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The result is an adventure much in the vein of ''KingdomHearts''--a DisneyAnimatedCanon crossover featuring a horde of soulless, soul-crushing enemies, the threat of the world's destruction, and of course Mickey Mouse as an action-ready hero. But what it really is, is the author's love letter to Disneyland--a nostalgic journey through the park's history, and a celebration of its capacity to blur the line between reality and imagination. It garnered overwhelmingly positive reviews from Karalora's fellow Disney park fans on ff.net, but non-fans may find it less accessible.
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3159333/1/Crowns_of_the_Kingdom But judge for yourself.]]
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3159333/1/Crowns_of_the_Kingdom But judge for yourself.]]
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The result is an adventure much in the vein of ''KingdomHearts''--a ''Franchise/KingdomHearts''--a DisneyAnimatedCanon crossover featuring a horde of soulless, soul-crushing enemies, the threat of the world's destruction, and of course Mickey Mouse as an action-ready hero. But what it really is, is is the author's love letter to Disneyland--a nostalgic journey through the park's history, and a celebration of its capacity to blur the line between reality and imagination. It garnered overwhelmingly positive reviews from Karalora's fellow Disney park fans on ff.net, but non-fans may find it less accessible.
imagination.
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3159333/1/Crowns_of_the_KingdomBut judge for yourself.It can be found here.]]
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3159333/1/Crowns_of_the_Kingdom
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* RuleOfFunny: Goofy manages to throw himself across the river by way of cartoon physics.
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** Doubles as CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
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* BigBad: Maleficent (The showdown with her comes ''after'' the one with [[Disney/{{Fantasia}} Chernabog!]])
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* BigBad: Maleficent (The Maleficent. The showdown with her comes ''after'' the one with [[Disney/{{Fantasia}} Chernabog!]])
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* ChekhovsGunman: The [[Disney/AliceInWonderland Queen of Hearts]], [[spoiler:Hypatia]], [[spoiler:Jiminy Cricket]]
* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve (natch--it's ''Disney'')
* CrossoverShipping: The elephants from ''Disney/{{Dumbo}}'' (all female) with the elephants from ''Disney/TheJungleBook'' (all male)
* DemBones: The skeletons on Pirates of the Caribbean
* DisneyAnimatedCanon
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* DoorStopper: There are over 30 chapters, totalling well over 150,000 words.
* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve (natch--it's ''Disney'')
* CrossoverShipping: The elephants from ''Disney/{{Dumbo}}'' (all female) with the elephants from ''Disney/TheJungleBook'' (all male)
* DemBones: The skeletons on Pirates of the Caribbean
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* ChekhovsGunman: The [[Disney/AliceInWonderland Queen of Hearts]], [[spoiler:Hypatia]], and [[spoiler:Jiminy Cricket]]
Cricket]].
*ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve (natch--it's ''Disney'')
ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: It's ''Disney''.
* CrossoverShipping: The elephants from ''Disney/{{Dumbo}}''(all female) with the elephants from ''Disney/TheJungleBook'' (all male)
''Disney/TheJungleBook''.
* DemBones: The skeletons on Pirates of theCaribbean
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* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons: See entry for OneWingedAngel. [[PetesDragon Elliot]] also makes appearances.
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* SugarBowl: "it's a small world"
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* SugarBowl:"it's "It's a small world"
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* UnderTheSea: The SubmarineVoyage
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* TempleOfDoom: The Franchise/IndianaJones ride, appropriatelyenoughenough.
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* TimeyWimeyBall: complete Complete with some explanatory TechnoBabble on the part of Ludwig von DrakeDrake.
* UnfortunateImplications: Seen in-universe with the unfinished area based around China and Confucius, which reflects the racist attitudes of the time. [[spoiler:Thankfully, Confucius gives Mickey helpful advice]].
* UnfortunateImplications: Seen in-universe with the unfinished area based around China and Confucius, which reflects the racist attitudes of the time. [[spoiler:Thankfully, Confucius gives Mickey helpful advice]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: The climax of the adventure has Mickey [[spoiler: travel to an [[FinalBossNewDimension alternate dimension]] composed of [[WhatCouldHaveBeen attractions proposed but never built for Disneyland]], where he spends some time following a half-glimpsed OswaldTheLuckyRabbit]] before figuring out what he's supposed to be doing. Hey, did [[EpicMickey Warren Spector]] read this or something...?
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* BigBad: Maleficent (The showdown with her comes ''after'' the one with [[{{Fantasia}} Chernabog!]])
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* AsianSpeakeeEngrish: Downplayed and subverted with the audio-animatronic Confucius, who prefaces each of his maxims with "Confucius say," but drops the pretense and speaks normally when Mickey doesn't get the message.
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* AsianSpeakeeEngrish: AsianSpeekeeEngrish: Downplayed and subverted with the audio-animatronic Confucius, who prefaces each of his maxims with "Confucius say," but drops the pretense and speaks normally when Mickey doesn't get the message.
