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* [[spoiler:TheMasochismTango]]: TheMasochismTango: With [[spoiler: Attolia]]. First he fell in love with her from afar. He spent a lot of time [[StalkerWithACrush sneaking around and watching her]]. Then she [[spoiler: cut of his hand]], causing him to go into [[HeroicBSOD a deep depression]]. Eventually he recovers, only to [[spoiler: kidnap her]] and propose marriage.
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* NoHeroToHisValet: As much as his childhood friend Eddis [[spoiler: Eddis]] respects him, she still says explicitly that she would sooner strangle him than marry him. She also tells the woman he's in love with how much of a liar he is.
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---> Attolia: "I have trusted you, and no, that does not mean that I have not had you watched and that I do not have spies that watch my spies, and spies even that watch those."
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* MuggingTheMonster: Really, Sejanus, did you honestly think it was a good idea to try and bait {{spoiler: [[spoiler: the former their of Eddis}}? Eddis]]? Where have you been for the past two books?
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* Jerkass: Is a serious jerk to Sophos, who hero-worships him, not to mention anyone who he perceives as being from a lower class (most noticeably Gen).
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** Played with. Really, she's ruthless because it's the only way to survive as a female ruler in a sexist government. The Attolian lower class seems to love her, at least the one's we've seen.
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* ImpossibleThief: [[spoiler: He goes from a lowly thief in the prisons of Sounis at the beginning of the series to the sovereign of ''all three countries by the end of the series; Eddis, Sounis and Attolia. Though to be fair, he was in prison by his own choice and only pretending to be "lowly".]]
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* NoHeroToHisValet: As much as his childhood friend Eddis respects him, she still says explicitly that she would sooner die strangle him than marry him. She also tells the woman he's in love with how much of a liar he is.
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* [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Crowning Moments Of Awesome]]Awesome]]: Has several throughout the series. Face it, where this CrazyAwesome, BunnyEarsLawyer thief goes, awesome immediately follows.
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ImpossibleThief: [[spoiler: He goes from a lowly thief in the prisons of Sounis at the beginning of the series to the sovereign of ''all three countries by the end of the series; Eddis, Sounis and Attolia.]]
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BadassBoast: "I can steal anything," followed by "I can do anything I want!" with a helping of ThisIsSparta.
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ConsummateLiar: In the words of Eddis: "He always lies to me. He lies to himself. If Eugenides talked in his sleep, he'd lie then too."
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