History FanFic / ARSENAL

21st May '16 4:05:39 AM Tron80
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The original version has since been deleted, and reuploaded on the former's page with new content to be added and old content to be changed or removed entirely. The revised version of the fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8496831/1/Reload-of-ARSENAL here]].

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The original version has since been deleted, and a new version was reuploaded on the former's page with new content to be added and old content to be changed or removed entirely. The revised version page. As of April 2016, though, Sage of the Toads declared the fic dead.

''Rebuild of Arsenal''
can be found read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8496831/1/Reload-of-ARSENAL here]].here]].

Since the tropes described below pertain to the deleted original version, there will be no spoiler tags.



* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Gendo is shot repeatedly and left bedridden at the end of the coup. Later on, before he is moved to Terminal Dogma to remove all sense of time from him, Shinji returns and beats his invalid father with a hammer, shattering his jaw and rendering him incapable of speech.]]

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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Gendo Gendo is shot repeatedly and left bedridden at the end of the coup. Later on, before he is moved to Terminal Dogma to remove all sense of time from him, Shinji returns and beats his invalid father with a hammer, shattering his jaw and rendering him incapable of speech.]]



* {{BFG}}: [[spoiler:Kensuke gets a 20mm anti-materiel rifle.]]
* BrickJoke: Early into the story, Shinji mentions that he can kill someone with wet paper and a paper clip. [[spoiler: Guess what happens in chapter 10?]]

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* {{BFG}}: [[spoiler:Kensuke Kensuke gets a 20mm anti-materiel rifle.]]
rifle.
* BrickJoke: Early into the story, Shinji mentions that he can kill someone with wet paper and a paper clip. [[spoiler: Guess what happens in chapter 10?]]10?



* DeadFic: The original got discontinued and the rewrite has not been updated since early 2013.
* DeathBySex: [[spoiler:Mercutio]] suspects that this is going to happen to him after [[spoiler:Satsuki]] lays him and tries to defy it, but fails.

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* DeadFic: The original got discontinued and the rewrite has not been updated since early 2013.
is officially dead.
* DeathBySex: [[spoiler:Mercutio]] Mercutio suspects that this is going to happen to him after [[spoiler:Satsuki]] Satsuki lays him and tries to defy it, but fails.



* EngineeredPublicConfession: [[spoiler:Pulled on Aoi.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Gendo is disgusted by [[spoiler:Shinji's treatment of Aoi]], and even near-VillainProtagonist Shinji is disgusted by the stuff Gendo and SEELE are responsible for in canon.
* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Shinji reveals to Gendo that all three of the Black Bunnies have been infected with nanomachines that play havoc with their nervous systems; each was then subjected to horrific punishments that have completely broken them.]]
* ForTheEvulz: Shinji invokes this occasionally. He's been known to carry a baseball bat to big fight scenes just so he can beat someone to death with it. What he does with [[spoiler:Satsuki]] is even more horrible.
* FreakyIsCool: Touji and Kensuke's opinion on [[spoiler:the eyeball Pen-Pen plucked from a SAS trooper that is now kept in a jar.]]

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* EngineeredPublicConfession: [[spoiler:Pulled Pulled on Aoi.]]
Aoi.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Gendo is disgusted by [[spoiler:Shinji's Shinji's treatment of Aoi]], Aoi, and even near-VillainProtagonist Shinji is disgusted by the stuff Gendo and SEELE are responsible for in canon.
* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Shinji Shinji reveals to Gendo that all three of the Black Bunnies have been infected with nanomachines that play havoc with their nervous systems; each was then subjected to horrific punishments that have completely broken them.]]
them.
* ForTheEvulz: Shinji invokes this occasionally. He's been known to carry a baseball bat to big fight scenes just so he can beat someone to death with it. What he does with [[spoiler:Satsuki]] Satsuki is even more horrible.
* FreakyIsCool: Touji and Kensuke's opinion on [[spoiler:the the eyeball Pen-Pen plucked from a SAS trooper that is now kept in a jar.]]



