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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5565307/1/ARSENAL ARSENAL]] is a ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' DeconstructionFic by the Sage of Toads and hosted by AndrewJoshuaTalon on fanfiction.net that is currently in progress.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5565307/1/ARSENAL ARSENAL]] ARSENAL is a ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' DeconstructionFic by the Sage of Toads and hosted by AndrewJoshuaTalon on fanfiction.net that is currently in progress. \n The original version has since been deleted when the site recently purged its content for illegal MA-rated stories but a rewrite is in progress and being posted.
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* AntiHero: Shinji, an indisputable [[SlidingScaleOfAntiHeroes Type-V]].

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* AntiHero: Shinji, an indisputable [[SlidingScaleOfAntiHeroes Type-V]].Type V]].



* {{BFG}}: [[spoiler: Kensuke gets a 20mm anti-materiel rifle.]]

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* {{BFG}}: [[spoiler: Kensuke [[spoiler:Kensuke gets a 20mm anti-materiel rifle.]]



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* CurbStompBattle: Directly invoked in the fight between Sachiel and Unit-01.
* DeathBySex: [[spoiler: Mercutio]] suspects that this is going to happen to him after [[spoiler: Satsuki]] lays him and tries to defy it, but fails.

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* CurbStompBattle: Directly invoked in the fight between Sachiel and Unit-01.
Unit 01.
* DeathBySex: [[spoiler: Mercutio]] [[spoiler:Mercutio]] suspects that this is going to happen to him after [[spoiler: Satsuki]] [[spoiler:Satsuki]] lays him and tries to defy it, but fails.



* EngineeredPublicConfession: [[spoiler: Pulled on Aoi.]]

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* EngineeredPublicConfession: [[spoiler: Pulled [[spoiler:Pulled on Aoi.]]



* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Shinji reveals to Gendo that all three of the Black Bunnies have been infected with nanomachines that play havoc with their nervous systems; each was then subjected to a particularly nasty punishment:]]
** [[spoiler:Kaede is subjected to two days of constant, excruciating pain, and afterwards becomes a bodyguard for the Suzuharas; see LaserGuidedAmnesia below]].
** [[spoiler:Satsuki is brain-damaged, and essentially turned into a dog; she wears a collar, beds down in a basket, is fed out of a bowl, and her only coherent thoughts are about Shinji showing her affection in similar ways that you'd treat a loved pet. Shinji also notes that he uses her for sex.]]
** [[spoiler:Aoi's senses of smell, taste, and touch are permanently numbed, and she is locked in an isolation chamber in shackles. At some prior point, the citizens of Tokyo-3 marked her entire body with graffiti in [[ColdBloodedTorture multiple methods]], and during the scene a man enters the room and is implied to use her as a human toilet. It should be noted that she is restrained in a way that renders her [[ICannotSelfTerminate unable to commit suicide]] to escape.]]
* ForTheEvulz: Shinji invokes this occasionally. He's been known to carry a baseball bat to big fight scenes just so he can beat someone to death with it, and he's keeping [[spoiler:Satsuki]] as his sex slave essentially ''because he can''.
* FreakyIsCool: Touji and Kensuke's opinion on [[spoiler: the eyeball Pen-Pen plucked from a SAS trooper that is now kept in a jar.]]

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* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Shinji reveals to Gendo that all three of the Black Bunnies have been infected with nanomachines that play havoc with their nervous systems; each was then subjected to a particularly nasty punishment:]]
** [[spoiler:Kaede is subjected to two days of constant, excruciating pain, and afterwards becomes a bodyguard for the Suzuharas; see LaserGuidedAmnesia below]].
** [[spoiler:Satsuki is brain-damaged, and essentially turned into a dog; she wears a collar, beds down in a basket, is fed out of a bowl, and her only coherent thoughts are about Shinji showing her affection in similar ways
horrific punishments that you'd treat a loved pet. Shinji also notes that he uses her for sex.]]
** [[spoiler:Aoi's senses of smell, taste, and touch are permanently numbed, and she is locked in an isolation chamber in shackles. At some prior point, the citizens of Tokyo-3 marked her entire body with graffiti in [[ColdBloodedTorture multiple methods]], and during the scene a man enters the room and is implied to use her as a human toilet. It should be noted that she is restrained in a way that renders her [[ICannotSelfTerminate unable to commit suicide]] to escape.
have completely broken them.]]
* ForTheEvulz: Shinji invokes this occasionally. He's been known to carry a baseball bat to big fight scenes just so he can beat someone to death with it, and he's keeping it. What he does with [[spoiler:Satsuki]] as his sex slave essentially ''because he can''.
is even more horrible.
* FreakyIsCool: Touji and Kensuke's opinion on [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the eyeball Pen-Pen plucked from a SAS trooper that is now kept in a jar.]]



