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''A Small Crime'' is a FanFic novel created by [[MostFanficWritersAreGirls Katy-Kale]] based on the ''{{Shrek}} the Third'' movie. The character Arthur 'Artie' Pendragon is made one of the main characters, who in the original works was the EnsembleDarkhorse rather than TheHero.
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''A Small Crime'' is a FanFic novel created by [[MostFanficWritersAreGirls Katy-Kale]] based on the ''{{Shrek}} ''WesternAnimation/{{Shrek}} the Third'' movie. The character Arthur 'Artie' Pendragon is made one of the main characters, who in the original works was the EnsembleDarkhorse rather than TheHero.
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* CareerKillers: [[spoiler: Both Siv and Kit are part of an assassin's guild]].
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* ProfessionalKillers: [[spoiler: Both Siv and Kit are part of an assassin's guild]].
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* {{Expy}}: Siv's look was inspired by Envy from FullmetalAlchemist.
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* {{Expy}}: Siv's look was inspired by Envy from FullmetalAlchemist.''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist''.
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* TechnicolorEyes: Siv has orange eyes, while Kit has yellow eyes.
* ImprobableAimingSkills: Kit can throw a card in the air and then shoot it (with her crossbow) right in the middle before it even hits.
* RageAgainstTheMentor: Artie does this to Kit when she's trying to teach him how to joust.
* ImprobableAimingSkills: Kit can throw a card in the air and then shoot it (with her crossbow) right in the middle before it even hits.
* RageAgainstTheMentor: Artie does this to Kit when she's trying to teach him how to joust.
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* TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: A group a guards who are stumbling in the dark mistake Puss and Donkey for an werecat, an assassin, a cocatrice,
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Of course, summaries include '''spoilers'''.
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'''Tropes names in this story that you should not read until you finish the story:'''
* DisneyDeath
* MinionWithAnFInEvil: [[spoiler: Kit and Donkey]].
* ReluctantMonster
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman
'''Tropes names in this story that you should not read until you finish the story:'''
* DisneyDeath
* MinionWithAnFInEvil: [[spoiler: Kit and Donkey]].
* ReluctantMonster
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman
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This page is under construction.
Note that the story is BetterThanItSounds.
Note that the story is BetterThanItSounds.
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''A Small Crime'' is a FanFic novel created by [[MostFanficWritersAreGirls Katy-Kale]] based on the ''{{Shrek}} the Third'' movie. The character Arthur 'Artie' Pendragon is made one of the main characters, who in the original works was the EnsembleDarkhorse rather than TheHero.
The story is set in an [[AlternateUniverse Alternate Shrek Universe]], where (instead of Shrek, who is never mentioned in the story) the main character is a teenage girl named Kit. The story contains enough {{canon}} to make it fit into Shrek's world, yet at the same time changes the scenes enough to make it new and interesting for the reader.
The story has a surprisingly large amout of fans who agree with this shipping.
The fanfic can be read here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5097340/1/A_Small_Crime
Of course, summaries include '''spoilers'''.
This page is under construction.
Note that the story is BetterThanItSounds.
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'''Tropes in this story:'''
*TechnicolorEyes: Siv has orange eyes, while Kit has yellow eyes.
*ImprobableAimingSkills: Kit can throw a card in the air and then shoot it (with her crossbow) right in the middle before it even hits.
*RageAgainstTheMentor: Artie does this to Kit when she's trying to teach him how to joust.
*ArtEvolution: The writer said that originally, Kit had long-ish blond hair (instead of short black hair), had blue eyes, and that she wore red armor (instead of wearing a grayish-black outfit), but then realized that she looked too much like Artie. The red armor was switched for a shirt to make Kit less impenetrable.[[spoiler: It was even said that Kit originally had red dragon-like wings]].
*BadassFamily: [[spoiler: Siv is the leader of an assassin's guild (or at least in very high authority). Her little sister, Kit, is one of her best-trained members.]]
*BodyguardCrush: [[spoiler: Kit, after she promises herself to protect Artie]].
*CareerKillers: [[spoiler: Both Siv and Kit are part of an assassin's guild]].
*TheChessmaster: Siv. [[spoiler: It was said that she has a notebook cointaining all the secrets of Far Far Away, including maps of the sewage system, and every single person's family tree]].
*ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler: Kit's hat and Siv's headband]].
*EveryoneCanSeeIt: At least Puss and Donkey can see it anyway.
*{{Expy}}: Siv's look was inspired by Envy from FullmetalAlchemist.
*FatalAttractor: Artie. The first girl he loved thinks that he's a loser. The second girl he loved [[spoiler: is supposed to kill him]].
*TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: A group a guards who are stumbling in the dark mistake Puss and Donkey for an werecat, an assassin, a cocatrice,
*LoveMakesYouDumb: [[spoiler: It takes a while for Artie to realize Kit's deep dark secrets, despite all the clues that he was given]].
*{{Masquerade}}: [[spoiler: Siv and Kit both have to wear a hat/headband to... blend in with the crowd]].
