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* AlternateEnding: There are two instances where the author shows how certain scenes would have played out differently, if certain events had transpired in different ways. [[KillEmAll Both end the same]], however.
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* HoldingHands: Shinji finds Rei holding his hand after [[spoiler: he wakes up from his coma]]. It turns out she'd been with him for [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming three days]].

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* HoldingHands: Shinji finds Rei holding his hand after [[spoiler: he wakes up from his coma]]. It turns out she'd been with him for [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming three days]].days.
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* BigBookOfWar: ''Literature/TheArtOfWar'', a favorite of Big Boss which he encourages Shinji to read.

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* BigBookOfWar: ''Literature/TheArtOfWar'', ''Literature/{{The Art of War|SunTzu}}'', a favorite of Big Boss which he encourages Shinji to read.
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* BigBookOfWar: TheArtOfWar, a favorite of Big Boss which he encourages Shinji to read.

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* BigBookOfWar: TheArtOfWar, ''Literature/TheArtOfWar'', a favorite of Big Boss which he encourages Shinji to read.
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* FlawExploitation: The Patriots knew that [[spoiler: Seele was tlistening to them, so Big Boss had Otacon and Mei Ling send out false information, causing Seele to bomb the wrong location.]]

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* FlawExploitation: The Patriots knew that [[spoiler: Seele was tlistening listening to them, so Big Boss had Otacon and Mei Ling send out false information, causing Seele to bomb the wrong location.]]
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* BuryYourGays: Done very blatantly with [[spoiler: Kaworu]], as he's literaly the first character to die in the fic, in the very first chapter of the story. Not to mention, it happens literally out of nowhere, along with AssPull/ DeusExMachina to accompany it. Although it's a bit complicated due to [[spoiler: Kaworu's [[DiscountLesbians Discount Homosexual]] status]], it still does invoke a '''lot''' of UnfortunateImplications.

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* BuryYourGays: Done very blatantly with [[spoiler: Kaworu]], as he's literaly the first character to die in the fic, in the very first chapter of the story. Not to mention, it happens literally out of nowhere, along with AssPull/ DeusExMachina to accompany it. Although it's a bit complicated due to [[spoiler: Kaworu's [[DiscountLesbians Discount Homosexual]] status]], it still does invoke a '''lot''' of UnfortunateImplications. %%move to GayGuyDiesFirst when that's launched
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* NamesTheSame: You have Eva, one of the founders of the Patriots, and Big Boss' lover, and you have the [=EVAs=], the weapons built to fight the Angels.

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* [[spoiler: {{Utopia}}]]: The world becomes this sometime after the events of the story.



* [[spoiler: {{Utopia}}]]: The world becomes this sometime after the events of the story.
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* WhatAnIdiot: Gendo, for bringing John Hayter (a five-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.

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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for bringing John Hayter (a five-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.


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* WhatAnIdiot: Gendo, for bringing John Hayter (a five-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.
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** Johnny gets it even worse, with his death being nonchalantly mentioned in the timeline, and that's about it.
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* UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans: Keel's plans to "unite" the world through {{Instrumentality}}.

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* UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans: Keel's plans to "unite" the world through {{Instrumentality}}.[[AssimilationPlot Instrumentality]].
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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for bringing John Hayter (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.

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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for bringing John Hayter (a four-star five-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.
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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting John Hayter (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.

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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting bringing John Hayter (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.
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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting John Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.

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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting John Hayter/Big Boss Hayter (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander himself pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.
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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting General Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.

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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting General John Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats]] was cathartic.
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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting General Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to Hayter's death threats was cathartic.

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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting General Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to [[CatchAndReturn Hayter's own death threats threats]] was cathartic.

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* FlawExploitation: The Patriots know that [[spoiler: Seele was trying listening to them. So Big Boss had Otacon and Mei Ling send out false information, 'causing Seele to bomb the wrong location.]]

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* FlawExploitation: The Patriots know knew that [[spoiler: Seele was trying listening tlistening to them. So them, so Big Boss had Otacon and Mei Ling send out false information, 'causing causing Seele to bomb the wrong location.]]


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* TooDumbToLive: Gendo, for inviting General Hayter/Big Boss (a four-star General of the United Nations protected under DiplomaticImmunity and the single greatest soldier who ever lived who also happens to be Gendo's superior) into his office just so he could threaten him with death if he didn't stay away from Shinji. Needless to say, the ensuing asskicking Hayter dishes out to Gendo's goons followed by the Nerv Commander pissing his pants in response to Hayter's death threats was cathartic.
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* [[spoiler: AxesAtSchool: Shinji brings Misato's gun to school to execute Asuka and Rei and then shoot up the rest of the class before killing himself. He ultimately doesn't go through with it (thanks to Big Boss) except in the [[ForWantOfANail alternate ending]].]]