* FunWithAcronyms: A Really Sadistic Evangelion... Now Action Laser! [[WikiMagic You try.]]

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* FunWithAcronyms: A Really Sadistic Evangelion... Now Action Laser! [[WikiMagic You try.]]



* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Shinji's behavior comes down to fighting people ruthless and efficient beyond measure, meaning he has to be willing to hold nothing back in order to win. [[spoiler:The punishments dealt to the Black Bunnies and the petty motives for such (revenge, getting a new bodyguard, etc)]], none of which contribute to stopping Third Impact in any way, push him completely into "monster" territory if he wasn't there already.

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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Shinji's behavior comes down to fighting people ruthless and efficient beyond measure, meaning he has to be willing to hold nothing back in order to win. [[spoiler:The The punishments dealt to the Black Bunnies and the petty motives for such (revenge, getting a new bodyguard, etc)]], etc), none of which contribute to stopping Third Impact in any way, push him completely into "monster" territory if he wasn't there already.



* KickTheSonOfABitch: Shinji's punishments of [[spoiler:Gendo and the Black Bunnies]] are twelve shades of this.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler:The ultimate fate of Kaede. The overwhelming pain caused by the nanomachines leaves her in such a state that she refuses to even try and remember what happened before she became a bodyguard for the Suzuharas.]]

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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Shinji's punishments of [[spoiler:Gendo Gendo and the Black Bunnies]] Bunnies are twelve shades of this.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler:The The ultimate fate of Kaede. The overwhelming pain caused by the nanomachines leaves her in such a state that she refuses to even try and remember what happened before she became a bodyguard for the Suzuharas.]]



** Shinji's punishments for [[spoiler:the Black Bunnies]]
** His reveal that [[spoiler:the nanomachines had originally been developed by NERV as a means to control the pilots through sensory deprivation]] works as this for [[spoiler:Gendo]].

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** Shinji's punishments for [[spoiler:the the Black Bunnies]]
Bunnies
** His reveal that [[spoiler:the the nanomachines had originally been developed by NERV as a means to control the pilots through sensory deprivation]] deprivation works as this for [[spoiler:Gendo]].Gendo.



* MeaningfulName: [[spoiler:"Roach" is the sole survivor of the SAS men.]]

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* MeaningfulName: [[spoiler:"Roach" "Roach" is the sole survivor of the SAS men.]]



* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: [[spoiler:Mr. 850 threatens to put Roach in jail on false premises to find out what happened in Tokyo-3.]]

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* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: [[spoiler:Mr.Mr. 850 threatens to put Roach in jail on false premises to find out what happened in Tokyo-3.]]



* PapaWolf: [[spoiler:Touji saved Ai from a NearRapeExperience and saves her from Kaede as well.]]
* PayEvilUntoEvil: Cited specifically as the reason for [[spoiler:the Black Bunnies' torturous fates]].

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* PapaWolf: [[spoiler:Touji Touji saved Ai from a NearRapeExperience and saves her from Kaede as well.]]
well.
* PayEvilUntoEvil: Cited specifically as the reason for [[spoiler:the the Black Bunnies' torturous fates]].fates.



* SarcasticConfession:Shinji, twice:

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* SarcasticConfession:Shinji, SarcasticConfession: Shinji, twice:



** Ai is a ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40K}}'' fan.

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** Ai is a ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40K}}'' 40000}}'' fan.



* TapOnTheHead: [[spoiler:Done to Aoi.]]

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* TapOnTheHead: [[spoiler:Done Done to Aoi.]]


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7th Nov '15 10:27:21 PM nombretomado
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** Ghost screaming [[RedVsBlue this doesn't seem physically possible]]

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** Ghost screaming [[RedVsBlue [[Machinima/RedVsBlue this doesn't seem physically possible]]
29th Jul '15 4:30:02 PM nombretomado
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** Gary Sanderson sounds [[ModernWarfare oddly familiar]]

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** Gary Sanderson sounds [[ModernWarfare [[VideoGame/ModernWarfare oddly familiar]]
18th Jun '15 6:18:32 AM MachRider1985
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* SarcasticConfession:Shinji, twice:
-->'''Misato/Ritsuko:''' What's in the briefcase?\\
'''Shinji:''' It's a suitcase nuclear bomb, six-kiloton yield.
16th Jun '15 11:27:46 PM MachRider1985
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ARSENAL is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' DeconstructionFic by the Sage of Toads and AndrewJoshuaTalon on fanfiction.net that is currently in progress. The original version has since been deleted, and reuploaded on the former's page with new content to be added and old content to be changed or removed entirely.