*MeaningfulName:
** The writer said that Kit was named after a beautifully-crafted crossbow that she saw in an antique shop with the same name.
** Plus, ''kitsune'' (foxes) also have naturally golden eyes.
*NoodleIncident: Donkey and the 'Dreaded and Infamous Potion Factory Incident'. Subverted since it is explained what happened afterwards.
*NoNameGiven: Kit and Siv's last name are never mentioned.
** And earlier, Siv is only named as the Stranger.
*OriginalCharacter: Siv and Kit, who never appeared in the original Shrek movies.
*SleepCute: Only for Artie. [[spoiler: When Kit was watching Artie sleeping, she described him as the most handsome boy ever to have lived]].
*SuperSpeed: Siv and Kit seem to have unnaturally quick reflexes.
*SuperStrength: Kit seems to be stronger than the average kid her age.
*WhatBeautifulEyes: Kit's eyes are a golden yellow color. But there's a reason [[TheReveal that explains that]].
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'''Tropes names in this story that you should not read until you finish the story:'''
*DisneyDeath
*MinionWithAnFInEvil: [[spoiler: Kit and Donkey]].
*ReluctantMonster
*WhatMeasureIsANonHuman
*YouNeverAsked: [[spoiler: Siv seemed to have neglected to tell Kit about their amazing healing abilities]].
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The story is set in an [[AlternateUniverse Alternate Shrek Universe]], where (instead of Shrek, who is never mentioned in the story) the main character is a teenage girl named Kit. The story contains enough {{canon}} to make it fit into Shrek's world, yet at the same time changes the scenes enough to make it new and interesting for the reader.
The story has a surprisingly large amout of fans who agree with this shipping.
The fanfic can be read here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5097340/1/A_Small_Crime
Of course, summaries include '''spoilers'''.
This page is under construction.
Note that the story is BetterThanItSounds.
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'''Tropes in this story:'''
*TechnicolorEyes: Siv has orange eyes, while Kit has yellow eyes.
*ImprobableAimingSkills: Kit can throw a card in the air and then shoot it (with her crossbow) right in the middle before it even hits.
*RageAgainstTheMentor: Artie does this to Kit when she's trying to teach him how to joust.
*ArtEvolution: The writer said that originally, Kit had long-ish blond hair (instead of short black hair), had blue eyes, and that she wore red armor (instead of wearing a grayish-black outfit), but then realized that she looked too much like Artie. The red armor was switched for a shirt to make Kit less impenetrable.[[spoiler: It was even said that Kit originally had red dragon-like wings]].
*BadassFamily: [[spoiler: Siv is the leader of an assassin's guild (or at least in very high authority). Her little sister, Kit, is one of her best-trained members.]]
*BodyguardCrush: [[spoiler: Kit, after she promises herself to protect Artie]].
*CareerKillers: [[spoiler: Both Siv and Kit are part of an assassin's guild]].
*TheChessmaster: Siv. [[spoiler: It was said that she has a notebook cointaining all the secrets of Far Far Away, including maps of the sewage system, and every single person's family tree]].
*ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler: Kit's hat and Siv's headband]].
*EveryoneCanSeeIt: At least Puss and Donkey can see it anyway.
*{{Expy}}: Siv's look was inspired by Envy from FullmetalAlchemist.
*FatalAttractor: Artie. The first girl he loved thinks that he's a loser. The second girl he loved [[spoiler: is supposed to kill him]].
*TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: A group a guards who are stumbling in the dark mistake Puss and Donkey for an werecat, an assassin, a cocatrice,
*LoveMakesYouDumb: [[spoiler: It takes a while for Artie to realize Kit's deep dark secrets, despite all the clues that he was given]].
*{{Masquerade}}: [[spoiler: Siv and Kit both have to wear a hat/headband to... blend in with the crowd]].
*MeaningfulName:
** The writer said that Kit was named after a beautifully-crafted crossbow that she saw in an antique shop with the same name.
** Plus, ''kitsune'' (foxes) also have naturally golden eyes.
*NoodleIncident: Donkey and the 'Dreaded and Infamous Potion Factory Incident'. Subverted since it is explained what happened afterwards.
*NoNameGiven: Kit and Siv's last name are never mentioned.
** And earlier, Siv is only named as the Stranger.
*OriginalCharacter: Siv and Kit, who never appeared in the original Shrek movies.
*SleepCute: Only for Artie. [[spoiler: When Kit was watching Artie sleeping, she described him as the most handsome boy ever to have lived]].
*SuperSpeed: Siv and Kit seem to have unnaturally quick reflexes.
*SuperStrength: Kit seems to be stronger than the average kid her age.
*WhatBeautifulEyes: Kit's eyes are a golden yellow color. But there's a reason [[TheReveal that explains that]].
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'''Tropes names in this story that you should not read until you finish the story:'''
*DisneyDeath
*MinionWithAnFInEvil: [[spoiler: Kit and Donkey]].
*ReluctantMonster
*WhatMeasureIsANonHuman
*YouNeverAsked: [[spoiler: Siv seemed to have neglected to tell Kit about their amazing healing abilities]].
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