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* TwiceToldTale: Despite Gohan and Goten's presence, the story is recognizably that of Manga/ElfenLied; they don't so much divert the flow as become part of it, and even the divergences keep it within what any EL fan would know; for example, when Kouta allows Professor Kakuzawa to take Nyu, Mayu still questions the Professor's story, while Gohan is outright furious with Kouta - as he might be with a certain also-gullible deceased father.
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* TwiceToldTale: Despite Gohan and Goten's presence, the story is recognizably that of Manga/ElfenLied; they don't so much divert the flow as become part of it, and even the divergences keep it within what any EL fan would know; for example, when Kouta allows Professor Kakuzawa to take Nyu, Mayu still questions the Professor's story, while Gohan is outright furious with Kouta - as he might be with a certain also-gullible deceased father.Kouta.
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* AnythingThatMoves: Nyuu, like in canon.
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* BreakTheCutie: [[{{TearJerker}} Several cuties, actually.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: [[{{TearJerker}} Several cuties, actually.]]BreakTheCutie:
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* [[spoiler:IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn: Deconstructed and played for drama in chapter 7, when Gohan's HealingHands have this side effect on Mayu, ''[[RapeAsDrama a victim of rape]]''.]] The results are, understandably, not pretty.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: What Gohan thinks.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: What Gohan thinks.
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* [[spoiler:IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn: Deconstructed IDidntMeanToTurnYouOn: [[spoiler:Deconstructed and played for drama in chapter 7, when Gohan's HealingHands have this side effect on Mayu, ''[[RapeAsDrama a victim of rape]]''.]] The results are, understandably, not pretty.
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* LosingYourHead
* LuminescentBlush: When [[ClingyJealousGirl Yuka]] is forced to give Nana-san ''the talk''.
* LuminescentBlush: When [[ClingyJealousGirl Yuka]] is forced to give Nana-san ''the talk''.
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* NiceGuy: Gohan and Kouta.
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** [[spoiler: Inverted with Juuichi. Instead of breaking under the facilities experiments, she grows stronger, both physically and mentally, to the point of developing a cocky and haughty personality that takes great pride in not only having survived, but even thrived in the harsh evironment.]]
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** [[spoiler: Inverted with Juuichi. Instead of breaking under the facilities experiments, she grows stronger, both physically and mentally, to the point of developing a cocky and haughty personality that takes great pride in not only having survived, survived but even thrived in the harsh evironment.environment.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Some of the stories scenes are more explicit than the canon material. [[spoiler:One notable instance is Mayu being raped by her stepfather.]] The scene is described in great detail.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Some of the stories story's scenes are more explicit than the canon material. [[spoiler:One notable instance is Mayu being raped by her stepfather.]] The scene is described in great detail.
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* DemographicDissonantCrossover: Basically, this story is a crossover between a shonen action series and a very violent seinen drama.
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* KiAttacks: It IS a DBZ crossover fanfic. What did you expect?
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* KiAttacks: KiManipulation: It IS a DBZ crossover fanfic. What did you expect?
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Boring Invincible Hero redirect is getting cut.
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* BoringInvincibleHero: It's Gohan of all people, folks, what did you expect from taking him from an action series full of [[PersonOfMassDestruction characters that can effortlessly]] [[EarthShatteringKaboom destroy planets with their hands]] and put him in a series where all the cast can die from bullets?
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* InvincibleHero: It's Gohan of all people, folks, what did you expect from taking him from an action series full of [[PersonOfMassDestruction characters that can effortlessly]] [[EarthShatteringKaboom destroy planets with their hands]] and put him in a series where all the cast can die from bullets?
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5386296/1/Elfen_Lied_Children_of_destruction Elfen Lied]]: [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/487204/chapters/849376 Children of Destruction]] is an Manga/ElfenLied and Anime/DragonBallZ CrossOver FanFic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1648707/LSSJ2_Gohan LSSJ2]] [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/GohanLSSJ2/pseuds/GohanLSSJ2 Gohan]]
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!!''Fanfic/ElfenLiedChildrenOfDestruction'' provides examples of:
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* MythologyGag: In one scene, Nyuu and Goten are shown trying to fix a grandfather clock. Another is when Kouta gives Nozomi a music box to help her with teaching Nyuu how to sing [[{{EarWorm}} Lilium.]]
