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ZCE comment-outs. Lots and lots of ZCE comment-outs.
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* AlwaysIdenticalTwins: Vayne and his brother Valian.
* BanOnMagic
* BigBad: Vayne himself, or so he thinks.
* BanOnMagic
* BigBad: Vayne himself, or so he thinks.
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* BodyguardBetrayal: Feliaed to his sister Nikara, in a gambit to free the rest of their people. [[YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo It doesn't quite]] [[ILied go as planned]].
* CelestialBureaucracy
* ChildrenAreInnocent: Played straight with Aelissa and Saelac. Subverted with Kalian, Dimitri, and [[ChildSoldier Drucocu]].
* ClockPunk
* CoolSword: Both Vayne and Qin have one.
* TheCorruption: Chaos and its effects.
* CreepyChild: Drucocu
* TheDarkArts
* TheDarkSide
* DealWithTheDevil: Two of them, both by the same person.
* DespairEventHorizon
* DungeonPunk: Ended by the plague, forcing society to evolve.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Three of them.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes
* EvilFeelsGood
* EvilParentsWantGoodKids: Vayne would rather his daughter grow up happy.
* EvilTwin: Vayne to Valian.
* ExactWords
* FantasticRacism
* ForGreatJustice: Vayne sees his goals as this.
* FreudianExcuse: A number of characters have this within their backstories.
* FunctionalMagic: Though it's vanishing for a number of reasons.
* GildedCage: What Princess Aelissa is being raised in. This will likely apply to Prince Saelac as well.
* GiveMeASign: Invoked by Vayne.
* CelestialBureaucracy
* ChildrenAreInnocent: Played straight with Aelissa and Saelac. Subverted with Kalian, Dimitri, and [[ChildSoldier Drucocu]].
* ClockPunk
* CoolSword: Both Vayne and Qin have one.
* TheCorruption: Chaos and its effects.
* CreepyChild: Drucocu
* TheDarkArts
* TheDarkSide
* DealWithTheDevil: Two of them, both by the same person.
* DespairEventHorizon
* DungeonPunk: Ended by the plague, forcing society to evolve.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Three of them.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes
* EvilFeelsGood
* EvilParentsWantGoodKids: Vayne would rather his daughter grow up happy.
* EvilTwin: Vayne to Valian.
* ExactWords
* FantasticRacism
* ForGreatJustice: Vayne sees his goals as this.
* FreudianExcuse: A number of characters have this within their backstories.
* FunctionalMagic: Though it's vanishing for a number of reasons.
* GildedCage: What Princess Aelissa is being raised in. This will likely apply to Prince Saelac as well.
* GiveMeASign: Invoked by Vayne.
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* HeroWithBadPublicity
* IgnoredEpiphany
* IronicEcho: "Funny thing about promises..."
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Vayne attempting to bring Alais back to life.
* KillTheCutie: Responsible for the [[BreakTheCutie breaking of Vayne]].
* LaResistance
* IgnoredEpiphany
* IronicEcho: "Funny thing about promises..."
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Vayne attempting to bring Alais back to life.
* KillTheCutie: Responsible for the [[BreakTheCutie breaking of Vayne]].
* LaResistance
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* LoveMakesYouEvil
* LovesTheSoundOfScreaming: [[EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette The Royal Jailer]], [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Ceid]].
* MagicIsEvil: At least, Vayne thinks it is.
* MagicVersusScience
* ManipulativeBastard: Qin is very proud of himself.
* MarriedToTheJob: Vayne, though he believes it’s for the greater good.
* MindRape
* MysticalPlague: Has wiped out almost all of the magical beings on the planet.
* {{Necromantic}}: Let's just say grief counseling would have been a big help.
* OhCrap: When the tables get turned on Feliaed.
* OrderVersusChaos
* OurAngelsAreDifferent: Katosiel, among others.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: They can shapeshift into a humanoid form.
* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: They, too, can shapeshift.
* LovesTheSoundOfScreaming: [[EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette The Royal Jailer]], [[OurVampiresAreDifferent Ceid]].
* MagicIsEvil: At least, Vayne thinks it is.
* MagicVersusScience
* ManipulativeBastard: Qin is very proud of himself.
* MarriedToTheJob: Vayne, though he believes it’s for the greater good.