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* [[spoiler: AxesAtSchool: Shinji brings Misato's gun to school to execute Asuka and Rei and then shoot up the rest of the class before killing himself. He ultimately doesn't go through with it (thanks to Big Boss) Boss), except in the [[ForWantOfANail alternate ending]].]]



* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Asuka, eventually pilots for Seele.]]

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* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Asuka, Asuka eventually pilots for Seele.]]
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* [[spoiler: AxesAtSchool: Shinji brings Misato's gun to school, and plans to execute Asuka and Rei, and shoot up the rest of the class before ultimately killing himself. He ultimately doesn't go through with it however. Except in the [[ForWantOfANail alternate ending]].]]

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* [[spoiler: AxesAtSchool: Shinji brings Misato's gun to school, and plans school to execute Asuka and Rei, Rei and then shoot up the rest of the class before ultimately killing himself. He ultimately doesn't go through with it however. Except (thanks to Big Boss) except in the [[ForWantOfANail alternate ending]].]]
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* BuryYourGays: Done very blatantly with [[spoiler: Kaworu]], as he's literaly the first character to die in the fic, in the very first chapter of the story. Not to mention, it happens literaly out of nowere, along with AssPull/ DeusExMachina to accompany it. Although it's a bit complicated due to [[spoiler: Kaworu's [[DiscountLesbians Discount Homosexual]] status]], it still does invoke a '''lot''' of UnfortunateImplications.
** It deosn't help that the author also stated in the very first chapter, Vamp will be permanetly dead in this version...

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* BuryYourGays: Done very blatantly with [[spoiler: Kaworu]], as he's literaly the first character to die in the fic, in the very first chapter of the story. Not to mention, it happens literaly literally out of nowere, nowhere, along with AssPull/ DeusExMachina to accompany it. Although it's a bit complicated due to [[spoiler: Kaworu's [[DiscountLesbians Discount Homosexual]] status]], it still does invoke a '''lot''' of UnfortunateImplications.
** It deosn't doesn't help that the author also stated in the very first chapter, Vamp will be permanetly dead in this version...



* ContinuityNod: Plenty, two that come to mind are Snake's bandana giving him infinite ammo, and [[spoiler: Asuka's eye getting injured, while she screams, "I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you all".]]

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* ContinuityNod: Plenty, two that come to mind are Snake's bandana bandanna giving him infinite ammo, and [[spoiler: Asuka's eye getting injured, while she screams, "I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you...I'll kill you all".]]
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* AnArmAndALeg: Happens when Raiden shows up and [[spoiler: cuts off Gendo's arm to prevent him from starting Third Impact.]]

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* AnArmAndALeg: Happens during the Battle for Humanity when Raiden shows up and [[spoiler: cuts off Gendo's arm to prevent him from starting Third Impact.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: The therapist who [[spoiler: who uses Asuka sexually, causing her to commit suicide.]]

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* KarmaHoudini: The therapist who [[spoiler: who uses Asuka sexually, causing her to commit suicide.]]
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** It deosn't help that the author stated Vamp will be permanetly dead in this version...

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** It deosn't help that the author also stated in the very first chapter, Vamp will be permanetly dead in this version...
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** It desn't help that the author also stated Vamp is permanetly dead in this version...

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** It desn't deosn't help that the author also stated Vamp is will be permanetly dead in this version...
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** It desn't help that the author also stated Vamp is permanetly dead in this version...
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* BuryYourGays: Very blatantly done with [[spoiler: Kaworu]], as he's literaly the first character to die in the fic, in the very first chapter of the story. Not to mention, it happens literaly out of nowere, along with AssPull/ DeusExMachina to accompany it. Although it's a bit complicated due to [[spoiler: Kaworu's [[DiscountLesbians Discount Homosexual]] status]], it still does invoke a '''lot''' of UnfortunateImplications.

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* BuryYourGays: Very Done very blatantly done with [[spoiler: Kaworu]], as he's literaly the first character to die in the fic, in the very first chapter of the story. Not to mention, it happens literaly out of nowere, along with AssPull/ DeusExMachina to accompany it. Although it's a bit complicated due to [[spoiler: Kaworu's [[DiscountLesbians Discount Homosexual]] status]], it still does invoke a '''lot''' of UnfortunateImplications.
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** {{Flanderization}}: She was heavily implied to be a [[{{Ubermensch}} much more]] [[LadyMacbeth morally]] [[MadScientist complex]] and [[TheChessmaster interesting]] character in canon, compared to her version in this fic.

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** {{Flanderization}}: She was [[AlternativeCharacterInterpretation heavily implied implied]] to be a [[{{Ubermensch}} much more]] [[LadyMacbeth morally]] [[MadScientist complex]] and [[TheChessmaster interesting]] character in canon, compared to her version in this fic.
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**{{Flanderization}}: She was heavily implied to be a [[{{Ubermensch}} much more]] [[LadyMacbeth morally]] [[MadScientist complex]] and [[TheChessmaster interesting]] character in canon, compared to her version in this fic.
* InstantExpert: Shinji learns the Close Quarters Combat unrealistically fast.

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