecessor to the Trade Order tried to do this, [[FinalSolution in a very complete way]]. They're the reason why [[NoTranshumanismAllowed Transhumanism isn't allowed]]. (See the CompleteMonster entry for details.)
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* TranshumanTreachery: A predecessor to the Trade Order tried to do this, [[FinalSolution in a very complete way]]. They're the reason why [[NoTranshumanismAllowed Transhumanism isn't allowed]]. (See the CompleteMonster entry for details.)
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* WorldBuilding: Arguably one of the most popular aspects of the fic.
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* WorldBuilding: Arguably one of the most popular aspects of the fic.fic.
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** To clarify? "Rest of the Traders" is the entire known galaxy.
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* SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Averted. ''Hard''. The author goes out of his way to make it clear that space is ''fucking'' '''''huge'''''. He even describes Twilight and Spike seeing the TDN ''Novus'' as a tiny point in the distance as a minor miracle.
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* SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Averted. ''Hard''. The author goes out of his way to make it clear that space is ''fucking'' '''''huge'''''. He even describes Twilight and Spike seeing the TDN ''Novus'' as a tiny point in the distance as a minor miracle.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: How the Traders dealt with the [[CompleteMonster Horizon Corporation]]. Along with their lab (and the asteroid it was on) being blown to smithereens, the entire organization was essentially ''erased'': all of Horizon's money and resources were seized, and ''everyone'' who worked for them was either killed or arrested. Moreover, the Traders were ''completely'' banned from doing business with Horizon's employees, via the Universal Trade Sanction--the bastards can't even buy '''food.''' And that's not all: the UTC was handed down by the Traders as a whole, so the various members also laid down their own punishments ''in addition'' to all of the above. Literally ''nothing'' is left of Horizon by the time the story starts.
** WordOfGod has said this detail was done partly to avoid the TurnedAgainstTheirMasters trope, as detailed below.
** WordOfGod has said this detail was done partly to avoid the TurnedAgainstTheirMasters trope, as detailed below.
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* ShoutOut: Rainbow Dash's callsign is "[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Starbuck]]".
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* ShoutOut: Several, mostly to ''[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Battlestar Galactica]]'', such as Rainbow Dash's callsign is "[[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Starbuck]]".(Starbuck), the Everfree Forest Cloudbase, which superficially resembles a squared off Cylon Basestar, and the use of the word "[[UnusualEuphemism frak]]".
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** And Cloudbase looks a lot like a [[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Cylon Basestar]].
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** And Cloudbase looks a lot like a [[Series/BattlestarGalacticaReimagined Cylon Basestar]].
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* AndroidsArePeopleToo: In the Trade Order, AI's are considered legal citizens, and are usually treated with as much respect as those of flesh and blood.
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** Also what happened to some members of the [[CompleteMonster Horizon Corporation]], also by WordOfGod. While the Universal Trade Sanction (which makes them unable to even buy ''food'') was handed down by the Investigation Directorate, the various factions of the TEC also handed down their own punishments...including ''Cognizant Cryocontainment''.
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** Also what happened to some members of the [[CompleteMonster Horizon Corporation]], Corporation, also by WordOfGod. While the Universal Trade Sanction (which makes them unable to even buy ''food'') was handed down by the Investigation Directorate, the various factions of the TEC also handed down their own punishments...including ''Cognizant Cryocontainment''.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: A Universal Trade Sanction, which essentially bans you from ''all economic activity'', '''permanently'''. Even buying ''food.''
* FictionalDocument: The "Extra Document"files.files, which provide much of the fic's WorldBuilding.
* FictionalDocument: The "Extra Document"
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* GattacaBabies: Twilight Sparkle.
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* GattacaBabies: Twilight Sparkle.Sparkle is a particularly [[TearJerker tragic]] version of this trope.
* SuperSoldier: Twilight was intended to be this. Her rescuers had other ideas.
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: Averted in regards to Twilight Sparkle, because ''someone else'' already did it for her.
* [[OfficerAndAGentleman Officer and a Gentlepony]]: Rarity.
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** [[WordOfGod And Twilight's creators will NOT be coming back. Ever.]]
* [[OfficerAndAGentleman Officer and a Gentlepony]]:Rarity.Rarity, of course.
** [[WordOfGod And Twilight's creators will NOT be coming back. Ever.]]
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* DamberouslyGenreSavvy: The Trade Order. Their response to Discord was to [[AndIMustScream stick him into an autonomous ship and kick on the FTL, sending into intergalactic space, the emptiest place in existance.]]
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* DamberouslyGenreSavvy: DangerouslyGenreSavvy: The Trade Order. Their response to Discord was to [[AndIMustScream stick him into an autonomous ship and kick on the FTL, sending into intergalactic space, the emptiest place in existance.]]
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* ColonelBadass: Colonel Rekav.
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* DamberouslyGenreSavvy: The Trade Order. Their response to Discord was to [[AndIMustScream stick him into an autonomous ship and kick on the FTL, sending into intergalactic space, the emptiest place in existance.]]
** Their response to [[PhysicalGod Nightmare Moon]] was to send a battlefleet.
** The Horizon Corporation, who were very, ''very'' thorough in creating a magical supersoldier that wouldn't disobey. Poor Twilight.
** Their response to [[PhysicalGod Nightmare Moon]] was to send a battlefleet.
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* GeneticEngineering: Deconstructed with Twilight Sparkle. It is implied that she is genuinely dangerous with her mental block restricting most of her potential disabled, and a great deal of her personality is based around this fact of her life.
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: Averted in regards to Twilight Sparkle, because ''someone else'' already did it for her.
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* FictionalDocument: The "Extra Document" files.
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently, Fluttershy joined Rarity's crew in some rather over-the-top antics on their last shore leave.
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently, Fluttershy joined Rarity's crew in some rather over-the-top antics on their last shore leave. leave.
** And Colonel Rekav is no longer allowed to gamble ''anything'', for some reason.
** And Colonel Rekav is no longer allowed to gamble ''anything'', for some reason.
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** Averted when [[GodEmperor Celestia]] tells the TEC that her currently insane sister will be returning to wreak vengeance soon. They send a battlefleet.
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** Averted when [[GodEmperor Celestia]] tells the TEC that her currently insane sister will be returning to wreak vengeance soon. [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy They send a battlefleet.]] And Admiral Kol.
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** To make matters even worse for the bastard, the overall flight path is perpendicular to the plane of the galaxy, so he's heading straight into intergalactic space, the emptiest place in existence. There won't be any conflict to free him for a long time.
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* TranshumanTreachery: A predecessor to the Trade Order tried to do this, [[FinalSolution in a very complete way]]. (See the CompleteMonster entry for details.)
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* TranshumanTreachery: A predecessor to the Trade Order tried to do this, [[FinalSolution in a very complete way]]. They're the reason why [[NoTranshumanismAllowed Transhumanism isn't allowed]]. (See the CompleteMonster entry for details.)
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** Also what happened to some members of the [[CompleteMonster Horizon Corporation]], also by WordOfGod. While the Universal Trade Sanction (which makes them unable to even buy ''food'') was handed down by the Investigation Directorate, the various factions of the TEC also handed down their own punishments...including ''Cognizant Cryocontainment''.
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* TranshumanTreachery: A predecessor to the Trade Order tried to do this, [[FinalSolution in a very complete way]]. (See the CompleteMonster entry for details.)