* {{Gorn}}: Lots and lots of graphic violence. Special mention goes to Pen-Pen in chapter 11.

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* {{Gorn}}: Lots and lots ''lots'' of graphic violence. Special mention goes to Pen-Pen in chapter 11.



* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Shinji's monstrous behavior comes down to fighting people ruthless and efficient beyond measure, meaning he has to be willing to hold nothing back in order to win. He becomes the monster when he [[spoiler: subjects the Black Bunnies to [[FateWorseThanDeath Fates Worse Than Death]]]] for petty reasons (revenge, getting a new bodyguard, etc), none of which contribute to stopping Third Impact in any way.
* ICallItVera: Shinji names all of his weapons. Sterling example: Hiroshima-kun for his suitcase nuke.

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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Shinji's monstrous behavior comes down to fighting people ruthless and efficient beyond measure, meaning he has to be willing to hold nothing back in order to win. He becomes the monster when he [[spoiler: subjects [[spoiler:The punishments dealt to the Black Bunnies to [[FateWorseThanDeath Fates Worse Than Death]]]] for and the petty reasons motives for such (revenge, getting a new bodyguard, etc), etc)]], none of which contribute to stopping Third Impact in any way.
way, push him completely into "monster" territory if he wasn't there already.
* ICallItVera: Shinji names all of his weapons. Sterling example: Hiroshima-kun "Hiroshima-kun" for his suitcase nuke.



* KickTheSonOfABitch: Shinji's punishments of Gendo and [[spoiler:the Black Bunnies]] are twelve shades of this.

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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Shinji's punishments of Gendo [[spoiler:Gendo and [[spoiler:the the Black Bunnies]] are twelve shades of this.



* LaserGuidedKarma: Shinji's punishments for [[spoiler:the Black Bunnies]]; also, his reveal that [[spoiler:the nanomachines had originally been developed by NERV as a means to control the pilots through sensory deprivation]] works as this for [[spoiler:Gendo]].

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* LaserGuidedKarma: LaserGuidedKarma:
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Shinji's punishments for [[spoiler:the Black Bunnies]]; also, his Bunnies]]
** His
reveal that [[spoiler:the nanomachines had originally been developed by NERV as a means to control the pilots through sensory deprivation]] works as this for [[spoiler:Gendo]].



* MeaningfulName: [[spoiler: "Roach" is the sole survivor of the SAS men.]]

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* MeaningfulName: [[spoiler: "Roach" [[spoiler:"Roach" is the sole survivor of the SAS men.]]



* NumberTwo: Misato is this or TheDragon depending on what side of the Moral Event Horizon Shinji's on.

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* NumberTwo: NumberTwo[=/=]TheDragon: Misato is this or TheDragon depending on what side of the Moral Event Horizon Shinji's on.either to Shinji.



* PapaWolf: [[spoiler: Touji saved Ai from a NearRapeExperience and saves her from Kaede as well.]]
* PayEvilUntoEvil: Cited specifically as the reason for the Black Bunnies' torturous fate.

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* PapaWolf: [[spoiler: Touji [[spoiler:Touji saved Ai from a NearRapeExperience and saves her from Kaede as well.]]
* PayEvilUntoEvil: Cited specifically as the reason for the [[spoiler:the Black Bunnies' torturous fate.fates]].



* RefugeInAudacity: The only reason most will be able to take most of the events as they unfold without screaming in horror is simply because it's too outrageous to believe- ''even in-universe''.

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* RefugeInAudacity: The only reason most will be able to take most of the events as they unfold without screaming in horror is simply because it's too outrageous to believe- believe -- ''even in-universe''.