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On second thought, Little Miss Badass seems like a better fit.
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* BadassAdorable: It's only mentioned briefly, but Annelise, one of the children from the It's a Small World ride, is said to have killer aim when throwing her wooden clogs, something she was preparing to prove to a horde of Dispirations right before the cavalry arrived.
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* BadassDriver: Minnie, who takes control of Tomorrowland's Monorail, an Atommobile, and a Jeep in the [[TempleOfDoom Temple of Mara]] throughout the fic and manages to be completely awesome each time.
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* HilariousInHindsight: The climax of the adventure has Mickey [[spoiler: travel to an [[FinalBossNewDimension alternate dimension]] composed of [[WhatCouldHaveBeen attractions proposed but never built for Disneyland]], where he spends some time following a half-glimpsed OswaldTheLuckyRabbit]] before figuring out what he's supposed to be doing. Hey, did [[EpicMickey Warren Spector read this or something...?
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* HilariousInHindsight: The climax of the adventure has Mickey [[spoiler: travel to an [[FinalBossNewDimension alternate dimension]] composed of [[WhatCouldHaveBeen attractions proposed but never built for Disneyland]], where he spends some time following a half-glimpsed OswaldTheLuckyRabbit]] before figuring out what he's supposed to be doing. Hey, did [[EpicMickey Warren Spector Spector]] read this or something...?
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* HilariousInHindsight: The climax of the adventure has Mickey [[spoiler: travel to an [[FinalBossNewDimension alternate dimension]] composed of [[WhatCouldHaveBeen attractions proposed but never built for Disneyland]], where he spends some time following a half-glimpsed OswaldTheLuckyRabbit]] before figuring out what he's supposed to be doing. Hey, did WarrenSpector [[EpicMickey Warren Spector read this]] this or something...?
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The story begins with a vengeful [[SleepingBeauty Maleficent]] casting a spell to undo all 50 years of Disneyland's development, leaving the park as it was when it first opened in 1955 and trapping every animated character created since then in a limbo between reality and non-existence. In order to rescue them and restore the park to its 2005 state, MickeyMouse and his core group from the ClassicDisneyShorts quest to retrieve [[PlotCoupon five decorative crowns]] stolen from the turrets of Sleeping Beauty Castle, each one representing ten years of Disneyland history. Along the way, they are opposed by the Dispirations, {{shapeshifting}} beings from the limbo dimension whom Maleficent has recruited. They also frequently find themselves navigating the hazards of Disneyland's thrill rides, come to life as an indirect result of the spell. And then the rest of the Disney Villains get involved...
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The story begins with a vengeful [[SleepingBeauty [[Disney/SleepingBeauty Maleficent]] casting a spell to undo all 50 years of Disneyland's development, leaving the park as it was when it first opened in 1955 and trapping every animated character created since then in a limbo between reality and non-existence. In order to rescue them and restore the park to its 2005 state, MickeyMouse and his core group from the ClassicDisneyShorts quest to retrieve [[PlotCoupon five decorative crowns]] stolen from the turrets of Sleeping Beauty Castle, each one representing ten years of Disneyland history. Along the way, they are opposed by the Dispirations, {{shapeshifting}} beings from the limbo dimension whom Maleficent has recruited. They also frequently find themselves navigating the hazards of Disneyland's thrill rides, come to life as an indirect result of the spell. And then the rest of the Disney Villains get involved...
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* ScienceVsMagic: Personified by Ludwig von Drake and [[TheSwordInTheStone Merlin]].
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* ChekhovsGunman: The [[AliceInWonderland Queen of Hearts]], [[spoiler:Hypatia]], [[spoiler:Jiminy Cricket]]
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* CrossoverShipping: The elephants from ''Disney/{{Dumbo}}'' (all female) with the elephants from ''TheJungleBook'' (all male)
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The result is an adventure much in the vein of ''KingdomHearts''--a DisneyAnimatedCanon crossover featuring a horde of soulless, soul-crushing enemies, the threat of the world's destruction, and of course Mickey Mouse as an action-ready hero. But what it really is, is the author's love letter to Disneyland--a nostalgic journey through the park's history, and a celebration of its capacity to blur the line between reality and imagination. It is unsurprising that it garnered overwhelmingly positive reviews from Karalora's fellow Disney park fans on ff.net.
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The result is an adventure much in the vein of ''KingdomHearts''--a DisneyAnimatedCanon crossover featuring a horde of soulless, soul-crushing enemies, the threat of the world's destruction, and of course Mickey Mouse as an action-ready hero. But what it really is, is the author's love letter to Disneyland--a nostalgic journey through the park's history, and a celebration of its capacity to blur the line between reality and imagination. It is unsurprising that it garnered overwhelmingly positive reviews from Karalora's fellow Disney park fans on ff.net.
net, but non-fans may find it less accessible.
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