* MindRape
* MysticalPlague: Has wiped out almost all of the magical beings on the planet.
* {{Necromantic}}: Let's just say grief counseling would have been a big help.
* OhCrap: When the tables get turned on Feliaed.
* OrderVersusChaos
* OurAngelsAreDifferent: Katosiel, among others.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: They can shapeshift into a humanoid form.
* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: They, too, can shapeshift.
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* PeoplesRepublicOfTyranny: Vayne is turning Lusec into this.
* PimpedOutDress: Winnela has many of these. She loves her frills.
* PolarOppositeTwins: Vayne and Valian, given that Valian was sent off to magic school.
* RequisiteRoyalRegalia: Vayne, of course. The dragon prince Kelith also has items of this nature.
* SanctuaryOfSolitude: The chapel beneath the palace
* {{Shapeshifter}}: The Shifters, obviously.
* PimpedOutDress: Winnela has many of these. She loves her frills.
* PolarOppositeTwins: Vayne and Valian, given that Valian was sent off to magic school.
* RequisiteRoyalRegalia: Vayne, of course. The dragon prince Kelith also has items of this nature.
* SanctuaryOfSolitude: The chapel beneath the palace
* {{Shapeshifter}}: The Shifters, obviously.
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* SlaveCollar: The dragons end up with these. They do double duty as [[MindControlDevice mind control devices]].
* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Vayne and Winnela’s son, Saelac.
* TheStarscream
* SteamPunk
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Though still a child, Aelissa bears quite a resemblance to her mother. This does not fair well on Vayne's [[{{Squick}} psyche]].
* SupernaturalGoldEyes: The dragons, some of the wolves.
* ThereAreNoTherapists: If there were, there would be a lot less problems.
* TragicDream
* VillainProtagonist: Vayne Shirewood, all the way.
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Well, Vayne is a king, after all.
* VisionaryVillain: Again, Vayne.
* WitchHunt
* YouCantFightFate: Vayne learns this in a highly undignified manner.
* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Vayne and Winnela’s son, Saelac.
* TheStarscream
* SteamPunk
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Though still a child, Aelissa bears quite a resemblance to her mother. This does not fair well on Vayne's [[{{Squick}} psyche]].
* SupernaturalGoldEyes: The dragons, some of the wolves.
* ThereAreNoTherapists: If there were, there would be a lot less problems.
* TragicDream
* VillainProtagonist: Vayne Shirewood, all the way.
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Well, Vayne is a king, after all.
* VisionaryVillain: Again, Vayne.
* WitchHunt
* YouCantFightFate: Vayne learns this in a highly undignified manner.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Though still a child, Aelissa bears quite a resemblance to her mother. This does not fair well on Vayne's
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%%* SupernaturalGoldEyes: The dragons, some of the wolves.
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Five Man Band is being cleaned up to be written in paragraph form and only have five roles. Removing ZCE.
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* FiveManBand
** Heroes:
*** TheHero: Kelith
*** TheLancer: Arilla
*** TheSmartGuy: Feliaed
*** TheBigGuy: Tauph
*** TheChick: Nikara
** Villains:
*** BigBad: Vayne
*** TheDragon: Qin
*** EvilGenius: Kalian
*** TheBrute: Drucocu
*** TheDarkChick: Dimitri
*** SixthRangerTraitor: Marrakech
** Heroes:
*** TheHero: Kelith
*** TheLancer: Arilla
*** TheSmartGuy: Feliaed
*** TheBigGuy: Tauph
*** TheChick: Nikara
** Villains:
*** BigBad: Vayne
*** TheDragon: Qin
*** EvilGenius: Kalian
*** TheBrute: Drucocu
*** TheDarkChick: Dimitri
*** SixthRangerTraitor: Marrakech
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Cut trope. Can't tell if its replacement trope or any others are applicable.
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However, Vayne's [[TheFairFolk mysterious friend]] [[BiggerBad Qin]] just might have other plans. [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters Toss a budding rebellion]] [[RagtagBunchOfMisfits into the mix]], and things really start to hit the fan.
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However, Vayne's [[TheFairFolk mysterious friend]] [[BiggerBad Qin]] Qin just might have other plans. [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters Toss a budding rebellion]] [[RagtagBunchOfMisfits into the mix]], and things really start to hit the fan.
