History FanFic / BlackCrayons

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* ArcWords: "It was important" is used by Annabelle as an explanation of why she does something. Early in the story, she uses this as to why she includes Ironhide (whether in vehicle or robot mode) in all of her drawings. [[spoiler: In ''A Child's Innocence'', she uses this as to why she went to Chicago while it was being ravaged by the Decepticons.]]
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* SwitchingPOV: The series switches between the POV of various characters.
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* CurseCutShort: In ''Not According to Plan'', after [[MamaBear Sarah]] dislocates one of Tommy's fingers.
-->'''Tommy:''' She broke my finger. That stupid b-\\
'''Sarah:''' [[ShutUpHannibal Quit complaining, I only dislocated it.]] Unlike some people, I understand the concept of restraint.



* ((Fingore}}: [[MamaBear Sarah]] dislocates one of Tommy's fingers after finding out that he kidnapped her daughter along with a few other children.

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* ((Fingore}}: {{Fingore}}: [[MamaBear Sarah]] dislocates one of Tommy's fingers after finding out that he kidnapped her daughter along with a few other children.


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** From the same story, Sarah to Tommy when the latter tries justifying his actions (kidnapping Annabelle, Izabella, Danny, Luke, Peter and Gwen) and generally refusing responsibility for his actions.
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* ((Fingore}}: [[MamaBear Sarah]] dislocates one of Tommy's fingers after finding out that he kidnapped her daughter along with a few other children.
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** In ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler:the world leaders buy that the Decepitcons will spare the Earth's population if the Autobots are exiled. Sam, Lennox, Epps and Simmons are aware of the fact that the Decepticons will most certainly not keep their word and that the Autobots are the Cybertronians who don't wish humans any ill will. The Decepticons will attack and Earth is forcing their only real chance at combating them off the planet. Simmons refrains from saying "I told you so." when the Decepticons inevitably go against their end of the deal and blow up the ''Xanthium''.]]

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** In ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler:the world leaders buy that the Decepitcons will spare the Earth's population if the Autobots are exiled. Sam, Lennox, Epps and Simmons are aware of the fact that the Decepticons will most certainly not keep their word and that the Autobots are the Cybertronians who don't wish humans any ill will. The Decepticons will attack and Earth is forcing their only real chance at combating them off the planet. Simmons refrains from saying "I told you so." when the Decepticons inevitably unsurprisingly go against their end of the deal and blow up the ''Xanthium''.]]
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* TheSociopath: Laserbeak takes great joy in killing humans.
* SecretKeeper: Not including those connected to the government or [=NEST=], those who know the truth about the Cybertronians include Sam, Mikaela, Annabelle, their families, [[AndZoidberg and Leo]] ([[TheGhost though he hasn't appeared in the series]]).



* SecretKeeper: Not including those connected to the government or [=NEST=], those who know the truth about the Cybertronians include Sam, Mikaela, Annabelle, their families, [[AndZoidberg and Leo]] ([[TheGhost though he hasn't appeared in the series]]).
* SequelEscalation: ''A Child's Innocence'' compared to the preceding entries which were SliceOfLife stories that were overall [[LighterAndSofter light in tone compared to the films]]. This entry involves [[spoiler:kidnapping, {{Character Death}}s, large scale destruction, countless innocent people being killed, and an all out brawl between two factions of giant alien robots.]]



** In the same story, Mikaela compares Sam to [[Film/DieHard John McClane]].

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** In the same story, Mikaela compares Sam to [[Film/DieHard John McClane]].McClane]] [[spoiler:when he arrives at Dylan's penthouse and holds the businessman at gunpoint, demanding to know where Mikaela is.]]


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* TheSociopath: Laserbeak takes great joy in killing humans.
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** Dutch is proven right in ''Not According to Plan''; there are a couple of new characters [[spoiler:who have witnessed the Decepticons tear apart Chicago]]): a group of teenagers (Tommy, Mike, Emily, and Katie) who plan to destroy any sympathy for the Autobots in response to what happened in [[spoiler:Chicago]] and a group of children (Danny, Luke, Izabella, Peter and Gwen) whom Annabelle befriends while her family assisting in repairing [[spoiler:Chicago]]. Unlike the teenagers, Tommy in particular believes all Cybertronians to all be complete monsters, the children believe Annabelle when she tells them that there are good and evil Cybertronians. The children befriend Wheelie when Annabelle shows them that he isn't dangerous. Izabella especially as she recognizes Ironhide as one of the good guys despite his size and weapons and acknowledges the Autobots' heroics for stopping the Decepticons.
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* BrokenMasquerade: [[spoiler:''A Child's Innocence'' breaks the masquerade of the Transformers when the Decepticons broadcast a (false) message worldwide that if the Autobots leave Earth, they will leave the planet unharmed. It's broken even further when the Decepticons lay wast to Chicago and the Autobots arrive to stop them.]]

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* BrokenMasquerade: [[spoiler:''A Child's Innocence'' breaks the masquerade of the Transformers when the Decepticons broadcast a (false) message worldwide that if the Autobots leave Earth, they will leave the planet unharmed. It's broken even further when the Decepticons lay wast waste to Chicago and the Autobots arrive to stop them.]]



* OhCrap: In ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler: Barricade]] has this reaction when he assigned with guarding Annabelle because he is afraid of what [[PapaWolf Ironhide]] (not to mention the other Autobots who care about her) will do to him if he finds out.

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In ''A Child's Innocence'', [[spoiler: Barricade]] has this reaction when he assigned with guarding Annabelle because he is afraid of what [[PapaWolf Ironhide]] (not to mention the other Autobots who care about her) will do to him if he finds out. out.
** In ''Not According to Plan'', [[MassOhCrap Tommy, Mike and Emily have this reaction]] when confronted with [[ActionGirl Chromia]] and [[TheBigGuy Ironhide]] [[TranquilFury who are not happy to find out that the teenagers]] [[MamaBear have kidnapped Annabelle]] [[PapaWolf and several other children.]]


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* ScrewThisImOutOfHere:
** [[spoiler:In ''A Child's Innocence'', Starscream decides to get the hell out of dodge after Sam [[EyeScream impales him in the eye]] and [[AnArmAndALeg nearly blows off his arm with an explosive]].]]
** In ''Not According to Plan'', [[TeensAreMonsters Tommy]] tries to run for it when he is noticed by Chromia and Ironhide, Chromia keeps him from escaping.
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