* ShoutOut: Ai is a ''{{Warhammer 40K}}'' fan.
--> Blood for the blood god!

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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
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Ai is a ''{{Warhammer ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40K}}'' fan.
--> ---> Blood for the blood god!



* TapOnTheHead: [[spoiler: Done to Aoi.]]

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* TapOnTheHead: [[spoiler: Done [[spoiler:Done to Aoi.]]
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Shinji's monstrous behavior comes down to fighting people ruthless and efficient beyond measure, meaning he has to be willing to hold nothing back in order to win. He [[YourMilageMayVary arguably]] becomes the monster when he [[spoiler: subjects the Black Bunnies to [[FateWorseThanDeath Fates Worse Than Death]]]] for petty reasons (revenge, getting a new bodyguard, etc), none of which contribute to stopping Third Impact in any way.

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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Shinji's monstrous behavior comes down to fighting people ruthless and efficient beyond measure, meaning he has to be willing to hold nothing back in order to win. He [[YourMilageMayVary arguably]] becomes the monster when he [[spoiler: subjects the Black Bunnies to [[FateWorseThanDeath Fates Worse Than Death]]]] for petty reasons (revenge, getting a new bodyguard, etc), none of which contribute to stopping Third Impact in any way.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: Operation Ride the Lightning, that is all.

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Starting out as your typical PeggySue fare, ARSENAL dispenses with that notion and wastes no time in establishing that Shinji is an [[AxCrazy insane]], [[MagnificentBastard brilliant]], and [[HeroicSociopath completely amoral]] young man with an extensive agenda. Armed with the knowledge of the future, training, and careful planning, he intends to not only avert the future that is canon, but do it in the most gloriously violent and [[UpToEleven over-the-top]] fashion possible.

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Starting out as your typical PeggySue fare, ARSENAL dispenses with that notion and wastes no time in establishing that Shinji is an [[AxCrazy insane]], [[MagnificentBastard brilliant]], and [[HeroicSociopath [[SociopathicHero completely amoral]] young man with an extensive agenda. Armed with the knowledge of the future, training, and careful planning, he intends to not only avert the future that is canon, but do it in the most gloriously violent and [[UpToEleven over-the-top]] fashion possible.



* HeroicSociopath: Shinji, to the ninth degree.


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** Allusions to ''AxisPowersHetalia'' when SEELE's members are involved.

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** Allusions to ''AxisPowersHetalia'' ''Manga/AxisPowersHetalia'' when SEELE's members are involved.
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* XanatosGambit: Chapter 8. By Shinji, of course.

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* XanatosGambit: Chapter 8. By Shinji, of course.
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* TakeThat: Some, mostly aimed at [[ShinjiAndWarhammer40K one fanfic in particular]].

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* TakeThat: Some, mostly aimed at [[ShinjiAndWarhammer40K [[Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K one fanfic in particular]].
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* FunWithAcronyms: A Really Sadistic Evangelion... N A L... [[WikiMagic You try.]]

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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Ramiel's arrival at the very end of Chapter 8 has been hailed as this.



* BigDamnVillains: Ramiel's arrival at the very end of Chapter 8 has been hailed as this.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5565307/1/ARSENAL ARSENAL]] is a ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' fanfiction by the Sage of Toads and hosted by AndrewJoshuaTalon on fanfiction.net that is currently in progress.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5565307/1/ARSENAL ARSENAL]] is a ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'' fanfiction DeconstructionFic by the Sage of Toads and hosted by AndrewJoshuaTalon on fanfiction.net that is currently in progress.


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* [=~It's All About Me~=]: Aoi says something to this effect.

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* [=~It's All About Me~=]: ItsAllAboutMe: Aoi says something to this effect.



* [=~An Offer You Can't Refuse~=]: [[spoiler: Mr. 850 threatens to put Roach in jail on false premises to find out what happened in Tokyo-3.]]

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* [=~An Offer You Can't Refuse~=]: [[spoiler: Mr. 850 threatens to put Roach in jail on false premises to find out what happened in Tokyo-3.]]


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* AcceptableTargets: Gendo and the Black Bunnies.



* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Shinji's fever dream at the start of 11; the Black Bunnies' [[FateWorseThanDeath final fates]].