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*** TheDragon: Qin, though he doubles as a BiggerBad.
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*** TheDragon: Qin, though he doubles as a BiggerBad.Qin
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Now has a [[DarthWiki/EndOfAnEraCharacters character sheet]], currently under construction.
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* FiveBadBand
** BigBad: Vayne
** TheDragon: Qin, though he doubles as a BiggerBad.
** EvilGenius: Kalian
** TheBrute: Drucocu
** TheDarkChick: Dimitri
** SixthRangerTraitor: Marrakech
** BigBad: Vayne
** TheDragon: Qin, though he doubles as a BiggerBad.
** EvilGenius: Kalian
** TheBrute: Drucocu
** TheDarkChick: Dimitri
** SixthRangerTraitor: Marrakech
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** TheHero: Kelith
** TheLancer: Arilla
** TheSmartGuy: Feliaed
** TheBigGuy: Tauph
** TheChick: Nikara
** TheLancer: Arilla
** TheSmartGuy: Feliaed
** TheBigGuy: Tauph
** TheChick: Nikara
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** Heroes:
*** TheHero: Kelith
** *** TheLancer: Arilla
** *** TheSmartGuy: Feliaed
** *** TheBigGuy: Tauph
** *** TheChick: NikaraNikara
** Villains:
*** BigBad: Vayne
*** TheDragon: Qin, though he doubles as a BiggerBad.
*** EvilGenius: Kalian
*** TheBrute: Drucocu
*** TheDarkChick: Dimitri
*** SixthRangerTraitor: Marrakech
*** TheHero: Kelith
** Villains:
*** BigBad: Vayne
*** TheDragon: Qin, though he doubles as a BiggerBad.
*** EvilGenius: Kalian
*** TheBrute: Drucocu
*** TheDarkChick: Dimitri
*** SixthRangerTraitor: Marrakech
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End Of An Era is part of a prequel series to a collaborative project that {{Tropers/themagicdance}} and {{Tropers/crystallacrymosa}} are working on. Presumably, it will be completed during UsefulNotes/NaNoWriMo's new summertime counterpart, Camp NaNoWriMo.
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End Of An Era is part of a prequel series to a collaborative project that {{Tropers/themagicdance}} and {{Tropers/crystallacrymosa}} are working on. Presumably, it will be completed during UsefulNotes/NaNoWriMo's new summertime counterpart, Camp NaNoWriMo.
[=NaNoWriMo=].
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White-Haired Pretty Boy was renamed to White Hair Black Heart. Zero Context Examples, poorly-written examples, shoe-horning and misuse are being deleted.
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* WhiteHairedPrettyBoy: Qin.
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* HoYay
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* ParentalNeglect: Vayne loves Aelissa, [[DotingParent he really does]]. He's just [[TheWorkaholic very busy]].
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* ParentalNeglect: Vayne loves Aelissa, [[DotingParent he really does]]. He's just [[TheWorkaholic [[{{Workaholic}} very busy]].
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Chainsawing IGW wicks.
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: When Winnela takes the mantle of ruler, [[ItGotWorse things change.]] [[DownerEnding A lot]].
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: When Winnela takes the mantle of ruler, [[ItGotWorse things change.]] change. [[DownerEnding A lot]].
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End Of An Era is part of a prequel series to a collaborative project that {{Tropers/themagicdance}} and {{Tropers/crystallacrymosa}} are working on. Presumably, it will be completed during NaNoWriMo's new summertime counterpart, Camp NaNoWriMo.
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End Of An Era is part of a prequel series to a collaborative project that {{Tropers/themagicdance}} and {{Tropers/crystallacrymosa}} are working on. Presumably, it will be completed during NaNoWriMo's UsefulNotes/NaNoWriMo's new summertime counterpart, Camp NaNoWriMo.
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* EyesofGold: The dragons, some of the wolves.
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* SupernaturalGoldEyes: The dragons, some of the wolves.
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* DifferentAsNightAndDay: Vayne and Valian, given that Valian was sent off to magic school.
* PolarOppositeTwins: Vayne and Valian, given that Valian was sent off to magic school.
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* YouCantFightFate: Vayne learns this in a highly undignified manner.
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* YouCantFightFate: Vayne learns this in a highly undignified manner.
