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* {{Bishounen}}
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* {{Bishounen}}
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For some reason, Yuu refers to Kurou as "[[SenpaiKohai sempai]]", despite being a year above him.
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For some reason, Yuu refers to Kurou as "[[SenpaiKohai "[[UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics sempai]]", despite being a year above him.
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Wields the Active Dress-002, ''Arc Saber'' (almost identical to Hayana's own ''Twinkle Saber''), and a [[BladeOnAStick naginata]], which can be set to stun or slash.
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Wields the Active Dress-002, ''Arc Saber'' (almost identical to Hayana's own ''Twinkle Saber''), and a [[BladeOnAStick naginata]], naginata, which can be set to stun or slash.
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Senpai Kohai is the name of the trope
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For some reason, Yuu refers to Kurou as "[[SempaiKohai sempai]]", despite being a year above him.
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For some reason, Yuu refers to Kurou as "[[SempaiKohai "[[SenpaiKohai sempai]]", despite being a year above him.
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Disambig. per TRS
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* KnifeNut: He wields his knives specifically for the intimidating effect.
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TheProtagonist of the story, Hayana is an absolutely [[{{Moe}} adorable little thing]] who is [[BadassAdorable yet to suffer a major defeat]]. She doesn't belong to any club at first (mainly because she doesn't feel interested enough in anything) but readily enlists in Fujishiro-sensei's venture. Her main motivation is to protect the restaurants at Misaki (which is SeriousBusiness) and to have fun.
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-> High School [[SecondYearProtagonist Sophomore]] Red
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-> High School [[SecondYearProtagonist Sophomore]] Sophomore Red
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* SecondYearProtagonist
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* '''Hime''' (Japanese for "[[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses princess]]") is a special honorific given to a female student who holds the Crimson Kyokusei title. It isn't held by anyone at the moment because the current Crimson Kyokusei is male. However, he himself compares Hayana to a "Hime".
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* '''Hime''' (Japanese for "[[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses princess]]") "princess") is a special honorific given to a female student who holds the Crimson Kyokusei title. It isn't held by anyone at the moment because the current Crimson Kyokusei is male. However, he himself compares Hayana to a "Hime".
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* ButNotTooForeign: WordOfGod (cited [[https://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=656153 here]] is that Sae is actually the granddaughter of Letty and Tsumugi from ''Manga/TheMikosWordsAndTheWitchesIncantations'' (as in, she is a daughter of [[HomosexualReproduction their own daughter]]), so she is quarter-German but has inherited her Japanese grandmother's family name and looks.
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* ButNotTooForeign: WordOfGod (cited [[https://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=656153 here]] here]]) is that Sae is actually the granddaughter of Letty and Tsumugi from ''Manga/TheMikosWordsAndTheWitchesIncantations'' (as in, she is a (a daughter of [[HomosexualReproduction their own daughter]]), daughter]], in fact), so she is quarter-German but has inherited her Japanese grandmother's family name and looks.
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* ButNotTooForeign: WordOfGod (cited [[https://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=656153 here]] is that Sae is actually the granddaughter of Letty and Tsumugi from ''Manga/TheMikosWordsAndTheWitchesIncantations'' (as in, she is a daughter of [[HomosexualReproduction their own daughter]]), so she is quarter-German but has inherited her Japanese grandmother's family name and looks.
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* CloserToEarth: She and Sae are appalled by Yuu's four-on-one tactics and let Hayana and Aoi make a run for their Active Dress before attacking Hayana for real.
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* WomenAreWiser: She and Sae are appalled by Yuu's four-on-one tactics and let Hayana and Aoi make a run for their Active Dress before attacking Hayana for real.
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* CloserToEarth: She and Aki are appalled by Yuu's four-on-one tactics and let Hayana and Aoi make a run for their Active Dress before attacking Hayana for real.
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* WomenAreWiser: She and Aki are appalled by Yuu's four-on-one tactics and let Hayana and Aoi make a run for their Active Dress before attacking Hayana for real.
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In short, a legendary {{badass}}.
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In short, a legendary {{badass}}.
badass.
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TheProtagonist of the story, Hayana is an absolutely [[MoeMoe adorable little thing]] who is [[BadassAdorable yet to suffer a major defeat]]. She doesn't belong to any club at first (mainly because she doesn't feel interested enough in anything) but readily enlists in Fujishiro-sensei's venture. Her main motivation is to protect the restaurants at Misaki (which is SeriousBusiness) and to have fun.
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TheProtagonist of the story, Hayana is an absolutely [[MoeMoe [[{{Moe}} adorable little thing]] who is [[BadassAdorable yet to suffer a major defeat]]. She doesn't belong to any club at first (mainly because she doesn't feel interested enough in anything) but readily enlists in Fujishiro-sensei's venture. Her main motivation is to protect the restaurants at Misaki (which is SeriousBusiness) and to have fun.
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* NaginatasAreFeminine: Easily the most feminine of the group.
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A Kyokusei, "Hyakkou the White Shine". She is somewhat of SmartGirl for the WDC, as she is the one who apparently built the VSS suits. Although formally introduced in chapter 3, she is mentioned as early as chapter 1 by Kurou, presumably being the first Kyokusei to be drafted by the Club. Forms a TomboyAndGirlyGirl duo with the fellow Kyokusei Sae (herself being the {{tomboy}}).
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A Kyokusei, "Hyakkou the White Shine". She is somewhat of SmartGirl TheSmartGirl for the WDC, as she is the one who apparently built the VSS suits. Although formally introduced in chapter 3, she is mentioned as early as chapter 1 by Kurou, presumably being the first Kyokusei to be drafted by the Club. Forms a TomboyAndGirlyGirl duo with the fellow Kyokusei Sae (herself being the {{tomboy}}).
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** To be a bit more accurate: In Chapter one, after ordering and eating everything on the menu, what does she do? Go for seconds.
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This is a character sheet for the manga ''TwinkleSaberNova''.
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This is a character sheet for the manga ''TwinkleSaberNova''.
''Manga/TwinkleSaberNova''.
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The World Domination Club (WDC) was formed, quite literally, to TakeOverTheWorld. However, since the world is [[{{Understatement}} quite big]], they decided to start small and take over Misaki Academy. Since Misaki is pretty large itself, though, they reduced the current ambitions to conquering the Lunch Program and all its associate restaurants, which inevitably led them into a conflict with Hayana.
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The World Domination Club (WDC) was formed, quite literally, to TakeOverTheWorld. However, since the world is [[{{Understatement}} quite big]], big, they decided to start small and take over Misaki Academy. Since Misaki is pretty large itself, though, they reduced the current ambitions to conquering the Lunch Program and all its associate restaurants, which inevitably led them into a conflict with Hayana.
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* BadassInANiceSuit
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* DressedToKill
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A Kyokusei, "Shinsen the Violet Flash", who seems to have a rivalry with Kurou. A scheming personality, he is not above [[TheCombatPragmatist ruthless tactics]] in a fight. Forms a SensitiveGuyAndManlyMan duo with the fellow Kyokusei Touya.
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A Kyokusei, "Shinsen the Violet Flash", who seems to have a rivalry with Kurou. A scheming personality, he is not above [[TheCombatPragmatist [[CombatPragmatist ruthless tactics]] in a fight. Forms a SensitiveGuyAndManlyMan duo with the fellow Kyokusei Touya.
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