Starting out as your typical PeggySue fare, ARSENAL dispenses with that notion and wastes no time in establishing that Shinji is an [[AxCrazy insane]], [[MagnificentBastard brilliant]], and [[SociopathicHero completely amoral]] young man with an extensive agenda. Armed with the knowledge of the future, training, and careful planning, he intends to not only avert the future that is canon, but do it in the most gloriously violent and [[UpToEleven over-the-top]] fashion possible.

The revised version of the fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8496831/1/Reload-of-ARSENAL here]].

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ARSENAL is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' DeconstructionFic by the Sage of Toads and AndrewJoshuaTalon on fanfiction.net that is currently in progress. The original version has since been deleted, and reuploaded on the former's page with new content to be added and old content to be changed or removed entirely.

AndrewJoshuaTalon.

Starting out as your typical PeggySue fare, ARSENAL dispenses with that notion and wastes no time in establishing that Shinji is an [[AxCrazy insane]], [[MagnificentBastard brilliant]], and [[SociopathicHero completely amoral]] young man with an extensive agenda. Armed with the knowledge of the future, training, and careful planning, he intends to not only avert the future that is canon, but do it in the most gloriously violent and [[UpToEleven over-the-top]] fashion possible.

The original version has since been deleted, and reuploaded on the former's page with new content to be added and old content to be changed or removed entirely. The revised version of the fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8496831/1/Reload-of-ARSENAL here]].



!!The original cut version of the fanfic contains examples of:

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!!The !!Tropes found in the original cut version of the fanfic contains examples of:
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---> Blood for the blood god!

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---> Blood --->''Blood for the blood god!god!''
28th Apr '15 11:00:14 AM MachRider1985
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* DeadFic: The original got discontinued and the rewrite has not been updated since early 2013.
28th Apr '15 10:25:55 AM MachRider1985
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The revised version of the fic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8496831/1/Reload-of-ARSENAL here]].



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* DeconstructionFic: Brutally deconstructs both the PeggySue and FixFic archetypes by just showing just how emotionally and mentally damaged Shinji is for having gone through it once.

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* DeconstructionFic: Brutally It deconstructs both the PeggySue and FixFic archetypes by just showing just how Shinji emotionally and mentally damaged Shinji is for having gone through it once.



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* SamaritanSyndrome: Alluded to; Shinji recognises that he's not God and doesn't let himself be guilt-tripped about it.

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* SamaritanSyndrome: Alluded to; Shinji recognises that he's not God {{God}} and doesn't let himself be guilt-tripped about it.



** Some to ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K''



* TakeThat: Some, mostly aimed at [[Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K one fanfic in particular]].



17th Apr '15 9:13:28 PM nombretomado
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** "I guess a sense of humor is one that's…" [[CSIMiami In the back of his mind, he wished he had a pair of sunglasses]], "…Evolved." [[strike: YEEEAAAHHHH!]]

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** "I guess a sense of humor is one that's…" [[CSIMiami [[Series/CSIMiami In the back of his mind, he wished he had a pair of sunglasses]], "…Evolved." [[strike: YEEEAAAHHHH!]]
21st Feb '13 10:08:00 AM SeptimusHeap
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* AntiHero: Shinji, an indisputable [[SlidingScaleOfAntiHeroes Type V]].
6th Dec '12 1:48:08 AM jgkitarel
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* DeconstructionFic

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* DeconstructionFicDeconstructionFic: Brutally deconstructs both the PeggySue and FixFic archetypes by just showing just how emotionally and mentally damaged Shinji is for having gone through it once.
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