* MoralEventHorizon:
** Gendo, from authorizing [[spoiler:the creation of the nanomachines]] to taking advantage of the Black Bunnies. Oh and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking he's a jerk too]].
** Both Satsuki and Kaede gleefully cross over the line at the very start of Chapter 8, when [[spoiler:they slaughter the families of three of Shinji's classmates and have one of them repeatedly raped and tortured]].
** Aoi rounds us out with her MotiveRant, specifically [[spoiler:she got off sexually on the destruction wrought by Second Impact]].
** Shinji has probably crossed this, but YourMileageMayVary. It's worth noting that he already views himself beyond redemption before he's done anything truly morally objectionable.



* NauseaFuel: [[spoiler:A man urinating on Aoi as she begs for death. Notable in that even [[CompleteMonster Gendo]] is disgusted by it.]]
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* FunWithAcronyms: A Really Sadistic Evangelion... N A L... [[WikiMagic You try.]]
-->'''[[WordOfGod Sage Of Toads]]''': ''Yes, it's an acronym, and no, I'm not telling you what it means. You'll have to find that out for yourself.''
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* DeathBySex: [[spoiler: Mercutio]] suspects that this is going to happen to him after [[spoiler: Satsuki]] lays him and tries to defy it, but fails.
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* [=~An Offer You Can't Refuse~=]: [[spoiler: Mr. 850 threatens to put Roach in jail on false premises to find out what happened in Tokyo-3.]]


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* MeaningfulName: [[spoiler: "Roach" is the sole survivor of the SAS men.]]


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** "Your mission is complete, [[Memes/StreetFighter go home and be a family man.]]"
** "I guess a sense of humor is one that's…" [[CSIMiami In the back of his mind, he wished he had a pair of sunglasses]], "…Evolved." [[strike: YEEEAAAHHHH!]]
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* {{BFG}}: [[spoiler: Kensuke gets a 20mm anti-materiel rifle.]]


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* EngineeredPublicConfession: [[spoiler: Pulled on Aoi.]]


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* FreakyIsCool: Touji and Kensuke's opinion on [[spoiler: the eyeball Pen-Pen plucked from a SAS trooper that is now kept in a jar.]]
* FreudianExcuse: Aoi claims that Satsuki and Kaede have this. Misato slaps it down as "a shitty excuse".


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* [=~It's All About Me~=]: Aoi says something to this effect.


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* PapaWolf: [[spoiler: Touji saved Ai from a NearRapeExperience and saves her from Kaede as well.]]


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* SamaritanSyndrome: Alluded to; Shinji recognises that he's not God and doesn't let himself be guilt-tripped about it.


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** ''{{Fargo}}'' is mentioned when Shinji tells Gendo why his plan failed.


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* TapOnTheHead: [[spoiler: Done to Aoi.]]
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* EngineeredPublicConfession: [[spoiler: Pulled on Aoi.]]


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* FreakyIsCool: Touji and Kensuke's opinion on [[spoiler: the eyeball Pen-Pen plucked from a SAS trooper that is now kept in a jar.]]
* FreudianExcuse: Aoi claims that Satsuki and Kaede have this. Misato slaps it down as "a shitty excuse".


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* PapaWolf: [[spoiler: Touji saved Ai from a NearRapeExperience and saves her from Kaede as well.]]


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* SamaritanSyndrome: Alluded to; Shinji recognises that he's not God and doesn't let himself be guilt-tripped about it.


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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Satsuki.
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* NecessaryEvil: Shinji's view of himself.

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* HeroicSociopath: Shinji, to the ninth degree.


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** Ghost screaming [[RedVs.Blue this doesn't seem physically possible]]

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** Gary Sanderson sounds [[CallOfDutyModernWarfare oddly familiar]]

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* BrickJoke: Early into the story, Shinji mentions that he can kill someone with wet paper and a paper clip. [[spoiler: Guess what happens in chapter 10?]]
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* DisproportionateRetribution: As utterly unsympathetic and completely monstrous as Shinji's adversaries have been so far, his retaliations and punishments for them can still seem like this.
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* AcceptableTargets: Gendo definitely. Possibly the Black Bunnies.

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* AcceptableTargets: Gendo definitely. Possibly and the Black Bunnies.

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