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* MythologyGag: In one scene, Nyuu and Goten are shown trying to fix a grandfather clock. Another is when Kouta gives Nozomi a music box to help her with teaching Nyuu how to sing [[{{EarWorm}} Lilium.]]
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* NecessaryEvil: How Kurama and many other facility members view caging the Diclonii and torturing them.
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* NecessaryEvil: NecessarilyEvil: How Kurama and many other facility members view caging the Diclonii and torturing them.
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How To Write An Example - Don't Write Reviews
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* OriginalCharacter: [[spoiler: Oniari is a split personality who is an [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]] [[JerkAss jackass]] who looks out for Gohan [[JerkWithAHeartOfJerk because of his own selfish reasons]]. Makai is another split personality that constantly tries to [[BreakTheCutie break Gohan]] [[SplitPersonalityTakeover to gain permanent control of him]]. Kazegawa is a [[MuggleBestFriend human scientist]] who works at the Diclonious Research Institute and doesn't agree with the [[ColdBloodedTorture harsh treatment]] of the Diclonii. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming He does what little he can to try and make their lives more bearable.]] [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Slipelit Number 11,]] aka [[BloodKnight Juuichi,]] is a Diclonious who, unlike many others, developed a cocky and haughty personality. She has great pride in her strength as a Diclonious and takes to the humans' experiment with glee, considering them tests worthy of her species abilities.]]
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* OriginalCharacter: [[spoiler: Oniari is a split personality who is an [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]] [[JerkAss jackass]] who looks out for Gohan [[JerkWithAHeartOfJerk because of his own selfish reasons]]. Makai is another split personality that constantly tries to [[BreakTheCutie break Gohan]] [[SplitPersonalityTakeover to gain permanent control of him]]. Kazegawa is a [[MuggleBestFriend human scientist]] who works at the Diclonious Research Institute and doesn't agree with the [[ColdBloodedTorture harsh treatment]] of the Diclonii. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming He does what little he can to try and make their lives more bearable.]] bearable. [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Slipelit Number 11,]] aka [[BloodKnight Juuichi,]] is a Diclonious who, unlike many others, developed a cocky and haughty personality. She has great pride in her strength as a Diclonious and takes to the humans' experiment with glee, considering them tests worthy of her species abilities.]]
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That's Taught By Experience.
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* GenreSavvy: Gohan has managed to be this, figuring out Nyuu and Lucy are split personalities due to himself being in a similar situation.
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* [[OutsideContextVillain Outside Context Hero]]: Gohan. Nobody in this world expects him, and none of them can stop him.
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* [[OutsideContextVillain Outside Context Hero]]: OutsideContextProblem: Gohan. Nobody in this world expects him, and none of them can stop him.
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* TakeOverTheWorld: Kakuzawa's eventual plan. How it differs from canon remains to be seen...
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* WorldDomination: Kakuzawa's eventual plan. How it differs from canon remains to be seen...
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5386296/1/Elfen_Lied_Children_of_destruction Elfen Lied]]: [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/487204/chapters/849376 Children of Destruction]] is an ElfenLied Manga/ElfenLied and Anime/DragonBallZ CrossOver FanFic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1648707/LSSJ2_Gohan LSSJ2]] [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/GohanLSSJ2/pseuds/GohanLSSJ2 Gohan]]
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* TwiceToldTale: Despite Gohan and Goten's presence, the story is recognizably that of ElfenLied; Manga/ElfenLied; they don't so much divert the flow as become part of it, and even the divergences keep it within what any EL fan would know; for example, when Kouta allows Professor Kakuzawa to take Nyu, Mayu still questions the Professor's story, while Gohan is outright furious with Kouta - as he might be with a certain also-gullible deceased father.