History FanFic / ChildOfGrace

23rd Jan '16 1:25:43 PM Llygodenfawr
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* FlatCharacter: While a lot of characters are introduced as a result of Holly befriending different people than Harry did, they get very little characterization beyond being Holly's friend, as well as the occasional InfoDump.
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* FlatCharacter: While a lot of characters are introduced as a result of Holly befriending different people than from those Harry did, they get very little characterization beyond being Holly's friend, as well as the occasional InfoDump.
10th Jan '16 11:54:42 PM Llygodenfawr
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mind reading is a form of telepathy
The result is [[MarySue Holly Potter]], who befriends Draco, Blaise, and Millicent, has powers that canon Harry does not possess (such as mind-reading, telepathy, and blocking spells without a wand), and figures most plot twists out in the original books from the get-go, even though she goes all through the same adventures as Harry anyway.
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The result is [[MarySue Holly Potter]], who befriends Draco, Blaise, and Millicent, has powers that canon Harry does not possess (such as mind-reading, telepathy, telepathy and blocking spells without a wand), and figures most plot twists out in the original books from the get-go, even though she goes all through the same adventures as Harry anyway.
10th Jun '15 2:42:41 AM Sheora
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Tropes cannot be subverted "heavily." This is cruft.
* MugglesDoItBetter: Heavily subverted. In spite of spending most of her life living in the Muggle world, Holly promptly discards all customs and traditions she observed in favor of the Old Ways.
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* MugglesDoItBetter: Heavily subverted.Subverted. In spite of spending most of her life living in the Muggle world, Holly promptly discards all customs and traditions she observed in favor of the Old Ways.
15th Jan '15 1:11:44 PM Beacon80
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* HatesBeingTouched: Allegedly a result of the abuse she received from the Dursleys, but only seems to apply to characters the author doesn't like.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Allegedly a A result of the abuse she received from the Dursleys, but only seems to apply to characters the author doesn't like.Dursleys.

** See HatesBeingTouched above.
13th Jan '15 1:33:51 PM Beacon80
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* InSpiteOfANail: Between Holly's powers and everyone fawning over her, she tends to get clues or even figure out the entire plot long before Harry did canonically. She always finds some excuse to not act on this information, so [[TheStationsOfTheCanon the plot won't change too much.]]
13th Jan '15 1:27:49 PM Beacon80
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* HatesBeingTouched: Allegedly a result of the abuse she received from the Dursleys, but only seems to apply to characters the author doesn't like.

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** See HatesBeingTouched above.
28th Apr '14 2:42:48 PM Beacon80
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** The Slytherins insist that they are unfairly prejudiced against, and are good people. They never demonstrate this, and after tormenting a muggle-born and a blood traitor (both first years) to the point where the muggle-born needs to be hospitalized, it's hard to fault the Gryffindors for assuming they're blood supremacists.
19th Sep '13 12:43:07 PM Beacon80
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** Blaise himself is a hypocrite here, since he is often telling Holly about how open-minded and non-judgemental people who follow the Old Ways are.
15th Apr '13 9:03:34 PM Tuckerscreator
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* JerkAssHasAPoint: Though Holly sees Ron and Neville's suspicion of herself and Malfoy as being involved with the releasing the Basilisk as a sign of them betraying her, the fact remains that Holly has been ignoring her alleged friends from Gryffindor and letting her Slytherin friends mock and attack anyone (including Colin Creevey and Ginny Weasley) that annoy her in the slightest.
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* JerkAssHasAPoint: JerkassHasAPoint: Though Holly sees Ron and Neville's suspicion of herself and Malfoy as being involved with the releasing the Basilisk as a sign of them betraying her, the fact remains that Holly has been ignoring her alleged friends from Gryffindor and letting her Slytherin friends mock and attack anyone (including Colin Creevey and Ginny Weasley) that annoy her in the slightest.
30th Mar '13 11:04:32 AM ASplashingKoi
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The result is [[MarySue Holly Potter]], who befriends [[DracoInLeatherPants Draco, Blaise, and Millicent]], has [[GodModeSue special powers that canon Harry does not possess (such as mind-reading, telepathy, and blocking spells without a wand)]], and [[FixerSue figures most plot twists out in the original books from the get-go, even though she goes all through the same adventures as Harry anyway]]. That's...pretty much it, really, unless you count the [[DracoInLeatherPants constant glorification of Slytherins]] paired with [[RonTheDeathEater demonization of Gryffindors]] for good measure, never-ending {{Wangst}} from the [[DesignatedHero main character]], and bucket loads of CanonDefilement.
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The result is [[MarySue Holly Potter]], who befriends [[DracoInLeatherPants Draco, Blaise, and Millicent]], Millicent, has [[GodModeSue special powers that canon Harry does not possess (such as mind-reading, telepathy, and blocking spells without a wand)]], wand), and [[FixerSue figures most plot twists out in the original books from the get-go, even though she goes all through the same adventures as Harry anyway]].anyway. That's...pretty much it, really, unless you count Since it's an AlternateUniverse fic (emphasis on the [[DracoInLeatherPants constant glorification of Slytherins]] paired with [[RonTheDeathEater demonization of Gryffindors]] for good measure, never-ending {{Wangst}} from the [[DesignatedHero main character]], and bucket loads of CanonDefilement. "alternate"), your mileage ''will'' vary.

* DamselInDistress: This is basically Holly's only role.
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* DamselInDistress: This is basically Holly's only role.Holly.

* {{Expy}}: Holly has been compared to [[{{Twilight}} Bella Swan]] in terms of uselessness and MarySue tendencies.
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